Unit 5 Reading for Writing高中英语人教版（2019）必修第二册.pptx
Write a speechsunnyHow can music help us and change our life?Warm upTouch our soulRelease our pressureBring us happinessGive us courage and powerKeep us companyWhat is the girl doing in the picture?Guess.Music changes her lifeWhats the type of this passage?Warm upA speechWhat should be mentioned at the beginning of this passage?Greetings,self introduction and topicpara11.Whats sarahs problem?How did she feel?Read for the detailsA serious disease which was difficult to cure2.How did music help her during her difficult time?Afraid/alone/discouragedThe song“happy”made her feel better and help her recoverMusic is the medicine of mind.Para2&3Read for the details1.What did music bring to sarah?Give me happiness-spirits fly like a kite in my mindGive me strength and brought me relief-it was the rock I leant on to become strongGive me hope and a sense of satisfaction like friend speak words of encouragement 2.Why did writer show her personal experience?Make the speech more sincere and touchingPara2&3Read for the detailsPara42.Whats her advice to others?Treasure music and make it a part of ones life.1.What should be mentioned at the end of this speech?Advice/hopesRead for the structurespara1Greetings+introduction+topicbeginningpara2Problem:diseaseSolution:musicstorypara3benefitsfeelingsbodypara4Hope+adviceclosingAppropriate structure makes the speech smooth,logical and coherent.Read for the language featuresBesides clear structure,what makes the speech successful?Give me happiness-spirits fly like a kite in my mindGive me strength and brought me relief-it was the rock I leant on to become strongGive me hope and a sense of satisfaction like friend speak words of encouragement We can know speakers emotion.repetitionRhetorical devices修辞手法修辞手法 Simile(明喻明喻):A simile compares two things by using words such as“like”or“as”.eg.“John is as cunning(狡猾的狡猾的)as a fox.”Metaphor(隐喻隐喻):A metaphor compares two things that are unrelated,but which are similar in some way.eg.“That businessman is a real fox.”Rhetorical question(设问设问):A rhetorical question is a question that isnt meant to elicit(引出引出)an answer,but is asked to make a point.eg.“How could I be so stupid?”Personification(拟人拟人):Personification is when a thing,idea,or animal is given human attributes(特征特征).eg.“The sky weeps.”Quote(引用引用):To quote is to repeat a short passage,word,phrase,or sentence that came from somewhere or sb.else.eg.“as Longfellow says,Music is the universal language of mankind.”Repetition(重复重复):Repetition is the use of the same word or phrase in a poem,speech,etc.eg.Julius Caesars famous saying“I came,I saw,I conquered.”Read for the language featuresRhetorical devicesMatch the names of rhetorical device to the lettered sentences in the speechActivity 4:Listen/Read for the language features of a speech.Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all?A rhetorical questionA statementArouse the audiences interest and build a connection between speaker and audience.Involve in the speechActivity 4:Listen/Read for the language features of a speech.John A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”quotePersonal point of viewConvincing/add weight to the point you presentActivity 4:Listen/Read for the language features of a speech.Music gave me happiness.Music gave me strength and brought me relief.Music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.repetition Emphasize/draw attentionActivity 4:Listen/Read for the language features of a speech.it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.vividActivity 4:Listen/Read for the language features of a speech.it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.similevividActivity 4:Listen/Read for the language features of a speech.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.metaphorActivity 4:Listen/Read for the language features of a speech.It became my best friend.personificationRead for the language featuresRhetorical devicesSpeech powerful,convincing and successfulstructure+Greetings+introduction+topicbeginningProblem:diseaseSolution:musicstorybenefitsfeelingsbodyHope+adviceclosing SimileMetaphorRhetorical questionPersonificationQuoteRepetitionWrite a speech about musicThink of ways that people experience music and how music can help peopleUseful expression in beginning/body/ending partGreetings+introduction+topicbeginningstoryfeelingsbodyHope+adviceclosing SimileMetaphorRhetorical questionPersonificationQuoteRepetitionHello!My name is John,and Im here to talk about the power of music over words.Two years ago,my grandmother passed away,and music has helped me cope since then.Sometimes words cannot describe what we are feeling,but music can.As Hans Christian Anderson once said,“Where words fail,music speaks.”Music is like a special language that everyone can understand.Have you ever heard a piece of music and remembered an important time in your life?Perhaps when something important happened,or when you felt really happy or sad.I feel this way about a piece of classical music by Eric Satie called“Gymnopedie No.1”.It reminds me of my grandmother.It is like an old friend comforting me when I hear it.This music helps me remember how much I miss her.It helps me remember all the great times we had.And music helps me remember all the great times we had.And music helps me be grateful for that time togther.If you struggle to find the words to help you,music can be your guide.Tips for delivering better speechesDont rush.Pause between sentences and after important points(or jokes)!Speak with enthusiasm and energy.Smile,when appropriate!Make sure the speech is easy to read and highlight important words and points.Tips for delivering better speechesStand straight and look up at the audience often.Practise aloud with a friend or record yourself.Think about tone and rhythm when practising.Homework1.Polish your draft according to the checklist.2.Deliver your speech to your friends by following the tips.
