好心人为经济困难的家庭送圣诞礼物读后续写练习 高三英语二轮专题 .pptx
高考英语读后续写语篇练习好心人为经济困难的家庭送圣诞礼物1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文A few days before Christmas,while enjoying coffees,my girlfriend and I noticed a woman trying to get her bank card to work.“Do you know her?”I asked my friend.“I do.Give me a minute.Im going to go and see if I can help,”she replied,standing up to walk over to her.A few minutes later,my friend returned to the table with the woman.The woman looked upset.Her eyes were swollen,as if shed been crying all night.She looked pale,tired,and messy.After I was introduced,my friend asked her if she was okay.She admitted she wasnt and burst into tears.I could sense she was a little embarrassed by her emotional response.Wanting to put her at ease,I quickly told her not to worry.I shared that I was a new mom with many troubles and Id already cried fourteen times that day.She laughed but soon her tears were flowing again.4续写原文For the next forty-five minutes,my friend and I both sat and patiently listened to her.She lost her husband before Christmas and their bank accounts were now left nothing.As a stay-at-home mom of two,in one split second,her entire life had come crashing down around her.We tried our best to cheer her up.My friend even tried to give her some cash,which she refused.When she finally got up to leave,she wiped her tears,thanked us both for listening,and walked out.As I drove home,I couldnt stop thinking about how depressed she looked when she left the cafe.No one deserves to feel that sad,I thought,especially right before Christmas.There must be something I can do to help.I racked my brain(绞尽脑汁)for an answer.5段首句Para 1：Gladly,a solution came.Para 2：The kids were overjoyed when hearing that Santa(圣诞老人)sent them gifts.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本篇书面表达是读后续写，文章讲述了作者和女友为一个困难家庭送圣诞礼物的故事。故事按照时间顺序展开，圣诞节前几天，作者和女友在喝咖啡时遇到一位刚失去丈夫、身无分文的全职妈妈，为了让她振作起来，在不伤害她自尊的前提下，作者和女友为她和家人买了些礼物。圣诞前夕，作者和女友把礼物送给妈妈和孩子们，看到他们脸上洋溢着的喜悦，作者感觉到自己带来了真正的改变，希望这家人的生活重回正轨。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para 1：Gladly,a solution came.由第一段首句内容“令人高兴的是，解决办法来了”以及第二段首句内容“孩子们听说圣诞老人给他们送了礼物，欣喜若狂。”可知第一段可描写想到了解决方法，为这位妈妈和她的孩子们买了些圣诞礼物，并在圣诞节之前把礼物送给他们。10续写思路分析Para 2：The kids were overjoyed when hearing that Santa(圣诞老人)sent them gifts.由第二段首句内容“孩子们听说圣诞老人给他们送了礼物，欣喜若狂”可知，第二段可描写这位妈妈一开始拒绝，但在“我”和女友的坚持下，他们高兴地收下了礼物，并表示感谢。11续写思路分析续写线索想到方法购买圣诞礼物送圣诞礼物收下礼物感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类决定做某事：decide to do/make a decision to do回到家：get home/arrive home购买礼物：buy them some gifts/purchase some gifts for them情绪类兴奋：call my girlfriend excitedly/telephone my girlfriend in excitement感谢：thank our kindness sincerely/show gratitude for our kindness sincerely13续写素材可用句型：【高分句型1】As soon as I got home,I called my girlfriend excitedly and explained my plan.（运用了as soon as引导的状语从句）【高分句型2】On Christmas Eve morning,we drove to the womans house with a large box of food and a few presents in the name of Santa,imagining their reactions when they found out that Santa had sent them gifts when they were least expecting it.（运用现在分词短语作状语、when引导的状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型3】It was not until we insisted that Christmas was a time for shared joy and Santa didnt accept returns that she accepted the presents and thanked our kindness sincerely.（运用了强调句型）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现Gladly,a solution came.I decided to make Christmas a little better for her family by buying them some gifts without hurting her pride.As soon as I got home,I called my girlfriend excitedly and explained my plan.She agreed with me and offered to buy and deliver the presents with me.On Christmas Eve morning,we drove to the womans house with a large box of food and a few presents in the name of Santa,imagining their reactions when they found out that Santa had sent them gifts when they were least expecting it.16范文呈现The kids were overjoyed when hearing that Santa(圣诞老人)had sent them gifts.However,their mom seemed embarrassed at first.It was not until we insisted that Christmas was a time for shared joy and Santa didnt accept returns that she accepted the presents and thanked our kindness sincerely.Seeing their faces filled with joy made me feel like I had made a real difference to their lives.The gifts were just the beginning,hopefully enough to put the familys lives back on track.I had a feeling that this would be a Christmas to remember.17范文译文圣诞节的早晨，我打了卡片上的号码。一个男人接了电话。我告诉他我是谁，我收到了Star给他的信息。听到这个消息，那人的声音因激动而颤抖。然后他感谢我打电话给他，因为他对Star感到非常沮丧和焦虑。听说她在避难所里很安全，他松了一口气。在平安夜遇见星星不仅仅是一个小小的魔法。我和儿子将永远记得那天晚上。18范文译文几个月后，当我开车时，我看到Star站在人行横道中间。她站着，双臂伸开，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。她站在车和一位拿着拐杖的老妇人之间，慢慢地穿过马路。这位妇女一安全过马路，Star就继续赶路。我微笑着开车去开会，想着我们邻居的“明星”在做她的工作。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thankyou!
