人教版初中英语中考历年常考15个话题写作备考指导.docx

话题一：个人情况【佳作欣赏】/ Love You；”English TeacherI have met mar)u good teadliMSiin the tost three qecirs. Mytngti5trteux:he例.HgTTgkmbofthemrNvwtutrme teLL 也u。bout himMr. Hua ng is 才me d ium he ight a n d。tittte thin. He o twoysi/i/eorsa pair of glasses. He is very strict with us but fboutevery student. l/l/6ec the students from poor families ore in trouble.he is atwaijs，taaaro句 to hetp themE n gtishrtErrche厂bsEU宓十iHiututo moke ourdoss ively. /Vlarq sludenls /q in love with Englishruse o hirrr"furget you/ ove you； mq EngLish teache! / wjHr单元链接年级单元话题功能七上Unitl My name's Gina.结交新朋友介绍自己：问候他人； 询问并给出电话号码七上Unit2 This is my sister.家庭介绍人物；辨认人物七上Unit 8 When is your birthday?日期谈论日期七下Unit 1 Can you play the guitar?加入俱乐部谈论能力七下Unit 9 What does he look like?外貌特征描述人物的外貌八上Unit 3 Fm more outgoing than my sister.个人特点谈论个人特点；与他 人作比较九年级Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.我们是如何变化的谈论你过去是什么样 的话题解读英语课程标准中关于“个人情况”的子话题有：1.个人信息；2.家庭信息；3.学校信息；4.兴趣与爱好；5. 工作与职业。分析河北近10年（20112020）中考书面表达的命题形式可知，针对此话题，共考查过5次：2020年紧扣热点， 以一个家庭为着眼点，通过叙述疫情下一位母亲去前线抗疫的故事，体现了中国所有医护人员舍小家保大家的家国 情怀；2019年分别从“家”和“学校”两方面表达对父母、师生的感谢；2017年要求以“真实的自我”为主题， 从自身的优点、如何提升自我和自己将来的梦想三方面写一篇演讲稿；2013年在写一份建议更换主题的发言稿中 涉及到对“爱好”的描述；2011年介绍他人的故事，并谈论对故事的感受及从故事中学到了什么。从全国来看，关于“个人情况”的相关话题主要从以下角度进行考查：1 .介绍自己的家庭情况（2019武汉，2019黄冈）；2 .介绍自己或他人的外貌、性格、爱好等（2020桂林，2019滨州，2019百色，2019柳州，2019泸州）；3 .介绍社会中的热点人物、著名人物或你心中的英雄（2020贵港，2020广元，2019河南）；4 .讲述一件事或经历，表达自己的看法或感受（2020临沂，2019天津，2018上海，2018安徽）：5 .感恩他人，如感恩父母、老师、朋友等（2020金华，2020襄阳，2019昆明，2019天水，2019自贡）；6 .认识与评价，如每个人都有自己的独特之处（2020上海，2019呼和浩特）：说明自己的优缺点（2019南通）;7 .讲述自己是如何变化的（2019临沂）。话题素材串联一、常用话题词汇1 .外貌：tall, short, strong, thin, handsome, beautiful/nice, good- looking, fat, look like, （be） of medium height, a round face, two big eyes, have a sweet smile> short straight hair2 .性格品质、与人相处:kind（beto sb.）, friendly（beto sb.）, strict（bewith sb.）, shy» quiet, active, outgoing, patient（bewith sb.）, popular（bewith sb.）, easy-going（随才口的），lovely, loving（慈爱的），humorous, brave, funny, clever/smart, calm, lazy, selfish（自私的）,mean（吝啬的）,get on/along with sb.3 . 职业：teacher, worker, doctor, nurse, dentist, driver, writer, engineer, farmer, policeman/policewoman, postman» actor/actress» singer* dancer* scientist* musician» cook, pilot, coach, manager, businessman4.兴趣爱好：hobby, like, prefer, enjoy, favorite, be fond of, be interested in体育：go fishing» go hiking, play basketball/footbalL running, swimming（2）收藏：collect stamps/old coins/balls/shells（贝壳）（3）其他：fly kites, read novels, write stories5. 能力：be able to, be good at/do well in, learn about, learnfrom, try one's best to do sth., be talented in 二、佳句欣赏与运用谚语类A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助之。Everyone has his price.天生我材必有用。人物介绍类Jack is a 15-year-old boy with great ability.He has a strong will and never gives up.He's of medium height and always wears a pair of glasses.He's very helpful. He is always ready to help others.My grandparents have had a great influence on me.She always encourages us to speak English as much as possible.【仿写】我的英语老师总是鼓励我努力学习。My English leacher always encourages me lo sludy hard.He is friendly to everyone and he often helps people out.He is good at math and he is also talented in sports.【仿写】露西在美术方面很有天分。Lucy is lalented in art.I used to be shy, but now I'm outgoing.I spend some of my free time playing football for my team.【仿写】她经常花一些时间辅导我们做作业。She oflen spends some lime helping wilh our homework.There is no doubt that he is a successful teacher.【仿写】毫无疑问，我的妈妈是一位伟大的妈妈。There is no doubt that my mother is a great mother.兴趣爱好类Hobbies can open up our eyes to the outside world.Hobbies can make me grow as a person» develop my interests and improve my skills.My life is full of happiness because of my hobby.I'm fond of classical literature.Li Lei is interested in/takes an interest in/has a strong interest in swimming.【仿写】我对旅游有浓厚的兴趣。| have a strong interest in traveling.He is crazy about listening to English songs.He often loses himself in reading books.Darning gets excited about watching movies.I'm deeply in love with climbing mountains.【仿写】她热衷于收集各种东西，如火车票、邮票和硬币。She is crazy about collecting all kinds of things, such as train tickets, stamps and coins.典例剖析(原创热点题)每到毕业季，学生们都会以各种方式表达对老师的感谢之情，如“因毕业希望老师批准永久请假” “最后一堂课唱歌送别班主任”等。悲欢的背后是老师对学生的关怀和学生对老师深深的敬意。请根据下列提示和 要求，以 “I Love You, My English Teacher” 为题，写一篇短文。提示：(1)What's your English teacher like?(2)Why do you like him or her?要求：（1）短文须包括提示的两个问题，可适当发挥；（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。【审题指导】这是一篇提纲作文。需仔细审题，理解信息，明确要点。本文适合四段式写法：第一段简要点明 你喜欢的老师是谁；第二段介绍你喜欢的英语老师的相关情况；第三段说明你喜爱这位老师的原因；第四段抒发你 对老师的感谢之情。文章时态主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。但是在叙述老师相关的情况时，应使用 第三人称。【写作导图】【作文失分点与句子升格】失分点此类作文是全国各地中考的高频话题之一，对大多数学生来说比较容易写作。结合此篇作文来讲，易失分的地 方主要有：1 .描述人物外貌时，be与has混淆不清；2 .不善于运用亮点短语、并列句和复合句，句式简单枯燥，缺乏趣味性。句子升格（答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现）1. He is strict with every student.He also cares about every student.（改为并列句，使句意保持不变）2. The students have trouble.He is always ready to help them.（ffl "when 引导的从句'和"in trouble”升格，改为复 合句）3. So many students like English.（用“faH in love with"和"because of him”升格，使句意更立体）【佳作欣赏】I Love You, Mv English TeacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher Mr.Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about him.Mr.Huang is of medium height and a little thin. He always wears a pair of glasses. He is very strict with us but he cares about every student.When the students from poor families are in trouble, he is always ready to help them.I Hke my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively. Many students fall in love with English because of him.I love you, my English teacher! I will never forget you.【名师赏析】本文的亮点之处有：l.be of medium height, be strict with, care about, be in trouble, be ready to do sth., fall in love with等短语的灵活运用，体现了作者丰富的语言积累和扎实的基本功；2.but, because等连词的运 用，使句式结构富于变化，同时表意更加清楚明白；3.整篇作文层次分明，内容完整：第一段引出写作主题；第二 至三段分别对应写作要点提示的前两点；最后一段表达自己对老师的喜爱之情。 实战演练（原创热点题）在经历了 2020新冠肺炎疫情、抗洪抢险等大灾难后，很多人对“英雄”有了新的认识，不再是 一味地追捧流量明星，而是对那些奋战在一线的医护人员、战士、志愿者等表现出了极高的敬仰之情。请根据下列 提示和要求，以“The Hero in My Heart”为题，写一篇短文。提示：（1 ）Who is the hero in your heart?（2）What did he/she do?（3）What do you think of him/her?要求：（1）短文须包括提示的三个问题，可适当发挥；（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。The Hero in My HeartThere are many heroes in our life. Among them. Doctor Zhong Nanshanis oneof the heroesI admiremost.He fought againsl the terrible virus twice without thinking about his own safety.2003 , he led his medical workers o fight against SARS successfully. 17 years later,akhough he is already 84， he led hiseam loWuhanlo fighl against COVID -19. With his knowledge，he gavg lotsof usefuladvice on what todo to avoidthevirus.Hisadvice saved thousands ofpeople.I'll studyhard andbe a useftil personlike him inthefuture.思路点拨1 .体裁：记叙文2 .人称：以第三人称为主3 .时态：以一般现在时为主（介绍第2点时用过去时）4 .段落布局：三段式写作：第一段直接引入写作主题，说明你心目中的英雄是谁（提示第1点）；第二段介绍 这个英雄人物的事迹（可列举12个示例，提示第2点）；第三段说明你的态度或未来的打算（提示第3点）。同学们，你们还积累了哪些好词好句？赶快写一写吧！话题二：居住环境【佳作欣赏】Hi.JohnI'mtod to hear that you're ptarto tnt£hLduring the surr7077r正力k? to invie you 1。my力0777或Hetfei 十mvisittbEties in the northern part of Chiith Shijiazhucjngaspitatpitqr1t-hbsQpopjtati©imfWE-rj'TTrTittiQjBecunmjfths-niceTfEntttpttnTctsTintttio nspf 寸TJWHBKtoe tioTYie andL If you come here： you canijoy rush oi： b lEskiESinnmiias wsttos beo utiful rand clear Th7VIo叫 forrnwisiptbCBbOf9HUIChengd年加QuntQiTrResortpewettworttiisiting. Besides； you con taste diff(iBCTiiitsusiibt kinds of delicious foodLooking forwadt。meeting yout单元链接年级单元话题功能七上Unit 4 Where's my schoolbag?房子周围的东西谈论东西在哪儿七下Unit 8 Is there a post office near here ?街区在大街上问路和指路八上Unit4 What's the best movie theater?你的城镇讨论偏好；作比较八下Unit 10 Fve had this bike for three years.居住环境谈论所有物和周边的事 物话题解读英语课程标准中关于“居住环境”的子话题有：1.房屋与住所；2.居室；3.家具和家庭用品；4.社区分析河北近10年（20112020）中考书面表达的命题形式可知，关于“居住环境”话题的考查，近10年均未涉 及。从全国来看，关于“居住环境”的相关话题主要从以下角度进行考查：1 .介绍社区，如社区的条件、邻居及对社区的感受等（2019扬州）；2 .介绍家乡或你所居住的城市的周围环境（2020安徽，2019遵义，2019广州，2019定西，2018黄冈）；3 .介绍家庭或家乡的变化（2019广元）；4 .介绍周边事物的变化（2019孝感）。话题素材串联一、常用话题词汇1 .地理位置表达：liein/on，be located in/on"s stand in/on",2 .方位介词（短语）：on> in, under, below, near/next to, behind, above, over, betweenand，in front of, across from, opposite, on the left/right二、佳句欣赏与运用谚语类A good neighbor is better than a brother in the next village.远亲不如近令B。There is no place like home./East or west, home is the best.金窝银窝，不如自己的草窝。地理位置类Guangdong is located in the southern part of China.On the top of the mountain stands a village.My hometown lies in the south of Zhejiang.It's a beautiful city with lots of woods, flowers and green areas.【仿写】我生活在一个有着悠久历史的古老的城市。I live in an ancient city with a long history.Beijing is a good place to have fun.It has a population of about 120 , 000.We can not only have delicious food, but also enjoy friendly service.【仿写】这里不仅风景优美，而且美食闻名。Il has not only beautiful scenery,but also famous food.You can enjoy fresh air, blue skies as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers.There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Great Wall and the Palace Museum.Gulang Island is really worth visiting.典例剖析（原创题）你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下提示，用英语在QQ上给他留言，介绍并推荐 你的家乡河北。词数80左右。提示：Localion（位置）：northern part of China（2）Capital city： Shijiazhuang（3）Population： over 75 million（4）Environment： air, mountains,（5）Places of interest： Beidaihe（北戴河），Chengde Mountain Resort（承德避暑上庄）要求：（1）必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；（3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。Hi, John,I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation.I'd like to invite you to my hometown Hebei for a visit.I'm looking forward to meeting you!【审题指导】根据题目要求，可知本文是一篇应用文。写作时，可采用“三段谋篇法“安排写作：第一段引 入写作主题（已给出）；第二段根据提示，从地理位置、省会城市、人口、环境、旅游名胜五个方面重点介绍河北的 相关情况（需学生完成）；最后一段表达期盼见到朋友的急切心情（已给出）。写作时，以第三人称为主，时态用一般 现在时，注意词数要求和语句之间的自然衔接和合理过渡。【写作导图】【作文失分点与句子升格】失分点此类作文比一般写入叙事类作文难度大。针对此篇作文，学生易失分的地方主要有：1 .描述地理位置时不知用什么句式；2 .表达“有多少人口”时按照中文思维去翻译；3 .词汇、句式积累太少，导致文章结构简单没有亮点。总之，学生在平时一定要加强复合句的训练，为作文增添色彩。句子升格（答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现）1. Hebei lies in the northern part of China.Shijiazhuang is its capital city.（用“with 表伴随的结构“将两句合并为一 句）2. The environment is nice.lt attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad.（用“because of'将句子升格）3. You come here and you can enjoy fresh air, blue skies, beautiful mountains and clear rivers.（用“if 引导的条件 句"和"as well as”改写句子）【佳作欣赏】Hi, John,I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation.I'd like to invite you to my hometown Hebei for a visit.Hebei lies in the northern part of China with Shijiazhuang as its capital city.lt has a population of over 75 million.Because of the nice environment, it attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad.If you come here, you can enjoy fresh air, blue skies as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Beidaihe and Chengde Mountain Resort are well worth visiting.Besides, you can taste different kinds of delicious food.I'm looking forward lo meeting you!【名师赏析】此篇作文的开头和结尾已给出，学生需要重点写作提示的内容，如何把提示的内容写出彩是得高 分的关键。此篇范文很好地做到了这一点。首先，将地理位置和省会城市这两点信息通过with结构串联起来，起 笔给人以深厚的写作功底的印象；紧接着介绍环境时，分别用了 becauseof和if引导的从句，使句式变化多样；最 后以be worth visiting落笔，直抒胸臆。实战演练美丽中国，美丽长江。黄冈是长江边一座美丽的城市。假如你是黄冈某中学的一名中学生李明，请你以"美丽 的黄冈”为话题，向你的英国笔友Tom介绍一下你美丽的家乡一一黄冈。提示：(1)黄冈位于长江之边，大别山之南；(2)黄冈风景迷人，乡村秀美；(3)人人参与，从小事做起，黄冈人正在努力地保护黄冈的自然环境；(4)邀请Tom来黄冈游玩。要求：(1)根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；(2)短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名；(3)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。参考词汇：lie； Dabie Mountains； Yangtze River； clear rivers and green mountains Dear Tom,Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown.Now let me tell you.My hometown is Huanggang.lt lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains.There are lots of beautiful mountains，rivers and lakes.They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere.Now the people in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment.Everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful.If you come to Huanggang，1 believe you will fall in love with it and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit! Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming 思路点拨 1.体裁：应用文2 .人称：以第一人称为主3 .时态：以一般现在时为主4 .段落布局：三段式写作：开头和结尾已给出，学生需重点写作第二段和第三段内容：第二段将提示信息1 3点串联成篇；第三段发出邀请(提示信息第4点)。【佳作欣赏】话题三：日常活动0n the morning of Mo1 4th； our school held q donation octiyiUj0n the playground to cetebrote Youth D。).In order to he门W9I0JI二 children. rrnfiniistudIs a nd teadg£!tookcm active port in 甘iv由j. 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Comeand 寸nrrusl单元链接年级单元话题功能七上Unit 7 How much are these socks?购物询问价格；谈论衣物：提供 帮助；感谢某人七下Unit 2 What time do you go to school ?日常活动谈论日常活动：询问和表达 时间七下Unit 6 I'm watching TV.日常活动谈论人们正在做什么八下Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?难忘的事件谈论过去的事件；讲故事话题解读英语课程标准中关于“日常活动”的子话题有：1.家庭生活；2.学校生活；3.周末活动。分析河北近10年(20112020)中考书面表达的命题形式可知，在2015年介绍个人周末计划中涉及到“周末活动”的内容。从全国来看，关于“日常活动”的相关话题主要从以下角度进行考查：1 .介绍家庭生活（2020咸宁，2020衢州,2020赤峰）；2 .介绍学校生活（2019金华、丽水）；3 .介绍课余活动及周末活动（2020云南，2020海南，2020营口，2019桂林，2019聊城，2018陕西）；4 .介绍网上点餐购物的利弊（2020泰安，2012黄冈）；5 .介绍聚会活动及计划安排（2020常德，2020甘孜州，2019包头）。话题素材串联一、常用话题词汇1 .在家日常活动的常用短语：get up. take a shower, brush teeth, go to bed, have breakfast/lunch/dinner, cook simple meals, wash the dishes, sweep the floor, clean the room, do housework/chores, watch TV, listen to music, play computer games-2 .周末活动的常用短语：do sports, play ball games, read books, hang out with friends, take a walk, watch movies, do homework, visit my grandparents, go hiking/camping/shopping, climb mountains, pick strawberries""3 .购物词汇：商场名称：clothes store, shopping center, supermarket（2）尺寸大小:large, medium, smalL size 28（3）价格：3 dollars/pounds, 20 yuan,（物品）expensive（dear）/cheap,（价格）high/low网购：（优势）save time and money, easy and quick» have more choices, don't need to go out*；（劣势）can't see real products, can't try on cl