2023新课标版英语高考第二轮复习--十五　书面表达.pdf

2023新课标版英语高考第二轮复习第六部分书面表达专题十五书面表达Writing 1假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Emma在给你的邮件中提到她对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Emma回信，内容包括：1 .该人物是谁；2.该人物的主要贡献；3.该人物对你的影响。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Emma,Yours,Li Hua答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生写一封信，向英国朋友Emma介绍一位自己喜欢的历史人物。主要人称为第三人称,主体时态为一般现在时。2.写作要点:自己喜欢的历史人物名字;该人物的主要贡献;该人物对自己的影响。One possible version:Dear Emma,Knowing that you take an interest in Chinese history,I just cant wait to share my favorite historicalfigure with you!第1页 共7 0页Li Shizhen is one of the most influential doctors in Chinas medical community.His famous book,Bencao Gangmu,is regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work,which has liftedChinese medical science to a new level.Hadnt it been for his work,many previous errors wouldnt have beencorrected and many more peoples lives could have been claimed.Encouraged by his perseverance,Im determined to work harder for my dream.Hope you will like himtoo and know Chinese history better.Yours.Li Hua精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇historical figure历 史 人 物 influential adj.有 影 响 的 comprehensive adj.综合性的2.出彩结构 Hadnt it been for his work,many previous errors wouldnt have been corrected and manymore peoples lives could have been claimed.（虚拟语气）Writing 2假定你是李华，你校外教Mr Thomson下周将结束两年的聘期回国任教，你将作为学生代表致欢送辞。请你写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.对Mr Thomson表示感谢；2.介绍Mr Thomson的教学情况；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生写一篇欢送辞，写作时主要采用第三人称，时态以现在完成时和一般现在时为主。第2页 共7 0页2.写作要点:表示感谢;介绍Mr Thomson的教学情况;表达祝愿。One possible version:Dear friends,How time flies!Mr Thomson will leave for his homeland next week after he has been working diligentlyat our school for two years.Now,it is time for us to express our thanks to him.During the past two years,Mr Thomson has devoted himself to improving our English,which has left agood impression on us.He makes his classes so lively and interesting that all of us enjoy every minute of them.It is his creative work that has made us achieve great progress in our English learning.We wish Mr Thomson a pleasant journey home and good health.Thats all.Thank you.精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇 leave a good impression o n 给.留下好印象devote oneself to 致力于.2.出彩结构 It is his creative work that has made us achieve great progress in our English learning.(调句型)Writing 3你的家乡(Qingshan Village)苹果大丰收，为了在电商平台上吸引外国客人购买,请你用英语为其写一篇宣传稿。内容包括：1.品质与价格；2.相关服务。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生用英语为家乡苹果写一篇宣传稿。写作时主要采用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。第3页 共7 0页2.写作要点:苹果的品质与价格；优质服务。One possible version:Big and cheap apples!Something that you shouldnt miss.A perfect opportunity to make a bargain andhave a try!Without being polluted,the apples are bound to be healthy.Their quality is what we are awfullyconfident of.Furthermore,the price of the apples is amazingly low and beyond your imagination.Mostimportantly,the instant you buy them,they will be delivered to your house.If you have any complaint,itswith great patience that we will solve your problem or give you a full refund.The apples are greeted with warm and heated popularity.Just buy them,or they will be sold out soon!精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇amazingly adv.令人惊叹地be greeted with warm and heated popularity 受到热烈的欢迎2.出彩结构 Their quality is what we are awfully confident of.（what 弓卜导表语从句）If you have any complaint,its with great patience that we will solve your problem or give you a fullrefund.（强调句型）Writing 4假定你是李华，你校正在为前来参加国际夏令营的外国中学生筹划中国传统艺术展。请你用英语写一封邮件通知外国中学生们，内容包括：1.欢迎参观；2.内容简介；3.注意事项。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示第4页 共7 0页1.本题要求考生用英语给前来参加国际夏令营的外国中学生写一封邮件，告知他们为他们筹划的艺术展的相关事宜。写作时主要采用第三人称，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:欢迎参观;活动内容简介;注意事项。One possible version:Dear friends,Welcome to our school!Knowing that you are keen on Chinese tradition,our school is holding aTraditional Chinese Art Exhibition for you.Let me introduce it in detail.The exhibition will last 3 days,from June 11 to June 13 in our school.It covers a variety of activities,ranging from learning daily Chinese to Chinese history and traditional culture.In addition,the exhibitionprovides a chance for students to enjoy some artworks in our museum,which is a good way to learn about ourhistory.If you are interested,please sign up for it before June 10 on our school website.Yours,Li Hua精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇 be keen o n 喜爱 in detail详细地 sign up for报 名 参 力 口2.出彩结构 In addition,the exhibition provides a chance for students to enjoy some artworks in ourmuseum,which is a good way to learn about our history.（which 弓 I 导非限制性定语从句）Writing 5假定你是李明。你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信，内容包括：1.提出建议；2.表达祝愿。注意:写作词数应为8 0 左右。Dear David,Yours,Li Ming答案第5页 共7 0页 写作提示1.本文要求考生写一封回信给David学习中文提出自己的建议。写作时主要采用第一人称和第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:简要介绍写信目的;提出学习中文的建议;表达祝愿。Dear David.Im delighted to learn that youve started learning Chinese!Knowing that you would like to have a bettercommand of Chinese,Tm writing to share with you some practical suggestions,just for your reference.With proper guidance and enough practice,youre bound to learn Chinese well.To begin with,it isadvisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs,which will expose you to an authenticlearning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.Besides,youdbetter make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible.With frequentcommunication in real life,you*ll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.Hopefully,my tips above can be of some help.Wish you success.Yours,Li Ming精彩语句 1.精美词汇 have a better command o f 更好地掌握 be bound to do 一定会做 be ofsome help有些帮助2.出 彩结构 To begin with,it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs,which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understandingof Chinese culture.（虚拟语气和which引导的非限制性定语从句）Writing 6假定你是李华，是学校英语戏剧社的社长。正值社团成立五周年，学校将举办一系列的活动，并打算邀请外教老师Mary参加。请你给外教老师写一封邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.活动时间、地点和内容；3.你的期待。注意:写作词数应为80左右。参考词汇:周年纪念日 anniversary第6页 共7 0页答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生给外教老师Mary写一封邮件，邀请她参加庆祝英语戏剧社成立五周年的系列活动。写作时主要采用第三人称，时态以一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:写信目的;活动时间、地点和内容;表达期待。One possible version:Dear Mary,I am writing to tell you that we intend to celebrate the fifth anniversary of our English Drama Club and Isincerely invite you to attend.The celebration will be held next Friday in the lecture hall.As scheduled,various activities will beavailable ranging from an oral English speech to English song performances.Additionally,an English playnamed Snow White will also be on show.Everything will overflow with happiness then.I hope we are lucky enough to have you here and expect to learn more with your presence andparticipation.Yours,Li Hua精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇available adj.可 获 得 的 overflow v.溢出2.出彩结构 As scheduled,various activities will be available ranging from an oral English speech toEnglish song performances.（省略和现在分词作后置定语）Writing 7你校英文杂志English Salon正在庆祝创刊五周年。请你写一篇短文表示祝贺,发表在学校网站英文版块，内容包括：1.读杂志的收获；2.最感兴趣的版块；3.你的祝贺和期望。注意:写作词数应为80左右。第7页 共7 0页To English Salon答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生在学校网站写一篇短文祝贺英文杂志English Salon创刊五周年。写作时主要采用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:读杂志的收获;最感兴趣的版块;你的祝贺和期望。One possible version:To English SalonFor the 5th anniversary of English Salon,as a fan of it,I want to share my reading experience.English Salon has accompanied me throughout my high school years.It covers a wide variety of topics toattract senior students,leading us into the outer world as a silent friend.Being a regular reader of EnglishSalon,I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happinessfrom exciting news.I sincerely hope that English Salon can make new progress and that more readers will participate in theinteraction and share their own stories.精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇 accompany v t.陪伴 a wide variety o f多种多样的 participate in参加2,出彩结构 Being a regular reader of English Salon,I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where Iget touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.(现在分词短语作状语和定语从句)Writing 8你校英语学习社团(English Club)将举办“读名著,学英语(Read Classics,Learn English)”活动。请你代表该社团写一封倡议书，发表在校报上。内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.号召积极参与。注意:写作词数应为80左右。第8页 共7 0页Read Classics,Learn English答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生代表英语学习社团写一封倡议书，号召同学们积极参加“读名著，学英语”活动。写作时主要采用第三人称，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:活动目的;活动内容;号召积极参与。One possible version:Read Classics,Learn EnglishDear fellow schoolmates,Aimed at appreciating the charm of English classics and promoting English learning,the school EnglishClub will host the“Read Classics,Learn English activity.This activity will last 2 weeks,scheduled from April 1st to 14th.Various activities have been designed,ranging from attending a lecture on reading tips to recommending the favorite English classics,followed byexchanging reading experience as well as reading skills.Anyone who has interest in reading English classics is welcome.Looking forward to your participation.English Club精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇 promote v t.促进;推动beaimedat旨在似.为目的2.出彩结构 Various activities have been designed,ranging from attending a lecture on reading tips torecommending the favorite English classics,followed by exchanging reading experience as well as readingskills.(现在分词短语作后置定语和过去分词短语作状语)Writing 9你校英文报正在征稿。请你结合下面的名人名言(famous quote),写一篇题为“My Understanding ofFailure的文章。“A man can fail many times,but he isnt a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.一J.Burroughs第9页 共7 0页内容包括：1.你对该名言的理解;2.生活中的例子；3.你的感悟。注意:词数80左右。My Understanding of Failure答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生根据所给名人名言写一篇关于失败的英语文章。写作时主要采用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:对该名言的理解;举例说明;自己的感悟。One possible version:My Understanding of FailureThis famous quote from J.Burroughs conveys that when faced with failure,we should reflect onourselves instead of putting the blame on others,which is more important than failure itself.When entering high school,many classmates found it really difficult to learn math and did poorly inexams.They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves,which resulted in even poorer performance.Iwas no exception.However,when I realized complaining made no sense,I adjusted my learning methods andturned to the teacher whenever I encountered difficult problems.Gradually,I began to make progress,whichin turn boosted my confidence in math.The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking full responsibility for failurerather than blaming others can we succeed.精 彩 语 句 1.精美词汇reflect o n 仔细思考 put the blame on归咎于.result in导 致 in turn反过来第10页 共7 0页2.出彩结构 The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that only by bravely taking fullresponsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.（省略 that 的定语从句、that 引导的表语从句和倒装句）Writing 10在高中三年的时光里，你一定经历了许多让你感动的人和事。请以“My Thanks to 为题，为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一篇短文。内容包括：1.感谢的对象;2.感谢的原因。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1 .本题应为记叙文，要求考生以“My Thanks to 为题，为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一篇短文.2.本文时态以一般过去时为主。3.第一段:点出本文的主题，即要感谢的人是谁（完成要点1）;第二段:介绍感谢的原因（完成要点2）;第三段:回到主题。One possible version:My Thanks to My English TeacherI should express my gratitude to my English teacher Mr.Smith in high school,without whom I would notbe able to make so much progress.第11页 共7 0页Mr.Smith influenced me in many ways,two of which are the most important.What comes first is on myhealth.He invited me to go running in the morning.We kept running for almost two years.Now I feel sohappy that I am healthy and strong.Whats more,he helped me find my confidence when I was depressedbecause of poor performance.He asked me to go climbing with him after school.We had a lot of discussionabout life,and about people.Gradually I forgot about unhappiness.Then I succeeded in regaining myconfidence.I will never forget what I got from Mr.Smith.I am very grateful to him and I wish him good luck.精彩语句I should express my gratitude to my English teacher Mr.Smith in high school,without whom I would notbe able to make so much progress.(“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句)Writing 11假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“把握今天(Seize Today)”的英语演讲比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.参赛人员与比赛内容；3.活动反响。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生为上周学校举办的主题为“把握今天”的英语演讲比赛写一篇报道。第1 2页 共7 0页2.本文以一般过去时为主，一般现在时为辅。3.文章布局:第一段点出该报道的主题，即上周五上午我校在学校礼堂举办了主题为“把握今天”的英语演讲比赛（完成要点1）；第二段介绍参赛人员与比赛内容（完成要点2）;第三段介绍活动反响（完成要点3）oOne possible version:An English speech contest with the theme of Seize Today was held in our school hall last Fridaymorning,which drew the attention of every student and teacher.Twenty students from different classes competed in it.All the participants made wonderful speeches onthe theme.At the end of the contest,two foreign teachers commented on several participants,speeches andgave some helpful suggestions.Finally,there was an award ceremony for the winners.Everyone thinks highly of this activity,for it is not only a good chance to help the students improve theiroral English but also enriches our school life.精彩语句An English speech contest with the theme of Seize Today was held in our school hall last Fridaymorning,which drew the attention of every student and teacher.主句使用 了 被动语态,which 弓|导非限制性定语从句。Writing 1220 2 2年冬奥会将在北京和张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会完满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容包括:1.个人情况；2.自身优势；3.服务承诺。注 意:1.词数1（）（）左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,第1 3页 共7 0页Yours faithfully,Li Hua答案 写作提示1.本题要求考生写一封申请成为冬奥会志愿者的书信。2.以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。3.第一段介绍写信目的;第二段介绍个人情况、自身优势及服务承诺;第三段给出适当结尾（如果能被提供成为志愿者的机会，将不胜感激）。One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.Im a boy of eighteen years old from a high school.My spoken English is good and I can communicatewith foreigners fluently.Whats more,I have other advantages.Tm especially fond of sports,familiar withBeijing,good at communication and always glad to help others.I am willing to provide the best service forevery athlete in the Winter Olympic Games.Therefore,I think Im qualified fbr a volunteer.I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.Thank you!Yours faithfully,Li Hua精彩语句“what s more”表示递进关系，使内容条理清楚。I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.用 了 I would appreciate it if.句式，非常合理。Writing 13假定你是李华。国外某高中学生代表团将于4 月6 日到你们学校进行文化交流活动,请你代表学校给访问团领队Mark写封英文信，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.接待活动安排;3.表达期待。第1 4页 共7 0页注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mark,Yours,Li Hua答案 写作提示1.本题为应用文，要求考生代表学校给即将在4 月6 日到学校进行文化交流活动的访问团领队Mark写封英文信，告知他有关此次活动的安排。2.要以第三人称为主，时态以一般将来时、一般现在时为主。3.第一段对即将到来的访问团表示欢迎;第二段介绍接待活动安排;第三段表达期待。One possible version:Dear Mark,Welcome you to our school for cultural exchange on April 6.Im writing to inform you of ourarrangements.The cultural exchange is scheduled for 8:00 am.To begin with,a lecture about the historic culture of ourcity will be given by our schoolmaster.After that,our traditional Wushu team will show you Chinese kung fu,which is full of power and skills.In the afternoon,a live art show is arranged for you,including performingChinese calligraphy,painting,paper-cutting and so on.Youre expected to join us and try them by yourselves.Thats all for our arrangements.Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua精彩语句第15页 共7 0页After that,our traditional Wushu team will show you Chinese kung fu,which is full of power and skills.本句使用了 Which引导的非限制性定语从句。Writing 14假设你是高中生李华，你校为了弘扬中国传统文化和丰富学生课余生活，将于本周五中午12点在学校报告厅举行国画展览，你的外教老师Linda对中国文化很感兴趣，请写一封邮件邀