读后续写--追捕进行时导学案 高三英语二轮专题 .docx

The Chase is OnIt was dark outside. just after the dinner hour, when Benny Correa and Amanda Dislerand three of their five kids climbed into their black Cadillac Escalade. As they prepared to exit the parking lot of the restaurant where they'd just eaten. a dark blue Honda Civic with heavily tinted windows crossed their path.“Yo. babe” Correa hollered.“that's that car That's that car!"Earlier in the day,Disley had mentioned an Amber Alert issued for a missing11-year-old girl in Brimfield, Massachusetts, less than 30 miles from the family's home in Springfield. The car that passed them was the same make and model as the one that had been used in her abduction.Correa took a hard right out of the parking lot and tailed the Honda in an effort to view the license plate. The driver immediately sped up and blew through a stop sign. Correa shocked his family by following suit. He wasn't about to lose the Honda.“Being a father,had to do what I had to do” he told ABC News.The Honda pulled around the back of a liquor store.“They're trying to ditch me," Correayelled. When the Honda came around to the front, Correa caught up and pulled ahead,trying to cut it off. The Honda hit the brakes and then jumped a curb. The Cadillac's high beams flashed on the driver-a young man with black hair, pulling a hooded sweatshirt up over his face. They could see him forcing a girl's head down in the back, as if trying to hide her.Disley, who by then had called 911, was frantically relaying their situation to the dispatcher.“lt's him!”she yelled into the phone.“The kidnapper!”Confused,the dispatcher asked,“The blue Honda?Yes, it's him!"Correa stayed close behind the Honda, cutting off cars to do so. They were now barreling down the road at 100 mph.“He's going through red lights!" Disley yelled to the police.Correa slammed on the brakes to avoid an oncoming car and then hit the gas to catch up.“Get him, Dad!”his son shouted excitedly from the back.Keeping on the Honda's tail, Correa discovered another problem: The low gas light was blinking on the Cadillac's dashboard. In fact, it had been blinking for much of the15-minute chase, and the beat-up Caddy-they'd find out later that the suspension had been damaged during the chase-was running on fumes The car soon sputtered to a halt.The Honda disappeared onto the Massachusetts Turnpike. But thanks to Disley's chatter and directions, the cops had plotted the path the kidnapper was taking and set up a roadblock on the turnpike, trapping the car soon after.The driver was 24-year-old Miguel Rodriguez. He'd pulled a knife on Charlotte Mocciaas she walked home from school and forced her into his car. If she screamed, he'd warned, he would kill her. Moccia was found huddled in the back seat, terrified but unharmed. which might not have been the case had it not been for Correa and Disley.“lt felt like we won the lottery" Disley says.“The feeling of knowing she's safe and back with her family because of us is just unexplainable.para1:The Cadillac soon came to a stop ._para2;The kidnapper was 24-year -old named Miguel ._写作思路分析：（1） 文本内容本文主要讲了Correa 一家晚饭后，在停车场发现了新闻中提及的绑匪，因此一家人驾车追踪，却因车没油了，且抛锚了而受阻。庆幸的是，妻子Disley 一直在给警方提供信息，因此绑匪最后被成功抓住，8岁小女孩也获救的故事。文章的故事性和情节性较强，体现的主旨是社会主义。（2）文本基本信息Writing style :narration When -just after the dinner hourWhere-parking lot road Who-Correa; Disley Correa's three kids  Miguel (the   kidnapper  the 8-year-old girl (the missing girl )What-Correa drove his car to chase the Honda, trying to catch the kidnapper .Meanwhile his wife ,Disney ,reported the situation  to the police .(3)  人物性格分析-Correa and Disley  Para2  (Correa  ) "Yo ,babe ,"Correa yelled ,"that is that car .That is that car!"- careful and sensitive Para4 (Correa) Correa took a hard right out of the parking lot and closely followed tha Honda in an effort to se the car number .-active and quick -reacted Para 4 (Correa) He wasn't about to lose the Honda -responsible and enthusiastic Para 5 (Correa )  Correa caught up and pulled ahead ,trying to cut it off.-brave  fearless;determined Para 6(Disley ) Disley ,who by then had called 911,was reporting their situation to the police.-careful ;thoughtful The family is united ,sharing the same belief .The repetition of the word "yell"presents us that the family are  anxious ,eagering to catch the kidnapper .（3）写作难点分析写这篇文章就如同在拍电影一样，由第一个提示句可知，主人公的车出了问题，那接下来就是要描写如何化解这个问题抓到绑匪。第二段根据提示语可知，已知抓到罪犯，所以写的是故事的结局，并点出主旨即可。注意在续写的时候对动作，语言和情感及场景的描写。二、语言学习（language learning） 1、Understanding the story Correa and his family had dinner at a restaurant and were about to leave_they spotted a Honda with heavily _(color) windows ,which was _(report) involved in a case ,where an 8-year-old girl was kidnapped.Immediately ,Correa _(加速），closely following the Honda in an _to see the car number .And his wife ,Disley called the police station to report the situation .The kidnapper,well _ of what was happening ,he tried every means possible to _ _the car following him .Unfortunately for Correa ,his gas was soon running _and what made the situation even worse was that the suspension had been damaged during the chase .He had to _ his car .2、词组积累1 、停车场                    parking lot 2、偶遇某人                   cross sb's path ; come across;bump into        3、涂了很重的颜色的玻璃  the heavily colored windows 4、提到、谈及、查阅        refer to 5、为了，试图（介短）    in an attempt/effort to do6、加速                            speed up;accerlerate 7、学样，模仿                follow suit                                         8、甩掉，除掉                get rid of 9、截止那辆车                 cut off the car 10、把衬衫拉上来遮住脸   pull up the shirt over his face 11、朝电话里大喊             yell into the phone 12、猛踩刹车                    salm on the brakes13、更糟糕的是                 what was worse ;worse still 14、停了下来                    come to a stop /halt 三、段落开头语分析Para1 :  The Cadillac soon came to a stop ._第一段眼看绑匪驾车消失的懊恼以及妻子提供给警方的信息，铺垫了绑匪落网的结局.The kidnapper was 24-year -old named Miguel ._1、What would happen to the Honda ? 2、What was Correa's feeling?3、How would Correa react to the unexpected situation ?4、Was there anyone can offer help ?5、How about the police ?思路：Correa 停下车，Honda 消失在远方-Correa 无可奈何，生气失望-在Disley 继续打电话告诉警察罪犯的行踪-Correa 一家焦急的等待-罪犯被抓住场景一：本田消失了 （What would happen to the Honda ？）1.The Honda began to pull the distance gradually ,disappearing in our eyesights quickly .本田开始逐渐拉开距离，很快消失在我们的视线中。2.The dark blue Honda sped up ,only to leave ash and dirt dancing in the air .(寻找货拉拉中的句子）深蓝色的本田加速，只留下灰尘和泥土在空中飞舞。3.Though the Honda was just a crossroads away, he failed to catch him .虽然本田车离他只有一个十字路口，但他没能赶上他。4.Before he could do something ,the Honda was already nowhere to be seen.他还没来得及做点什么，本田就已经不见踪影了.5. At that very moment ,the dark blue Honda with heavily colored windows sped up ,disappearing in the distance .就在那一刻，深蓝色的本田（Honda）加速行驶，车窗颜色浓重，消失在远处。场景二: Correa 的心情（失望；生气）1.Correa stamped his feet ,annoyed that the Honda should disappear out of sight  at such a disadvantage . 科雷亚跺脚，对本田在如此不利的情况下消失在视线之外感到恼火。2.Staring at the Honda zooming past him  , Correa trembled with rage .盯着从他身边飞过的本田车，科雷亚气得发抖。3.Correa had a strong sense of loss and stamped his foot in anger ,staring at the Honda zooming ahead of them.科雷亚有一种强烈的失落感，愤怒地跺着脚，盯着在他们前面疾驰的本田车。4.A sense of mounting anxiety gradually filled the Correa's mind .科雷亚的脑海里渐渐充满了一种日益增加的焦虑感。5.Never could he have imagined that the kidnapper should have escaped this way !他怎么也想不到绑匪竟然这样逃走了！6.The Honda disppeared ,watching the kidnapper's car vanished ,the kids could do nothing but keeping stamping their feet wildly.本田车突然停了下来，看着绑匪的车消失了，孩子们只能继续疯狂地跺脚。7.It's awfully terrible .We have lost the kidnapper !" Correa shouted while hitting the steering wheel hard .太可怕了，我们失去了绑匪！科雷亚一边大声喊道，一边使劲打方向盘。场景三: 如何抓到绑匪1.Meanwhile,Disley kept on informing the police where they were and in what dirction the kidnapper was going .Based on the given information ,the police soon located the Honda and lay in wait for him where  the kidnapper was to pass.与此同时，迪斯利不停地通知警方他们在哪里，绑匪要往哪个方向走。根据所提供的信息，警方很快找到了本田，并在绑匪要经过的地方埋伏等待他。2.Fortunately ,thanks to Disley 's continuous directions,the police had blocked the path the kidnapper  was taking and set up a roadblock on the way ,trapping the car soon.幸运的是，多亏了迪斯利不断的指点，警方封锁了绑架者的道路，并在路上设置了路障，很快就把车困住了。3.Fortunately , with the accurate information offered by Disley ,the cops successfully followed the traces of the kidnapper ,plotted the path he was taking and set up a roadblock on the road ,trapping the car soon after .幸运的是，在迪斯利提供的准确信息下，警察成功地追踪了绑架者的踪迹，规划了他要走的道路，并在路上设置了路障，不久就把车困住了。场景四：Correa 一家焦急的等待警察抓捕的结果1.They were waiting anxiously in the car ,hoping the police would catch the kidnapper and rescue the little girl.他们在车里焦急地等待着，希望警察能抓住绑架者并营救小女孩。2.Watching the criminal with his car out of sight ,the whole family could do nothing but stay in their own car ,waiting anxiously for the police .看着罪犯的车消失在视线之外，全家只能呆在自己的车里，焦急地等待警察。场景五：衔接下一句1.And it was not long before that the man was in the police's net.不久，该男子就落入了警方的网中2.And  the  kidnapper was arrested .绑架者被逮捕了。3.It was not long before the police called back to say that the girl was saved and the kidnapped was caught . 不久，警察打电话回来说，女孩得救了，被绑架的人被抓住了。第二段绑匪被抓住后的神情，被救女孩的状态以及其家人的感激.1、Was the kidnapper caught successfully ?2、Was the 8-year -old girl saved successfully ?And she hurt or not ?3、What would the family do ?What would they say ?4、 What would Correa or his wife say ?思路：Miguel 绑架小女孩的原因-小女孩被救出时的场景-女孩一家对Correa 一家的感激之情-主题升华场景一：绑架者绑小女孩的原因1. Having been out of work for quite a long time ,he had no money in his pocket.他失业很长时间了，口袋里没有钱。2. Seeing the girl wandering alone on the street ,he took her away ,wanting to get some money from his parents .看到那个女孩独自一人在街上徘徊，他就把她带走了，想从父母那里弄点钱。3.He flankly confessed  knfes 坦白(错误或罪行)to the cops that he'd pulled a knife on an 8-year-old girl in Brimfield ,Massachusetts as she walked home from school and forced her into his car .他坦率地向警方供认，他在马萨诸塞州布里姆菲尔德的一名8岁女孩放学回家时拔出一把刀，将她逼上了他的车。场景二：女孩被救出的场景1.The missing girl was found huddledhdl( 缩成一团) in the back seat ,terrified but unharmed.失踪的女孩被发现蜷缩在后座，惊恐万分，但安然无恙。2.When they opened the door,huddling at the back seat was the missing girl .当他们开门时，蜷缩在后座的是失踪的女孩。3.The missing girl was taken to the police station where her eager parents were waiting for her .失踪的女孩被带到警察局,她热切的父母在那里等她。4.The poor girl ran into her mother's arms, streaksstriks of tears streaming down her cheeks . 这个可怜的女孩跑进了她母亲的怀里，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来5.The poor girl was found huddled in the back seat ,trembling  with fear as well as choking with sobs .人们发现这个可怜的女孩蜷缩在后座上，吓得浑身发抖，还哽咽着场景三：女孩父母对Correa 一家的感激之情1. The  girl's parents arrived .They were so grateful to the family's bravery and wisdom .女孩的父母来了,他们非常感谢家人的勇敢和智慧。2. They constantly expressed their gratitude ,saying that but for the Correas ,the  girl would have suffered badly .他们不断地表达他们的感激之情，说如果没有科雷亚，这个女孩会遭受严重的痛苦。3.On the scene ,the girl's parents expressed great gratitude to Correa and Disley ,"Had not been your kiind help ,our daughter were not safe and sound ."在现场，女孩的父母对科雷亚和迪斯利表示了极大的感谢，“没有你的帮助，我们的女儿并不安全。” 场景四：主题生华1. Undoubtedly, it was Correa and Disley's bravery and kindness that rescued an innocent little girl .毫无疑问，是科雷亚和迪斯利的勇敢和善良救了一个无辜的小女孩。2. To Correa ,the sweetet moment was when his son pressed a kiss on his forehead ,calling him a hero .对科里亚来说，最甜蜜的时刻是他的儿子亲吻他的额头，称他为英雄。3.Whenever they mentioned this special experience ,Disley always said,"It is an extraordinary feeling to save someone in danger ,which is just unexplainable!"每当他们提到这一特殊经历时，迪斯利总是说：“拯救处于危险中的人是一种非凡的感觉，这是无法解释的！”3.In a world where people can be so focused on what they are doing ,a random act of kindness can make all difference .在一个人们可以如此专注于他们正在做的事情的世界里，一个随意的善举可以让一切变得不同。学科网（北京）股份有限公司