2023年高考英语写作训练-文章续写_广东二模.pdf
高考英语写作训练6 月 3 日广东二模文章续写Music has always been an essential part of myfamily.As a little girl,I often watched my momsinging with others in the church.As I grew older,she and I would sing while we did the dishes orhung clothes.My brother Dean was also a musicalsoul.In good time or in bad,there was always musicin our house.It shaped us,comforted us,and gaveus a way to express feelings that might otherwisehave gone unspoken.After Dean became a father,we learned that hisoldest son was on the autism spectrum（自闭症）.Mynephew Dj did not handle social situation well,andsometimes even for him to speak aloud outside thefamily was a struggle.He worked very hard toovercome his fears,so much so that the year hewas eight,he decided he wanted to be part of theChristmas music program with the other children inhis Sunday school class.The part he had beenoffered was one that required him to sing a verse allon his own-a solo.My brother carefully explained to him that thiswould mean singing in front of the audience;therewould be no one singing with him.Dj considered thisvery carefully.After a couple of days,he decidedthat he would accept the part.He explained to usthat he believed he could do it because it was a veryspecial occasion,and he would practice until he wasas perfect as he could be.He said he knew hisdaddy would help him to be the best singer possible.For over a month,he and his father practicedtogether.Every evening would find them lockedaway in the music room,my brother on guitar,andmy nephews small voice coming from somewheredeep down inside his little body.He gainedconfidence,and when the day of the concert arrived,he was certain all would go well.My brother waitedbackstage,giving Dj double thumbs-up,and hecame out to sit with the rest of the family to watchand take photos.When it was finally time for Dj to sing,the musicplayed on,and he froze.我们眼中孩子心理活动一表情/细微举动观众反应一沉默/意识到问题/窃窃私语我们的想法/举动Suddenly父亲开始歌唱Everyone turned to see who was singing,while Iknew it was my brother.父亲是怎么唱的孩子是怎么开口的观众反应一鼓掌欢呼文章结尾一音乐意义（首尾呼应）freeze-froze-frozen冻住 不动了 没反应了My computer is frozen.My computer froze.Freeze!不许动When it was finally time for Dj to sing,the musicplayed on and he froze.His little face grew pale,and we could see the panicin his eyes.出现问题He seemed/appeared to be quite nervous.表情、眼神、细微动作（流汗、颤抖）The pianist started the music again but still nothingcame out.问题放大The entire audience leaned forward in expectation,and some even began to whisper,while all of myfamily qripped the arms of the chair,honing hewould overcome his fear.两种对应 对比grip their fistsgrip each others handDj seemed to get smaller as each note was played.问题高潮All of a sudden,a low male voice broke the silence,singing the song for the kid.转机Everyone turned to see who was singing,while Iknew it was my brother.With each word his father sang,Dj stood a Httle回:.问题开始解决The color came back to his face and his eyes beganto sparkle.问题继续解决He opened his mouth and began to sing along,hislittle voice growing stronger with each line.彻底解决The show ended with thunderous applause,wHh thekids excitedly celebrating the praise for a job welldone.I turned to my brother with tears in my eyes.反 应（观众、孩子、我）双方动作同时发生A did sth,(with)B doing sth/B doneI was answering the questions attentively,(with)myteacher walking around.I was answering the questions attentively,(with)myclassmate scolded by the teacher.At that time no words needed to be spoken;music bonded the father and son,and made the dayfor all of us,中心“You make the day for an old woman!,When it was finally time for Dj to sing,the musicplayed on,and he froze.Seized by panic and alarm,it seemed that Djs previous confidence andrehearsals had all gone up in flames.The pianistrestarted the accompanying tune and cast Dj anencouraging look,hoeing to instill in him confidenceand courage.Still,nothing came out from the poorboy.A veil of awkward silence swept across theaudience.Obviously,everyone,including my motherand I,were at a loss what to do.SuddenM out ofnowhere rose a booming voice,which the pianistquickly grasped and resumed his accompaniment.David came into the room,whoInto the room came David,whoEveryone turned to see who was singing,while Iknew it was my brother.His voice was low butmagnetic and pleasant,which quickly caught Djsattention.Father and sons eyes met in the air.Almost miraculously,the previously deflated boysuddenly became re-energized and quickly joinedhis fathers melodic lyrics.As their singingconcluded,thunderous applause and cheers filledthe auditorium.Once off the stage,Dj threw hisarms around Dean under our misty stares.Ofcourse,no words needed to be spoken.Musicbonded the father and son,allowing them to expressfeelings that might otherwise have gone unspoken.
