高考应用文写作指导之建议信.ppt
高考英语应用文写作指导 之建议(recommendation letter)Objectives:2.Master and use useful expressions,structure and formwork of the recommendation letter.3.Complete a writing of recommendation letter.In this class,we will be able to 1.Know how to analyze the material of the recommendation letter.高考常见的应用文类型有：信件类建议信其他类别通知邀请信 海报道歉信 广告申请信 招领祝贺信 演讲稿感谢信 留言条投诉信 发言稿咨询信 电子邮件二二找找三三列列一审一审四写四写五润五润纠正错误和润色文章写建议信找结构列要点审题目建议信的写作步骤Sample：假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。思考的问题 样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？（type）要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(tense)第一人称建议信对英语学习给出建议说理的逻辑性一般现在时第一步：审题目如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象结构三部分1.Heading点题一两个句子；概括性2.Body 陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由；层次分明3.Ending 总结全文，表明希望；呼应主题第二步：找结构 read English aloud everyday/spend one or half hour in reading English booksWatch Englishmovies/films.第 三步：列要点listen to English songs/learn to sing English songs第 三步：列要点practice your spoken English with a native-speaker.How to begin an recommendation letter?第一段：开头是成功的一半Dear.:(开门见山，点明意图）(1)I know you have some troubles in learning English after reading your letters.There are some tips for you.(2)I am glad to hear you want to learn English well.In my opinion,.(3)I am writing to share my advice with you on how to learn English well.It will be wise of you if you take the following actions.读了你的信后，我知道你在学习英语上有困难.我很高兴听到你想要学好英语.在我看来,我写信和你分享如何学好英语方面的建议。如果你能采取以下措施，将是明智的选择。第 四步：写作文建议信重点第二段：说明建议的内容；（是什么）提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。To list your suggestions亲们，别东拉西扯，闹糊涂啊 First,Secondly,Finally,On the one hand,on the other hand,What is more/besides/moreover/furthermore To begin with,In addition,Last but not least(注意连贯和逻辑，合理使用连接词或短语）A perfect ending!第三段：完美的Ending，可不是说灰姑娘的故事哦。In a conclusion/in a word（结论简洁，指明观点）(1)Practice makes perfect！Nothing is difficult If you put your mind into it.(2)I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.(3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements.适当运用模板 Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.In your letter,you said+你碰到的问题.My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,_,because_.Secondly,you should_,because_.Thirdly,youd better_.Only in this way can you _.Whats more,_.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,xxx 第 五步：该错误、美文章Summary Summary一审二找三列五美四写 建议信的写作步骤时态人称题材顺序主题 第二篇建议信：对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信建议内容：1）和他面对面地交流、沟通；2）给她发邮件或短信；3）告诉他学习的重要性。Practice:Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.In your letter,you said your friend spends most of his time chatting on the Internet and often goes to the Internet cafe instead of attending classes.You really want to help him out but you dont know what to do with it/how to help him.Well.I would like to give my advice for you.My advice are as follows.Firstly,I think you should have a talk with him sincerely.Because if your friend skips classes,he is not going to do well at school.Secondly,you can e-mail him or leave a message.Thirdly,you should tell him the importance of study.Because every one of us just has one chance to go to high school,he should study hard and not waste time in indulging on the Internet.In a word,I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,Editor Thank You!假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议：1.课堂上认真听老师讲课；2.多和同学和老师用英语交流：3.坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多练、多问等。4.培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。Homework:Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.In your letter,you said you have some difficulties in learning English.I think I can give you some useful suggestions.My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly,the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly,you can speak English with your classmates and teachers,which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.Whats more,the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,xxx 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter,Im glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li HuaHomework:Dear Peter,Im sorry to hear that you have some problems on how to learn Chinese well.I think I can give you some useful suggestions.My suggestions are as follows.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,because youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your classmates.Second,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers in Chinese.Third,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing it,youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Li Hua Dear Wang Nan,Im sorry to hear that you are feeling annoyed these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively.I will give you some useful advice.My advice are as follows.First,as a saying goes,every man has his faults,I notice some people around us are not good at communication.So you dont have to worry too much about it.Second,good communication is not only helpful to our study but also good for our success.Third,be honest and frank to those whom you talk to,so you could be understood by others easily.Whats more,youd better try to understand others when they talks so that you can exchange ideas with them freely.I hope my advice will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,Lihua 假定你是某中学的学生李华，请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，主要内容包括：优点：1.话题广泛 2.图片丰富 3.有助于提高学习兴趣 建议：适当降低词汇难度 Dear Editor,As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house._
