全国卷高考英语写作之求职信写作指导作文评讲.pptx

全国卷高考英语写作之求职信写作指导作全国卷高考英语写作之求职信写作指导作文评讲文评讲 假如你是李华，从报假如你是李华，从报假如你是李华，从报假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训纸上看到中老年英语培训纸上看到中老年英语培训纸上看到中老年英语培训机构机构机构机构Mid Senior ESCH Mid Senior ESCH 面向高中毕业生招聘暑期面向高中毕业生招聘暑期面向高中毕业生招聘暑期面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学院课兼职辅导员，负责学院课兼职辅导员，负责学院课兼职辅导员，负责学院课间服务事项，请根据以下间服务事项，请根据以下间服务事项，请根据以下间服务事项，请根据以下内容用英语写一份求职信，内容用英语写一份求职信，内容用英语写一份求职信，内容用英语写一份求职信，要点包括：要点包括：要点包括：要点包括：1.1.你的英语水平；你的英语水平；你的英语水平；你的英语水平；2.2.你的工作经验；你的工作经验；你的工作经验；你的工作经验；3.3.你做好这份工作的信心你做好这份工作的信心你做好这份工作的信心你做好这份工作的信心Type of writing:A letter of job applicationPurpose of writing:to apply for a job to c_ the employer to hire youLanguage:polite convincing/persuasive,logical Tense:The simple present tense(introduction),The present perfect tense/The simple past tense (experience)convince第1页/共16页II II StructureStructure ofof thethe letterletter 求职信结构求职信结构Para.1Para.1：the opening paragraph:the opening paragraph:purposepurpose ofof thethe letterletter How do you know about the recruitment?How do you know about the recruitment?Which position are you applying for?Which position are you applying for?Para.2:the body:Para.2:the body:detailed introduction about yourself detailed introduction about yourself (Your name)a high school graduate(Your name)a high school graduate your English proficiency(your English proficiency(水平水平)your working experience your working experience Para.3:the closing paragraphPara.3:the closing paragraph conclusion,conclusion,hope,hope,thanksthanks your confidence(conclusion)your confidence(conclusion)your hope to be interviewed your hope to be interviewed Thank Thank youyou forfor youryour timetime andand consideration.consideration.第2页/共16页III The content Purpose of the letter:to convince the employer to hire you So you should write something that highlights your advantagesavoids your shortcomingsis relevant/related to the position!My English is not so good,but I will try my best.Secondly,I have worked in other companies before,where I have gotten enough working experience.第3页/共16页Supporting ideas in Para.2 Supporting ideas in Para.2 Your English proficiency:Your English proficiency:英语很好英语很好havehave a a goodgood commandcommand ofof EnglishEnglish口头、笔头英语流利口头、笔头英语流利bebe fluentfluent inin bothboth spokenspoken andand writtenwritten EnglishEnglish令人满意的阅读技能令人满意的阅读技能satisfactorysatisfactory readingreading skillsskills在高考中取得好成绩在高考中取得好成绩 gotgot goodgood gradesgrades inin thethe collegecollege entranceentrance examinationexamination在演讲比赛中屡获佳绩在演讲比赛中屡获佳绩receivedreceived a a goodgood manymany awardsawards inin speechspeech contestscontests第4页/共16页中老年英语培训机构中老年英语培训机构中老年英语培训机构中老年英语培训机构;暑期兼职辅导员暑期兼职辅导员暑期兼职辅导员暑期兼职辅导员;负责学院课间服务事项负责学院课间服务事项负责学院课间服务事项负责学院课间服务事项Your experience 社区志愿者，定期为老人提供服务社区志愿者，定期为老人提供服务 和老人相处得好，沟通容易和老人相处得好，沟通容易a a communitycommunity volunteer;volunteer;offeroffer servicesservices toto thethe oldold regularly;regularly;getget alongalong wellwell&communicatecommunicate easilyeasily社区志愿者，教老人英语社区志愿者，教老人英语培养了耐心，责任心培养了耐心，责任心teach the elderlyteach the elderly English;develop my patience English;develop my patience and sense of responsibility and sense of responsibility Supporting ideas in Para.2 Supporting ideas in Para.2 第5页/共16页Example 1(Score:20)第6页/共16页Example 2(Score:22.5)第7页/共16页HowHow toto getget a a satisfactorysatisfactory score?score?a right structure(3-4 paragraphs,purposeintroductionhopethanks)relevant content(highlight the advantages)correct&advanced vocabularygood linkingsproper length(80-120)beautiful handwriting 第8页/共16页Rewriting 第9页/共16页 我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。（oror：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。）职辅导员的职位。）作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因我的周到服务、耐心和强烈的责任感受到赞赏。我的周到服务、耐心和强烈的责任感受到赞赏。因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。感谢您的时间和考虑。第10页/共16页 我从报纸得贵机构正在招聘暑期兼职辅导员，我对此非常感兴趣。（or：我写信来是想申请您在报纸上广告的暑期兼职辅导员的职位。）I have learned from the newspaper that you are recruiting part-time instructors/assistants during the summer vacation,which appeals to me greatly.Im writing to apply for the position of part-time instructor/assistant,which you advertised in the newspaper.第11页/共16页作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握作为一名高中毕业生，我熟练掌握英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，英语。我不仅口头和笔头英语都很流利，而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老而且我的阅读技能也是令人满意的。此外，我在服务老人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，人方面有丰富的经验。在我的社区做志愿者已经三年了，我经常因我的周到服务、耐心、强责任感受到赞赏。我经常因我的周到服务、耐心、强责任感受到赞赏。AsAs a high school a high school graduategraduate,I,I have a good command have a good command of of English.English.Not only am I Not only am I fluent in both written and spoken fluent in both written and spoken English,English,but also but also my reading skills are my reading skills are satisfactorysatisfactory.In addition,In addition,I I have rich experience in have rich experience in serving serving the the elderlyelderly.Having beenHaving been a volunteer in our community for three a volunteer in our community for three years,years,Im frequently praised for Im frequently praised for my good servicemy good service,great patiencegreat patience andand a a strongstrong sensesense ofof responsibilityresponsibility.第12页/共16页 因此，我很有信心我能胜任这份工作。如果您能给我面试的机会，我将非常感激。感谢您的时间和考虑。Therefore,Im confident that Im qualified for the job/Im competent at the job/Im equal to the job.I would appreciate it if I could get a chance to be interviewed./It would be appreciated if you could give me a chance of an interview.Thank you for your time and consideration.第13页/共16页DearDear Sir/Madam,Sir/Madam,I have learned from the newspaper I have learned from the newspaper that that you you are are recruitingrecruiting part-time part-time assistantsassistants during during thethe summer vacation,summer vacation,whichwhich appeals to appeals to me greatly.me greatly.AsAs a a high high school school graduategraduate,I I have have a a good good command command of of English.English.Not Not only only am am I I fluent fluent in in both both written written and and spoken spoken English,English,but but also also my my reading reading skills skills are are satisfactorysatisfactory.In In addition,addition,I I have have rich rich experience experience in in serving serving the the elderlyelderly.Having Having beenbeen a a volunteer volunteer in in our our community community for for three three years,years,Im Im frequently frequently praised praised for for my my good good serviceservice,great great patiencepatience andand a a strongstrong sensesense ofof responsibilityresponsibility.ThereforeTherefore,Im Im confident confident that that Im Im qualified qualified for for the the job.job.I I would would appreciateappreciate it it if if I I could could get get a a chance chance to to be be interviewed.interviewed.Thank you for your time and consideration.Thank you for your time and consideration.YoursYours sincerely,sincerely,LiLi HuaHua第14页/共16页HomeworkCorrect the mistakes in your original version Add the original version&the model version to your composition books!第15页/共16页感谢您的观看！感谢您的观看！第16页/共16页