高中英语《“短文改错”解题指导及备考建议》.ppt

“短文改错短文改错”解题指导及解题指导及备考备考建议建议（2-1）名师简介：名师简介：1982年毕业于福建师范大学外语系英语专业，获文学士；2003年获教育硕士学位；2006年被授予“福建省特级教师”荣誉称号；2008年被评选为福建省中小学中青年学科教学带头人；2012年被授予“三明市名师陈惟理工作室领衔人”；2013年被聘为三明市高中英语学科教师培训实践导师。陈惟理陈惟理 高级教师高级教师 三明一中一、一、福建卷与全国卷的总体差异福建卷与全国卷的总体差异1、2015年福建卷年福建卷第第卷卷（选择题 共115分）第一部分第一部分 听力听力（共两节，满分30分）第二部分第二部分 英语知识运用英语知识运用（共两节，满分45分）第一节 单项填空(共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分)第二节 完形填空（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）第三部分第三部分 阅读理解阅读理解（共20小题，每小题2分，满分40分）第第卷卷（非选择题 共35分）第四部分第四部分 写作写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文填词短文填词（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）阅读下面短文，根据以下提示：阅读下面短文，根据以下提示：1）汉语提示，）汉语提示，2）首字母）首字母提示，提示，3)语境提示，在每个空格内填入一个适当的英语单语境提示，在每个空格内填入一个适当的英语单词，所填单词要求意义准确，拼写正确，并将该词完整地词，所填单词要求意义准确，拼写正确，并将该词完整地写在答题卡中相应的横线上。写在答题卡中相应的横线上。第二节 书面表达（满分25分）2、2015年年全国全国卷卷题型题型第第卷卷第一部分第一部分 听力听力（共两节，满分30分）第二部分第二部分 阅读理解阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）第一节 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，（共15小题，每小题2分，满分30分）第二节 根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。（共5小题，每小题2分，满分10分）第三部分第三部分 英语知识运用英语知识运用（共两节，满分45分）第一节 完形填空（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）第二节 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）第第卷卷第四部分第四部分 写作写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节第一节 短文改错短文改错 文中共有文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。（共两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。（共10小题，每小题小题，每小题1分，满分分，满分10分）分）第二节 书面表达（满分25分）二、“短文改错短文改错”的变化的变化1、福建卷、福建卷 “短文改错短文改错”“短文填词短文填词”“短文改错短文改错”2、全国卷全国卷 2013年前年前，对标题号的每一行做出判断对标题号的每一行做出判断。2013年起，每句中最多有两处年起，每句中最多有两处。2013年年前前“短文改错短文改错”的要求的要求第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（）；如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei.She is our 76_ monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.77_ Clever as she is,but she works very hard.We have a 78_ lot on common and have a lot to talk about.One evening she 79_ told me that something happened when her parents was out.80_ She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when 81_ she smelt something burning.She stopped look out 82_ of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 83_ of her neighbors house.She called 119 immediate.Ten 84_ minutes later,the firemen came and put out fire.Her neighbor 85_ was very thankful for her help.whosebutinwerehomeworktofoundimmediatelythe2004福建卷短文改错福建卷短文改错2012全国卷短文改错全国卷短文改错 Every one of us can make a great efforts to 76._cut off the use of energy in our country.To begin with,all 77._of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only 78._when we have a real need.That wont be easy,I know,79._but we have to start anywhere.Whats more,we can go to 80._work by bike once and twice a week,and we can also buy 81._smaller cars that burn less oil.Other way is to watch our 82._everyday use of water and electric at home.For example,83._how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the 84._lights or television when no one else was there?85._adowntosomewhereorAnotherelectricitylefton2、2013起全国卷全国卷“短文改错短文改错”的要求的要求第四部分 写作第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.holdpassedwell/clearlyshouldersto/intohimandwhenever2013全国卷短文改错全国卷短文改错 Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!agoofyearshaveaeverywheretastymany或把but改为yetwonderful2014全国卷短文改错全国卷短文改错 When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.thoughttheandwithseriousairManyfindour2015全国卷短文改错全国卷短文改错1、第一人称记叙文；2、词数为108、106和105；3、文字浅显易懂，没有生僻或超纲词；4、句子结构简单，基本上是简单句或并不复杂的复合句；5、设题主要是学生常见错误。三、近三、近3年全国卷年全国卷“短文改错短文改错”特点分析特点分析时态：13:passespassed I was only four when 14:had been allowinghave been allowing 15:thinkthought When I was a child,15:have been shown have shown名词：13:shouldershoulders broad shoulders 14:yearyears for all these years 15:airsair The air we breathe in is词形：14:tastetasty but juicy and tasty wonderfullywonderful tomatoes 15:seriouslyserious a serious problem 短语：13：remember sb.very muchwell/clearly 14：nearly five years before nearly five years ago with the help by our father with the help of our father 15：on the development of with the development of 代词：13：himselfhim set sb.apart 15:yourour We to protect our environment.冠词:13:in a fact in fact 14:as result as a result 15:in countryside in the countryside其它：14:much many There are so many that 15:much many Many rare animals 13:never ever I have ever known.14:somewhere everywhere 15:must foundmust find 句型：13:He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.and he was strong and powerful.In fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.when they came over to play or do homework with me.14:Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.四、短文改错指导建议四、短文改错指导建议n2015年考试说明中对写作部分（1）的考核目标与要求是：准确使用语法词汇准确使用语法词汇。n学生通过错误改正错误改正、缺词添加缺词添加、多词删除多词删除三种形式修正文章中的错误。n一般设置多词1-2个，少词1-2个，改词6-8个。1、基础为本、基础为本n（1）语法教与学，基础为本。）语法教与学，基础为本。（2）词组记与用，基础为主。）词组记与用，基础为主。（3）词形思与辨，基础为重）词形思与辨，基础为重。2、能力为重、能力为重We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!wonderful （1）学会观察Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.seriousI was only four when she passes away.passed（2）学会思考13:He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.14:Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.andwhen（3）学会改错13:However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.14:As a result,the plants are growing somewhere.with the help ofwith the development as a result in the countryside in factevereverywhere Thank you!