书面表达之应用文类（解析版）-备战2021高考英语系列之3年高考2年模拟1年原创.pdf

2021版3年高考2年模拟1年原创精品系列专题3 0书面表达之应用文类考支颗州2021年高考命题预测】预测一话题与考生的生活实际密切相关。书面表达提供的写作情景比较真实，写作的话题与考生的校园生活、成长经历、个人情感、学习活动等内容密切相关，关注考生的情感、态度和价值观，能够充分考查考生的独立思考能力和创新精神。预测二书面表达的词数仍将保持100词左右。考生要在文章的结构、段落的衔接和过渡等方面花费更多的心思和笔墨。预测三 写作的开放度加大。高考英语书面表达写作要求也呈现了开放的趋势，这使考生的写作内容受到的限制减少，并为考生提供了一个更加自由和开放的写作空间。预测四 根据近几年高考题的特点，2021年高考仍然考查应用文写作的可能性很大。命题形式以开放性命题为主。写与学生实际生活相关的内容，会尽可能避开热点话题。学会用简单的英语表达H常生活英语是学习的根本。任何脱离学生实际的大而空的话题，不是高考的命题风格，也不符合学生的学习的特点。不符合为用而学的思想。这就是为什么2003年高考和2020年高考关于疫情的内容基本没有，而很多人还在盲目跟风。从基础的句子开始，扎实备考，全面复习各种题材是王道。（2021考纲解读】英语考试大纲对学生的书面表达能力作了明确的规定：”要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。”高中英语课程标准也对写作作了必须要达到的要求：1.能通过文字及图表提供的信息进行简单描述；2.能写出常见体裁的应用文，如信函和一般通知等；3.能描述人物或事件并进行简单的评论；4.能填写有关个人情况的表格，如申请表等；5.能以小组形式根据课文改编短剧。书面表达是考查考生用英语表达自己思想的能力，即运用所学的英语知识及合乎英语习惯的表达方式来传递信息，进行思想交流的能力。这将要求考生根据所给的情景和要求，在限定时间内（一般30分钟）写 出100个词左右的书面材料。因此考生要做到：审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。所以，具有良好的书面表达能力是非常必要的，它也进一步突出了对考生创新能力的考查。三年高考【三年高考】18、19、20年高考试题及其解析2020年高考试题【2020 全国新课标I】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛,内容包括：1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1.词 数 100左右；2,短文题目和首句已为你写好。【答案The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us.They may be our teachers,parents or one of our elders.As forme,my father is the person I respect most.My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things withme about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study,my father will listen to me patiently and encourageme to overcome the difficulties bravely.He achieved a lot in his work,respected by his students.So,in my mindmy father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列 提 纲（重点短语）As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;第三步：连词成句LAs for me,my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny thingswith me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.根 据 提 示 及 关 键 词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：As for;and;but;So第五步：润色修改【2020 全国新课标H上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活 动，内容包括：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受注意：1.词 数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。题 目:My Weekend【答 案】My WeekendLast weekend,we took part in a picking activity.We drove from the school,and the farm was about 2kilometers away from our school.When we arrived at the farm,there are all kinds of animals,green freshvegetables and fruit trees in the farm.We were divided into two groups.One group was responsible for pickingfruits,the other packed up the fruits.Time flying quickly,the activity was over.But it was a meaningful day,whenwe learn a lot form it.Through this activity,we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is.Weshould treasure the food planted by the farmers.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.农场情况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受第二步：列 提 纲（重点短语）took part in；was responsible for；a meaningful day；should treasure第三步：连词成句1.Last weekend,we took part in a picking activity.2.One group was responsible for picking fruits,the other packed up the fruits.3.But it was a meaningful day,when we learn a lot form it4.We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1 .表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受2.表示并列补充关系：and;But;Through第五步：润色修改【2020.全国新课标HI】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。注意：1.词 数 100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。【答案】Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going!I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adaptedaccording to the textbook.Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat fbr a short English play.The play is set on a big storm after midnight,on the raft down the river navigation,we see a steamboat that is going to sink.We saved a scared boy.However,the adaption is quite a chailenge.Having written the English script,we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So wouId you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes?If it is convenient,may【pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule,Fd be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.Look forward to your early reply.Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教Miss Evans对 于 the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）write to；according to；combine；adaption；challenge；attached to；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关犍词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用 T 较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient,may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give youmore details?这句话运用了 i f 引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【2020浙 江卷】假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1.询问近况；2.分享班级最新消息；3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Peter,I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.How are you feeling now?I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.Last month,an English festival was heldin our school,and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.As soon as we finished the song,all the audience gave us warm applause.If only you had been there.We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。要求：1.询问近况(How are you feeling now?)2.告知班级消息(my good news;performed a song which you taught us)3.表达祝愿(wish you a quick and complete recovery)第二步:列提纲(重点词组)be sorry to do;on sick leave;sweep away;as soon as;give sb.warm applause;recovery第三步：连词成句1.1 am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.2.1 hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.3.As soon as we finished the song,all the audience gave us warm applause.4.We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.根据提示及关犍词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【2020 全国新高考II山东卷】假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了 5 公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.参加人员：2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下：3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Cross-Country Running Race【参考范文】A Cross-Country Running RaceLast Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-countiy running race,which nearly drew the attention of everystudent and teacher of our school.The students selected from every class took part in the competition.The route measured five kilometers,fromour school gate to the fool of Nanshan Mountain.Every runner tried their best to finish the task,with theirclassmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement.At last,all the runners managedto arrive the finish line,receiving cheers from all the directions.The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide chance fbr us to exercise,but also made usmore cohesive.【解 析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。体 裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结 构：总分总要求：1.参加人员2.跑步路线3.活动反响第二步：列 提 纲（重点词组）attend/witness/draw ones attention/manage to do sth./measure/speak highly of?provide sth.fbr sb.第三步：连词成句Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race,which nearly drew the attention of everystudent and teacher of our school.2.The students selected from every class took part in the competition.3.The route measured five kilometers,from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.4.Every runner tried their best to finish the task,with their classmates along the way giving them necessary helpas well as encouragement.5.At last,all the runners managed to arrive the finish line,receiving cheers from all the directions.6.The activity is highly spoken of,because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise,but also makes usmore cohesive.第四步：连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so.状语从句连词:because/if?though/although.定语从句连词：which/that/when/where.第五步：修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)【2020.天津卷】假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6 月 8 日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括：(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头己给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎COVID-F9Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you.Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you.The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8lh this month.During the coming-of-age ceremony,the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult,reviewing thegrowth period that we had experienced.After that,we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against theepidemic.Through the activity,what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and moredetermined.When faced with the difficulties and failures,I must overcome them.In the future,I will be a gooddoctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying,devoting myself to my work.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6 月 8 号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友C hris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给C hris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：（1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）2.对活动的感受。3.对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth.,be faced with,heal the wounded and rescue the dying,devote oneself to doing sth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During Ihe coming-of-age ceremony,theheadmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult,reviewing the growth period that we had experienced,that弓 I 导的表语从句 Through the activity,what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make usstronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句 When faced with the difficulties and failures,I mustovercome them.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that,besides,however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。2019年高考试题1.12019 全国I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展 请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1 .写信目的：2.个人优势：3.能做的事情。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。【答案】Im LiHua,an outgoing boy,who is studying in London.I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of yourteam,having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.I have some advantages for thejob.First of all,having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child,I have agood command of English and Chinese,which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.Besides,having agood knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture,I can get foreignersand the locals to know more about it.Last but not least,through my introduction and efforts,I believe,I canstrengthen the friendship between China and England.I would appreciate it if you could take my application intoconsideration.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer,a Chinese PaintingExhibition,local city,advantages,a good command of,beneficial for,familiarity with,appreciate,take myapplication into considerationo通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如 First of all,Besides,to begin with,moreover,as for me,Last but not least,等，使全文衔接自然,语义流畅。本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第 2 段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，an outgoing boy,who is studying in London.此处使用 了 同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese PaintingExhibition will be held in this local city.使用 了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China forsixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child,I have a good command of English and Chinese,whichis beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用 了 分词和非限制性定语从句。另外 First of all,Besides,Lastbut not least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如 I would appreciate it if you could takemy application into consideration 条件状语从句。无论是在学校还是今后读大学再到走上工作岗位，写好一份申请都是你必不可少的一项技能。这种形式的写作，学生需结合自身优势，考生成文时应注意：1.要点要齐全：（1）提出写信的目的申请做这个志愿者；（2）提出个人优势；（3）表达出自己能做的事情；2.时态：以一般现在时为主；3.人称：第二人称为主；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old teenager studying in London.Learning that a volunteer is needed for an exhibitionof Chinese traditional painting,I am writing to apply fbr it.I have some advantages for the job.First of all,having lived in China fbr years and learnt English since I was achild,I have a good command of both English and Chinese,which is beneficial when introducing Chinesepaintings to foreign friends.Besides,because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture,I can get foreignersand the locals to know more about it.Last but not least,through my efforts,I believe,I can strengthen thefriendship between China and England.I would appreciate it if this wonderful chance would be offered to me.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua2.【2019 全国II假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】本文要求给你的队友Chris写一封邮件，告知他关于近期参加排球比赛的情况。邮件的主要内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。1.考生在写作的时候，要注意：由于书面表达开放性很强，只为考生提供了一个笼统的写作提纲，因此首先，要在邮件的开始点明排球比赛的具体信息，可以自己增加一些内容等。其次，写明比赛的赛前准备等。另外，在邮件中最后表达自己的期望等。2.时态：以般将来时为主；3.人称：第 人称：4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5,适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。同时要灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。【答案】Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.The match will take place inour school gym on the morning of July 8th.We will play against a team from Chao Yang High school.For goodperformance in the match,we must get fully prepared and practice hard.So starting morning,we all need to trainfor two hours after school every day.In addition,we should avoid getting hurt during the training and have ahealthy diet to keep fit.Youre an excellent player.With you on the team,we have every hope of beating another team.Lets try hardtogether.Sincerely,Li Hua3.12019全国HI】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】随着网络的发展，写电子邮件是中学生经常与朋友沟通的一种方式，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1.要点要齐全：(1)音乐节的时间(2)活动的安排(3)欢迎朋友表演一个节目2.时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；3.人称：第二人称为主；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅：5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【答案】Dear Alien,1 am writing to invite you to attend the Music Festival to be held from 8：00 a.m.to 5：00 p.m.next Sunday inmy school.In order to enrich our after-class life,our school is to organize this festival,which is intended to promote Chinesetraditional folk music as well as enjoy foreign ones.Not only will you appreciate wonderful folk music items likeperformances of Erhu and Guzheng,but also you can give a performance to us in person.I hope you can play thepiano or sing an English song for us.Looking forward to your coming.I promise it will be a feast for your eyes and ears.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li hua4.12019浙江】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮