读后续写：诚信类---一张星空地图讲义 高考英语作文专项复习.docx

高三下学期模拟考试英语读后续写题目：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a late Saturday afternoon in early March, and I was sweating gracelessly, in search of the only gift my son said he wanted from Los Angeles:a map to the homes of the stars.I was here for meetings in Westwood near the UCLA Medical Centre. Should I wander a little? Try to find one of the treasured maps?From the front of the hotel taxi line, a cheerful driver said, “No problem. Map vendors(小贩) are everywhere!” Before long, we saw a hand-painted sandwich board saying: Star Maps. The taxi stopped. A fellow approached with a thin folded sheet and said:“Ten dollars.”Ten dollars. American! With righteous assurance, I informed him, “Thats too much.”The map man shrugged. We continued, whizzing past the Beverly Hills Hotel into West Hollywood. The driver dropped me at the House of Blues, encouraging me to stroll. I began walking, certain I would find a low-cost star map soon.I was wrong. There was hardly anybody on the street. There didnt seem to be many real stores, just cars and bars. No maps. No stars. Blocks passed. The sun began to sink. At the edge of West Hollywood, another fellow appeared ahead, selling star maps to a car full of teenage girls.Ten dollars still. Still too much. Forgot it. My son would understand. Time to go back to Westwood. That night, I called my wife. “Did you get one of those maps to the stars? Hes been talking about nothing else.” This news was hard to ignore But it was late.Morning was coming. There would be last try. After I checked out, the first taxi in the hotel line was an old Chevy driven by a skinny guy from North Carolina. At nine in the morning, map vendors were nowhere to be found.“You know,”said the driver, “The guys with the maps just aint up yet!” He was right. “Forget it. Let's go to the airport.”“Well.” said the driver“I could mail you one if you like.”Sure. Trust this guy? I might as well toss cash onto the freeway. But exiting the taxi,I recognized my last chance. I handed the driver $13 and my business card.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Three weeks passed, no reply from LA.I held the package and the note in my hand speechless.试题分析:文本是-一篇记叙文。讲述了作者在美国洛杉矶出差期间留下13美元托付-一位出租车司机帮助购买星空地图，经过一周后因仍未收到地图，在几乎失去信心的时候，最终收到对方寄来的地图的故事。故事体现了出租车司机助人为乐的精神及对他人的诚信，符合新时代社会主义价值观，适合离中生写作。五要素Who-主要人物: I: 次要人物: a taxi driver in LA; my son, my wifeWhen-a late Saturday afternoon in early March; three weeks later.Where-in Los AngelesHow-to keep his wordWhy-to keep his wordWhat-A taxi driver helped to buy a star map and mailed it to me挖掘文章人物的情感I.主次人物分析根据文本和续写两段首句可知是续写第是第-段续写的次要人段的主要人物;物是第二段续写的主要人物是这两段中的次要人物。主要人物要在每-一段中体现次要人物可能出现在续写中，考生可以根据自己的故事情节进行合理安排。II。 人物情感和性格分析根据I was sweating gracelessly，Should I wander a little?Blocks passed.The sun began to sink河看出“我给my son买星空地图，又为避免付出了相当大的根据Ten dollars still. Still too much, Forgot it可看6我”始终和而-度但是据the only gift my son said he wanted from Los Angeles及后来给my wife打电话时听到He's been talking about nothing else等描述，可以发现my son非常所以“我”只能买星空地图不可。所以根据I could mail you one if you like及I recognized my last chance. I handed the driver $13and my business card可以看出出租车司机觉得可疑的，但是的性格，虽然不情愿但只能接受。III.场景分析根据Three weeks passed, no reply from LA和I held thepackage and the note in my hand, speechless可得知，第-一段段末以情况应该重点描写结束，实现与第二段首句的街接第二段可以通过合理描写不文的合理街接，同时通过描写实现上以及对故事进行和升华。IV。动作分析文本中I was sweating gracelessly动作描写出“我”找星;从文本We continued, whizzing past the。began walking， certainly I would find a low-cost star map等司“我”为了得到以看出，这也为续写时解释为什么taxi driver 会过了三周才给他发来的星空地图。根据文尾handed the driver $13 and my business card这个动作细节司知，续写第描写段应该通过设计由失望到惊喜的过程。V心理活动分析文本关于心理活动的描写主要集中在Should I wander a little? Try to find one of the treasured maps?可看出作者为了不惜走多几条街想法。根据Forgot it.My son would understand河看This news was hard toignore , Sure. Trust this guy? I might as well toss cash onto“我”是-一个的人the freeway可看出这也为续写第-一段经过三周后还没收到星空地图描写作者和如何埋下伏笔。VI。对话分析根据文本Did you get one of those maps to the stars? He'sbeen talking about nothing else及my wife在电话中的所说的话可知，my son是另根据“You know said the Taxi driver,“ The guys with the maps just ain't up yet!“我”应该是把自己的寻找地图的跟可以推测taxi driver说了。所以才会有I could mailyou one if you like这样的:也为续写第二段就为什么会过了三个星期还没收到对方答应寄来星空地图作出解释。范文：Three weeks passed, no reply from LA. My son sighed with disappointment when carefully checking the mail box. Seeing his drooping head and gloomy eyes, I couldnt help blaming myself for putting my easy trust on a total stranger and expecting him to realize my sons wish. After all in recent days no one would like to take the trouble to do this for an encounter with nothing in return. We had given up on the star map when a big white envelope marked “U.S.”unexpectedly reached us one afternoon. Inside the envelope was a small green package and a small note saying“Forgive delay. Heres a map for your son Kind regards,LA!”I held the package and the note in my hand, speechless.The whole thing was totally to my surprise. I had previously thought that an act of kindness from a stranger would not really existed. However, what I was experiencing right now proved that I was wrong. I was deeply ashamed of myself, because I shouldnt have assumed the drivers intention to help someone in need. When my son saw the star map in my hand, his eyes sparkled with great excitement. Seemingly incapable of containing his joy, he hugged me tightly and exclaimed, “I cant believe, dad, you did it!” I gently touched his head, explaining, “If you never trust anybody, youll never find the good man."学科网（北京）股份有限公司