基础写作方法.ppt

一、基础写作的命题特点一、基础写作的命题特点：考考生生按按所所给给的的内内容容及及要要求求，用用5个个规规范范的的英英语语句句子子描描述述所所给给信信息息的的全全部部内内容容，并并组组成成连连贯贯的的短文。短文。简简而而言言之之，考考查查考考生生整整理理信信息息和和组组词词造造句句成文的能力。成文的能力。题型题型题量题量赋分赋分时间（分钟）时间（分钟）基础写作基础写作1 115151010 二、基础写作的评分标准？12 34句子内容的完整性完整性(Completeness)句子结构的正确性正确性(correctness)句子结构的复杂性复杂性(Variety)句子内容的连贯性连贯性(Coherence)三、基础写作所需的能力三、基础写作所需的能力Short essay writing is,in fact,to test a students four abilities,as shown in the following diagram.Ability to take in the information given摄取信息的能力摄取信息的能力Ability to analyze what is involved in the topic分析信息的能力分析信息的能力Ability to build up the frame of the composition构筑信息的能力构筑信息的能力Ability to express yourself表达信息的能力表达信息的能力四、基础写作得高分的秘诀四、基础写作得高分的秘诀How to get high marks?Rewrite the sentences 1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.2.I will be given another chance.I will succeed.3.He wants to improve his English.He studies hard.方法一方法一.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档When they arrived at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.Arriving at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.If I am given another chance,I will succeed.Given another chance,I will succeed.In order to improve his English,he studies hard.方法二方法二.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力1.He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.Not until2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.Only 3.He is clever but he does not work hard.as/though4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is,he does not work hard.stands the clock tower.五、基础写作基本步骤抄改连扩抓审审写作写作基础写作基础写作步骤审审抓抓扩扩连连改改抄抄基础写作步骤一、审题理清文字信息判断文章格式、人称、要点、时态、基础写作步骤二、抓要点确定主要行为用一两个词或短语 写出每句的要点基础写作步骤三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或高级词汇将要点扩展成句基础写作步骤四、连句成文 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）、逻辑关系、开头与结尾、巧用连接词和过渡句书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误如要点齐全、句法、语法有无问题；单词拼写、大小写和标点符号；句数基础写作步骤六、誊写卷面要工整一、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。要求：要求：1.标题标题:Something about Li Hua 2.必须使用必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容个句子介绍全部所给内容.3.将五个句子组织成连贯的短文将五个句子组织成连贯的短文.姓名姓名:李华李华学校学校:育才中学育才中学地址地址:中国广州育才路中国广州育才路138号号 身高身高:180cm 头发颜色头发颜色:黑色黑色 全家人口全家人口:3人人 父母职业父母职业:教师教师 爱好爱好:集邮和硬币集邮和硬币 掌握外语情况掌握外语情况:英语英语写作指导：先写成简单句子，然后再做组合，连成通顺的5句短文:1.Li Hua is a student from Yucai Middle School.2.He is 180cm tall.His fair is black.His family is at 138,Yucai Road,Guangzhou,China.3.His family has three people.Both his parents are teachers.4.Li Hua has two hobbies:collecting stamps and coins.5.He knows English well and can speak perfect English.一、一、Something about Lihua Li Hua,who is 180cm tall with black hair,is a student from Yucai Middle School.His family,which is at 138,Yucai Road,Guangzhou,China,has got three people.Both his parents are teachers.Li Hua has two hobbies,which are collecting stamps and coins.He knows English well and can speak perfect English.二、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。1、标题：Top Meal of the Day2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会。结果：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的30%，青少年健康应从早餐抓起。1.Some students study late into the night.2.They choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed.3.As a result,they tend to be sleepy all day.They have bad memories.4.It is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of exams.5.As a matter of fact/In fact,a morning meal plays an important part in our daily life.6.It can provide 30%of the whole days energy.7.We students should start with a regular breakfast.二、二、Top Meal of the DaySome students,who study late into the night,choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed.As a result,they tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories,so its hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests.In fact,the morning meal plays an important part in our daily life.It can provide 30%of the whole days energy.For a creative mind and better judgment school students should start their day with a regular breakfast.三、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。1、标题标题:What Can We Do for the Olympics of 2008?2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。(1)2008年奥运会是年奥运会是21世纪重大体育比赛之一，包括世纪重大体育比赛之一，包括中国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备。中国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备。(2)奥运会的作用。奥运会的作用。(3)中国为举办奥运会，将要做些什么？中国为举办奥运会，将要做些什么？(4)你个人该做些什么？你个人该做些什么？1.The Olympic Games of 2008 will be held in Beijing.2.It is one of the most important events in the history of sports.3.Every country in the world,including China,is preparing for it.4.It will do good to the friendship between China and any other country in the world.5.We should try to improve our environment and build enough stadiums as well as widening the roads in Beijing.6.As a student,I must try to learn English well and try to do something for the Olympic Games.三、三、The Olympic Games of 2008 The Olympic Games of 2008,which is one of the most important events in the history of sports,will be held in Beijing.Every country in the world,including China,is preparing for it.It will do good to the friendship between China and any other country in the world.We should try to improve our environment and build enough stadiums as well as widening the roads in Beijing.As a student,I must try to learn English well and try to do something for the Olympic Games.