2021-2022年上海中考英语冲刺满分作文专题05 记叙文之写人叙事地点类.docx

专题05记叙文之写人叙事地点类写人叙事类【写人】常用句型开头句1、The person who has influenced me most is对我影响最大的人是2、A true friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed.一个真正的朋友是会在你失落沮丧的时候给你温暖的人。3、I have never expressed my thanks and respect to.我从未对表达过我的谢意和敬意。4、For a long time,there was one thing that I would never forget.很久以来，一直有一件事情令我难以忘怀。5、The experience left a deep impression on me.这次体验给我留下了深刻的印象。中间句1、She has watery eyes and a lovely baby face.她有着水汪汪的眼睛和可爱的娃娃脸。2、He is of medium build but has a powerful body.他虽然是中等身材，但有着强健的体魄。3、He is a boy full of integrity and honesty.他是一个充满正直老实品质的男孩。4> I am a positive person and never lose heart.我是一个积极乐观，从不轻易放弃的人。5、As long as he makes a promise,he will never break it.只要他做出了承诺，就决不食言。6、She always does a favor to someone who is in trouble.她经常帮助那些有困难的人。7、 In my opinion,friends are the persons whom we can share happiness and sorrow with.在我看来，朋友是我们可以提供快乐和悲伤的人。8、When I think of this matter,! feel very lucky.当我想到这个问题时，我觉得非常幸运。结尾句1、Thank you for everything you have done for me.感谢您为我所做的一切。2、I am proud of her,and I love my mother very much.我以她为豪，而且我非常爱我的母亲03、It will be one of my unforgettable experiences in my life.这将会成为我生活中难以忘怀的经历之一。5、If you put your heart into the things you want to do,you will succeed in the end.只要你用心做你想做的事，最终你将会成功。必背范文第一篇：我的母亲My mother is a very pretty woman.She is of medium build and has long straight hair and big round eyes. My mother loves my family so much that she takes care of us very well. She usually gets up early in order to prepare breakfast for us. She stays up late to help with my study. As a nurse, my mother is not only hard-working but also warm-hearted. She is always friendly to her patients and often helps them. She often encourages her patients not to give up. Many patients think she is one of the most beautiful nurses in the hospital.I am proud of her, and I love my mother very much.建议记诵的话题词汇和短语：1. 关系：father, parents , grandfather ,uncle ,aunt,schoolmate, monitor 等，cousin 比拟力口分哦职业：teacher, doctor, nurse, dentist, cook, artist, scientist, soldier, manager, businessman, journalist 等2. 夕卜貌'性格：pretty, good-looking, short , tall, lovely, adorable, naughty, smart , wise, diligent, lazy, humorous, attractive, funny, outgoing, serious, quiet, warm-hearted, patient, strong-minded, hard-working 等（介绍夕卜貌时候可 用上定语从句，开篇就亮点）年龄： a twenty-year-old man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 10, during his childhood, middle-aged , in his forties 等 5. 兴趣爱好： enjoy doing, like to do /doing, be fond of, be crazy about, be interested in , prefer to do/doing6. 评彳介：be popular with , be respected by, be honored as, be considered ad, be famous for, be regarded as, set a goodexample 等。句子：1. He shows great enthusiasm in pursuing knowledge.2. She is a ordinary-looking girl with short hair.3. Not only does she . but also.4. He sets us a good example.5. ril never forget the day when.6. I'm so proud that I have such a good friend.7. He is considered as an honest, humorous teacher and he is respected and loved by the students and other teachers.8. Owing to his patient guide and my effort, I learned quite well at the end.9. Without his help, I would have.10. It was because of their help and encouragement that I could get the best result.11. She has a great sense of humorous.12. She always comforts me when I get into trouble.13. I'm very grateful to him for all that he has done for me.14. During the process of my growth, there are lots of people I want to thank, but the person I want to thank most is.15. I want to thank sb. from the bottom of my heart.(1)时光匆匆，不知不觉中，同学们的初中生活即将结束，你们有一个懵懂的孩童成长为有知识有理想的少年。 在你们成长的历程中，渗透了父母的心血，充满了师长的关爱，得到了朋友的帮助，请以My 为题，写一篇短文，描述你心中最重要的人或最令你难忘的人。要求：1.把题目补充完整。2 .文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。3 .词数在60-80之间。4 .内容要齐全，包括以下几点：Who is the person in your heart?Why is the person so important in your heart?What will you learn from the person in the future?参考范文：My father is a hero in my heart. Although he has been away for many years, he still lives in my heart now.As a father of the five children, he knew his duty. When I was a little girl, I thought my father never knew tired. He always worked and worked. He was a man of great strength both physically and in the mind.My father not only worked hard to support the whole family, but also looked after my ailing(多病的)mother. Day and night, he struggled for years with mother's disease. At last, my mother recovered because of my father's love and help. However, my father, a man who was great and gentleness, fell down. I lost my hero. He was too tired. He slept for ever.A few years has passed, but I think my father never left me. He always smiles at me and lives in my heart. I know I have my father's love. It gives me courage to do anything, to face any difficulties in my life.From him, I will learn to stand up straightly, to be proud of who I am!2. A Real Friend提示：朋友，是思想上值得依赖，情感上可以依托，学习上能得到帮助，生活上给予关照的人。请写一、两 件事情来讲述你和朋友之间真挚的友情。要求：1、请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否那么以零分计；4、短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。参考范文：A Real FriendEveryone needs friends. Friendship plays an important role in our lives. Friends can encourage us to be better and share our hopes and dreams. Amy is a real friend like this.When I became a middle school student, I don't do well in English or math. I fell behind others. I was worried and upset. At that time, Amy often lent me her notebooks and came to my house to help me after school. When I wanted to give up, she always encouraged me to hold on, Thanks to Amy, a month later I caught up with others. Now both of us are in Grade 9, we have the same dreams - to be a student in a good university. I think we can achieve our dreams.A friend in need is a friend indeed. Amy is such a good friend.记诵词组suffer from 遭受，忍受1. thanks to 多亏了get/be used to sth./doing sth.习惯于2. be absorbed in专心于，全神贯注于concentrate on sth. 专注于3. share your happiness and sadness with sb.和某人提供你的快乐和痛苦pursue knowledge 追求知 识4. be in trouble处于困境中，遇到麻烦depend on sb. to do sth.依靠某人做某事5. to be honest 老实说encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事6. be popular with sb.受到某人的欢迎strengthen our friendship 增进我们的友谊 promote our friendship7. benefit a lot from sth.从中受益良多speak highly of sb.对某人评价高8. get along well with sb.和某人相处得好put one's heart into sth.用心对待某事9. make progress 取得进步have trouble in doing sth.做某事有困难10. come true 实现realize/achieve one dream 实现某人的梦想11. enjoy doing sth. like to do sth. / like doing sth. be fond of sth. / doing sth. be crazy about sth. / doing sth. prefer doing sth. to doing sth.12. is of great help to sb.对某人有很大的帮助=very helpful lose one9s temper 发脾气写作练习：（叙事篇）1 .力求简洁，说明核心人物和事件，无需过多细节删.连词必须有，按照时间顺序在句子之间加上承接或转折的词或词组，保持叙事连贯，没有不相干的内容增2 .注意句式多样化,用sothat, not.until, which, unless或者倒装、状语前置、分词、从句等等方式，让行文丰 富起来改.注意时态，叙事多为一般过去时查【叙事】第二篇：特别的一天Last Sunday was a special day for me, because it was my mother's birthday. I did a lot of things on that day.In the morning, I went to the supermarket and bought a yellow sweater for mymother as her birthday present. In the afternoon, I cleaned up our house and watered the plants. After that, with the help of my mother, I cooked a big dinner for my family. In the evening, my family got together to have a party. We said Happy Birth-day to my mother. We also danced and ate some desserts.My mother was very happy. And so was I. What a special day it was!第三篇：难忘的一件事May 15, 2017 MondaySunnyLast Monday morning on my way to school, I found that a little girl was crying in front of a shop. So I came up to her and asked, nWhy are you crying? Where is your mom? " The girl said that she couldn*t find her mom. So I asked her address and sent the little girl to her home. Her mother thanked me again and again. As a result, I was late for school and my teacher told me not to be late next time.Although I was late for school, I was proud of myself for helping others.写作练习：（保护环境篇）As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we can't see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Bird there is less and less fresh water in the world. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. We had better use shopping basket bets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. We should use both sides of the paper when we write. Don*t use paper cups. At our school dining room, use our own bowls and chopsticks instead of disposable ones. We can reuse the water and save the electricity. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. 'There is only one earthn, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. 介绍地点（旅游等） 0名词： Canada, France, Japan, the United States. Australia, Singapore, the United Kingdom, country, Sydney, New York, Paris, Toronto, Tokyo, language, Japanese, world, French, office, post office, library, restaurant, bank, street, pay phone, avenue, center, bridge, neighborhood, garden, district, tour, place, way, taxi, airport, map, shop, hospital, station, direction, New York City, guide, center, corner, the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, Tian'an Men Square, Hutong, culture, bicycle, subway, car, train, bus stop, train station, minute, kilometer, mile, river, town, theater, cinema, radio station, screen, jeans, service, clothing store, train, subway, on vacation, the capital of, history, colorful history, space museum, amusement park, zoo, water park, tour guide, tourist, island,动词：visit, arrive, take, visit, think of, take a taxi, turn left, take photos, worry, get to, be close to, think about, do a survey, travel, take the train, live in, fall in love with, be in style, be welcomed by, take a ride, consider, translate, provide, sail, continue, take it easy, provide sb. with sth, offer sb. sth, be willing to., dream of., hold on to.形容词：international, west, fantastic, awful, delicious, expensive, crowded, cheap, quick, early, trendy, comfortable, easy, worse, worst, loud, lovely, cheap, dull, huge, famous, wonderful, foreign, natural, strange, beautiful, relaxing, fun, dangerous, interesting, boring, exciting, tiring, peaceful, lively, crowded, expensive, hot回There is a supermarket.It's on Center Street.It's across from the bank.It's next to the post office.It's between the restaurant and the supermarket.Have a good trip. Have a good time.Showtime cinema is the cheapest.Gold theatre has the most comfortable seats.The most popular clothes store is Jason's .It has the best quality clothing.As for radio stations, most people think that Jazz 107.9 FM is really great.We did a survey of our readers and this what we learned.I love places where the people are friendly.I hope to see/visit.one day/some day.rd like to go somewhere relaxing/interesting.For your next vacation, why not consider visiting.?It has./ doesn't have.We can do lots of outdoor activities. It is convenient to .亮点提升：1 .词组计戈U及希望：will do, be going to do, want to do, plan to do, decide to do, make up one's mind to do，would like to do, be about to do, hope to do, hope + 从句喜好及兴趣：like / enjoy doing, be fond of doing, be keen on doing, prefer to do, be interested in sth /doing sth., be impressed by,其他舌动：spend time doing, can't help doing, suit sb. just fine, look forward to sth/doing sth. relax oneself, experience the life,介绍方位：south, north, west, east, in front of, between, opposite, next to, across from, near.2 . 句型从句 too.to, so that, not only.but also., why not, make sb. adj., that/which/who.非谓语结构：It's+adj. fbr sb. to do, doing sth is.e.g. For your next vacation, why not consider visiting Beijing?Bird Nest, which was built for the 2008 Olympic games, is the largest stadium in BeijingBeijing, the capital of China, is famous for its long history and splendid culture.Beijing duck (snacks) is one of the most delicious foods, which you should never miss.Beijing is a lovely place where the people are friendly and warm-hearted.Only when you come yourself, can you experience its charm.因22008四川自贡中考作文北京将迎来2008年的奥运会，请以主人的身份向外国朋友介绍一下北京和北京几个著名的景点。根据以下 提示写一篇短文。1 .北京是一个历史悠久的城市；.北京有许多名胜古迹；2 .紫禁城是最受来宾欢迎的景点之一；.故宫非常漂亮和著名；3 .长城也是非常美丽可去一看的地方；4 .天安门广场是一个好去处，可去漫步； 注意：1.词数80左右。2 .请不要逐字翻译，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯、意思完整、符合逻辑。3 .参考词汇：紫禁城 the Forbidden City,故宫 the Imperial Palace,天安门广场 Tiananmen Square 优秀范文：As the 29th Olympic Games is just around the corner, more and more foreigners are coming to Beijing. In order to help them know more about it, I am glad to say something about our great capital.Beijing is a large city with a long history. There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Imperial Palace, Tiananmen Square, the Great Wall and so on. The Forbidden City is one of the most favorite places where our foreign friends like to go. The Imperial Palace, which is beautiful and famous, is also a place worth visiting. You can see a lot of culture relics there. If you want to know more about the Great Wall, you will have to go there. As you know, there is a Chinese saying, "He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. "Walking on the Tiananmen Square, you will feel it is one of the greatest squares in the world. If you go there early in the morning, maybe you can see your national flag rising ceremony.I am sure you will have a great time in Beijing.7.给朋友的信 假如你是英国学生Peter在北京学习，请按下文给你的朋友Mary写一封信谈一下北京和伦敦的异 同。100字。相同点：北京和伦敦都是首都和很长历史的城市，都拥有众多人口，都是国家政治文化中心。不同点：伦敦；汽车靠左行，很多人坐汽车上班，学生不充分利用时间。北京：汽车靠右行很多人骑自行车上班，学生学习勤奋。Dear Mary,I have studied in Beijing for some time. There are something in common between Beijing and London. They are both the capital of the country and are both with long history. Both places have large population. They are also the political and cultural center.I also found many differences in two cities. In London we drive on the left of the road, while in Beijing they drive on the right. Most people in London go to work by bus, instead, people in Beijing ride bikes. And in London most student don't spend their time on study, but here in Beijing many students study hard.Peter