高二英语人教版选修8学案UNIT1SECTIONⅤWRITING—介绍某一地点的说明文.docx
Section VWriting介绍某一地点的说明文写作技法指导一、根本结构第一段:总体简介。其次段:绽开描述位置、面积、环境、交通、人口、历史、名胜古迹及特色。第三段:结合写作要求进行结尾。二、增分佳句1 .前门大街有600多年历史,800米长,沿街有300多家店铺。Qianmen Street with 800 meters long is a famous street of over 600 years old, along which there are more than 300 shops.Qianmen Street with a history of over 600 years old, is 800 meters in length, along which there are more than 300 shops.The 800-meter-long Qianmen Street with more than 300 shops along has a history of over 600 years old.2 .坐落在山顶的寺庙经受了这个地区的很多变化。The temple stands on the top of the mountain, and has experienced many changes in this area.Standing on the top of the mountain 9 the temple has witnessed many changes in this area.3 .它坐落在天安门广场南面。It is just located to the south of Tiananmen Square.To the north of it, there is Tiananmen Square.It lies in the south of Tiananmen Square.4 .加拿大,世界其次大国,占地997万平方千米。Canada, which is the second largest country in the world, covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.Canada, the second largest country in the world, covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.Canada, covering an area of 9.97 million square kilometres, is the second largest country in the world.5 .乘车到达那儿很便利,可乘坐公共汽车17、69、59等路,以及地铁2号线。It's very convenient to get there by taking Buses No. 17, 69 or 59 besides Subway Line 2.With Buses No. 17, 69 or 59 passing there, it is very convenient to get there by bus, and you can also choose to take Subway Line 2.With Subway Line 2 another choice, you can get there easily by taking Buses No.17, 69 or 59.6 .万绿湖是一个很漂亮的地方,湖水清亮;湖中有各种各样的鱼;你可以到那里划船、 野餐、钓鱼。(DWanlu Lake is a beautiful place, where the water is so clean that there are all kinds of fish in it, and you can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic.The water of Wanlu Lake, a beautiful place, is so clean that there are all kinds of fish in it, and you can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic.五步写作规范题目要求假设你是李华,请依据下面提示给Mr.Smith回信,介绍适合他租用的一处房子。1 .位于市中心商业区,交通便利,环境美丽;2 .面积80平方米,宽敞光明;3 .房间自然?气、暖气、家具、空调等必备设施齐全;4 .房租价格合理,每月仅1000元;5 .房子位置和户型如下图:留意:词数100左右。第一步:审题构思很关键一、审题1 .确定体裁:本文为说明文;2 .确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称;3 .确定时态:主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一局部:引出话题。其次局部:房屋简介。第三局部:全文总结。其次步:核心词汇想周全1. Ig_jn/bcocatea ij坐落在2. thc fifth floor五楼3. convenient便利的4. contain含有5. be?quipped jvith装备;配备6. facility设施7. rent租金8. bargain廉价第三步:由词扩句雏形现1 .一句多译在它的四周有超市、医院和公共汽车站。f Around it, there jg a supermarkeL a jhospital ana a biis Stop(there be 句型) f Around it lies a supermarket,a hospital aiid a Diis stop(含有 lie 的倒装句) 房子有一个客厅,两个卧房,一个厨房和一个卫生间。f Theris 9neiving roum, two bedrooms, one kitchen and one toilet in the house.(there be)f Thc hoiisc£oiitains 0ii£iviiig room, two bedrooms, one kitchen and one toilet(contain)2.按要求补全句子房子在六层建筑的五楼。The house ._”蜒_4仙_门001of a six-storey building.它位于花园路和和平路的交叉路口。It isocate(|ii the crossroads made by the Garden Avenue and the Peace Avenue.它们是我们市最繁忙的两个街道。They are twQ busiest streets in our city.每月租金仅为1 000元。The rent is no more than 1,000 yuan per month.它真的很廉价。It is _real_bargaiiK第四步:句式升级造亮点1 .把句改为名词短语置于句中作同位语It jgcatedn therossr()adsnadc by thc Garden Avenue an(|the peece Avenii awQ Dusiest streets_m ou£_sity.2 .把升级后的句1改为which引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰句中的buildingThe_jioiisc_ig_oii_the_fifth_floO£_9f_a_six-st()rey_biiildiii 口,which iSlocatedLin thC grossroadS jnadC bYthC Garden AvenuC anathe PeacC Avenua two Dusiest streets in our city.3 .用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句和The jrene IgDQ gnoreJhaii LOOe UuaE pejjnoiithj)vhichJsa Feal Darqaiii.第五步:过渡连接联成篇Dear Smith,As for the problem you put forward in you last letter, I'd like to remend the following house to you.It is on the fifth floor of a six-storey building, which is located in the crossroads made by the Garden Avenue and the Peace Avenue, two busiest streets in our city.Around it lies a supermarket, a hospital and a bus stop, so it is convenient for you to do shopping, see a doctor or travel.Whafs more, the house contains one living room, two bedrooms, one kitchen and one toilet.Besides, it is equipped with all the households and living facilities such as natural gas, heating system, furniture, air-conditioners and so on.The rent is no more than 1,000 yuan per month, which is a real bargain.I think the house is quite suitable for you.Yours,美文串记核心考点单元小结单元主干知识 一篇美文串起 词汇无现识记 高效简洁无比