2023年高考英语写作训练-海淀一模应用文.pdf

高考英语写作训练2021年海淀一模应用文假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近过度使用手机，日常生活受到影响，他为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1、表示理解；2、你的建议及理由。第一段：主题背景+表示理解第二段：建议和理由第三段：结尾交际内容Dear Jim,When it comes to phone addiction,I cannot relateto you more.There are times when I immerse myselfin the virtual world and sacrifice the real life.I reallyunderstand that guilt.负表示理解一感同身受一相似经历However,we all need to make a change beforeconsequences pile up.Here are a few things you cando.First,some apps which can lock your phone fora certain period can be helpful.Besides,it is betterto develop some healthy habits to keep your focusaway from your phone,such as reading or playingbasketball.建议一总分结构+建议句型写法理由一紧扣主题+原 因（能带来的结果/要实现的目的）I hope these tips can be of some help,and that yourlife will get back to normal soon.Look forward to yourgood news.交际性话语：避免完全复制套路、加入和主题相关内容Yours,Li Hua全文呈现Dear Jim,When it comes to phone addiction,I cannot relateto you more.There are times when I immerse myselfin the virtual world and sacrifice the real life.I reallyunderstand that guilt.However,we all need to make a change beforeconsequences pile up.Here are a few things you cando.First,some apps which can lock your phone for acertain period can be helpful.Besides,it is better todevelop some healthy habits to keep your focus awayfrom your phone,such as reading or playingbasketball.I hope these tips can be of some help,and that yourlife will get back to normal soon.Look forward to yourgood news.Yours,Li Hua