读后续写助人类遛狗导学案 高三英语二轮专题+.docx

读后续写原题目：September is most beautiful in Strathroy, where people wholeheartedly enjoy the simple pleasures of life and nature.   Roland was no exception. He was a magnificent German Shepherd(德国牧羊犬),a little lazy and overweight though. He loved to doze in the backyard. He yawned and stretched his body as he heard the slowly approaching footsteps of Mrs. Proudfoot. “Come have your lunch dear!” said Mrs. Proudfoot with her usual fondness for him and he wagged his tail affectionately in return.      Roland was licking the last piece of meat in his plate when the doorbell burst into music. Mrs. Proudfoot hurried to answer the door. Roland stood alert by her side.  “Good noon Mrs. Proudfoot”. It was Sam, her teenage neighbor. “My! My! You look pale! What happened?” asked Mrs. Proudfoot with genuine worry. She immediately waved him in and closed the door behind. Mrs. Proudfoot was a lonely widow, but was well loved in her neighborhood especially by kids, though she had no kids to call her own.    Once encouraged, Sam disclosed his dilemma. “My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library. It costs 150 dollars, but he has only 55 dollars and his poor parents cant afford to pay the rest. Barry is working part time but thats far from enough.” With a dramatic sigh he continued, “If he didnt refund the loss before the end of term, he will be dismissed from final exams.That will ruin his future! I have to help him, whatever it takes. He is my best friend.”    “Dont worry, Sammy. You want me to pay” but Mrs. Proudfoot was interrupted. “No, No, Mrs. Proudfoot. This is not what I came here for. Ill work for you. Would you favor me to walk your dog please? For 2 dollars a day.” He looked up with begging eyes.  Mrs. Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreement, “That cant be better! Ive been worried about Roland lately. He does need some exercise! Its nice of you to make such an offer.”     Sam thanked her over and over, “I will start tomorrow morning.”Paragraph 1: Sam arrived very early the next morning_Paragraph 2: A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic_主要内容本文节选自 网站，Mrs. Proudfoot， 一个孤独的但又深受孩子们喜欢的寡妇，她家里有一条狗狗Roland，有点肥有点懒，但是对主人很忠诚。有一天邻居家的孩子Sam忧心忡忡地来到她家，在Mrs. Proudfoot的鼓励之下，跟她说他的好朋友Barry丢了学校图书馆一本珍稀的书，要150美金，可是Barry只有55美金， Barry家又很穷，他自己打工赚钱，可是远远不够。如果在学期结束之前不能还清， Barry就不能参加期末考试，要影响前途了。Mrs. Proudfoot愿意给他钱，但Sam说他可以通过帮她遛狗赚钱。Mrs. Proudfoot拍手同意了， 说她正为Roland担心，它需要锻炼了，Sam答应第二天早上就开始.主要人物1. Roland  - a mgnificent German Shepherd2.Mrs. Proudfoot -a lonely widow3.Sam -a teenager ; Mrs Proudfoor's neighbor 人物性格1.Roland · a magnificent German Shepherdh·a little lazy and overweight · loved to doze in the backyard· yawned and stretched his body as he .· wagged his tail affectionately · stood alert by her side lazy ;overweight  ;a devoted dog ;be obedient to Mrs. Proundfoot2.Mrs. Proundfoor ·be well loved in her neighborhoaod· had no kids to call her own · "Don't worry ,Sammy,you want me to pay."· clapped her hands in agreement animal-friendly ;kind-hearted considerate;affectionate;trustworthy ;reliable3.Sam· With a dramatic sigh he continued · That will ruin his future !I have to help him,whatever it takes .he    is my best friend .· This is not what I came here for.I will work for you · He looked up with begging eyes .a devoted /loyal/faithful friend; considerate ;a person of self -esteemand independence推测结局故事的原文是个 悲剧，最后Roland去世留下Mrs Proudfoot 孤独一人，但作为我们续写还是要充满积极乐观的去写完这个故事的。故事的结尾Sam应该为Barry筹到了足够的钱同时与Roland 成为了朋友。Roland喜欢上了运动变得越来越健康和精力充沛。Mrs Proudfoot 不再孤独了，Sam经常到她家来陪伴她。故事主题§ A act of kindness can make a great difference to people in          trouble.§ Roses given,fragrance in hand .§ Kindness is the sunshine that brightens our lives .具体描写Paragraph 1: Sam arrived very early the next morning_在续写之前一定要反复研读揣摩所提供的段落及两个首句，注重对重要细节的理解，分析人物的性格，领会故事发展方向和主题。理解他人，是表达自我的前提，否则你的作文就是答非所问，缘木求鱼。根据两个首句和人物的性格，我们可以作出如下思考：当Sam第二天来到Mrs. Proudfoot 家，想要去walk the dog 的时候，因为Roland 是很lazy  的，所以对Sam来说带Roland出去散步会是一件简单的事吗？如果Roland不肯出去，那么Sam又想出了什么办法带Roland 出去呢？带着这些问题我们可以勾勒出第一段要续写得内容的场景。场景一 描绘Roland的laziness场景二 Roland不愿意和Sam 出去场景三 Sam想出好的方法让Roland和他去散步,并且Roland 很享受散步场景四 衔接下一段句首一个好的故事多半由多个场景组合而成，场景好才是好故事的大西瓜，把场景确定好后再补充细节描写，细节描写只是小芝麻。 Paragraph 1: Sam arrived very early the next morning_1.Seeinh Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line .Sam darted towards him,arms widely opened trying to tempt Roland to stand up and follow him out.看见罗兰懒洋洋地沐浴在温和的阳光下，眼睛眯成一条线。萨姆朝他冲过来，张开双臂试图引诱罗兰站起来跟着他出去。2.Unwilling to move an inch ,Roland just lay there ,belly glued to     his bed .罗兰一动不动，躺在那里，肚子贴在床上。3. Giving him a lazy glimpse ,Roland wagged his tail idly and then turned his head away,falling sound asleep again .罗兰懒洋洋地瞥了他一眼，懒洋洋地摇着尾巴，然后他把头转过去，又睡着了。4.At the sight of a strange approaching the house ,Roland watched him ,ears up,head slightly cocked .一看到一个陌生人走近房子，罗兰看着他，竖起耳朵，头微微翘起。5.Roland stretched ,shook himself and circled several times before dropping to the ground .罗兰伸了个懒腰，摇了摇身子，绕了几圈才倒在地上。6.Curling in his warm and soft bed ,Roland idly lifted his head,casting Sam a lazy glance and then again fell asleep soundly.罗兰蜷缩在温暖柔软的床上，悠闲地抬起头，懒洋洋地瞥了萨姆一眼，然后又睡着了。场景二 Roland不愿意和Sam 出去1.A look of annoyance and reluctance written on his face ,he wagged his tail hopelessly ,begging not to go .他脸上写着恼怒和不情愿的表情，绝望地摇着尾巴，乞求不要走。 场景三 Sam想出好的方法让Roland和他去散步,并且Roland 很享受散   1. Lured by the tasty smell ,Roland swiftly bounced up and       jumped at the bone,following  Sam out .罗兰被那股香味吸引，迅速跳起来，扑向那块骨头，跟着萨姆走了出来2. With the temptation of the delicious meat ,Roland followed Sam eagerly 被美味的肉诱惑着，罗兰急切地跟着萨姆3.Tempted by the sweet smell of biscuit ,Roland swiftly stood up ,only to find Sam bouncing away with his favourite snack .罗兰被饼干的甜味所诱惑，迅速站了起来，却发现萨姆拿着他最喜欢的零食蹦蹦跳跳地走开了。4. The shaggy grass, the squelch of the mud , the shimmering rays from the sun and the rosy clouds held Roland entirely in their fascination .蓬松的草地，静谧的泥泞，闪烁的阳光和玫瑰色的云朵使罗兰完全着迷。5. Delightedly, Roland threw himself into the embrace of nature ,rolling on the grasses and sniffing around here and there .令人高兴的是，罗兰投入大自然的怀抱，在草地上打滚，到处嗅。6.Chasing a butterfly here and bouncing at the falling leaves ,Roland delightedly found himself facinated by the surroundings.罗兰在这里追逐一只蝴蝶，在落叶上蹦蹦跳跳，高兴地发现自己被周围的环境吸引。场景四 衔接下一段句首1.Day by day , it gradually became a routine for both of them .一天又一天，这逐渐成为他们俩的例行公事。2. Delightedly, Sam found Roland had gradually become willing and eager to have a walk outside .令人高兴的是，山姆发现罗兰渐渐地愿意出去走走。3. Since then, Sam arrived at Mrs. Proudfoot on time every morning and playing and walking with Roland became one of his daily rountines.从那以后，山姆每天早上都准时到普劳德福特太太家，和罗兰一起玩耍和散步成了他每天的一项活动。 Para2 A month later，Mrs Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic._第二段中我们可以写的场景很多，比如Mrs.Proudfoot感谢Sam 并支付给他遛狗的钱；Sam和Roland产生了感情，他们成了好朋友；Sam 和其他的孩子经常来Mrs. Proudfoot 家中，Mrs. Proudfoot 再感到孤单；Sam把遛狗的钱 给了Barry，Barry买了书还给了图书馆，最终参加了期末考试。以上这些情节都可以作为第二段的续写内容，但是这样的话故事结尾的线头太多了，也会增加阅卷老师的理解难度，造成主题不够明确。由于每个故事都有一个若隐若现的主题，它是故事的灵魂，它才能控制故事情节的发展方向。而本篇故事我们确定的主题是A act of kindness can make a great difference to people in trouble.因此在本段中要选定Sam为叙述主题，场景的选择要能体现故事的主题， 因此根据主题本段必选场景Mrs.Proudfoot感谢Sam 并支付给他遛狗的钱以及Sam把遛狗的钱给了Barry，Barry买了书还给了图书馆，最终参加了期末考试。场景一 Mrs. proudfoot很开心， 感谢Sam 并且给了他遛狗的钱场景二 Sam把遛狗的钱给了Barry，Barry 感谢Sam可选场景：Sam和Roland产生了感情场景三  主题升华 场景一 Mrs. proudfoot很开心， 感谢Sam 并且给了他遛狗的钱1.Sam ，thanks for your effort . Here is what you deserve .山姆，谢谢你的努力。这是你应得的。2.Sam opened it slowly ,taking out all the money ,only to find it was far more than he deserved .山姆慢慢地打开，拿出所有的钱，却发现远远超出了他的应得。3" It was you that gave not only Roland but also me considerate company and laughter to let  me not feel lonely ."Mrs.Proudfoot choked ,tears brimming  with her eyes .“是你不仅给了罗兰，还给了我体贴的陪伴和笑声，让我不感到孤独”普劳德富特太太哽咽着，眼里噙满了泪水。4. Obviously ,Sam's efforts paid off-Roland was healthy and active .Then came the moment Sam had been looking forward to -the day he was paid for his work .很明显，山姆的努力得到了回报罗兰身体健康，很活跃。然后，山姆期待的那一刻到来了他得到工作报酬的那一天。5.Satisfied with Sam's work ,she gave him some extra money ,saying ,"life is marvelous ,Thanks to your help,a fat lazy dog has become strong and energetic!"她对山姆的工作很满意，给了他一些额外的钱，说：“生活太棒了，多亏了你的帮助，一只又胖又懒的狗变得又强壮又精力充沛了！”6.In return for Sam's efforts,she gave Sam enough money which could help Barry afford that book .作为对萨姆努力的回报，她给了萨姆足够的钱来帮助巴里买得起那本书。 场景二 Sam把遛狗的钱给了Barry，Barry 感谢Sam1.What a big surprise ! Tears of gratitude welled up in Barry's eyes as he knew what Sam had done for him .真是个大惊喜！当巴里知道萨姆为他做了什么时，他眼里涌出了感激的泪水。2. Sam thanked over and over again ,and rushed to give money to his best friend Barry afterwards .山姆一遍又一遍地感谢他，然后赶紧把钱给他最好的朋友巴里。3.When receiving the money which was offered by Sam ,Barry hugged Sam tightly as if wards failed to convey his gratitude .巴里收到萨姆给他的钱时，紧紧地拥抱着萨姆，好像没有话语可以他的感激之情。场景三  主题升华1.it was a story of passing love .From then on , Sam went to Mrs Proudfoot 's house and played or took a walk with Roland now and then but this time for free.这是一个关于传递的爱的故事。从那时起，萨姆去普劳德富特太太家，偶尔和罗兰一起玩耍或散步，但这次是免费的。2.Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining,making the world more beautiful and harmonious .有时候，只有一点点的善良，才能点燃一些闪光的东西，让世界变得更加美丽和和谐。3.For Sam ,it was an unforgettable experience as well , It turned out that his efforts not only helped his good friend  in need ,but also gave hiimself  the sweet taste of helping others .对山姆来说，这也是一次难忘的经历，事实证明，他的努力不仅帮助了 需 要帮助的好朋友，也让自己尝到了帮助别人的甜头。4.It was such a small kindness that brightened the day of the Sam. 正是这样一个小小的善举使山姆的日子变得光明起来5. Although the act of kindness is small , it can lighten up others' life. 善举虽小，却能照亮别人的生活学科网（北京）股份有限公司