2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-作文（人教PEP版）.docx

名师精编：2022-2023学年小升初英语易错专项-作文（人教PEP 版）一、命题作文1.同学们，这个周末就要到了，请你和大家分享你这个周末有什么计划或打算呢？请你写下来。要求：1.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范、工整；2.不少于5句话；3.作文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名。This Weekend2 .小朋友们，你们的寒假过得怎么样？也像Amy那样有趣吗？请你以"My Winter Holiday" 为题，运用一般过去时记录自己的寒假生活。要求：语句通顺，不少于50个单词。3 .现在的你和六年前相比，有了很大的变化吧！请以My changes为题，写一篇小作文， 不少于六句话，可以根据提示进行有选择的使用。要求：条理清晰，语言准确，意思连贯；标点正确，书写规范；不能出现自己的真实姓名和 校名。参考答案：1 .范文：This WeekendThe weekend is coming. I will have a happy weekend. On Saturday morning, lzm going to do my homework. In the afternoon, Tm going to the bookstore. In the evening, Tm going to have dinner with my parents outside. On Sunday, Tm going to visit my grandparents with my parents.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以“ThisWeekend”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述周末的 计划或安排。注意文章为般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词:Saturday星期六,Sunday星期天,do one's homework做作业，bookstore书店, have dinner 吃晚饭，visit my grandparents 看望祖父母参考句型：I will .； On Saturday morning, Km going to .； In the afternoon/evening, lzm going to ；On Sunday, Km going to .；3 .范文：My Winter HolidayI really had a busy and happy winter holiday. I did my homework, and helped my parents do some housework. I also played computer games. I made a snowman, went skating. At the Spring Festival, I visited my grandparents and friends. I ate fresh food. We really had a good time together. I like my winter holiday very much.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以“My Winter Holiday”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述做 了什么。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合单词字数要求。4 .参考词汇与句型：参考单词：busy 忙碌的，do one's homework 做作业，housework 家务活，play computer games 玩电脑游戏,make a snowman堆雪人,go skating去滑冰，Spring Festival春节,fresh新鲜的 参考句型:I really had .； I .； I also .； At the Spring Festival, I .； We really I like .； 3.参考范文：My changesI am Mike. I am 12 years old now. I have great changes. Before, I was short and fat, so I couldn't ride my bike well. Now. I am tall and thin. So I go cycling every day. Before, I didn't like winter. I thought it was cold and I couldn't play outside. Now, I love winter. Because I can play snow with my friend and go ice-skating. This is me. I have changed a lot. How about you?【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据表格信息，从外貌特征、个人能力，喜好这些方面 用英语介绍自己的变化，注意文章为一般过去时态和一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:change 改变,shor and fat 又矮又胖,ride 骑，tall and thin 乂高 乂瘦，outside 在 外面,because 因为,go ice-skating 去滑冰参考句型：I was.before； Now I am.； Before, I didn't.； Now, I.4.参考例文：My FamilyHi, I am Laura. I am a pupil. I like reading books. And I go to school by bike. My mother is a doctor. She works in the hospital near my school. She likes drawing and playing the pipa. She goes to work on foot. My father is a policeman and he works in a police station. He likes running and playing basketball. Sometimes we can play basketball together. He goes to work by subway. On Sundays, we visit my grandparents. And we can have dinner together.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称和第三人称介绍自己的家人。然后再阐述家 庭成员的爱好，职业，工作地点和交通方式。注意文章为般现在时态并要符合句子数量要 求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：pupil 学生，doctor 医生，hospital 医院，play the pipa 弹琵琶,on foot 步行，together 一起，by subway 称地铁，grandparents 祖父母参考句型：Hi, I am.； I like.； My mother/My father is.； She/He works.； He goes to.5.参考例文：My best friendI have a best friend. His name is Jack. He lives in Beijing. He is 12 years old. He is tall and thin. He likes singing and doing kung fu. He often goes to school by bus. He reads stories every day. He usually goes hiking on weekends.【详解】L题干解读：该题目要求以“My best friend”为题，介绍自己的好朋友。然后再阐 述好朋友的年龄、外貌、住在哪个城市，爱好及周末的活动。注意文章为一般现在时态并要 符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:Beijing北京，thin瘦的，由1<11叶加练功夫，心:15"018$读故事,go hiking去远 足参考句型：I have .； His name is .； He lives in .； He is .； He likes .； He .；6.参考例文：A bad coldI don't feel well today. I think I have a bad cold. I am sad and my mother is worried about me. She takes me to see a doctor. The doctor asks me to wear warm clothes and take some medicine. Izm fine now. My mother doesn/t need to worry about me. I think I should do more exercise to keep healthy.【详解】L题干解读：该题目要求以“Abad cold 为题写一篇作文，描述自己感冒时的感受。 然后再阐述感冒时做r什么，和谁一起。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:sad 伤心的，be worried about 担心,see a doctor 看医生，wear warm clothes 暖和的衣服,take some medicine吃些药,do more exercise多做锻炼,healthy健康的 参考句型：I don't feel .； I think I .； I am .； She takes me to .； The doctor asks me to .； My mother doesn't need to .；7.范文：My school is near the hospital. It?s not very far. Now let me tell you how to get to my school.Go straight from your home. Turn left at the bookstore. Then go straight and turn right at the hospital. You can see my school on your right.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以“The Way t。My School”为题写一篇英语小短文，告诉 萨拉如何去自己的学校。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：near 在.附近，go straight 直走，turn left 左转，bookstore 书店,turn right 右转 参考句型：My school is near .； Now let me tell you .； Go straight from .； Turn left at the .； Then .； You can .；8.范文：Introduce myselfMy name is Amy. I'm twelve years old. I like going swimming. There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Peng. My favourite season is spring. It's warm and sunny. I like hamburgers. They're delicious.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以Introduce myself为主题介绍自己。然后再阐述姓名， 年龄，兴趣爱好，朋友，喜欢的季节，食物等。注意文章为般现在时态并要符合句子数量 要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：twelvel2, go swimming 游泳，doctor 医生,teacher 老师，favourite 最喜欢的， hamburger汉堡包参考句型:My name is .； I'm .； I like .； There are .； My favourite season is .；9.范文：Summer vacation is coming. And I have made some plans. Km going to Beijing this summer vacation. It's far from my home, so I'm going there by plane. I will go with my parents. We will visit the Great Wall. Itzs very long. We will visit the Palace Museum, too. Beijing Duck is delicious and we will eat it. I think we will have great fun.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求选择一个话题写话。话题一选择一个名人，可以描述其 外貌，性格，喜欢做和经常做的事情。话题一可以选择讲讲去哪里，和谁一起去，做什么， 怎么去等。注意文章时态，且满足词数要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:summer vacation 暑假，plan 计划,by plane 坐飞机，the Great Wall 长城，the Palace Museum故宫博物院,Beijing Duck北京烤鸭，delicious美味的，have great fun玩得开心 参考句型：is coming： Km going to. ； We/lwill.； I think.10.范文：I had a good time with my brother yesterday. My brother's name is John. He is tall and thin. He is twelve. He is a pupil. We went shopping in the morning. We bought a lot of food. We visited our grandparents in the afternoon. We helped them clean the room. We saw a film in the evening.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求先介绍一下弟弟，然后说一说昨天和弟弟做了哪些事情。 注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:have a good time 玩得开心,twelvel2, pupil 学生,go shopping 去购物,visit one's grandparents拜访祖父母,see a film看电影参考句型：I ；He is .； We . in the morning/afternoon/evening.；11.范文My favorite story is Robinson Crusoe. British writer Daniel Defoe wrote this story. The story is about Robinson. He is not afraid of difficulties or danger. He is brave enough to travel. I really like this story. Because the story is very interesting. What stories do you like?【详解】1.题干分析：要求根据问题提示，写最喜欢的故事，要写出故事的名称、作者、 主要内容和喜欢的原因。主要用一般现在时，要满足句子数量要求。2 .参考词汇和参考句型：参考词汇：favorite最喜欢的,writer作家，not afraid of不害怕,interesting有趣的。 参考句型：My favorite story is.； The story is.； I really like.； What stories do.。12 .范文I love PE. I have three PE lessons a week. There are various activities, such as playing table tennis, playing football and so on. My favorite sport is running, especially the long-distance running. Because it's easy. It can help me keep healthy.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据提示用第一人称写一写体育课，注意符合句数要求。 2.参考词汇句型：参考单词：table tennis 乒乓球，favorite 最喜欢的，PE lesson 体育课，activities 活动，because 因为参考句型：My favorite sport is.； I like.； I have.；13 .范文：Dear friends and teachers:I had a good time with you in the past time. We played together. We sang and danced together. We helped each other. Now I will go to a new school. I will study harder, because I want my dream to come true. I want to be a teacher like my English teacher. I hope you are all well.【详解】L题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称对你的老师或者同学说几句话，可以谈论你 们的过去，也可以谈论你们的将来、你对自己或者大家的期望等，注意文章为一般过去 时和一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:together 一起，each other 互相,come true 实现参考句型：Ihad.； We played/sang/danced/helped.： I will.； I hope.14.范文：If I can travel to any country in the world, I will go to France. Its capital is Paris. It is famous for its beautiful sceneries. There are many tourist attractions, such as Eiffel Tower; Louvre Museum, Triumphal Arch. I will see the Eiffel Tower and Triumphal Arch. It will be very nice. I can't wait.【详解】1题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写自己的暑假计划。然后再阐述要去哪个国家 并介绍该国家。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求.2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：France 法国，capital 首都，sceneries 风景，tourist attraction 观光胜地，Eiffel Tower 埃菲尔铁塔；Louvre Museum卢浮宫；Triumphal Arch凯旋门参考句型：If I can travel to any country in the world, I will go to.； Its capital is.； .is famous for.； I will see/visit.15.范文：I'm going to America this summer holiday with my parents. We/re going by plane. America is a country with many interesting places. We can visit the Yellowstone National Park, the Statue of Liberty, the Hollywood and the Empire State Building. I like watching movies, and many of my favorite movies were made in Hollywood, so I will visit it and take some pictures there. The Yellowstone National Park is a wonder of nature. So I will not miss it when I go to America.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写想去旅游的国家，怎么去，什么时候去，介绍该国的 景点，同时说出自己将要做的事。注意描述将要做的事用一般将来时态，描述景点用一般现 在时态，同时要符合单词数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:summer holiday 暑假；Yellowstone National Park 黄石公园;Statue of Liberty 自由 女神像;Hollywood好莱坞；Empire State Building帝国大厦;favourite最喜欢的；visit参观; wonder奇迹；miss错过参考句型；Km going to.； We can visit.； I like.； I will.16.范文:My name is Amy. I have a good friend. Her name is Kate. She is 12 years old. She lives in Beijing. She goes to school by bike every day. She likes playing the violin on the weekend. She feels happy. Next weekend she is going to visit her grandparents.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求假设自己是Amy,介绍自己的朋友Kate。然后再阐述年 龄、住址、爱好、如何上学、心情如何，周末的打算。注意文章主要为一般现在时态并要符 合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:Beijing北京,by b汰e骑自行车，play the violin拉小提琴，on the weekend在周末, visit one's grandparents参考句型： My name is .； I have .； Her name is .； She is .； She lives in .； She goes to school .； She likes .； She feels .； Next weekend she is going to .；17.参考范文：This is a picture of my brother and I. My brother's name is Xiaoming. He is a teacher in a middle school. He is taller than me, but I am fatter than him. He is 50 kg. I am 40 kg, so he is heavier than me.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据图片描述身高、体重。胖瘦方面的不同。注意文章 为一般现在时态。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:picture图片,brother兄弟，middle school中学，fatter更胖的,taller更高的, heavier更重的，so所以参考句型:This is.； My brother's name is. ；He is.than me； I am.than him.18.范文：I'm Jack. Tm a boy. I like drawing very much. Now I'm drawing a flower in the park. Tm very happy.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求看图写话。然后再阐述自己是谁，爱好是什么，在做什 么，心情如何。注意文章主要为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：draw画画，flower花，h叩py高兴的参考句型：I'm.； I like . ；Now I'm.：19.范文：Dear KimzI am happy to be your new friend. My name is Li Lei. I am twelve years old. I usually go to school on foot. I often go to the library to read books on weekends. My favourite subject is maths.Because my maths teacher is very kind. I like her very much. I like playing football after school. I want to be a policeman one day.Your new friend,Li Lei【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍自己的情况。可以写一写自己的姓名，年龄，经常的 活动，喜欢的科目及其爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考词汇:on foot 步行；go to the library 去图书馆;read books 读书;favourite subject 最喜 爱的科目；football足球；policeman警察；参考句型:I usually .； I often.； I like.；20.范文：My uncle is a fisherman. He works on a boat. He works very hard. He likes playing football. He is going to take a trip this weekend.【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求以My uncle为题，结合图片介绍你的叔叔。需要从职业, 工作地点，兴趣爱好和周末计划等几个方面进行介绍。根据图片，可知叔叔是一个渔夫，在 船上工作，喜欢踢足球，周末计划去旅行，其他内容可适当发挥想象。注意文章为一般现在 时态和一般将来时态，句子数量要符合要求。2.参考词汇与句型参考词汇：fisherman渔夫;on a boat在船上；work very hard非常努力工作：play football 踢足球；take a trip去旅行；this weekend这个周末参考句型:My uncle is a.； He works.； He likes.； He is going to.21.例文:This is my family. There are four people in my family. My father is a scientist and he works at a university. My mother is a math teacher and she works in a school. My brother and I are pupils.Tomorrow is Saturday. It's my mother's birthday.My family are going to have a big dinner. My father is going to cook dinner. I will clean the rooms and my brother is going to watch TV.We are going to enjoy fish, beef, chicken, vegetables and soup. My mother will eat egg noodles. After dinner, we will eat candies and a birthday cake.My father is going to tell us a story about the space station （空间站）.I'm interested in science and I'm going to be a scientist, too. And my mother will read a poem-Family.We will have a good time tomorrow.【详解】L题干解读：该题目是根据图画内容和所提供的信息，将短文补充完整。文章.主要 是关于我们家人的职业介绍，以及计划明天给妈妈过生H的事情。时态是般现在时及 般将来时。要求：语句通顺，书写规范。2.参考词汇及参考句型：参考词汇：a math teacher 一个数学老师,pupil学生，cook dinner做晚餐,tell a story讲故 事，fish鱼参考句型：My mother is.； We are going to.； My father is going to.22.范文：My last winter holidayI love the winter holiday. Last winter holiday, I went on a trip to Shenyang. My grandparents lived there. It was snowy there. I made a snowman with my cousins. I took many beautiful pictures in the snow. I went ice skating. It was fun. I had a big dinner with my grandparents. The food was delicious. What a fun winter holiday!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求假如自己是李东，根据图片，描述上个寒假的生活。然 后再阐述去哪了，做了什么，和谁一起。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词:winter holiday 寒假，go on a trip 去旅行，make a snowman 堆雪人，have a big dinner 吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，go ice skating去滑冰,delicious美味的参考句型:I love.； Last winter holiday, I .； I .； What a fun winter holiday!；4 .请你以“My Family”为题，写一篇关于你的家庭成员的爱好、职业、工作地点和交通方式 的短文。My Family5 .请以“My best friend”为题,介绍你好朋友的年龄，外貌，住在哪个城市,她/他的爱好以 及周末经常干什么，不少于五句话。6 .同学们，在我们的生活中，生病是难免的。假如你今天感冒了，感觉不舒服，你的感受 是怎样的呢？请以"Abad cold”为题写一篇作文，描述你感冒时的感受，50个词左右。A bad cold7 . Sarah想去你的学校参观，但她不知道去你学校的具体路线。请以"The Way to My School” 为题写一篇英语小短文，告诉她如何去你学校。不少于5句。8 .请你以Introduce myself为主题介绍自己，包括自己的姓名，年龄，兴趣爱好，家庭成 员，朋友，喜欢的季节，食物等。要求：1、与主题有关、条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、书写规范，不能出现真实姓名。2、不少于五句话。Introduce myself二、提纲作文9 .请选择下面的一个话题写一段不少于40个单词的话，要求内容丰富，句子正确，表达连 贯，语言得体，书写工整。话题一：你喜欢哪一个名人呢？请你介绍一下他（她）吧。话题二：小学的最后一个暑假就要来了，你有什么出游计划吗？请你写下来吧。10 .昨天你和弟弟Tom一起度过了愉快的一天，展开想象，先介绍一下弟弟，再说说你们 一起做了哪些事情。要求：1.句式要规范，注意时态；2.句子要完整、连贯；3.不少于5句话。11 .根据下面的问题提示，介绍自己喜欢的故事，不少于六句话。1. What is your favourite story?2. Who wrote the story?3. What is the story about?4. Why do you like it?12 .请根据问题提示写一写你体育课的相关情况。不少于5句话。提示：Do you like PE lessons?How many PE lessons do you have every week?What activities do you do in PE lessons?What's your favourite activity? Why do you like it?13 .写作：（不少于40个单词）You will leave your school. What would you like to say to your teachers or your friends?请对你的老师或者同学说几句话，可以谈论你们的过去，也可以谈论你们的将来、你对 自己或者大家的期望等.Dear:14 . 1.请介绍一种你喜欢的动物，可以从外形、习性、栖息地以及你喜欢它的理由等方面 来谈一1炎。（My favourite animal is the It is It has It lives It eats）2.暑假即将来到来