读后续写练习写作 讲义 高三英语三轮冲刺.docx

试题原题读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Whats that squeaky noise?” Meg asked her eight-year-old daughter, Haley. She looked down at the girls shoes and noticed her sneakers soles (鞋底) had been torn open. Meg and Haley were on their way home from school, and it had just stopped raining. Water on the road had leaked into Haleys damaged shoes, making a squishy (吱吱作响的) noise.Meg immediately took her daughter to a shoe store to buy her a new pair of sneakers. She had some money for groceries but thought getting Haley a new pair of shoes was more important. “How about these?” asked Haley, who was checking shoes in the section only for boys. “Mama, I want these limited-edition sneakers. Buddy loves a TV show and always tells me how he wishes to wear such shoes.”Meg frowned. Not only did she not have money to afford two pairs of shoes, but she wondered why Haley was too interested in getting her classmate Buddy a new pair. Sensing her mothers hesitation, Haley continued, “Buddy is from a very poor family, mama. Poorer than us. His shoes are torn and look miserable. Everybody laughs at him. Please, can we buy these shoes for him? You can buy mine later.”Meg thought for a while and decided it would be best if she bought her daughter shoes for now. “You will fall sick if you keep wearing your wet, torn shoes. Im sorry, honey, but you need a new pair.” Haley sighed heavily and agreed. She was not excited to see the new pair of sneakers her mom had bought for her.As Meg and Haley left, Bob, the shoe store owner who knew Meg well, walked to the entrance and sighed. He had overheard everything and knew what it was like to live in poverty. He wanted to help Haley fulfill her mission of helping Buddy but didn't know how. Moreover, the pair of shoes Haley wanted to get for Buddy was a limited-edition collection, which had been ordered by someone else. He could not simply give them away.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored. _The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house. _试题分析1.人物（角色）：Meg: mumHaley: Megs eight-year-old daughterBob: the shoe store ownerBuddy: Haleys classmate, a boy from a poor family2.主题：人与社会（自我）八岁的小女孩Haley鞋子破了，雨天漏水，却想着办法希望妈妈Meg给比自己家里更穷的同学Buddy买双鞋子，但迫于无奈，只能先给Haley买了一双新鞋，Haley并未感到有多少高兴。母女俩的对话，正好给店主Bob听见了，他对Meg一家比较了解。于是，Bob想帮Haley完成这份夙愿。.3.续写情节安排： 第一段：Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored.（与开头句衔接）在楼下仓库找鞋子找到后，包装+卡片（与下文开头句衔接）连夜把鞋子送到Haley家门口第二段：The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house.（与开头句衔接）看到鞋子的心情发现其中的卡片放学后到Bob店里表示谢意下水作文Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored. It was not long before Bob settled down to pick out the shoe box, containing the sneakers that resembled the one that Buddy longed for. He took out them from the box and checked whether they were still available. Much to his great delight, the very pair was in good shape, though out of fashion. “Buddy will surely be happy to own such a pair of new shoes.” Bob thought. Making sure nothing was wrong, he packed the shoe box with great care, inserting a card in it. All done, Bob rode on his bike and placed the shoes to the front door of Haleys house. (106 words)The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house. Puzzled, she picked up the shoe box and asked Meg, “Mama, did you forget the box here?” When getting the negative answer, she felt even more puzzled. With her mothers permission, she opened the box, finding a pair of handsome sneakers lying in it. When the card caught her sight, all came out in a wash. “Specially for Buddy, from Bob!” Haley read aloud with great joy! “Thats generous gift from kind Bob! No one will laugh at Buddy any longer!” Later that day, after school, accompanied by Meg, Haley and Buddy went directly to the Bobs, thanking him again and again for his generosity. (105 words)参考范文Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored. Wriggling his way through the sections where old limited-edition shoes were stocked, he searched high and low and finally rested his eyes on the shoe box at the top of the shelf. There it was; the pair bore much resemblance to what Buddy desired but were an older version. He gingerly brought it down and dusted the ash off. Then he contacted Haley's mother and explained his motive. “I want to surprise the girl. Is that OK if I drop off the shoes before six tomorrow morning?” “Sure. Thanks, Mr. White. I'm glad you could help!” Meg said gratefully. (99 words)The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house. She rubbed her sleepy eyes and caught sight of the note stuck on the box. It was written, “Hope Buddy loves them!” Curious to know what was inside, Haley hurriedly opened the box and stood stunned the next minute. Though a bit different, the shoes were what would make Buddy exhilarated. Cradling the shoes in her arms, she cried in joy. Meg, who had been hidden behind the door to eye her daughters reaction, shed tears, too. She was convinced that something else illuminated her that day two golden hearts. (91 words)试题呈现: “Whats that squeaky noise?” Meg asked her eight-year-old daughter, Haley. She looked down at the girls shoes and noticed her sneakers soles (鞋底) had been torn open. Meg and Haley were on their way home from school, and it had just stopped raining. Water on the road had leaked into Haleys damaged shoes, making a squishy (吱吱作响的) noise.Meg immediately took her daughter to a shoe store to buy her a new pair of sneakers. She had some money for groceries but thought getting Haley a new pair of shoes was more important. “How about these?” asked Haley, who was checking shoes in the section only for boys. “Mama, I want these limited-edition sneakers. Buddy loves a TV show and always tells me how he wishes to wear such shoes.”Meg frowned. Not only did she not have money to afford two pairs of shoes, but she wondered why Haley was too interested in getting her classmate Buddy a new pair. Sensing her mothers hesitation, Haley continued, “Buddy is from a very poor family, mama. Poorer than us. His shoes are torn and look miserable. Everybody laughs at him. Please, can we buy these shoes for him? You can buy mine later.”Meg thought for a while and decided it would be best if she bought her daughter shoes for now. “You will fall sick if you keep wearing your wet, torn shoes. Im sorry, honey, but you need a new pair.” Haley sighed heavily and agreed. She was not excited to see the new pair of sneakers her mom had bought for her.As Meg and Haley left, Bob, the shoe store owner who knew Meg well, walked to the entrance and sighed. He had overheard everything and knew what it was like to live in poverty. He wanted to help Haley fulfill her mission of helping Buddy but didn't know how. Moreover, the pair of shoes Haley wanted to get for Buddy was a limited-edition collection, which had been ordered by someone else. He could not simply give them away.Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored.The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house.参考范文：Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored. Wriggling his way through the sections where old limited-edition shoes were stocked, he searched high and low and finally rested his eyes on the shoe box at the top of the shelf. There it was; the pair bore much resemblance to what Buddy desired but were an older version. He gingerly brought it down and dusted the ash off. Then he contacted Haley's mother and explained his motive. “I want to surprise thegirl. Is that OK if I drop off the shoes before six tomorrow morning” “Sure. Thanks, Mr. White. I'm glad you could help!”Meg said gratefully.The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house. She rubbed her sleepy eyes and caught sight of the note stuck on the box. It was written,“Hope Buddy loves them!”Curious to know what was inside, Haley hurriedly opened the box and stood stunned the next minute. Though a bit different, the shoes were what would make Buddy exhilarated. Cradling the shoes in her arms, she cried in joy. Meg, who had been hidden behind the door to eye her daughters reaction, shed tears, too. She was convinced that something else illuminated her that day- two golden hearts.考场优秀作品：. After a while, Bob found a pair of shoes which was similar to the limited-edition sneakers. Opening the box carefully, Bob checked the shoes detailedly to confirm that the shoes were not broken. When night fell, Bob decided to give the pair of shoes for Harley to help Buddy. Approaching Megs home, he tiptoed to the door and put the shoe box at the doorstep, so that Harley could see as soon as she pushed the door open. And then he went back with satisfaction.Puzzled as she was, she opened the box. Surprised and thrilled, she jumped to her feet and told her mother excitedly. . The moment Buddy saw the desired shoes, he hugged Harley tightly to convey his gratitude.精彩表达思维积累：1.Seeing its appealing appearance like a new one, he was overwhelmed with satisfaction and happiness. Thinking for a while, he wrote his best wishes on a card attached to the shoe box and headed for Harleys home.2.lose its original appearance3.She called for her mum, trying to confirm whether her mum had bought the shoes for her classmate.4.No sooner had she opened the box than a note fell out and caught her attention, which read, “Present for a kind and selfless heart”,with a “Bob” signed on it.5.Overwhelmed with excitement, he cleaned them with great patience. The moment he imagined how Buddy would feel when he received the sneakers, a flood of happiness welled up from his bottom.6.With a smile creeping up on her face, she couldnt wait to open the box.7.Bob's kindness not only helped her achieve her goal but also deepened her understanding of the power of compassion and the positive effect it could have on others.原文本赏析：Girl Asks Mom to Buy Shoes for Needy Classmate, Finds Boxes of Footwear on Their Doorstep Story of the Day"What's that squeaky noise?" Meg asked her eight-year-old daughter, Haley. She looked down at the girl's shoes and noticed her sneakers' soles had ripped open.Meg and Haley were on their way home from school, and it had just stopped raining. Water on the road had seeped into Haley's damaged shoes, making a squishy noise.Meg immediately took her daughter to a shoe store to buy her a new pair of sneakers. She had some money for groceries but thought getting Haley a new pair of shoes was more important."That one, yes, those pink shoes on the rack below the blue shoes," Meg instructed the shop assistant."How about these?" Meg heard Haley say. She turned around and saw Haley checking shoes in the section exclusively for boys.Meg frowned and approached her daughter."Mama, I want these limited-edition sneakers. Buddy loves this TV show and always tells me how he wishes to wear such shoes."Meg was taken aback. Not only did she not have money to afford two pairs of shoes, but she wondered why Haley was too interested in getting her classmate Buddy a new pair."Why would you want to buy your classmate new shoes?"Haley's smile shrunk into despair. "Buddy is from a very poor family, mama. Poorer than us. His shoes are torn and look miserable. Everybody laughs at him. Please, can we buy these shoes for him? You can buy mine later."Meg thought for a while and decided it would be best if she bought her daughter shoes for now."You will fall sick if you keep wearing your wet, torn shoes. I'm sorry, honey, but you need a new pair."Haley sighed heavily and agreed. She was not excited to see the new pair of sneakers her mom had bought for her.As Meg and Haley left, Bob, the shoe store owner who knew Meg well, walked to the entrance and sighed. He had overheard everything and knew what it was like to live in poverty.Bob's late father was a cobbler, and it inspired him to establish a shoe store that sold footwear for people from all walks of life.He wanted to help Haley fulfill her mission of helping Buddy but didn't know how. Moreover, the pair of shoes Haley wanted to get for Buddy was a limited-edition collection. They were pretty expensive, and he could not just give them away for free.Suddenly, he remembered something and climbed downstairs to the store's basement, where old limited-edition shoes were stocked."Hmmm!" Bob grinned. He brought down an entire shelf of unsold shoes and picked the best ones that could be used. Then he contacted Haley's mother."And what time can I pop in? I want to surprise the girl. Make sure she is not up and out before seven tomorrow morning, alright?!""Sure.Sure.thanks, Mr. White. I'm glad you could help!"Haley hadn't slept the entire night peacefully. She was hounded by the thought of Buddy and his raggedy shoes. She had even checked her piggy bank, but the few coins rattling in it disheartened her even more. She decided she would invite her classmates to pool money to buy new shoes for Buddy."Darling, wake up! It's time to get ready for school. Haley, wake up!" Meg jolted her daughter."Good morning, mama!""Good morning, darling. Can you please bring me the paper from the gate?" Meg told Haley. She could not wait to see her daughter's reaction once she opened the door.Haley rubbed her sleepy eyes and yawned as she walked to the main door. She opened it and stood stunned."Mama! Come here, mommy.There are so many boxes at the door. Mommy, please come quickly!"Meg came out smiling and asked Haley to open the boxes and see for herself."NEW SHOES?!" she cried in joy.On one of the shoeboxes, it was written:"Hope Buddy loves them!"Meg then told Haley that the shoe store owner had overheard their conversation and had wanted to help."He's an old friend and has two little granddaughters just like you. He told me he couldn't see you sad. So, honey, are you happy? There are new sneakers for Buddy and his parents!"Haley inspected the shoes meant for Buddy and found they were the ones he wanted, inspired by his favorite TV series, but an older version.As she scooped up the boxes, she found another shoebox with her name written on it. She opened the box to see what was inside. It made her cry the next minute."New ballet shoes!" the girl cried in joy.It turned out that Meg had once visited Bob's shoe store to shop for new ballet shoes. But she could not buy