初中英语九年级主题作文18-成长与变化.docx

主题：成长与变化导读本综合训练的主题是成长与变化.这一主题贴近同学们的学习和生活，能让同学们有话可说、有感而发. 因此，同学们可从自身的角度用英语描述一下自己在生活、学习、人际交往等方面所取得的进步等，体现自己 的成长与变化；也可谈谈自身成长过程中经验、知识、价值观等的形成，或者他人的成长变化、家乡的变化 等.题目回放一同学们在初中三年的生活和学习中都见证了自己的成长.请以The greatest change I have ever made为题, 根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的最大变化.写作要点：1 .你的最大变化是什么？2 .发生这个变化的原因是什么？3 .变化后你有什么感想？写作要求：1 .文中不要出现你的真实姓名和校名；2 .词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁：介绍自己的成长变化，属于记叙文.2审内容：紧扣写作要点：你的变化、原因、感受.3审时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：开篇点题，简单介绍自己成长过程中最大的变化是什么.中间：主体段落可以通过自己的亲身经历详细叙述这一变化的内容、过程、原因和结果.结尾：总结这一变化对自己的影响及自己的感悟.段落素描1. First paragraph: As we grow up, we make changes. As for me, the greatest change I have ever made is .(.)2. The body: When I was a little child, I. As time went by, I came to . At present,.(.)3. Last paragraph: As the saying goes,. I have benefited a lot from.(.)范本淬炼The greatest change I have ever madeAs we grow up, we make changes.For my own part, the greatest change I have ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.When I was a little child, I had no interest in reading because it was boring in my mind. My mother, however, often read stories to me, and bought books for me. As time went by, Icame to like spending some time in reading. At present, reading is one of my favorites. While reading, I feel as if talking with a wise person. Also, reading is a fantastic way for me to spend my spare time.As the saying goes, " Books are the ladder of human progress/9© The more we read, the more progress we will make. I have benefited a lot from reading, and I will keep the habit of reading.for my own part,就我 自 己而言.come to do sth.逐渐开始做某事.feel as if，感觉好像.The more .,the more-，越就越benefit a lot from，从.中受益颇多.亮点点评1 .文章开头引入主题即“我''的最大变化，中间段落展开论述，尾段总结并发表感想.全文内容完整,结构清 晰.2 .文中 When I was a little child, As time went by, As the saying goes 等使用得体，使文章衔接自然,表达流 畅.3 .文中使用了状语从句,while加现在分词充当时间状语以及副词和形容词的比较级等丰富句式,使文章 句式灵活多变.4 .文中用语丰富,如使用了 fall in love with, have no interest in, as if, benefit a lot等短语，增强了文章的感 染力.题目回放二在人的成长过程中,或许一句话就会改变一个人的一生，尤其是一些广泛流传的名言警句,你最喜欢的谚 语、格言、名言警句是什么?它对你的成长有什么深刻的影响?请以你最喜欢的一条谚语、格言或名言警句为 题，写一篇英语作文.写作要点：1.你最喜欢的一条谚语、格言或名言警句；2你对这条谚语、格言或名言警句的理解；3 .能体现这条谚语、格言或名言警句的个人经历；4 .你的个人感悟.写作要求：1 .以一条谚语、格言或名言警句为题目；2 .文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等相关信息；3 .词数90左右.审题指引1审体裁：这是一篇对谚语、格言或名言警句的理解及感悟的文章，属于议论文，可以夹叙夹议.2审内容：首先要写出一条谚语、格言或名言警句,然后写出对它的理解，以及能体现它的个人经历，最后谈谈 个人的感悟.3审时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：用一句谚语、格言或名言警句开头，引出主题.主体段落具体叙述对这条谚语、格言或名言警句的理解，并叙述能体现它的个人经历.结尾：叙述自己的感悟.段落素描1 .First paragraph: My favorite saying is.(.)2 .The body: This saying shows a person's attitude towards. Everyone wants to but to he or she must. Once, I.At first, L.Later, I.(.)3 . Last paragraph: Now I have learned a lot from the saying. I am aware that.(.)范本淬炼Where there is a will, there is a way.My favorite saying is that where there is a will, there is a way.This saying shows a person's attitude towards challenges or difficulties. Everyone wants to succeed, but to achieve success, he or she must face the difficulties bravely and overcome them wisely. Once, I was told to give a speech. At first, I was nervous, and wanted to give up. Later, I was encouraged by this saying,which reminded me to have a strong will and face the challenge bravely.Now I have learned a lot from the saying. I am © aware that nothing is impossible if we have a strong will. that引导表语从句. attitude towards challenges or difficulties,对挑战或困难的态度. achieve success,取得成功.overcome,克月艮.give up,放弃.©which引导非限制性定语从句.aware,意识到.亮点点评1 .开篇直接点出自己最喜欢的谚语，中间主体段落对该谚语加以解释并结合自己的事例佐证它对自己的 影响，尾段总结了自己的深刻感悟.整篇文章内容充实，结构合理.2 .文中灵活运用被动语态、非限制性定语从句、状语从句等丰富句式，为文章添彩.3 .文中once, at first, later, now等用语使上下文内容连贯，前后连接紧密.4 .文中用词丰富，如使用了 attitude towards, challenge, achieve success, overcome, nervous,give up, remind 等用语，而bravely, wisely等副词更精准表达了思想情感.素材宝库1 .好词妙语learn to take responsibilities 学会负责任depend on sb.'s study habits取决于某人的学习习惯make great changes发生很大变化in the past three years 在过去三年里become more independent 变得更独立an attitude towards challenges or difficulties 对挑战或困难的态度achieve success 取得成功be aware that.意识到feel as if感觉好像2 .提分佳句Jim has made a greater change than before, and has become outgoing and active.吉姆比以前有了更大变化,变得外向而活跃了.When I was in Grade Eight, I was so shy that I did not dare to speak English in front of my classmates. Now I am not shy anymore.当我在八年级的时候，我太害羞以至于不敢在同学们面前说英语.现在我不再害羞.I hated playing the piano, but now I love it.以前我讨厌弹钢琴，但现在我喜欢它.Now I work much harder than I used to.现在我工作比以前努力得多.An important change is that I have learned to take responsibilities.一个重要的改变是，我已经学会了负责任.Whether or not you can do it well depends on your study habits.你是否能做好它，取决于你的学习习惯.I am glad that I have made great changes in the past three years.我很高兴我在过去的三年里发生了很大变化.The more you read, the faster you will be.你读得越多，就会越快.I have become more independent, which is the greatest change for me this year.我变得更独立，这是今年我最大的变化.写作预热1 .句子改错1) My sister did not like drawing at all before, but, she is crazy about it these days.2) On weekends, I usually spend much time read books instead of play computer games.3) Thanks for the voluntary activity, I gained much experience in caring for others.4) I believe that I have the power to be a better person in the future by increasing my know ledges.5) I sure I will make my dream come true.答案：l)but后逗号去掉2)read 改为 reading; play 改为 playing3)Thanks for 改为 Thanks to4） know ledges 改为 knowledge5） sure 改为 am sure2 .句式变换1） I like these changes. They have made me a better person.（改为含非限制性定语从句的复合句）2） I am much happier now, and I work even harder than I used to.（句子仿写）3） Nothing is impossible if you are willing to do it. Day by day, I have begun to believe it.（改为含宾语从句的复合 句）4） The greatest change that I have made is that I have fallen in love with reading.（用 fall in love with 仿写句子）5） I have a friend. She always encourages me to study hard.（改为含定语从句的复合句）6） I failed in the English exam. I failed in the math exam（用 not only .but also,连接）I failed in the English exam in the math exam.7） The boy was too young to go to school, （ffl so.that 改写句子）The boy was he could go to school.8） Tom is taller than any other student in his class.（改为同义句）Tom is student in his class.9） When will they come? Do you know?（合并为复合句）Do you know come?10） She is busy with her homework.（改为同义句）She is busy her homework.答案：1） I like these changes, which have made me a better person.2） I study much harder now, and I have made greater progress than I used to.（开放性答案）3） Day by day, I have begun to believe that nothing is impossible if we are willing to do it.4） I used to hate math, but now I fall in love with it because it helps me a lot in my daily life.（开放t生答案） 5）1 have a friend who always encourages me to study hard.6) not; only; but; also7) so; young; that; not8) the; tallest9) when; they; will10) doing实战练笔1 .改变才能有收获，才能成熟，才能成长；不断改变会让我们的人生更精彩和更充实.请你以The change I want to make most为题，根据以下写作要点写一篇90词左右的英语短文.写作要点：1 .你最想如何改变；2 .你为什么想这样改变；3 .你对此改变的期待.范文：The change I want to make mostAt my school, I want to change some of my study habits. The change I want to make most is to cut down the time for watching TV.I always spend more than two hours a day watching TV. In fact, I turn on the TV whenever I have time. Now, I want to change this habit because I am aware that spending too much time watching TV has a bad effect on my studies, and is bad for my eyes.To change this habit, I will pay attention to more meaningful things, such as reading and sports. I believe that I will be able to do this in the near future.n.现在同学们崇拜的偶像有所不同.你的观点是什么？你崇拜谁?你的偶像对你的成长有什么影响?请自拟标题，写一篇90词左右的英语短文.范文：The idol in my heartWe each have our idols. Some of my classmates admire astronauts; others regard scientists as idols, and believe scientists make great contributions to the country.Unlike my classmates, I think that the idol in my heart is the heroic group of Chinese doctors and nurses, who fought bravely against any disease, and saved the lives of a large number of people.In my heart, those medical workers set a good example to us, and deserve our respect. We should learn from them.