2021[新教材]高中英语Unit1TeenagelifeSectiomⅣppt课件新人教版必修第一册.pptx
Unit 1TEENAGE LIFE Sectiom 写作指导写作方法指导夯基提能作业写作方法指导 写作储备 阅读教材P18 建议信，提炼建议信的写作特点：常用写作格式 1 齐头式，即日期，正文，署名全在左边顶格写。教材中就采用了这种格式。2 空格式：日期，署名在右边，正文每段开头空两格。写一封有关学校生活的建议信 黄金写作模板 建议信 写作语言特点 1 建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2 提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。写作常用词汇 1 have trouble in.在有些麻烦 2 communicate with.与交流 3 feel lonely 感到孤独 4 ask for advice on.就征求建议 5 suggestion n 建议 6 overcome v克服 7 get along well with 和相处很好 8 make it 做到 9 make friends 交朋友 10 as far as I am concerned/in my opinion 就我而言/在我看来.写作常用句型 1 建议信开头常用句式：(1)I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。(2)Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.我很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。(3)Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里有帮助你的一些建议。(4)I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。2 表达建议常用句式：(1)First(ly),why not join a club?If you do this,you can make friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。(2)Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way,you will feel better.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。(3)Third(ly),it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。3 建议信结尾常用句式：(1)I hope you will find these ideas useful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。(2)As time goes on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice above.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。(3)I believe that if you follow my advice,youll get along well with your classmates.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。典例剖析 假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面的提示给她写一封信。1 要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2 要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3 友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。注意：词数80 左右。审题谋篇 定框架 好的开始，成功的一半体裁 建议信人称 第二人称为主时态 主要使用一般现在时框架第一段：点出写信的目的：交朋友存在困难第二段：正文列出所提的建议：做一个朋友；和朋友同甘共苦；需要时间和投入最后一段：写信人的希望 定要点、关键词及动词时态 打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样的极优作文 要点一：知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(宾语从句)I am sorry to know _.要点二：如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境是很容易的。(be adj.to do)The situation _if you take my advice.要点三：要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。(主谓结构)If you want to make friends,_.that you are having trouble in making friends is easy to change you should be a friend first 要点四：你要和朋友同甘共苦。You should _.要点五：患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。A friend _ is a friend _.要点六：友谊需要时间和投入。(主谓宾结构)Friendship _.share happiness and sorrow with your friends in need indeed calls for/needs time and effort 词汇、句式升级 创造极优作文的倩词靓句 升级句式一：用why not 改写要点三 _ 升级句式二：用wouldnt it be a good idea if.改写要点四 _ 升级句式三：用just as a saying goes 来丰富要点五 _If you want to make friends,why not be a friend first？Wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friends？Just as a saying goes,a friend in need is a friend indeed.组建极优作文 水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉 _ To begin with,why not be a friend if you want to make friends?In addition,wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friends?Just as a saying goes,a friend in need is a friend indeed.Last but not least,wouldnt it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends?It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours，Li Hua 假设你是李华，贵校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad 课程(iPad class)。你代表学生会，支持开设iPad 课程。请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：1 资源丰富；2.促进交流；3.利于环保；4.其他理由。注意：1.词数80 左右；2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 开头和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。To begin with,everyone learns in a respective way.Students can customize their iPads with materials that fit their level and learning style,and thus tailor them to meet their different needs.Moreover,when connected to the Internet,students can interact with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently,which will contribute favorably to their learning efficiency.Furthermore,we also consider it environment friendly to open iPad classes,for paper is no longer a necessity.More importantly,students passion for study will be enormously sparked with this brand new way of learning.We hope you would take our ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.Yours sincerely，Li Hua
