读后续写邻里情之我的邻居Bill 讲义 高三英语复习写作专项.docx

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My family moved in a small house in Brighton, Colorado on my seventh birthday. My first memory is our neighbor Bill, an old man, handing me strawberries from his garden through a hole in the chain-link(铁丝网)fence.“We need to make the hole bigger,” he said jokingly. Later I knew that he lived alone.Bill spent much time working in the garden, and I was always talking to him from our yard. I was a chatterbox. I think what drew me to Bill is that he never got tired of listening to me. I also think Bill saw a lot of himself in me-we were both lonely and anxious -and that may be why he always took the time to listen to me. It was a wonderful connection.There weren't any kids of my age in the neighborhood, and my parents were very busy, so I mostly played in the yard with my dog. I had a lot of imaginary friends-a whole family, actually with a wife，children，a best friend.no joke. Weird kid.One day, my parents asked Bill whether he'd watch me while they were away on business. This worked well for everyone, so it became a somewhat monthly occurrence. Bill had a spare room in his house, which became “my" room.Bill promised to teach me to drive the lawn tractor(割草机) someday and I was always looking forward to it.In winter, Bill would attach a snowplow(铲雪机)to the front of the lawn tractor. I seriously told him that I would invent a better snowplow when I grew up. "Sure you will. You'll get a patent certificate. It takes a certificate to prove an important thing," Bill said with a smile.One snowy morning, an idea suddenly hit me. My parents were watching TV when I spit it out."What if I adopted Bill as my grandpa?" My parents said I could go over and ask him.题文解读划分段落来分析文本信息的同时关注人物特点以及人物关系发展：第一段：“我”在七岁这年搬家，认识了邻居Bill, 他通过铁丝网篱笆给我递了草莓。第二段：Bill总是在花园干活，而我经常在院子里和他讲话。但Bill不会因为“我”是话匣子而厌烦。第三段：“我”没有同龄人可以一起玩，父母也很忙而没有时间陪伴我。“我”却有很多想象的家庭成员。第四段：父母出差时把“我”托付给Bill，这成了我们每月的一项活动，Bill家专门有一个房间为“我”而设。第五段：Bill承诺教我开割草机，他的割草机冬天会加装铲雪机。“我”和他承诺我以后会为他设计一款更好的铲雪机。他觉得我以后肯定会成功，并拿到专利。参考思路第一段：“我”提出想被认养Bill虽然震惊，但是开心地同意“我”告诉父母，和父母登门拜访吃团圆饭，拍全家福Bill觉得是时候教我开割草机了。第二段：“我”对闯祸感到害怕Bill用幽默帮我化解“我”开始更认真地学习，终于学会Bill用拥抱来表示对我的赞赏“我”回之拥抱，认为拥有了最好的朋友。下水作文Paragraph 1：I knocked on his door, sat down in his living room, and asked," Can I adopt you as my grandpa?" Rooted to the spot, Bill was obviously shocked by what I said. But quickly, a broad smile lit up his face, and he nodded in earnest, willing to adopt me as his grandson.（主从复合句） Immediately, I told the news to my parents, mad with joy. Bearing the same kind of delight in mind, they soon took me to visit Bill, with some gifts in their hands.（with 的独立主格） Bill entertained us for dinner. Having had dinner, we took a family phototook.Abruptly, it occurred to my“grandpa”Bill that he had promised to teach me the driving strategies of the lawn tractor. Thus, we decided to start up it the next morning.（和续写第二段开头相呼应，且与文本Bill的承诺呼应，）Paragraph 2：The next morning, while learning to drive the lawn tractor with a snowplow, I accidentally plowed down our chain-link fence. So nervous was I that I was afraid of being blamed by Bill, as my palms sweated constantly. But what Bill uttered next pushed our relationship more connected. He bantered in a joking tone as usual, “ Oh, so lovely my grandson is! You do make the hole in the fence bigger as I told you!”（与首段向呼应） His words relieved my self-accusation and fear, as if a warm breeze was blowing into my heart. with Bills patient guidance, I made it to steer it smoothly. When I finished the last drive this morning in the garden, Bill came to hug me tightly, full of praise pouring out of his mouth. I hugged back, and thought in my heart, “Fine, I indeed turned imaginary friends into reality- at least, a best friend. No joke.”学科网（北京）股份有限公司