高考英语二轮复习读后续写练习课件（女孩的父亲因为新冠病毒去世暖心邻居帮助女孩度过难关）.pptx
高考英语读后续写语篇练习女孩的父亲因为新冠病毒去世，暖心邻居帮助女孩度过难关1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文A Community Puts on a Dazzling Display of SupportIn Saras family,putting up Christmas lights was always a big day of celebration.Every year,just after Thanksgiving Day,her dad Anthony,70,would visit local stores to check out new decorations and then excitedly string lights and hang decorations in and out of the house.The dazzling(绚烂的)display made him a hit in the community.On 2020 Christmas Eve,as usual,the whole house twinkled with lights,and gifts were piled under the tree.While everyone was looking forward to enjoying another Christmas together as a family,Sara,got a call:the whole family had tested positive for COVID-19.Their Christmas celebration had to be canceled.4续写原文At first,everyones symptoms(症状)seemed manageable.But right after the new year,Anthony started having trouble breathing and unfortunately passed away two weeks later,though the rest had recovered from COVID-19.The following week of planning the funeral was the worst for Sara and her husband,Frank.Sorrow left them doubled over in pain.The saddest of all was that no neighbours attended her fathers funeral.Only the twinkling Christmas lights at night brought them a little bit joy.The lights were one of the last moments they had of their beloved father,so they kept them up.One morning in February,Sara received an envelope.“Take your Christmas lights down!Its Valentines Day!”the unsigned letter read.Sara looked at the paper in shock.Then she got angry.She could have bottled up that anger,but she decided to write about it instead.She logged on to a local community Facebook group and shared the letter.She ended the post with this:“We all had a tough year.Be kind to people because you never know what they are going through.”5段首句Para 1：Half an hour later,Frank rushed into the room excitedly,with his phone in the hand.Para 2：When night fell,Sara and Frank were surprised by what they saw outside.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了莎拉的父亲因为新冠病毒而不幸去世，周围邻居通过他们的友爱的行为，表达了对他们家庭支持的故事。9续写思路分析Para 1：Half an hour later,Frank rushed into the room excitedly,with his phone in the hand.由第一段首句内容“半小时后，弗兰克兴奋地冲进房间，手里拿着手机。”可知，第一段可描写莎拉发的帖子在网上被很多人点赞和评论，以及他们夫妇二人内心的心理变化的过程。10续写思路分析Para 2：When night fell,Sara and Frank were surprised by what they saw outside.由第二段首句内容“夜幕降临时，莎拉和弗兰克被外面的景象惊呆了。”可知，第二段可描写周围的邻居都把圣诞彩灯挂起来了以及他们夫妇二人内心的感动。11续写思路分析续写线索弗兰克兴奋地冲进房间看到帖子火了很多人表达他们的同情夫妇二人的内心感受回邻居们都挂上圣诞彩灯表达支持感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类走红，火爆：goes viral/turn hot/become popular流下来：streamed down/rolled down大叫，呼喊：exclaimed/shouted情绪类感动的：moved/touched吃惊的：surprised/astonished/amazed13续写素材可用句型：高分句型1While slowly swiping across the screen with her fingertip and reading each comment,she was so moved that tears streamed down her cheeks.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略）高分句型2Seeing that,Sara and Frank burst into tears.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语）高分句型3.With the catchy Christmas songs echoing softly,the roofs of the buildings,the windows,the gardens,the trees,the fences.all twinkled with colorful Christmas lights and were wrapped with Christmas decorations.（运用了with的复合结构作状语）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现Half an hour later,Frank rushed into the room excitedly,with his phone in the hand.“Honey,your post goes viral!”exclaimed Frank.Sara hesitantly took over the phone and found hundreds of likes and comments under the post.Some expressed their grief over the loss of her beloved dad and some showed anger towards the letter writer.While slowly swiping across the screen with her fingertip and reading each comment,she was so moved that tears streamed down her cheeks.And during the whole day Sara and Frank were bathed in the neighbours kindness and warmth.16范文呈现When night fell,Sara and Frank were surprised by what they saw outside.Against the black night,she noticed the neighbourhood was like a sea of lights.With the catchy Christmas songs echoing softly,the roofs of the buildings,the windows,the gardens,the trees,the fences.all twinkled with colorful Christmas lights and were wrapped with Christmas decorations.Undoubtedly,the neighbours had collectively hung their lights back.Seeing that,Sara and Frank burst into tears.For them,the dazzling lights were not only the honour and memory of their beloved father,but also an overwhelming display of the neighbours support.17范文译文半小时后，弗兰克兴奋地冲进房间，手里拿着手机。“亲爱的，你的帖子疯传了！”弗兰克喊道。Sara犹豫地接过电话，在帖子下面发现了数百个赞和评论。一些人对失去她深爱的父亲表示悲痛，一些人对写信人表示愤怒。当她用指尖慢慢地在屏幕上滑动并阅读每一条评论时，她感动得泪流满面。萨拉和弗兰克一整天都沐浴在邻居的善意和温暖中。18范文译文夜幕降临时，萨拉和弗兰克对外面的景象感到惊讶。在漆黑的夜晚，她注意到附近就像一片灯光的海洋。伴随着朗朗上口的圣诞歌曲，建筑物的屋顶、窗户、花园、树木、栅栏。所有这些都闪烁着五颜六色的圣诞彩灯，并被圣诞装饰品包裹着。毫无疑问，邻居们集体把灯挂了起来。看到这一幕，Sara和Frank泪流满面。对他们来说，耀眼的灯光不仅是对他们深爱的父亲的荣誉和纪念，也是对邻居支持的压倒性展示。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thankyou!
