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专题14 读后续写（一）1.（广东省珠海市第二中学202L2022学年高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One summer afternoon,when I was about eight years of age,I was looking at a beautiful rainbow that,bending from the sky,seemed to be losing itself in a thick wood about a quarter of a mile distant.“Do you know,Gracie,said my brother,who was just recovering from a severe illness,weak and tired,thatif you should go to the end of the rainbow,you would find there precious treasures?“Is it truly so?”I asked.“Truly so,“answered my brother,with a smile but a very serious face.Now,I was a simple-hearted child who believed everything that was told to me;so,without another word,Irushed out toward the wood.My brother called after me as loudly as he was able to,but I did not take any notice ofhim.I cared nothing for the wet grass,on and on I ran.I was so sure that I knew just where that rainbow ended.Butwhen I reached the cedars（雪松林），the end of the rainbow was not there!Abruptly I saw it shining down among the trees a little farther off;so on and on I struggled,through the thickbushes,till I came within the sound of a stream.I reached the bank of the stream,and I could see it a little way offon the other side.I crossed the stream on a fallen tree,and still ran on,though my muscles were aching and myknees shaking.Suddenly I met in my way a large porcupine（豪猪）.I ran away from him as fast as my tired feet would carryme.In my flight and hurry I forgot to keep my eye on the rainbow,and when,at last,I remembered and looked forit,it was nowhere in sight!When 1 saw that it was indeed gone,I burst into tears,fbr I had lost all my treasures,and had nothing butmuddy feet and a wet and torn dress.So I set out for home.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:But I soon found that my troubles had only begun.Paragraph 2:At last I heard my own name called.【答案】Possible version 1Paragraph 1:But I soon found that my troubles had only begun.I lost my way!I was shivering with cold,with my emptystomach rumbling.The night wind howled ruthlessly,nameless creatures murmured in the dark and the moonlightshone weakly on the ground.Filled with fright,I dragged my exhausted body inching forward.Eventually,I satbeside the stream,my arms and legs aching.Regretful for my simple-minded behavior about the missing rainbowand treasures,I burst into tears again.Paragraph 2:At last I heard my own name called.The voice came from distance,but I could figure out it was my brother.“Here!Here!”I shrieked at the top of my lung.My weak brother made his way to me,his eyes filled with concern.A sense of apparent relief enveloped me.I threw myself to him and hugged him tightly.Following him,I arrived athome safe and sound finally.Now,it becomes an indispensable memory in my childhood.Possible version 2Paragraph 1:But I soon found that my troubles had only begun.All at once I heard voices shouting and hallooing.I wasfrightened,tearing that some unknown animals were upon me!I could not find my way:I was lost in a wood!Icould not tell which was east or west,north or south,but wandered about here and there,crying and calling,thoughI knew that no one could hear me.I was hungry,cold,scared,altogether very miserable indeed.Paragraph 2:At last I heard my own name called.Then came familiar voices near me.That was my family!Instantly,I triedto respond loudly and urgently,uHere!Here!”Within minutes,my family came into my eyes.Rushing towardsthem,I threw myself to their warm hugs.In a guilty tone,my brother said,“My poor little sister!I thought youwould know I was only quizzing you.Smiling at him,I said,There is no treasure at the end of the rainbow.Butour family are!”Possible version 3Paragraph 1:But I soon found that my troubles had only begun.I couldnt find the previous way!A chill crept over me.With my lips trembling,I was reduced to tears.Hoping to find something more,I still walked through the woods.However,it seemed that the god wasnt blessing on me.Ultimately,I sat down by the tree with my arms aching.Ifelt extremely tired and my spirits sank,tears streaming down my cheeks again.Paragraph 2:At last I heard my own name called.A wild excitement took hold of my sinking heart.Somebody was lookingfor me!Rushing forward quickly,I saw it was my brother,who was seized by a burst of anxiety.Seeing me with abig smile,he rushed to me and gave me a long and affectionate hug,eyes beaming with relief.This experience mthe summer afternoon gave me a lesson.There was no treasure at the end of the rainbow,but the love between mybrother and me.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者听了哥哥的话，认为在彩虹的尽头会找到珍宝，作者向树林里跑去，但是却什么也没有找到，除了泥泞的脚和一件湿漉漉的破衣服。1 .段落续写:由第一段首句内容“但我很快发现，我的麻烦才刚刚开始“可知，第一段可描写作者在回家路上遇到的困难。由第二段首句内容“最后我听到有人叫我自己的名字”可知，第二段可描写作者在哥哥的帮助下回家。2.续写线索：冷得发抖向前挪动尖叫到家3.词汇激活行为类冷得发抖：shivering with cold/tremble with cold向前挪动：inch forward/move forward尖叫：shriek/scream至家：arrive at home/get home情绪类惊恐：filled with fright/in horror关切：concern/care【点睛】高分句型 lThe voice came from distance,but I could figure out it was my brother/省略了连接词 Ihal 的宾语从句）高分句型 2FoIlowing him,I arrived at home safe and sound finally.（用现在分词作状语）2.（广东省普通高中2021-2022学年高三质检）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One spring morning many years ago,I had been searching for gold along Coho Creek on southeastern AlaskasKupreanof Island,and as I appeared from a forest,I froze in my tracks.No more than 20 paces away in the bog（沼泽）was a huge Alaskan wolf-caught in one trap.From her appearance,I guessed that she had been trapped only a few days.I suspected that if I tried to releasethe mother wolf,she would turn aggressive and try to tear me to pieces.Whats next?I wondered.The mother wolf was clearly suffering.Yet each time I moved in her direction,shelet out a howl.I thought I had to find her something to eat.I hiked toward Coho Creek and spotted the leg of a dead deer.I whispered gently,“OK,Mother,your dinner isserved,but only if you stop growling at me.Come on,now.Easy.She sniffed them,then gobbled them up.Over the next few days,I divided my time between searching and trying to win the mother wolfs trust.Italked gently with her,threw her more meat.Little by little,I kept edging closerthough I was careful to remainbeyond the length of her chain.The big animal never took her dark eyes off me.Come on,Mother,1 pleaded.“You want to go back to your friends on the mountain.Relax.On the fifth day,I delivered her daily meat.Heres dinner,1 said softly as I approached.I slowly placed myhand on the mother wolfs injured leg.I applied pressure.The trap was open,and the mother wolf pulled free.My experience in nature suggested that the mother wolf would now disappear into the woods.But cautiously,she walked toward me.Slowly,she sniffed my hands and arms.Yet,strangely,it all seemed so natural.After a while,the mother wolf was ready to go into the forest.Then she turned back to me.At the same time,the mother wolf sent a long howl into the air.Then she disappeared.Four years later,after serving in World War II,I returned to Coho Creek.There,standing,I gave out a long,low wolf call-something I had done many times before.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:An echo（回声）came back across the distance.Paragraph 5:Moments later,the wolf was gone.【答案】Paragraph 1:An echo（回声）came back across the distance.Again I called.This time followed by a wolf call from about ahalf-mile away.Then,far off,I saw a dark shape moving slowly in my direction.As it approached to me,I couldsee it was the wolf.An unusual feeling spread through my whole body.I knew at once that familiar shape,evenafter four years.Hello,old girl,I called gently.The wolf got closer,and stopped a few yards off,her tail swayedslightly.Paragraph 2:Moments later,the wolf was gone.I left Kupreanof Island a short time after that,and I never saw the animalagain.But the memory she left with mevividwill always be there,a reminder that there are things in nature thatexist outside the laws and understanding of man.We can only accept them andbecause theyre with an air ofmystery and strangeness-perhaps treasure them all the time.1 feel lucky to have an animal friend.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在森林中遇到了一只被陷阱困住的母狼，作者给它喂食,在获得了它的信任后作者放走了母狼，母狼消失在了森林中。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“远处传来回声“可知，第一段可描写作者听见了那只母狼的回应。由第二段首句内容“过了 一会儿，狼不见了“可知，第二段可描写作者的感悟。2.续写线索：叫看见狼狼走近感悟3.词汇激活行为类叫：call/shout看见：see/catch sight of走近：get closer/approach情绪类轻轻地：gently/lightly幸运的：lucky/forlunale【点睛】高分句型 lAs it approached to me.I could see it was the w olf.（由 as 引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2But the memory she left with mevividwill always be there,a reminder that there are thingsin nature that exist outside the laws and understanding of m an.（由 that 弓|导的定语从句,省略了 引导词 that；由that引导的同位语从句；由 that引导的定语从句）3.（福建省宁化第一中学2021-2022学年高三月考）阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文，续写词数应为150左右。My great-grandfather,my grandfather and my father are farmers,and so are all my family.My father has afixed idea that I would become a farmer too.Although I respect him and am indeed skilled at doing some farmwork,I dont agree that I should automatically follow in my father footsteps.When I was a teenager,my father happened to take me to an airport which belonged to one of his friends.Itwas the first time I had seen an aeroplane in real life.Knowing that I had never been on board,my fathers friendTom offered me an opportunity to fly with him in his small aeroplane.I quickly accepted his offer!When we tookoff,I felt nervous but thrilled.Being up in the clouds and looking at the view below was unlike anything I had everfelt.I was just enjoying it.I assumed being a pilot would be the most awesome thing in the whole world.From thatday a thought crept into my mind that I wanted to become a pilot,but I doubted whether my father would supportme.After all,it was a totally different path from what he had planned for me.Therefore,I put the thought to theback of my mind,because I knew he would still insist on holding onto his previous idea.Anyway,besides helping my father on the farm,I would frequently visit Toms airport.Gradually,I gotfamiliar with every button and switch on the aircraft and I learned a lot about planes,such as how to fill the planewith fuel,how to check the engines and so on.But what I had learned just left me wanting more,so I decided to goto college to become a professional pilot.Paragraph 1:This time I would not hide my desire any more.Paragraph 2:At the graduation ceremony,with my father present,I,as“Best Pilot”,had to deliver a speech.【答案】Possible version:This time I would not hide my desire any more.Determined to follow my heart,I explained to my father how Ifelt.I told him that 1 wanted to go to a college to learn to fly instead of being a farmer.After saying this,I waitednervously for his reaction,lb my surprise,he approved my request,and he told me he was moved by myperseverance.With his support and my efforts,I was admitted into my ideal college.At the graduation ceremony with my fhther present J,as“Best Pilot had to deliver a speech.In my speech,Ishared with the audience my story about how a teenager realized his dream.Faced with difficulties,I took a paththat led me do something that needed passion,training and practice.I also owed my success to my fathers support.Without his understanding,I couldnt have pursued my dream.At the end of my speech,I spotted my fatherswatery eyes,and said,Dad,I made it!”His face lit up with pride.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，因为家里祖祖辈都是农民，父亲认为子承父业是很自然的事情，但我却不这么认为。一次偶然的机会，爸爸带我去了他朋友汤姆拥有的匕机场，第一次坐上了飞机的我，非常兴奋，并暗下决心成为飞行员。于是，我常到汤姆叔叔的飞机场帮忙。越/解飞机的知识，越想成为专业的飞行员。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：这次我不再掩饰我的渴望了。所以接下来应该围绕我向父亲表达了想成为飞行员的梦想。根据第二段已给信息得知，我说出自己的想法后，父亲应该同意并支持了我。在本段应描写我的心理活动及父亲的做法和状态。第二段开头是：父亲出席了我的毕业典礼，我作为“最佳飞行员”必须发表演讲。本段应围绕我演讲的内容，描述为实现梦想付出的努力。最后可以描述父子之间感情的升华，如父亲为我实现梦想而骄傲等。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，注意语言通顺，符合逻辑，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：approve,instead of,understanding,to ones surprise等高级词汇;文章恰当的使用 了 宾语从句,如“I told him that I wanted to go to a college to learn to fly instead ofbeing a fhrmer.和To my surprise,he approved my request,and he told me he was moved by my perseverance.“使文章表达更加地道。4.（福建省三明市第二中学2021-2022学年高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。1 was in my room,unwilling to head to the community theatre with“my brother“Henry.He was just adoptedby my parents recently.I was not in the mood for being onstage with him.“Kirstie,come here,my mom called.Following her voice,I found her outside the bathroom,holding a wetbook.She gave the book a shake.Henrys book was in the bathtub.Did you put it there?”She glared at me,something she never did before Henry came to our home.I didnt wet his book on purpose.Tears of hurt cloudedmy eyes.Worse still,she promised to buy him a new copy.My heart ached.Henry was stealing my mothers love.He was ruining my life.Meanwhile,Henry was just nearby,absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot（绳结）as usual.Why dida boy like him do the girly work?Far from manly!Soon,it was time to have to set off to the community theatre.As Henry walked ahead of us to the car,my momtook me aside and said in a low voice,MIts the first time for Henry to be onstage.Be kind to him,Honey.I noddedbut sighed.Being kind didnt use to be hard.But after Henry moved in,everything felt different.The theatre used tobe a special place for my parents and me.With Henry involved,it didnt seem so special any more.Finally,it was our stage time.My heart beat wildly.I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while.As we kidslined up,ready to act out our short play,I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring（束带）on my skirt.Sureenough,my skirt began to drop.Laughter from the audience could be heard,and even though I was wearing shortsunder my skirt,I could feel my face burst into flames.However,my hands were full.If only someone could helpme out!注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Right then,Henry sensed my embarrassment.After the performance,I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.【答案】Right then,Henry sensed my embarrassment.He immediately came to my aid.He pulled up my skirtand skillfully tied the drawstring with a beautiful knot.Seeing what Henry did fbr me,something deep in my mindbegan to change.It seemed as if my cold heart began to melt slowly and my annoyance at him gradually gave wayto guilt.I regretted having treated him as a stranger.While my mind was wandering,our performance time came.Itturned out a great success,thunderous applause filling the whole theatre.After the performance,I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.Thanks,9,1 said with a gratefillsmile on my face.I had to admit that but for his timely help,I would have been extremely embarrassed.Without hisknotting skill,the performance would have been quite different.UKNOT a problem.You are my sister/*he grinnedinnocently,saying humorously.Surrounded by the cheerful atmosphere,I felt a flood of warmth of a big family.Maybe it wouldnt be so bad to have a new person in my corner of the world after all.【解析】本文以人物为线索，主要讲述了作者因为家里新收养的孩子，觉着母亲不再关注自己，他偷r母亲对自己的爱而内心备受伤害。却在一次戏剧演出中，自己的裙子束带松了，这个男孩帮助了作者，避免了在舞台上裙子掉落的尴尬。通过这件事，作者也才意识到家里有了这个新成员也是一件不错的事。段落续写：由第一段首句内容“在那时，亨
