中考英语复习初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导复习ppt课件(好资料).ppt

书面表达备考指导中考英语复习中考英语书面表达写作训练brainstormMy FatherAgePersonalityApperancesJob Hobbies(2013 山东聊城中考)在父亲节（6 月16 日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“My Father”为题的英语作文，介绍其大体情况，并谈谈你对“父亲”的评价。年龄 40岁外貌 又高又胖，短头发，大眼睛职业数学教师（工作努力，上课活泼生动，深受学生喜爱）性格 诚实，善良爱好 打乒乓球【注意】1.字数：80 左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审1.父亲的年龄、外貌、职业、性格及爱好2.对父亲的评价 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步1.My father is2.He likes3.lively,is loved by加 加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.and,or,but,so,because,if,unless,though,first,firstly,second,secondly,then,also 等等。2.eitheror,neithernor,not onlybut(also),bothand 等3.on the one hand on the other hand,in the end,all in all,in fact 等等美 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：书面表达写作技巧审 列 加 连 美1.书写美观、大方、清楚；2.时态、人称、大小写及标点运用准确无误；3.句子连贯完整，恰当使用连接词；4.能够部分或少量使用复合句。Myfatherisa40-year-oldmathteacher.Heistallandfatwithshorthairandbigeyes.Healwaysworkshard.Hisclassislivelyandinterestingandisdeeplylovedbyhisstudents.Myfatherisanhonestandkindman.Heoftenhelpsotherchildrenandmewithourmath.Myfathershobbyisplayingtabletennis.Weoftenplaytabletennistogetheratweekends.Myfatherisnotonlythesweetestoneintheworldbutalsothegreatestone.Ihavelearnedalotfromhim.Ilovemyfatherverymuch.健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的英语句子列出文章的要点 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel How do people spend their vacation?Here is a survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列 How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.The people who relax will work well.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.According to it,most people travel.And some people stay at home.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax will work well.连 We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax will work well.美1.书写美观、大方、清楚；2.时态、人称、大小写及标点运用准确无误；3.句子连贯完整，恰当使用连接词；4.能够部分或少量使用复合句。以“I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy/like/prefer To make my dream come true,I If my dream comes trueHomework I have a dreamAnybody has a dream.But different people have different dreams.Most people always dream to be popular or rich.But my dream is very special,I just want to be a bird.Why do I have such a dream?Just because I admire theyre free,they can do everything they want.When theyre flying in the sky,they look beautiful,even theyre the most beautiful animals.I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky.However,I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream,in my heart.PassageOnePassageTwo I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketball player.I like it because I think it very interesting.It can make me become very happy and healthy.To make me dream come true.I need try to do it.And I need to spend some time on it.I need to practice every day.If my dream comes true,I will try to do it.All of us have holidays in our daily life,but how do people spend their holiday?We did a survey and here are the results.from Tian WenhuiIts nothing better than having a rest after working!So how do people rest themselves on vacation?According to our survey,there are several ways.from Luo ZhiminAll in all,different people have different ways to relax themselves.But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday,then we may work better.from Yu HuiSo this year,why not consider going outside?Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study.from Zhang Li ai 书面表达备考指导中考英语复习 一、认真审题认真审题的目的就是要确定时态及人称,同时关注题材格式。时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要与时间状语一致。如ago,lastnight 等用于一般过去时。nextyear,“in+一段时间”等一般用于将来时。人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thankstotheteachers,wehaveimprovedourEnglish.其中we 和our 就是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。二、找全信息点1.切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再擦掉。2.根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。值得注意的是找全信息点的时候,尤其要紧扣主题,突出重点。三、成文时表述正确英语写作和语文写作一样,文字表述正确还只是基本的要求,文字的流畅程度同样重要。不过有三点依旧需要注意:1.切忌与汉语提示一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义 表达出来即可。2.首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾、主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,较好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。3.认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。四、认真检查,然后将作文誊写在答题卷上。书写时注意按结构分段,书写力求清晰。典例1(2018 安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thankyou,myteacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;4.注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。写作思路一、审题这是一篇提纲作文,写对老师的感谢。写作注意事项如下:1.本文属于记叙文,文章所用的时态要以一般过去时态或一般现在时态为主;2.人称上以第三人称为主,注意代词的运用;3.注意多使用一些好的句型、句式,以使文章表达流畅,有节奏感。二、可用素材1.词汇:bestrictwith,fail,patient,difficult,dealwith,encourage,help,giveup,makeprogress2.句式:WhenshefoundIwasveryworried,sheencouragedmetostudyharder.Shewasalwayspatienttomakemeunderstandeverysinglequestion.Withherhelp,IvehadenoughcouragetofacedifficultiesandmademuchprogressinEnglish.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.Onepossibleversion:Thankyou,myteacher!Mrs.LiismyEnglishteacherduringmythree-yearmiddleschoolstudies.Shehasleftaverygoodimpressiononme.Sheisareallywonderfulteacher.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.Besides,herclassiswellorganizedandinclassshealwaysencouragesusandavoidsmakingusfeelembarrassedevenwhenwemakemistakes,soeverystudentisveryactiveintheclassdiscussion.Shehasalreadybeenpopularwithallofthestudentsinourclass!WithMrs.Lishelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglish.Thankyou,Mrs.Li!Thanksforhelpingandencouragingme!典例2上高中后的第一节英语课上,老师要求每个同学用英语做一分钟的自我介绍。请准备一份80100 词的发言稿,内容应涉及以下四个方面:1.家庭情况;2.学习上的强项与弱项;3.兴趣与爱好;4.对高中生活的期待。要求:1.内容反映自己的真实情况,但不得在文中提及真实的人名、地名和校名;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.ImfromRainbowHighSchool.写作思路一、审题本篇作文是一篇提纲作文,要求写作的内容是自我介绍,需要介绍的内容要点已经全部给出。考生需要做的就是把这些信息整合到一起,组成一篇完整的文章。此话题正是初中英语的重点话题之一,也是常考的写作话题之一。注意事项:1.本文是说明文,以一般现在时为主;2.本文是自我介绍,写作时以第一人称为主;3.写作注意包含所给提示的所有要点,不要遗漏。二、可用素材1.词汇:parents,member,brother,work,doctor,teacher,interest,hobby,begoodat,bepoorin,lookforwardto.2.句型:Bothmyparentsareworkingfarawayfromhome.AtschoolIamgoodatmath,physicsandchemistry.Iamgoingtoworktogetherwithmynewteachersandnewclassmates.Imlookingforwardtomakingfriendswithyou.Onepossibleversion:Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.ImfromRainbowHighSchool.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherworksinacomputercompanyandmymotherisahousewife.Imtheonlychildinmyfamily.Imgoodatmathandphysicswhichareinterestingforme.ButImweakingeography.Itisdifficultforme.Inmysparetime,Iliketoreadnovelsandplaysports.LuXunismyfavoriteauthorandIadmirethebasketballstar,YaoMing.Ihopetogetgoodgradesatseniorhighschool,andgetalongwellwithalltheteachersandclassmates.Thatsall.Thanksalot!素养训练提高【1】(2018 安徽明光二模)近年来,人们非常关注学生的安全。很多学校为此取消了许多有意义的外出活动,如春游、夏令营、野餐等。假如你是育英中学的一名学生张硕,请给曾校长发一封电子邮件,就此发表自己的见解。要点如下:1.安全第一,但开展一些户外活动也是很有必要的;2.通过这些活动,学生不仅能增长知识,还能开拓视野;3.与大自然亲密接触,能增强同学们的环保意识;4.建议学校在活动之前教给学生一些安全常识,让学生学会保护自己和自救。参考词汇:outdooractivities户外活动;widenoneshorizon 开拓视野注意:1.词数80100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。DearMr.Zeng,Imsorrytotroubleyou.ImZhangShuo,astudentfromYuyingMiddleSchool.Imwritingtoyouaboutoutdooractivities.Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us?Of course,safety comes first.But its necessary for us to take part in such activities.In my opinion,we can learn more knowledge and widen our horizon in this way.Whats more,its a good way for us to learn to protect the environment by staying close to the nature.And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates.Why not show us some safety knowledge before these activities?Its a good chance for us to learn to protect and save ourselves.Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangShuo【2】(2018 安徽安庆模拟)再过半年你将成为一名高中生,那么你应该怎样完善自己呢?请以“Howtobeanexcellentstudent”为题,写一篇英语短文。提示:1.遵守校纪校规(按时到校,不吸烟);2.养成良好的学习习惯(上课认真听讲、课后复习、学会放松等);3.与人沟通,学会分享,互相帮助;4.在家为父母做些力所能及的家务活(洗碗、打扫卫生等);5.保护环境,积极参与志愿者工作。要求:1.词数:80100。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译,可适当发挥。HowtobeanexcellentstudentImgoingtobeaseniorhighschoolstudent.How can I be an excellent student?First,I will follow the school rules.I will go to school on time and I wont smoke.Second,its also important to have good study habits.I will listen to the teachers carefully in class.Third,I am going to learn to share what I have with my classmates and help my classmates.Fourth,at home,I will try to help my parents do some housework because they are very tired every day.At last,I will protect the environment and actively participate in volunteer work.I believe Ill be an excellent student in senior high school.【3】(2019 预测)假如你是杨洋,目前正在美国学习,你在网上看到圣约瑟夫孤儿院(St.JosephOrphanage)正在招募暑假志愿者。请你根据以下招聘信息,给这家孤儿院写一封申请信。招募志愿者:1.工作时间:7 月1日至8月31日,每周工作10个小时。2.工作范围:给孩子提供帮助;帮助老师组织班会等等。注意:1.词数80100;2.不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,IreadyouradvertisementontheInternetyesterday.Im writing to tell you that Id like to work as a volunteer in St.Joseph Orphanage.As a student,I have enough free time during the coming summer vacation.So I can work ten hours per week during the requested two months.Besides,Im outgoing and careful.This makes it easy for me to provide care for the children.Whats more,I can also be a good helper in class.I am really good at organizing class activities since I am a leader of our schools study club.If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer,I will try my best to do the job well.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,YangYang【4】时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的,那么怎样才能更好地利用时间呢?请用英语写一篇题目为“HowtoSaveTime”的短文。内容包括:1.时间的意义和重要性;2.人们浪费时间的现象(至少3种);3.节省时间的方法(至少3个);4.号召大家节约时间。注意:1.词数80100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。HowtoSaveTimeWe have ever heard of“Time is money.Time is life.”Time is very important to everyone.But we can see people waste their time everywhere.They spend much time playing computer games,drinking,sleeping late and so on.Its necessary for us to save our valuable time.We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn something else after class.We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time.We should spend more time reading instead of playing games.If we can make good use of time,we are sure to get more.Saving time is to saving life.Lets save time from now on.