2015届高考英语一轮近3年真题考点分类汇编《专题十九　短文改错》含解析.pdf

专题十九短文改错高考试题Passage 1（2013新课标全国I）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从 第 11处起）不计分。I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only fourwhen she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from blacktoward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he wasstrong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homeworkwith me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案:I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to me on her knees and sing old songs.I wasonly four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.州”抬I remember my grandfather very 立.He was tall,with broad and a beard that turned fromblack u w d gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set hfkis&f apart from others in our small 薪 town,A he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away 由 白 力 坞 they came over toplay or do homework with me.Howe ver,he was the gentlest man I have 兄 known.剖析:l.used to do sth.表示“过去常常做某事2.此处描述过去的事情,因此应用一般过去时，与主句时态一致。3.remember sth./sb.very well/cleady”很清楚地记得某事/某人4.人有两个肩膀,因此应用复数形式。5.tum from A to/into B 表示“由 A 变成 B”。6.他的嗓音低沉,这使他与众不同。短语set sb.apart from“使某人与众不同7.分析句子成分可知，逗号前后为两个并列的分句,且表示并列顺承关系，因此应用and连接。8.i n fact“事实上”，为固定搭配。9.during为介词，后可接名词或代词，不能引导从句，故应改为when。when在此处引导时间状语从句。10.我的爷爷是我曾见过的最温和的一个人。ever“曾经，符合语境。Passage 2（2013新课标全国H）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从 第 11处起）不计分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.lt is said to have started in the early 1800s.Havetea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock atnight.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting,it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain,therewas a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelainindustry.答案:The book Pm reading ef talks about afternoon tea in Britain.lt is said to have started in the early1 800S.HGE tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner而空 might not be served until 一 加 9松优8 oclock at night.This custom soon XUSN another meal of 色 dayjkf&5由 峭,让 had a connectionMesne d K 京7Hthe British porcelain（瓷器）industry.Tea in China was traditionally from cups without handles.When teagot popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good Gt?with handles to suit British habits.This made for theg丁 笛 首 in the porcelain industry.剖析:l.read为及物动词，其后不加介词。2.此处应用动名词短语作主语。3.which在此引导非限制性定语从句，并在从句中作主语。4.此处在介绍英国人喝下午茶这一习俗的形成,故应用一般过去时。5.day是可数名词，且在此处表特指，其前应用定冠词the。6.此处应用副词作评述性状语。7.have a connection with/to是固定搭配，表示“与.有联系”。8.分析句子结构可知，应用过去分词构成被动语态。9.此处cup为可数名词，应用复数形式表示泛指,指各种各样的茶杯。10.此处grow要作介词for的宾语，应用其名词形式growth（）Passage 3（2013陕西）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号（八）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线(_),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soon aswe arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to getimpatiently.I wanted to give up,and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pullat the pole and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.答案:My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we 丝 fishing at a lake.We took O K?j fishing poles and headed for the lake.As soonas we arrived,se we dropped the lines into the water.3 e/(7?*e waiting for about half an hour,I was beginning to死 get 指甲cE&TN工I wanted to give mygrandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there a9K sudden pull at the pole and X fish was caught.Within the next few grandfather also caught a fish.s nusurrsFeW hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.F“洗$剖析：1.句中出现了时间状语One Sunday morning且整篇文章说的是过去的事情，故用一般过去时。2.修饰名词短语fishing poles应用形容词性物主代词。3.分析句子结构可知，此处是as soon a s引导的时间状语从句,so 多余。4.根据句子意思可知，此处指的是在等了大约半个小时之后。故应用after。5.get是系动词，后面要用形容词作表语。6.根据上下文的意思可知,此处表示转折，而非并列。7.在there be句型中,b e的变化要和后面的名词保持致。根据后面的a sudden pull可知，谓语动词要用单数形式。8.此处用不定冠词a,表示泛指。9.few后面跟可数名词的复数形式。10.根据句子结构可知,feel与其逻辑主语w e之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应用现在分词作状语,表示原因。Passage 4(2013辽宁)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜钱()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep andhardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.44He has ruined hishealthy.We are worried about him.That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,!paid visit toMr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step intothe room.I saw him lying in bedjooking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missedus just as many as we missed him.答案：Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time I：2 his work.With littlesleep and hardly any break,se he works from morning till night.Hard work k iE made him very ill.He hasruined his 泪;it.We are worried about him.That is】other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,!paid2visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I7ZTinto the room.I saw him lying in bedjooking at some of the we had taken together.I understoodsr 造眸that he missed us just as 机。叮 as we missed him.剖析:1.spend time/money on sth.“在.上花费时间/钱”，为固定用法。2.因为该句逗号前面是介词短语，因此so 多余。3.因为本句的主语hard work是不可数名词，因此谓语要改为has。4.his是形容词性物主代词，后面应该接名词,所以将healthy改为healtho5.引导表语从句，且在从句中作宾语，故用whato which有选择的意思，用在此处不准。6.pay a visit to sb.表示“拜访某人，为固定搭配。7.根据上下文内容可知，此处应用his指代Mr.Johnsonso8.根据前面的Yesterday afternoon,paid,was,had等词可知应用一般过去时。9.picture是可数名词,some of the pictures是多幅画中的一部分，所以picture应该用复数形式。10.修饰动词missed应用副词much,much在此用作程度副词，而 many只可用作形容词，所以应将many改为muchoPassage 5（2013浙江）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从 第 11处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend A weekend with you.Luckily I 松 S completely free鬲srsthen,so Ill 的 say an*ive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m.Friday evening.TnDear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why wemove last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,t4He was lucky to find other one.His new job meant Ihad to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make mattersbad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfullytiring,but I know ril never fall sleep.Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary答案:Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles fef away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why welast week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find oneTHis new job meant Ihad to say goodbye to my school 空 just everything else I love in the world.To make matters5stsns0d,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is A first day of school.I amawfully,but I know Til never fall 5配空.RMGood night and remember,you,dear diary秘 my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend,sr?Yours,Rosemary剖析away是不具体的,与前面的350 miles相矛盾，故应去掉。2.宾语从句的时间状语是last week,故应改为过去时。3.又找到一份工作,又一个应该是another one。4.根据上下文可知是“同学们”应用复数形式。5.此处是并列关系应改为ando6.上文讲到的不是什么好事，这里应该是“更糟糕的是 应用比较级。7.first day是特指的需要限定,故应加the或 my。8.tiring是使人感到疲劳的，主语应该是物或事，故应改为tiredo9.fall asleep是固定搭配。10.主语是you,被插入语dear diary隔开了应改为are。Passage 6（2013四川）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；3.只允许修改10处，多者（从 第 11处起）不计分。Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my bestfriend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after thetest,all of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in thetests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I wasjust helping a friend.Why does she punish me?答案:Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test but I tried to do it.Suddenly Mary,mybest friend/*me to let her te copy my answers.After for some time,I let her copy my answers.Butafter the test,r of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had 不 sameanswers in the 1r-.We were warned not to cheat again 二 she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.Ididnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why she punish me?剖析:1.动词find后用形容词作宾语补足语。2.表示“费力地”用副词hard,hardly几乎不，是表示否定意义的副词,不符合语境。3.句中缺少谓语动词，故用asked（过去式）作谓语。4.1 e t后用不带to 的不定式作宾语补足语。5.介词after后用动词-ing形式作宾语。6.根据语境可知此处指两人都,所以用both。7.same之前需加定冠词the。8.此处指一次化学考试，所以用单数形式。9.根据语境可知此处应用连词or,表示“否则，要不然”。10.全文是在讲述过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。Passage 7（2012新课标全国）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从 第 11处起）不计分。I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until Iwas about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,!gotangry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which washappening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,Thats it.No more toys to you.Mypunishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,!found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitudechanged from then on.答案:I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and aggressive.From the time I was aboutfour until I was about six,!destroyed each of my tg .1 was happy when the toys worked,but when things did/Arays 树 r s swrong,!got angry and broke 建.For a while A parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see1七was happening.When I MGr apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,Thats it.No more toys EQyou.My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,!found out that with more patience I make my toys tolast.My attitude changed from then on.剖析:l.and连接的应该是两个并列的成分，前面是比较级more patient,后面也应是比较级，故将little改为lesso2.each o f短语后为复数可数名词，故改toy为 toys。3.do wrong做错事。其主语一般是人，而此句中主语是things东西。go wrong Hl毛病;出故障，故可将did改为went或在did后面加go表示对g o 的强调。4.此处的代词指代前面的toys,故用复数形式，改 it为 themo5.此处指的是我的父母，应在parents前加my。6.此处表示“发生什么事，故用whato7.“撕毁”动作发生在过去，应用过去式，与 said同时发生。8.给某人买玩具应用foro9.must在肯定句中表推测，语气最强，而此处语气较弱用might或 could更合适。10.根据使役动词make的用法，应将to 去掉。make sb./sth.do sth.使某人/某事物做某事。Passage 8（2012浙江）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下画-横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从 第 11处起）不计分。Two years before,!traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,!had an accident and hit anothercar,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what hadhappened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my mother wouldnot sleep if she knew.Thereibre,!told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobodyknew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.答案:Two years traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Skf had an accident and hitanother car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two Week.l called my parents,I did not tell them whathad happened.I knew that they 0 be worried about my5时 because I was so fa?：her away,and that my於 皿 落 rw/srmother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,!told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.Asa result,nobody knew A truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.剖析:1.由下文时态得知。2.因为rent是及物动词。3.此处是副词作状语。4.前有two,故用可数名词复数形式。5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折,所以用but。6.由上下文时态得知。7.此处是介宾短语,需宾格代词。8.此处无表示比较之意。9.interesting“有趣的“，修饰物,interested“感兴趣的”，修饰人,因为此处修饰stories,所以用interesting=10.因为指代上面的真实情况。Passage 9（2012辽宁）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从 第 11处起）不计分。Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.It was so kind for you to let us bring Annesfriend,Gina.Unfortunate,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on thehighway and,for a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.In the end,we drove to a service stationand waited there unless the road was clear.In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out fartoo quickly from behind a lorry.They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona答案：Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we with you.It was so kind for you to let us bring Annesfriend,Gina.URfdTXRR沮the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on thehighway and,/O?a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six.In the end,we drove to a servicestation and waited there SX帮the road was clear.In the car park 己 Gina nearly got knocked over as X car0 ft 亍 金drove out far too quickly from behind a lorryT/iev finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our ownway te home.Much love,Fiona剖析：1 .由下文可知此处应用过去式hado2.此处kind修饰you,说明you的品质，故用介词of。3.unfortunately为副词，修饰后面的句子。4.as a result结果,是固定词组。5.前面有six,故用复数名词mileso6.until/till直到，符合此处的语境。7.在那儿的一个停车场，故用thereo8.car为可数名词，此处表示泛指,故用不定冠词ao9.由后面的our可知，此处应用welO.home为副词，故前面不用介词。Passage 10(2012陕西)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线(_)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.lt is in thedowntown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internetconnection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for m