高考英语二轮专题复习课件：专题20-书面表达-第3讲-（半）开放类书面表达.ppt

高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场专题二十书面表达第三讲(半)开放类书面表达 高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场角度1议论文/夹叙夹议文【典例】(2012北京卷)请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数100左右。You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim.Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场【思路点拨】第一步：审题谋篇1审题：体裁：夹叙夹议文或议论文时态：一般现在时(描述画面也可用过去时)人称：描述画面可用第三人称，议论用第一人称高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场第二步：确定要点1词汇嘲笑laugh at 骄傲proud保持冷静remain calm陷入沉思fall into deep thoughts在现实中in reality向学习learn from.高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场2句式(1)我认为长铅笔看起来很骄傲、很高兴，它正在嘲笑短铅笔。(looking)I think the long pencil，looking proud and delighted，is laughing at the short pencil.(2)长铅笔的话让短铅笔陷入了沉思。(let sb do sth)The long pencils words let the short pencil fall into deep thoughts.(3)只要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要介意别人说什么。(as long as)Dont mind what others say as long as we are confident in what we have done.第三步：连句成篇高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场【范文赏读】I think the white pencil，looking proud and delighted，is laughing at the black pencil by saying“Youre nearing the end！”The black pencil，on the other hand，remains calm.The white pencils words let him fall into deep thoughts.He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing.Its true that hes approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.In reality，we should learn from the black pencil：not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场角度2记叙文【典例】(2012湖南卷)Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括：1.丢失的物品；2.物品失而复得的经过；3.你的感想；注意：1.词数不少于120；2不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场【思路点拨】(1)由题目要求可知本文主要内容是对物品失而复得经过的回忆，故本部分应用一般过去时，而就本经历的感想部分应该使用一般现在时。(2)本文的内容主要包括三个部分：丢失的物品；物品失而复得的经过；你的感想。在写作时，应注意这三部分内容的关系，主要集中在物品失而复得的经过及感想部分。(3)内容要点：丢失/不见：be lost/missing张贴通知：put up notices奖励、奖赏：reward做好事：do good deeds高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场【范文赏读】I have a precious pen，which was given to me as a birthday present by one of my best friends.I like it very much，however，this pen once has an unusual experience.When I was a student of Grade Two，I lost my precious pen because of carelessness when our school was holding a sports meeting.I almost felt crazy when I realized that it was missing.I searched the playground carefully and even the road leading to my home.I put up several notices with its titleMy Precious Pen Lost，in which I promised to pay the one who gives the pen back to me 100 yuan.Several days later，I heard my name called by someone.It was a girl with a pen in her hand.I felt excited to see my precious pen back.I thanked this kind girl again and again，who didnt accept the money I gave her as a reward.高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场From the unusual experience of my precious pen，I learn that we should be thankful to those who always do good deeds and also be ready to do what we can to help others.高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场角度3说明文【典例】(2012重庆卷)某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发贴，发布物品交换信息。内容应包括：你将拿出什么物品进行交换 具体介绍该物品 你希望换回什么物品 请愿意交换的朋友给你留言高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场注意：1.词数100左右；2格式不限；3文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。_高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场【思路点拨】(1)本文是半开放式作文，要求在提供个人闲置物品交换的网站上发布物品交换信息，将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换。发布物品信息，需要介绍物品的特点，故应写成以现在时态为主的说明文。(2)本文应首先点明主题：自己想拿出什么物品进行交换，并重点介绍该物品的详细信息，如物品的新旧程度、功能特点等。其次应再写想换回什么样的物品，以及自己对该物品的要求，最后应在文末写明请愿意交换的朋友留言。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场【范文赏读】I have a collecton of EnglishChinese bilingual readingsthe Bookworm Series V，which is suitable for the students in Senior 2 or Senior 3.It is made up of six worldfamous novels and with it is an MP3 CD which can provide you with excellent pronunciation.I have greatly improved my English by reading and listening.Besides，I am a booklover and the books are so well kept that they are as good as new.Now Im graduating from senior high school and the book is not fit for me，so I want to exchange it for a Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English which I think will be good for my college study.I dont care whether it is new or not as long as it is intact.If anyone wants to exchange，leave message here，please.高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场【知识链接】阐述图画的寓意及其对我们的启示时常用到的句型1The picture is trying to tell us that.2The picture reflects a common social problem that.3The picture vividly shows.4The picture conveys a message that.5I think the picture wants to show us that.6From the picture，we can draw a conclusion that.7As the picture suggests.8It reminds me of.9The picture makes me think a lot about.高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场写开放作文时的注意事项不论是图片式开放性作文，还是命题式开放性作文，都要注意以下几点：一是审题，包括题目或图片的内容、命题老师的目的或意图、写作时需要使用的文章体裁等；二是定文章的主题、结构和层次；三是列出要点和提纲，即哪些东西需要写，哪些东西不需要写，做到心中有数；四是文章中所用的人称、时态和语态；五是文章所需要的词汇、短语和句型等。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场体验高考体验高考高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场防范1词性混用或选词搭配不当【典例】(误)60%of the students against the idea of entrance fees.(正)60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.(误)Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.(正)Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.在平常的学习中，应把每种词性在句中作的成分、有什么样的搭配要搞清楚。词汇和短语应多积累。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场防范2无关联词/多关联词【典例】(误)I am tired，I must to to bed.(正)I am tired，so I must go to bed.(误)Although I am thin，but I am strong.(正)Although I am thin，I am strong.英语句子特点之一重“形合”，句子的各个部分由各种关联词连在一起。而汉语句子重“意合”，句子前后连接主要是通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现，很多人在写作时往往忽略这一点造成句子的错误。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场防范3句子缺乏连贯性或时态混乱【典例】(误)Rose falls in love with John is in love with Mary.(正)Rose falls in love with John，while John is in love with Mary.(误)I am very glad to receive your letter just now.(正)I was very glad to receive your letter just now.句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句子之间过渡自然、层次分明。同时避免出现时态混乱、未用过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完整的分割句等错误。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场防范4标点符号误用【典例】(误)China Daily is a great help to the English learners.(正)China Daily is a great help to the English learners.(误)Li Ping is not old enough，he can not join the army.(正)Li Ping is not old enough.He can not join the army./Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.英语无书名号，报刊、书名等单词首字母大写，或斜体；一般情况下，一个主谓结构就构成一个英语句子，句末应用句号。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场(2012湖北卷)请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。You cannot choose what you are given，but you can choose how you make use of it.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场作文点评 该考生作文主题明确，行文基本流畅，时态、语态、人称等使用正确。不足之处有：书法一般，字数较少(105个词)。不少地方用词不准确，如come across；face with等。汉语式表达，如I was bad luck。无高级词汇，句式使用单一。高考命题视角高考命题视角考场失分防范考场失分防范专题知识清单专题知识清单高考阅读现场高考阅读现场体验高考体验高考