初中九年级英语写作训练50题含参考范文.pdf

初中九年级英语写作专题训练50题-含参考范文一、话题作文1.假如你是B ob.你现在在中国四川,请给你的好友John写封信，介绍你在中国四川的情况,不少于50个词，开头和结尾部分已给出.Dear John,Im in Sichuan now.Im glad to be here.Yours,Bob【答案】Dear John,Im in Sichuan now.I make a lot of new friends and they are friendly to me.My schoolis not far from my home.So I usually walk to school.It takes me about fifteen minutes to getthere.The teachers are also very good and kind to me.They help me study Chinese.Iespecially like the food here.They are very delicious.For breakfast,Td like an egg and someapples.I have lunch at school.I usually have chicken and rice.I have dinner at home with myparents.Tm glad to be here.Yours,Bob【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Bob的身份给自己的好友John写信，告诉他你在四川的情况。短文只给出了主题，具体的写作内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这封信是写给熟悉的朋友的，关系比较亲密，信中可以给他介绍你在四川的日常生活，如你的学校、同学、老师，你在那里的起居、饮食习惯等等。文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要根据题目要求介绍自己的日常生活，不能偏离主题，写一些无关的东西。合理安排各部分之间的内容，注意层次清晰，内容充实。其次应注意英语句式的结构和表达习惯，不能根据汉语思维，逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。选择适当的单词、短语和句型去表达，句式结构以简单句为主，易于掌握，表达也比较清晰、明了。同时注意整篇文章的连贯性，可以使用一些衔接成分。【点睛】这是i篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给自己的好朋友写信，介绍了自己在四川的情况。首先短文内容充实，符合题目要求。短文从自己交新朋友、学校、老师以及自己的一日三餐等方面进行介绍，表达准确，叙述清晰、完整。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。以简单句为主，简洁、明了。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如 Imake a lot of new friends and they are friendly to m e.、My school is not far from my home.So I usually walk to school.、It takes me about fifteen minutes to get there.For breakfast,rd like an egg and some apples.I have dinner at home with my parents 等等。2.你的上个周末是怎么度过的？请你以My busy weekend为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的周末。写作要求：1.文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名；2.语句通顺、意思连贯，标点正确；3.词数60左右。【答案】例文One possible version:My busy weekendI was very busy last weekend.On Saturday I did my homework at home.After I finishedmy homework,I helped my mother clean the room.Though I was a little tired,I was veryhappy.In the evening I played the guitar.I like reading books and playing guitar very much.On Sunday I went to the zoo with my family.I saw many kinds of animals.We had a goodtime there.I had a happy and busy weekend.I enjoyed myself last weekend.【详解】I.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己忙碌的周末情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。3.书面表达以“How to keep healthy”为题，写一篇短文。要求：条理清楚，字迹工整，6080词。【答案】How to Keep HealthyHealth is very important for everybody.Then how can we do to keep healthy?You can try thefollowing tips:First,you should have healthy eating habits.You should eat more vegetables and fruit.Ifsgood fbr you.Dont eat too much meat.Dont drink coffee too much.Second,you can play sports.Sports can make you stronger and healthier.You can playbasketball with your friends when you are free.You can go to the mouuntains with yourfamily.Third,be happy.A happy man lives longer than a sad man.So sing a song or watch a funmovie.You can do anything to make yourself happy.At last,stay away from smoking and drinking.Smoking and drinking are too bad fbrmen.They can cause terrible illness.If you do these things,I believe you can be a healthy man.【详解】试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以How to keep healthy为题写一篇作文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的重点词汇，如 healthy habits健康的习惯，eating habits饮食习惯，be good for对.有好处，do exercise进行锻炼，keep fit保持健康。我们要围绕这些重点词汇组织短文的写作。其他很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。写作亮点：这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从健康的习惯、锻炼等几个方面，告诉我们如何才能保持健康，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如 Health is very important for everybody.Then how can we do to keep healthy?等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如If you do these things,1 believe you can be a healthy man.At last,stay away from smokingand drinking.等。考点：话题类作文。4.运动可以让我们更健康，爬山成为很多年轻人喜爱的运动。假如你和同学计划本周日去爬山，请根据提示，写一篇60词左右的短文。要求：层次清楚，结构完整。提示词：classmate,Sunday,meet,school gate,leave,take,guitar,bread,water,fun【答案】例文This Sunday my classmates and I are going to climb mountains.We plan to meet at theschool gate.We are leaving at 8:30 a.m.They are going to take many things,such as somedelicious food,different kinds of drinks,the guitar and so on.I am going to take some breadand water.When we have a rest,Li Kang is going to play the guitar and sing some songs forus.I think we must have fun.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，内容是根据提示，写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍一下你和同学本周日计划去爬山的情况。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般将来时为主，用 begoing to 描述场景；首先提出周末计划；其次具体介绍活动安排：最后是祝愿。5.阳光中学校报英文版正在为其栏目“你所熟悉的身边人”征稿。请根据提供的信息，以“My friend”为题撰写一篇稿件，介绍你的好朋友Jack。注意：(1)要点清楚，语言流畅，字数80词左右(2)短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥SchoolNameJackAge13Comes fromEnglandLives inChinaSunshine Middle SchoolClass2Grade7Lookstall and strong,short hairBe good atMaths,drawingHobbiesSports,a member of the school basketball teamHis dreama basketball playerHeroYao MingMy friendI have a good friend.【答案】My friendI have a good friend.His name is Jack.He is 12 years old.He comes from England,but nowhe lives in China.He is a student in Class2 Grade?in Sunshine Middle School.Jack is talland strong,he has short hair.He is good at Maths and drawing.He likes sports and he is amember of the school basketball team.He hopes to be a basketball player like Yaoming.Because Yaoming is her hero.【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时来描写人物，所以在写作时，要尤其注意一般现在时的表达方式。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如:be good at,comes from 等，还有注意an d 和 because等连接词的用法。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。考点：提纲作文。6.健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们非常重要，请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇作文，谈谈你的看法。提示：可以从饮食健康、锻炼身体以及良好的生活习惯等方面入手。要求：1.词数80左右。2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。【答案】例文：How to Keep HealthyAs we all know,health is very important in our life.So how can we keep healthy?First,it is necessary to keep a balanced diet.We should eat more fruit and vegetableswhich are rich in vitamins.Also,we should have meals regularly.Second,to have a strongbody,we should exercise more.If we dont have much time to exercise,we can try to ride ourbikes or walk to school.Ifs also good exercise.Third,get up early and never stay up late.They are both good for our health.We must make sure we sleep at least eight hours a day.Besides these,we must keep away from some bad habits,such as smoking and drinking.I believe if we can form good living habits,we are sure to live a healthy life.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写短文谈谈如何保持健康，要包括提示中的几个方面。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一 人 称为主，时态采用一般现在时。文章可分为三段式:第一段点题；第二段给出具体方法；第三段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。7.你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请你结合自己所学的知识，以“Why should wesave wild animals?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，简述保护野生动物的原因。80词左右。Why should we save wild animals?答案】Why should we save wild animals?I think there are many endangered animals in the world,such as tigers and pandas.Why arethey in danger?There are many reasons.First of all,humans cut down forests,so tigers canhave few places to live in.Second,people kill many tigers for fur to make money.Forpandas,there are also few places to live in.But we couldnt live without animals around us.So we should know the importance of savingthese animals,and we must stop people from killing wild animals.【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Why should we save wild animals为题,介绍一下我们所知道的濒危的野生动物，以及我们为什么要保护他们。这是一个开放性的作文，题目中只给出了题目，而具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力，来组织语言，连接成文。在文章中应先介绍一些濒危的野生动物，简单叙述他们濒危的原因，并谈论我们要保护他们的重要性。写作时，要注意文章内容的条理性，叙述要清晰、完整。还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，不要写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的句型、短语来表达。句子之间使用一些副词或者连词，增强文章的连贯性。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求给我们介绍了我们要保护野生动物的原因。首先短文内容完整、充实，短文可以分成三个部分，首先是介绍了一些濒危的野生动物；然后分析了他们濒危的原因；最后讲述了我们要保护他们的重要性。结构很完整，叙述也很清楚、明了。其次短文中的语法规范，时态准确，句式表达符合英语的表达习惯，整体比较流畅、连贯。短文中有一些较好的句型，如 I think thereare many endangered animals in the world,such as tigers and pandas.Second,people killmany tigers for fur to make money So we should know the importance of saving theseanimals,and we must stop people from killing wild animals 等。8.书面表达请向你的同学介绍一下，你都能会些什么。约 30-50词。【答案】My name is Li Darning.Im a 15 years old boy.Im active,lovely and clever.In theschool,my favourite subject is math.I also like sports very much.I can play football andbasketball.I can swim and I am good at it.At home I can help my mother do housework.【详解】亮点说明：文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in the school,my favouritesubject,15 years old,active Jovely and clever,like sports,very much,play football andbasketball,be good at,at home,help sb.do等。虽然习作的句式和内容都较简单，但层次清楚，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。二、小作文9.健康饮食很重要，请列举出5 个你最喜欢吃的健康食品。【答案】例文：I like milk.It tastes good.I like eggs.I always have an egg for breakfast.I like eating apples because there is an old saying,tAn apple a day keeps the doctoraway.I often have vegetables because they can make me healthy.I also like eating chicken.It can provide me with the necessary nutrition.【详解】I.题干解读：题目要求写出自己喜欢的五种健康的食物，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要注意是健康食物，本文应该用第一人称描写；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。1 0.书面表达假如你是Li M in g,你的英国朋友William对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。春节将至，请结合图片内容，并适当发挥，用英语写五个完整的句子，向他介绍春节。注意：句中不得出现真实姓名或学校信息。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _【答案】Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China.Chinese people have a big dinner with family at the festival.(3)At Spring Festival,we often watch TV together after dinner.Children always get lucky money at the festival.We often make big lanterns before Spring Festival.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图写作，然后根据图片内容，写五个完整的句子，向英国朋友William介绍春节，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：句子应该用第一人称和第三人称叙述；时态采用一般现在时；介绍春节及春节活动时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。1 1.请仿照例句，用方框中提供的信息，写一写你的真实的经历(情况)，并说明理由或感受。Example:A.I have read Treasure Island once.I think it is an interesting story.B.I have never swum in the river.It is dangerous.C.I have eaten stinky tofu many times.It doesnt smell good but it tastes delicious.I have visited.I have been to.I have read.I have never.I.1.2._3._4._5._ 答 案【小题 1 】I have visited the Birds Nest twice.Tm really prould of it.【小 题 2 I have been to the Great Wall many times.I think the it is an unusual wonder inthe world.题 3 I have read Journey to the West twice.I think it is very exciting.小题 4 I have never been to Japan before.Its too far away from my home.【小题 5 I have tried Beijing Duck before.I think its very delicious.【详解】1.题干解读：该题要求按照所给的要点提示，根据例句进行仿写，描述自己的真实的经历，并说明理由或感受。2.写作指导：根据例句可知，本题主要采用现在完成时；人称以第一人称为主。写作可以结合自身的经历，描写去过的地方，读过的书等。注意写五点即可，但是要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。三、材料作文1 2.生活中有很多东西会使我们心情低落。作为学生，我们常常会遇到学习、生活、天气、环境等等方面的问题，它们可以让你感到疲惫和焦虑。但我们可以通过一系列方法消除这些情绪，让自己快乐起来。具体措施如下：1.听一些让人放松的音乐；2.做你最喜欢的运动；3.多与别人交流，寻求意见；4.读你自己最喜欢的书；5.吃可口的食物等等。请根据以上信息，以“How to Keep Happy”为题，写一篇70词左右的短文，可以适当发挥。【答案】例文：How to Keep HappyEveryone dreams to live happily.There are some ways to keep you happy.First,you can listen to some relaxing music.Second,do some exercises that you likemost.Next,you can use your spare time to talk to people and seek for some advice.Then,itwill also be helpful to read some books that you love.Finally,if you are still in a bad mood,you can eat some delicious food.Happiness can keep your life going well,so you need to keep happy all the time.【详解】L 题干解读：本题要求以“How to Keep Happy”为题，根据提示内容写一篇70词左右的短文，内容包括让自己快乐起来的一些具体措施。2.写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时；写作时应紧扣提示内容进行发挥，注意开头或结尾的总起和概括；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合英文表达习惯。1 3.旅行是一种享受，江河湖海，名胜古迹，让人领略到祖国山河的美好。暑假就要到了，假如你计划去北京旅游，请根据以下提示内容，制定你的旅游计划。提示：(1)Why do you want to go to Beijing?(2)Who will you go with?(3)How will you go there?(4)What will you do there?(5)How long will you stay there?要求：(1)短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；(3)词数70词左右。【答案】例文The summer holiday is coming.I want to go on a trip to Beijing with my parents.Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history.Ws the capital of China.We will go there bytrain.We will stay there fbr 3 days.We are going to visit Tiananmen Square and the GreatWall.We will go to Tiananmen Square to watch the raising of the national flag and we willtake a lot of photos on the Great Wall.I hope well have a great time.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍暑假去北京旅游的计划。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。介绍旅行的交通方式，跟谁一起去，计划去参观哪些旅游景点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。1 4.假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Sam打算作为交换生来到你校进行交换学习，为更好为到你校学习做准备，发邮件想了解你的学习与生活作息，并对学校的校规、课程和社团活动表示感兴趣。请根据提示信息，给他回一封邮件介绍一下相关情况。短文词数约80词，不包含给出的开头和结尾。内容：1 .你的日常生活作息(至少两点)；2.你的校规；3.你的课程和社团活动；要求：1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息、意思连贯、语法正确。2.可适当发挥“短文词数约80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Dear Sam,Thanks for your e-mail.I am very happy to tell you something about my life at schooland home.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Sam,Thanks for your e-mail.I am very happy to tell you something about my life at schooland home.I always get up early every day and go to school on foot.We have 7 classes on weekdaysand I like English and science best.After school,I first finish my homework in the classroomand then play table tennis with my classmates.There are many interesting clubs in my school,such as sports club,cooking club,musicclub and so on.I join in the sports club because I love table tennis.However,there are some rules at school.For example,we should wear school uniformand we cant eat in the classroom.The rules are strict but they will help us develop goodhabits.I hope it will help you get to know our school better.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求给外国朋友Sam写-封邮件，介绍一下你的学习与生活作息，学校的校规、课程和社团活动：注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称进行写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点以及每个要点可能用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，围绕主题准确使用词汇、语法和句型；语言表达要符合语法结构和英文表达习惯；做到层次分明，条理清晰。1 5.书面表达:请你以学生会主席吴兵的名义，根据下列提示，给学校方校长写封推荐信，推荐林涛获得本年度的新星奖，字 数 100词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。能力聪明，学东西快学习努力，擅长弹钢琴、打排球个性考虑事情周全，把每件事情都计划的很好，经常参加为有困难的孩子举行的筹款活动事迹非常勇敢，上学期，他的邻居，7 9 岁的孙奶奶的厨房着火了，他冲进去，用湿毯子裹住孙奶奶将她救了出来，他受了重伤，住院两个月Dear Mr.Fang,I would likeWe all thinkthat_Yours faithfully,Wu Bing【答案】Dear Mr.Fang,I would like to recommend Lin Tao to get the new star award this term.Lin Tao is very cleverand he learns things very quickly.He studies hard.He is good at playing the piano andplaying volleyball.He is considerate and always plans things well in advance.He is ready tohelp others and he often attend activities to help poor children.He is brave.Last term,hisneighbor Grandma Suns kitchen was on fire.He rushed in and took Grandma Sun out with awet blanket.And he was badly injured and stayed in hospital for two months.We all think that Lin Tao is such an excellent boy that he is the best choice for the new staraward.I hope you can consider my advice.Yours faithfully,Wu Bing【详解】试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以吴兵的身份，给方校长写一封推荐信，推荐林涛获得这个年度的新星奖。这是一封推荐信，在信中，我们首先应表明写这封信的目的；其次我们要阐述推荐林涛的原因，这是作文的主体部分，题目中已给出了具体的写作内容，我们需要用英语将这些内容表达出来；最后重申自己的建议，并希望校长考虑接受自己的建议。通过分析可知，这篇短文主要应使用一般现在时态，而在最后一条介绍林涛的事迹的时候，应使用一般过去时态。人称应使用第三人称，因此我们应注意一般现在时态中，谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化以及一般过去时态中，动词的过去式的变化。写作时，不要逐条翻译，要注意上下文的连贯，应使用符合英语表达习惯的词汇和句型，避免汉语式的英语。使文章表达流畅，还应使用一些好的句型。写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，给方校长写了一封推荐信。短文共包括三个主要的部分，首先是向方校长表明写信的目的，I would like I。recommend Lin Tao to get the new star award this term,一句话点明，简洁明了。接下来作者介绍了林涛的一些情况，使用了丰富的句型和短语，如 He is good at playing thepiano and playing volleyball He is ready to help others and he often attend activities to helppoor children、He rushed in and took Grandma Sun out with a wet blanket；最后作者重申了自己的提议，并希望校长予以考虑。短文的结构非常完整，内容很充实。这篇短文还使用了正确的人称和时态，注意了谓语动词形式的变化，符合英语的语法规范。考点：提纲类作文。16.人类对热带雨林的不断砍伐和破坏，导致雨林的面积逐渐缩小。现请你以“How to Protect Rainforests”为题，写一篇80词左右的文章来倡导大家保护雨林，以及告诉大家怎样保护雨林。建议：1.向人们展示并说明热带雨林的重要性；2.节约用纸，少用纸；3.让人们不要砍树；4.让人们多植树。提示词：save（节约），use,less,paper,importance（重要性），show,ask