九年级英语中招复习专题中招专题：书面表达人教版课件.pptx

中招专题复习：书面表达LearningObjectives考纲解读01真题回顾02写作指导03见证奇迹04I.考 纲 解 读河南省中招英语试题书面表达依据五级目标要求，着重考察学生综合运用语言知识的能力。课标要求九年级毕业生写作应该能够达到五级水平：1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改；3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；4、能简单描述人物或事件；5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。I.考 纲 解 读符合题目要求内容完整层次结构清晰表达清楚语言无误体裁 明确；要点 齐全；人称及时态正确；结构 完整：开头、主体，结尾连接词 恰当；语言通顺/优美；无语法错误 书写规范字母书写范；格式正确；大小写及标点正确近五年全国中招真题书面表达内容分类表年份 参考省份 作文话题 内容类型2019河南 选择一位名人共进午餐Mydream/myfeelings2018河南WhatIlikeaboutwhereIlive Myplace2019广东WelcometoGuangzhou2017河南Ididit Myexperience/mychange2016河南ThebiggestpersonalchangeIveevermade Mychange/myimprovement2015河南Iwanttohave_ Mydream2019北京1 设计“安全月”海报 Myopinions北京2 以“自律”为主题的征文活动 Myimprovement2019安徽 回信谈谈保护视力的做法Myadvice2019河北Whentosaythankyou Mylife2019广东 关于广东传统文化研学交流Ourculture2019吉林 梦想职业与个人计划及兴趣爱好Myplan/myhobby2019武汉Myfamily MyfamilyII.真题回顾II.真题回顾结合近5年河南省及2019年全国的英语中招考试试卷中的书面表达，我们将其按照具体内容划 分为三大主题：人与自我人与自然 人与社会My family，My friend，My ability，My hobby，My habit，My feelings，My opinions，My advice，My experience，My change，My improvement，My dream，My planMy hometown,My city Our safety，Our culture，Our specials，Our history,Our relationship between.and.III.写作指导一般情况下，书面表达有提示和要求两部分。“提示”一般包括与写作内容紧密相关的信息;“要求”一般包括对短文的文体、格式及字数的要求。它类似汉译英,但又不同于汉译英,因为我们必须根据所给材料进行适当地发挥,切中题意,语言准确,条理清楚,书写规范。定人称定时态列提纲润词句修细节 审：定：列：润：修：七步写作文 誊：誊成品审题干 拟：拟初稿III.写作指导 生活中人人会犯错，或大或小，关键是犯错后的态度。请以“What I have learnt from(making)mistakes”为题并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你犯过的错误。1.要点：1）你犯过什么样的错误；2）犯过之后有什么体会。2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数100词左右。l 审：介绍“做错”的事情(具体经历)l 定：第一人称为主；一般过去时讲事例，讲感受时可用一现III.写作指导-叙议结合列提纲 写句子开头：引出主题 IstillrememberhowmyspokenEnglishgotimproved.正文：犯的错WhenIwasinGradeSeven,Iusedtobequietinclass.Whentheteacherknewaboutmysituation,theyhelpedmealot.结尾：犯过错的体会、感受Dontbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Learnfromit,successiswaitingforus.What I have learnt from(making)mistakesIII.写作指导1.The mistake made me grow up2.I learned from this experience3.gave me power III.写作指导-活用 你的班级上周就“Whether we should tell white lies开展了讨论，请你就这个问题谈谈你的观点。要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数100词左右。列提纲 写句子开头：简单叙述事件，表明自己观点Lastweekwehada.Asforme,Ithinkweshouldneverdoit正文：展开说明不能的原因HonestyisthemostimportantqualityTellingwhitelieshurtspeopleaswell.结尾：总结Thecostisbiggerthanthebenefits,soweshouldnevertellwhiteliesIII.写作指导-议论文1.Is the development of technology making our city better?2.Should teachers be Wechat friends with students?3.Do you think it is necessary to wear school uniforms?4.Should we have homework?III.写作指导-活用请以“_is fun”为题写一篇英文短文。要求：1）先把题目补充完整（空格处可以是单词、短语、句子）；2）短文中不得出现真实地名或者人名信息；3）词数100左右。l 审：l 定：介绍“有趣”的事情第三人称或第一人称为主；一般现在时为主，III.写作指导-记叙文列提纲 写句子开头：补全题目，点明主题Readingisfun.正文：罗列读书有趣的理由Ithelpsmetolearnmoreabouttheworld.Ithelpstoimprovemywritingskills.结尾：表达感受Ilikereading.Readingisagoodwaytoimproveandrelaxourselves._is fun III.写作指导-记叙文1.My hobby2.Something that I like doing most at home3.日常学习和生活中放很多事情可以在方方面面帮助我们。请以_has helped me learn a lot为题，举例说明，并谈谈你的感受4.Reading makes me happy III.写作指导-活用 I love reading books.I like reading the articles that are published on the books.In my opinion,reading books is great fun.In fact,reading books is like a journey to me.You can enjoy it whenever you like.And I love this feeling very much.Reading books can also relax myself.When I am stressed and tired,I will relax myself by reading the books that Im interested in.Also,I think reading is the process of finding your own fun.Everyone has unique interests after all.Reading books is fun because I enjoy getting knowledge from the books and at the same time I can feel less stressed.15-16III.写作指导-润15pointsoutof20？Whywasmybrilliantarticlegivensuchalowscore?IsthereanyhopeformetogettotheAlevel?III.写作指导-润lessstressed.Reading is the beginning of wisdom and I find it great fun to swim in the sea of books.First,reading is a good way to broaden my horizons and acquire more knowledge,which is useful for me to get into the society.Besides,as an enjoyable process of shaping my mind,reading turns me into a more active and outgoing person.Additionally,reading a book is like talking to a wise man and thats probably why I always get lost in it.Reading makes a full man.With the company of books,my life will absolutely be filled with wide-ranging knowledge and great fun as well.III.写作指导-润19-20“Problem 1The use of beginner-level expressions语用太低级！1III.写作指导-润Example 1I love reading.I am fond of reading.I am keen on reading.I am crazy/mad/enthusiastic about reading.I am addicted to reading.I am obsessed with reading.Phrases are usually preferred than words.短语总是更好些！III.写作指导-润Example 2Reading is good for us.Reading is of great help/use to us.Reading is beneficial to us.We can benefit/profit a lot from reading.We can enjoy the benefits of reading.The later,the better.后学到的更高级！III.写作指导-润Example 3Reading is important in my life.Reading is vital/essential/significant/crucial in my life.Reading plays an important role in my life.Reading is of great importance/significance in my life.I put/lay great importance/significance on reading.The importance of reading in my life can never be doubted.Try to change the part of speech.III.写作指导-润Example 4This book is good.She is a good teacher.She is a good student.She is a good person.This book is inspiring/enlightening.She is a responsible/caring/patient/knowledgeable teacher.She is a hard-working student.She is a warm-hearted/helpful/kind/honest person.Try to be specific.细致说明为更佳！III.写作指导-润Problem 1:The use of beginner-level expressionsSolution:Summarize various words&phrases of the same meaning同义短语用起来！Warnings:Avoid repetition.重复不可取！Avoid using awkward words&phrases which are rarely used.难词偏词避免用！III.写作指导-润“Problem 2The use of simple or similar sentence patterns句型单一缺变化！2III.写作指导-润 Iwasverytiredandcouldntwalkanyfarther.Wecanprotectourtraditionalcultureinthisway.WeusuallyvisitourrelativesontheSpringFestival.Readingreallymakesmylifecolorful.Thesunsetintheeastandwehadtowavegoodbyetotheworkers.Heheardthebadnewsandcouldnthelpcrying.Weneedtotakeactionatonce.HenanliesinthecenterofChina.ItscapitalcityofitisZhengzhou.ExamplesIII.写作指导-润全部都是主谓(宾)！I was very tired and couldnt walk any farther.tooto 句型Iwastootiredtowalkanyfarther.Example 1III.写作指导-润We can protect our traditional culture in this way.倒装结构Only in this way can we protect our traditional culture.Example 2III.写作指导-润We usually visit our relatives on the Spring Festival.it 形式主语Its our tradition to visit our relatives on the Spring Festival.Example 3III.写作指导-润Reading really makes my life colorful.强调句型It is reading that makes my life colorful.Example 4III.写作指导-润The sun set in the west and we had to wave goodbye to the workers.with独立主格结构With the sun setting in the west,we had to wave goodbye to the workers.Example 5III.写作指导-润He heard the bad news and couldnt help crying.非谓语-分词Hearing the bad news,he couldnt help crying.Example 6III.写作指导-润We need to take action at once.what主语从句What we need to do is(to)take action at once.Example 7III.写作指导-润Henan lies in the center of China.Its capital city is Zhengzhou.非限制定语从句Henan lies in the center of China,whose capital city is Zhengzhou.Example 8III.写作指导-润Problem 2:The use of simple or similar sentence patternsSolution:Try to use at least two or three special sentence patterns in your article.至少两到三个特别句型！Warnings:The short+The longStress your topic.Form your own style.长句短句错落开，用得自然方奏效！III.写作指导-润“Problem 3The unclear logic逻辑缺清晰！3III.写作指导-润Ilovereadingbooks.Ilikereadingthearticlesthatarepublishedonthebooks.Inmyopinion,readingbooksisgreatfun.Infact,readingbooksislikeajourneytome.Youcanenjoyitwheneveryoulike.AndIlovethisfeelingverymuch.Readingbookscanalsorelaxmyself.WhenIamstressedandtired,IwillrelaxmyselfbyreadingthebooksthatIminterestedin.Also,Ithinkreadingistheprocessoffindingyourownfun.Everyonehasuniqueinterestsafterall.ReadingbooksisfunbecauseIenjoygettingknowledgefromthebooksandatthesametimeIcanfeellessstressed.ReadingisthebeginningofwisdomandIfinditgreatfuntoswimintheseaofbooks.First,readingisagoodwaytobroadenmyhorizonsandacquiremoreknowledge,whichisusefulformetogetintothesociety.Besides,asanenjoyableprocessofshapingmymind,readingturnsmeintoamoreactiveandoutgoingperson.Additionally,readingabookisliketalkingtoawisemanandthatsprobablywhyIalwaysgetlostinit.Readingmakesafullman.Withthecompanyofbooks,mylifewillabsolutelybefilledwithwide-rangingknowledgeandgreatfunaswell.III.写作指导-润in a word,in short,in brief,all in all,in conclusion,to sum upfirst of all,to begin with,whats more,in addition,besides,additionally,moreover III.写作指导-润Example 1We should protect traditional Chinese festivals.They are the symbols of Chinese culture.We should protect traditional Chinese festivals for the reason that they are the symbols of Chinese culture.because(of),due to,owing to,since,as,as a result of,now thatso,therefore,hence,thus,accordingly,as a result/consequence,consequentlyIII.写作指导-润Example 2Traditional Chinese festivals have many special meanings.They carry peoples wishes to lead a better life.Traditional Chinese festivals have many special meanings.For example,they carry peoples wishes to lead a better life.for instance,such as,like,for one thing,for another thing III.写作指导-润Example 3Western festivals are becoming more and more popular in China because our traditional Chinese festivals are less celebrated.Western festivals are becoming more and more popular in China.However,our traditional Chinese festivals are less celebrated.instead,on the other hand,on the contrary,by contrast,III.写作指导-润Example 4The task is hard,but we must finish it in time.We must finish the task in time no matter how challenging it is.(even)though,in spite of,despite,however,although,even if,after all,III.写作指导-润Example 5My mom will cook some dishes on my birthday.In order to celebrate my birthday,my mom will cook some dishes.so that,with this in mind,for this purpose,to this end,so as toIII.写作指导-润Problem 3:The unclear logicSolution:Learn to use link words not only in your paragraphs but also in your sentences.关联词语要巧用！III.写作指导-润“Problem 4Just so ordinary!太普通！4III.写作指导-润Reading makes a full man.Francis BaconReading is a discount ticket to everywhere.Mary SchmichI have never known any distress that an hours reading did not relieve.Charles de MontesquieuTip 1Use famous sayings引名言！III.写作指导-润A room without books is like a body without a soul.Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.As a creature,l eat;as a man,l read.Tip 2Use metaphors&comparisons比喻对比别忘记！III.写作指导-润Action speaks louder than words.Easier said than done.Better late than never.Time and tide waits for no man.Tip 3Use proverbs 俗语谚语用起来！We should start now.Lets work together to protect our traditional festivals.Everyone should protect our traditional festivals.Lets do it instead of saying it.III.写作指导-润可能存在的问题1.是否符合题意要求，要点有无遗漏。2.拼写错误 Ma Yu(Ma Yun)Newdun(Newton)Mozhate(Mozart)luch(lunch)benifit/benefit change/chance come ture/come true text/test 3.名词单复数问题 sing song,make friend with,read book,forget all my troubles,more knowledges 4.缺少动词 I will excited,I will really happy,He sometimes funny,he also good at 5.缺少介词或多加冠词 listen a song have a lunch I should learn him.6.代词的误用I can have lunch with he,She book,he music is very nice 7.主谓不一致 She do it every day,everyone have a person,He play basketball very well 8.汉式英语 She is my like star,I very like him,Kebi play basketball is very nice,I think this talk must very valuable for me.9.书写不够工整、规范（强烈建议衡水体！）III.写作指导-修Find out the mistakes in each sentences and correct them.Classify what mistake it is.1.Unless each of us is small in the big world,we can still have a dream.2.One thing I felt very proud of is lose weight.3.I used to be fat.It make me very shy.Sometimes my classmates laugh at me.4.I begun to run.5.I experienced the pain of my feet,I didnt give up,finally I succeeded.6.I lost thirty pound within a year.7.I feel confidence now.8.I understand nothing is impossible for you if we put our heart into it.Althoughlosing/to lose逻辑关系非谓语动词made laughed时态began单词拼写，but.Finally标点大小写pounds名词单复数confident词性us人称III.写作指导-修IV.见证奇迹我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手。请以“I did it!”为题并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述一件你完成的棘手事情。要点：（1）你做了什么事情；（2）你是如何做那件事情的；（3）你做完那件事请后的感受。要求：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；（2）100词左右。Although each of us is small in the big world,we can still have a dream.One thing I felt very proud of is losing weight.I used to be fat.It made me very shy.Sometimes my classmates laughed at me for my weight.I began to run.I experienced the pain of my feet,but I didnt give up.I lost thirty pounds within a year.I feel confident now.I was proud of myself.I understand nothing is impossible for us if we put our heart into it.IV.见证奇迹 Although each of us is tiny in the big world,we can still stick to a dream.One thing I felt very proud of is losing weight.I used to be fat.It made me very shy.Sometimes my classmates laughed at me for my appearance.I took up running.I experienced the painful exercise and hunger,but I didnt give up.I lost thirty pounds within a year.I feel confident now.I take pride in everything Ive done.I understand nothing is impossible if one puts his heart into it.用词高一等，短语要偏爱。避免多重复，符合真情景。IV.见证奇迹 Although each of us is tiny in the big world,we can still stick to a dream.One thing I felt very proud of is losing weight.I used to be fat.It made me very shy.Sometimes my classmates laughed at me for my appearance.I took up running.I experienced the painful exercise and hunger,but I didnt give up.I lost thirty pounds within a year.I feel confident now.I take pride of everything Ive done.I understand nothing is impossible if one puts his heart into it.rathersuch a bigsuccessfullyunbearableever巧加形副两词，表达立显丰满IV.见证奇迹 Although each of us is rather tiny in such a big world,we can still stick to a dream.One thing I felt very proud of is losing weight successfully.I used to be fat.It made me very shy.Sometimes my classmates laughed at me for my ugly appearance.I took up running.I experienced the painful exercise and unbearable hunger,but I didnt give up.I lost thirty pounds within a year.I feel confident now.I take pride in everything Ive ever done.I understand nothing is impossible if one puts his heart into it.and try to achieve itbut kept on补充说明能润色I wasnt courageous enough to make friends with anyone.In my view,nobody would stay with a fat person like me.I was determined to take up running after an embarrassing P.E.class.增加细节方添彩IV.见证奇迹 Although each of us is rather tiny in such a big world,we can still stick to a dream and try our best to achieve it.One thing that I felt very proud of is losing my weight successfully.I used to be extremely fat.It made me very shy.I wasnt courageous enough to make friends with anyone.In my view,nobody would stay with a fat person like me.My classmates often laughed at me for my ugly appearance.I was determined to take up running after an embarrassing P.E.class.I experienced the painful exercise and unbearable hunger.I didnt give up but kept on.I lost thirty pounds within a year.I feel confident in public now.I take pride in everything Ive ever done.I understand nothing is impossible if one puts his heart into it.As for me,oneWhat was worse,myIn the way that was ex