高考应用文写作之演讲稿学案 高三英语二轮专题 .docx

题目展示:假定你是李华,你将参加一个以“Live a Green Life”为主题的英语演讲活动,现需写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括:1.“绿色生活”的意义和方式    2.发出号召。注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;   2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.审题“三步走”一审文体: 演讲稿                             二数要点:三个：“绿色生活”的意义“绿色生活”的方式发出号召。三.思时态与人称:时态一般现在时                人称 第一人称绿色生活相关表达:1.global warming 全球变暖2.solar energy 太阳能3.deal with rubbish properly  正确处理垃圾4.do great harm to our daily life  对我们的日常生活非常有害20.Accordingly/Consequently,.it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that people are more andmore aware of the importance of the protection of the environment.因此,不难得出结论:人们越来越意识到环境保护的重要性了。21.How important and necessary for us to keep the balance of nature and protect the environment!       对于我们来说,保持生态平衡、保护环境是多么重要和必要啊!学生作品展示:Ladies and Gentle men，My name is LiHua. Privileged to stand here.I am going to deliver my speech featuring on the topic “Live a Green Life".Green is the color of nature which suggests that our life should be environmentally friendly and sustainable so we could better protect the nature and grant ourselves a cleaner world.To realize this lifestyle we may change our way in every aspects ranging from transportation to daily foods. For instance,taking public transportation is great for cutting down carbon emission and using more recyclable bags help stop the plastic pollution.-One persons effort matters little but it added up we could make a difference to this world.I appeal you all to join this activity.第一段:简单介绍+发言主题1.My name is Li Hua.Privileged to stand here,I am going to deliver my speech featuring on the topic“Live a Green Life”.Li Hua的后面可以增加同位语,亮明演讲者的身份,也可起到丰富语法结构的作用;featuring一般用于描述某个人、物或事件的特色,而不是用于描述演讲的主题;topic后需加上介词of.修改提升:My name is Li Hua, a student from  Grade 3.Privileged to stand before you today,I am going to deliver my speech on the topic of "Living a Green Life."其它写法1:Good afternoon! I feel greatly honored to be here, sharing my ideas abou“Living a Green Life".其它写法2:My name is Li Hua.It is a great privilege for me to stand here and deliver a speech on the subject of "Living a Green Life."其它写法3:Im glad to be here today to share my thoughts on living a green life.第二段正文:意义+方式2.Green is the colour of nature,which suggests that our life routine should be environmentally friendly and sustainable,so we could better protect the nature and grant ourselves a cleaner world.属于“绿色生活”的意义部分;be environmentally friendly and sustainable这个系表结构改为动词短语adopt an environmentally friendly and sustainable lifestyle(动宾结构)效果更好;grant有点奇怪,建议改成 provide或 create;so改为so that “以便;为了”,前后逻辑关系更恰当。3.To realize lifestyle,we may change our way in every aspects,ranging from transportation to daily foods.属于“绿色生活”的方式部分;every aspect不需要加 "s""ranging" 可以不加，因为 "every aspect" 已经表达了“在各个方面”之意,如果前面是in various aspects,那么ranging就需要了。基本修改:To realize/achieve a healthier lifestyle, we may need to make changes in various aspects, ranging from transportation to daily foods.修改提升:4.For instance,taking public transportation is great for cutting down carbon emission,and using more recycleable bags helps to deal with plastic pollution.符合先笼统后具体的写作逻辑;在cutting down后面加上 on，以使句子更准确;recycleable改为recyclable;tackle代替 deal with，因为tackle更加强调采取措施应对这种问题。修改提升:For instance, taking public transportation is great for cutting down on carbon emissions, and using more reusable/recylable bags helps tackle plastic pollution.其它写法:Public transportation is a great option for lowering carbon emissions, and employing more recyclable bags is an effective approach to addressing plastic pollution.第三段:简单致谢+重申主题5.One persons effort matters little but if added up we could make a difference to this world.前面的主语是effort而if后面的主语应该是our efforts,前后的逻辑主语不一致,就不能使用省略句;added up改为added together/combined;matters little改为 makes little difference这个固定短语更加流畅自然。修改提升:One person's effort makes little difference, but if our efforts are combined/added together, we could make a difference to this world其它写法:Although the contribution of one individual may be minimal, by pooling(集中) our efforts together, we have the potential to bring about significant change in this world.其它写法2:While the impact of a single person's actions may be small, if we collaborate and combine our efforts, we can make a valuable difference to this world.6.I appeal you all to join this activity.向某人呼吁去做某事应该是appeal to sb. to do sth.初步修改:I appeal to you all to join this activity.其它写法1:I urge/encourage/invite you all to participate in this event/get involved in this project其它写法2:Small actions can make a big difference. Lets work together to protect our planet and ensure a sustainable future for ourselves and for generations to come.Thank you.其它写法3:Together, every bit of our efforts can make a big difference to the green planet, and a green tomorrow! Thank you!修改精简后的文章完美呈现 Good afternoon! I feel greatly honored to be here, sharing my ideas about “Living a Green Life".Together, every bit of our efforts can make a big difference to the green planet, and a green tomorrow! Thank you!           (106 words)范文呈现:Ladies and gentlemen, Green is the symbol of life and living green has become the priority of many people.     最好加上演讲常用的开头句:Its my honour to do.To achieve a green life style,we must adjust our behavior. For example,we could sort out our trash for better recycling and use electricity only when needed.Other simple steps that make a big difference include using public transportation instead of driving private cars,which not only relieves traffic jams but also reduces gas emission.  有中心句,通过举例说明要改变的行为,定语从句说明行为意义  Let's pull together to live in harmony with nature and contribute to the building of an ecological world.   祈使句结尾相关拓展倡议信:低碳生活(杭州二中2022学年第二学期高三年级第一次月考）假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校正在举办“低碳周"活动,请你在学生大会上做一个发言内容包括:1.校园内的浪费现象低碳生活的倡议注意:写作词数应为80左右。Dear boys and girls, Green and low-carbon life，as is known to all，has become a new fashion.Now everywhere you look around the campus, there is nothing but waste,ranging from our diet to study and daily supplies. It's high time for us to live a low-carbon life. Clean Plate Campaign always comes first，and keep in mind that never waste food when dining.It is also a must to make full use of paper by using both sides.Plus, say no to the waste of water and electricity,and develop the habit of turning off the lights when they are not in use.  Let's go green now and we believe every individual's small effort can make a big difference!学科网（北京）股份有限公司