龚露工作室2021年各地二模优秀作文加精读汇总.pdf

龚露工作室制作整理，关注微信公众号 GLEnglishSZ 和官网： 1 龚露工作室 2021 年各地二模试卷优秀作文汇总 一、人与人（四）、人与陌生人 5、他国奇遇记（1）_ 1 1 _ 1 2 _ 3 一、人与人（四）、人与陌生人 2、善良友爱（20）_ 4 一、人与人（二）、人与家人 1、亲情（16）_ 6 七、通知/新闻 13 _ 8 七、通知/新闻 14 _ 10 四、询问信5 _ 11 十九、其他 _ 12 一、人与人（四）、人与陌生人 5、他国奇遇记（1）1 1 题目 This particular day began at seven in the morning in Casablanca(卡萨布兰卡).My friend Mike and I were going to visit Abdel,a young man wed worked with on a volunteer project in Kenitra,an industrial city on the Moroccan(摩洛哥)coast.Hed been excepting us to arrive in Casablanca for a few days now,and since he had no telephone,hed written down his address and name and told us to just show up his mother and sister were always at home.Apparently the address he had written down was hard for foreigners like us to understand.When we got into the neighborhood,our taxi driver started asking directions.Eventually,with the help of a policeman,we were led to a house down a winding road.Our driver went to the door and inquired.He came back saying Abdels sister was in this house visiting friends and would come along to show us where they lived.Soon a girl of about sixteen emerged from the house.Surprisingly,she didnt look like Abdel at all.Sill,Id seen other families where children didnt look alike,so I didnt give it too much thought.She then brought us to a yard.We waited in the yard while the sister went in and returned accompanied by her mother,sisters and brother-in-law,all of whom greeted us with cautious warmth.We were shown into the living room.The mother told us in broken French that Abdel was out,but would be home soon.We sat on low,cushioned seats,drinking sweet mint tea and eating sugar cookies,while the family members sat with us and made shy,polite conversation that frequently fell into uncomfortable silence.龚露工作室制作整理，关注微信公众号 GLEnglishSZ 和官网： 2 An hour passed,more family members emerged from inner rooms.I was again struck by the fact that none of them looked a thing like our friend.After another two hours had passed with no sign of Abdel,the family insisted on serving us a meal in their kitchen next door.“Soon,”was the only response I got when I inquired as to what time Abdel might come back.Paragraph 1:Finally we heard the words we had been waiting for from the mother,“please,Abdel is back in the living room.”Paragraph 2:When I took out the piece of paper Abdel had given me in Kenitra and showed it to the new Abdel.高分作文：Finally we heard the words we had been waiting for from the mother,“please,Abdel is back in the living room.”Soon,in popped a young man wearing a blue plaid shirt.1 Much to our shock,however,he was not our dear friend Abdel,but another young man who happened to1 share the same name!When Mike and I explained the whole story to the new Abdel,he was not in the least embarrassed1.Instead,he inquired in the same broken French1,“Is there any address provided by your friend?”When I took out the piece of paper Abdel had given me in Kenitra and showed it to the new Abdel.Winking mischievously2,he told us that our friend had misspelled the letter L for I3.No wonder2 people would mistake it for another address.Having corrected the word for us,the new Abdel and his family served us a rich Moroccan feast4,which we enjoyed in a merry3 and joyful atmosphere.It was 5:00 p.m.when we found the real Abdel by the new address2.As we shared him the whole story,he joked that a twin brother of the same name miraculously led us to him5.3 What a pleasant serendipity we had in this hospitable country!4 一、动作 1.happen to 发生于；偶然发生 2.Winking mischievously 调皮地眨眼 3.misspell the letter L for I 把 L 错拼成了 I 4.served us a rich Moroccan feast 为我们提供了一顿摩洛哥盛宴 5.miraculously led us to him 奇迹般地把我们引向他 二、心理 1.not in the least embarrassed 一点也不尴尬 三、固定搭配/专有名词 1.broken French 蹩脚的法语 2.No wonder 难怪，怪不得 3.in a merry and joyous atmosphere 在欢乐的氛围里。四、高分（语法）句型 1.Soon,in popped a young man wearing a blue plaid shirt.很快，一个穿着蓝色格子衬衫的年轻人突然冒出来。2.It was 5:00 p.m.when we found the real Abdel by the new address 下午 5:00 当我们通过新地址找到真正的 Abdel 时 龚露工作室制作整理，关注微信公众号 GLEnglishSZ 和官网： 3 3.he joked that a twin brother of the same name miraculously led us to him.他开玩笑说一个同名的双胞胎兄弟奇迹般地把我们引向了他。4.What a pleasant serendipity we had in this hospitable country!在这个好客的国家，我们有多么愉快的意外经历！2 2 题目 Stephen Crane was traveling from the United States to Cuba as a newspaper reporter.One night,his ship hit a sandbar and sank in the Atlantic Ocean,off the coast of Florida.Most of the people on board got into lifeboats.Stephen Crane was among the last to leave with three others:the ships captain,the cook and a sailor named Billie.These four men climbed into the only remaining lifeboat which was so small that no one believed it could float very long before they would ever reach the shore.But the men fought the seas bravely,with all their strength.The small lifeboat bounced from wave to wave in the rough seas of the Atlantic.The four men in the boat couldnt see the sky.The waves rose too high and pushed the open boat violently.Every man thought each wave would be his last.The waves were huge,and each created a problem in guiding the direction of the boat.For two days,since the ship sank,the four men had been struggling to reach land,but there was no land to be seen.The boat had only two wooden oars(船桨).Billie directed the boats movement with one oar.Stephen Crane pulled the other oar.The captain sat in the front of the small boat and kept telling Billie when to turn the boat.But luckily,the wind was blowing toward the shore.“If it starts blowing the other way,we will never reach land,”said the cook.The reporter and the sailor agreed but the captain laughed and asked,“Do you think weve got much of a chance now,boys?”This made the others stop talking.But they also didnt want to suggest there was no hope.So they were silent.But to their joy,a few seagulls flew near and far and brown pieces of seaweed appeared from time to time.They showed the men in the boat that it was slowly approaching land.Paragraph 1:As time went by,they could see more and more seagulls.Paragraph 2:After searching the sky for a long time,Stephen Crane finally found the lighthouse.As time went by,they could see more and more seagulls.They also saw the land,which was a small island.“See!”the captain said,“I said we would survive.”But the naked island1 hushed him quiet(让某人保持安静).The four man could see nothing but sand1.Hopeless and exhausted2,they got on the island.It seemed that they were at the end of the rope.But Stephen didnt want to surrender to the fate2.He racked his brains3,and it suddenly dawned on4 him that he may find the lighthouse nearby.When night fell,he made every effort to5 see through the sky.After searching the sky for a long time,Stephen Crane finally found the lighthouse.“A lighthouse!”his trembling voice1 betrayed his elation6.3 The other three men jumped up and asked,“Where?”Stephen pointed it out,and they all saw the ray of hope3.Without hesitation,they gathered all their strength7,got on the boat and struggled towards the spark of light4.Time ticked 龚露工作室制作整理，关注微信公众号 GLEnglishSZ 和官网： 4 by,and they eventually arrived at the light house.They were all rescued.Afterwards,when asked how they survived,Stephen put on a beam smile8 and answer:“Where theres a will to survive,there is a way.”一、动作 1.see nothing but sand 除了沙子什么也看不见 2.surrender to the fate 向命运低头 3.racked his brains 绞尽脑汁 4.dawned on 开始意识到 5.made every effort to 竭尽全力 6.betrayed his elation 暴露了他的喜悦 7.gathered all their strength 聚集所有力量 8.put on a beam smile 面露喜色 二、心理 1.trembling voice 颤抖的声音 三、专有名词/固定搭配 1.the naked island 孤岛 2.Hopeless and exhausted 无助且疲惫 3.the ray of hope 希望之光 4.the spark of light 光的火花 四、高分（语法）句型 1.It seemed that they were at the end of the rope.他们似乎已经到了穷途末路 2.it suddenly dawned on him that he may find the lighthouse nearby.他突然意识到他可能会在附近找到灯塔 3.his trembling voice betrayed his elation.他颤抖的声音暴露了他的喜悦 一、人与人（四）、人与陌生人 2、善良友爱（20）题目 Henry got on his bike and began to deliver copies of the March 8,1970,issue of The Gazette.Half an hour later,he threw the last newspaper onto the porch（门廊）at 35 Oak Street and cycled to The Gazette offices.There must be something important.for the editor in chief to meet with an 11-year-old paperboy.“No good way to deliver bad news,”Mr.Trotta greeted him when Henry stepped in.Henrys smile faded.“Were closing shop,Henry.Advertising is down.Television is how people get their news today.Local papers are the first to close.Mr.Trotta shrugged.Henry couldnt believe his ears,frozen to the spot.He thought of all those people he had met on his route.They wouldnt get their neighborhood news anymore!“You were great,Henryalways dependable,”Mr.Trotta said.Henry forced his head up to say good-bye.As he rode past the houses he knew so well,he saw Mr.Grady on his porch,holding a broo(扫帚).Henry led him to a chair and cleaned the porch.They sat for a while s Mr.Grady recalled how happy he d been moving his family to 10 Oak.He sounded lonely.龚露工作室制作整理，关注微信公众号 GLEnglishSZ 和官网： 5 A week after his last deliveries,Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did.He thought of a way to find out.He started out on his old route with a notebook.Henry stopped at Ms.Burkes.She opened the door,holding the two babies.She asked him if he knew any neighbors with experience of looking after children.Mr.Simon was next door,carrying his violin out.“Hey,Henry.My band is having a concert in the park this Friday.Tell all your friends.”As Henry made more notes,an idea started forming in his head.Maybe he could create a newsy page(小报)for the neighbors.Paragraph 1:Neighbors cheered Henrys idea,ready to offer information.Paragraph 2:Henrys first Oak Street News then produced desired effects.高分作文：Neighbors cheered Henrys idea,ready to offer information.Besides Mrs.Burke who longed for1 a baby sitter and Mr.Simon who desired a large audience for his concert2,Henry also collected six other neighbors appealing and needs,including Mr.Grady who yearned for1 his childrens coming back for a short reunion1.Information in hand,Henry knocked at Mr.Trottas door and pleaded for his support2 in publishing his first Oak Street News,who approved almost immediately.Soon,Henrys tabloid2 was in circulation3,which he cheerfully delivered from door to door as before3.Henrys first Oak Street News then produced desired effects.Neighbors applauded the idea4 of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper5,which really addressed their immediate concern6 in a practical and efficient way.As Mrs.Burke successfully found an ideal baby sitter4,Mr.Simon secured a large following for his concert and Mr.Grady who happily reunited with7 his kids,Henry realized,from his deep heart3,that The Gazette was far from gone in this TV era5,but transformed into Oak Street News that connected,bonded and tied the Oak neighbors in a cozy fabric.一、动作 1.yearn for 向往 2.plead for his support 恳求他的支持 3.he cheerfully delivered from door to door as before 他像往常一样快乐地挨家挨户送货 4.applaud the idea 赞扬这个主意 5.sharing their needs in a communal newspaper 在公共报纸上分享他们的需求 6.addressed their immediate concern 解决了他们的迫切关注 7.reunite with 和团聚 二、心理 1.long for 盼望 2.desire a large audience for his concert 希望他的音乐会吸引大批观众 3.from his deep heart 从心底最深处 三、固定搭配/专有名词 1.a short reunion 短暂的团圆 龚露工作室制作整理，关注微信公众号 GLEnglishSZ 和官网： 6 2.tabloid 小报;药片;文摘;小型画报 3.in circulation 在流通中；在从事社交活动的 4.baby sitter 保姆 5.TV era 电视时代 四、高分（语法）句型 1.As Mrs.Burke successfully found an ideal baby sitter,Mr.Simon secured a large following for his concert and Mr.Grady who happily reunited with his kids,Henry realized,from his deep heart,that The Gazette was far from gone in this TV era,but transformed into Oak Street News that connected,bonded and tied the Oak neighbors in a cozy fabric.当伯克夫人成功找到理想的保姆时，西蒙先生为音乐会举办了追随者，而格雷迪先生与孩子们快乐地团聚，亨利从内心深处意识到，宪报在这台电视上已经走得很远了。时代，但后来转变为橡树街报，以一种舒适的面料将橡树邻居联系在一起，相互联系并紧密相连。一、人与人（二）、人与家人 1、亲情（16）题目 I was in my room,slowly getting ready to head to the community theater with the rest of my family.I wasnt in the mood for being onstage.“Kate,come here,”my mom call from down the hall.I found my mom outside the bathroom,holding a wet book.Henry,my new stepbrother,was nearby,working on a complicated string knot(结),as usual.My mother gave the book a shake.“Henrys book is in the bathtub.Did you put it there?”“Not on purpose,”I said.“It was already on the edge,and it happened to fall in when I stepped out of the tub.My mother glared at me,something she never did before I had a stepfamily.“You could have picked it up,”she said.“That would have been the kind thing to do.”As Henry walked ahead of us to the car,my mom took me aside.“This is our comer of the world now,Kate,”she said.“Lets try to make it a good one.”The community theater was busy when we got there.Theater used to be what my mom and I did togetherone play a year for our special thing.With Henry involved,it didnt seem so special anymore.Henrys dad,who had arrived earlier to help set up,was already in costume.“Dear children,”he called in a theatrical voice,“Come to Father.”I thought he was a nice guy even before he and my mother started dating.Unfortunately,I now had stepbrother to deal with.Soon,it was curtain time.I pecked(偷看)out at the audience and noticed that the darkened theatre was full.My heart beat faster.I forgot my annoyance at Henry as the lead actress sang,“The hills are alive with the sound of music!”Nothing compared to show nights.Before long,it was my turn.I went onstage,song book in hand.As we kids lined up before Henrys dad,who was playing the part of our father,I realized how poorly Id tied the string on my skirt which was over leggings(打底裤).I should have asked my mom for help.Paragraph 1:And then,suddenly,the string knot on my skirt came untied.龚露工作室制作整理，关注微信公众号 GLEnglishSZ 和官网： 7 Paragraph 2:I shot Henry a grateful glance.高分作文 And then,suddenly,the string knot on my skirt came untied.Its sudden outburst1,coupled with my shuddering body1,rooted me to the spot2.Are my leggings exposed?Does everyone notice?Will my skirt fall?these horrible questions kept buzzing in my mind3,distracting me from my song book4.Hardly had I cast a desperate look behind,hoping someone,preferably a girl,would notice,when Henry stepped in.1 He adroitly1 worked the untied string together,just as he always did in his complicated knots2 and whispered a resolute Now,done!by my ear.2 I shot Henry a grateful glance.And he responded with a reassuring smile.Shortly afterwards,our performance began.Henry and I,together with other chorus members,chanted by our sweetest voice under the guidance of our father5,to which the audience responded with several rounds of thunderous applause2.In the backstage,I thanked Henry genuinely3 and apologized for my not saving his book in the bathtub.Shrugging his shoulder6,Henry mumbled,We are family,arent we?I nodded firmly,knowing a flower of kindness and friendship began to blossom in both of our hearts.3 一、动作 1.coupled with my shuddering body 和我颤抖的身体 2.rooted me to the spot 让我钉在原地动弹不得,呆若木鸡 3.buzzing in my mind 我脑海里嗡嗡作响 4.distracting