2023年浙江首考读后续写真题讲评课件 高三英语二轮复习写作专项+.pptx
2023年1月浙江高考读后续写真题蜂鸟报恩I was invited to cookout on an old friends farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention,so I entered it.It was a humming bird,desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,closing the door securely behind me.When I opened my hand,the bird did not fly away;she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered herI removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired?Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.However,she approached within six inches of my face.For a long moment,this tiny creature looked into my eyes,turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout,I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing,my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes,then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For moment,all were speechless.Then someone said,She must have come to say good-bye.Para1.A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.Para2.I was just about to leave when the hummning bird appeared.Read for basic information.storywhen where who what Brief summary:I saved a humming bird in a farm.the humming bird and I during the cookoutin the farmI saved a humming birdPara1.A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.Para2.I was just about to leave when the hummning bird appeared.蜂鸟到第二段才出现，所以第一段不能写我与蜂鸟相遇的情节。Analyse the given sentences.给出的句子一般为过渡句，首先提到了我和农场，为避免叙述跳跃，接下来的叙述也应从我或者农场开始同理，第二段的叙述应从我或者蜂鸟开始。第二段开头点名我准备离开，注意第一段结尾与第二段开头的衔接Para1.A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.Para2.I was just about to leave when the humming bird appeared.Raise questions for the given sentences.1.What was I thinking of when I entered the farm?2.What did I do when I was in the farm?3.How did I feel when I arrived the farm?How about when I left without seeing the humming bird?1.What did I feel when I saw the humming bird?2.What did the humming bird do when it saw me?3.Did the humming bird come alone?1.What was I thinking of when I entered the farm?the humming birdWeather the broken window got fixed or not?Would there be another animal trapped in the milking house?3.How did I feel when I arrived the farm?excited curious hope to see the humming bird again How about when I left without seeing the humming bird?disappointed worriedthrilled and excited relieved 1.What did I feel when I saw the humming bird?happyexcitement flooded over meI heaved a sigh of relievebe seized with happinessExpressions about bird1.拍动翅膀：2.婉转歌唱:3.翅膀:4.盘旋：5.啄：falpchirpfly aroundpeckwing翻译句子：1.那只蜂鸟又浮现在了我的脑海中。（固定搭配）2.一阵失落涌上心头。（心理描写）3.我下车四处张望，却没发现它的影子。The humming bird came to my mind.A sense of loss welled up.I alighted and looked around,but found no sign of it.翻译句子：1.我看到它十分高兴。（时间状语从句）2.当看到它时，我如释重负，眼里含着泪光。（用一.就.句型）3.我把车停在路边，急忙走向农场，充满了期待。（形容词短语作状语）I was seized with happiness.At，I felt relieved with spark in my eyes.I parked down the street and rushed to the farm,.Appreciate the sample.Para1.A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.Thinking about the broken window once trapped the humming bird,I alighted from the car and made my straight way to the milking house to check it.The window had been repaired well and no spider-webs had been seen.The humming bird came to my mind again.I walked out of the milking house,looked around but found no sign of the hummiing bird.With a sense of loss,I sighed and opened the door of my car.Appreciate the sample.Para2.I was just about to leave when the hummning bird appeared.At the sight of it,my heart was wild with pleasure,thinking the happy reunion is coming.The humming bird approached as it flapped its wings and chirped happily.I opened my palm and let it stay.“How are you doing?My old friend!”I said excitedly with happy tears in my eyes.The humming bird opened its mouth and put a blueburry in my palm and started to fly aroud me.“Thank you!”I said in a low voice and I saw her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.thank you.Para2.I was just about to leave when the hummning bird appeared.At the sight of it,my heart was wild with pleasure,thinking the happy reunion is coming.The humming bird approached as it flapped its wings and chirped happily.I opened my palm and let it stay.“How are you doing?My old friend!”I said excitedly with happy tears in my eyes.The humming bird opened its mouth and put a blueburry in my palm and started to fly aroud me.“Thank you!”I said in a low voice and I saw her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.
