2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写情绪描写技巧导学案.docx

高三读后续写之情绪描写技巧导学案罗定实脸中学周伟文学习目标：掌握并能够运用读后埃写之情感描写的技巧，让情感枯骂更加生动形发、更加 富有网面感.感础技巧进阶技巧使用无灵主语a可.1+a6.2.动作使用让步状语从句使用独立主格固定动词 seize抓住 catch（过去式caught） strike （过去式struck） surround也绕着 take hold of 控制 wash over止人感到 surge through 涌上 come over包圉/支配 envelop 笼罩 overwhelm使难以承受Part 1:基础技巧Skill I:使用无无灵主语I）定义2）词汇积累情绪名词happiness/joy/ delight 开心 gratitude / appreciation 感激 admiration 长保anger / rage / annoyance/ fury 狂怒 sadness / socrow/grief 悲伤 fear / terror / fright / panic 害怕 guilt / regret / remorse 愧疚悔恨 astonishment /shock / surprise nervousness / tense/anxiety / stress 紧 张/婚虎/压力情绪名词+固定动词+ sb.worry/concem/fear 担忧 relief Jft®disappointment/frustration 失望/沮丧3） Observe and Mimmuriz« （he structure1 .Unconirullably. a wave of nervousness washed over ine as I gave my first class in Luoding Middle School.Z.InMantly, a scrong sense of exci（en）eni took hold of n>e when I known （hat I was admitted into Sun Yat-Sen University.3. Suddenly, a strong wave of fear enveloped him as the bear drew nearer.结构，4）真题翻译练习1.1意办妆邮没仃及时的说网和鼓廊 大:放弃比奏.我突然感到种强烈的招忧和生虐礴.（2022.全国一卷）2.一种强烈的紧张和不安立刻涌上Ikuor的心头，当他敲Mr. Adler的门。（2023,广东一 辕）Skill 2: adjl+adj.2, sb.did9 doings1 ） Observe and summarize the structureI .Ncnous and scared. Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech.2 .Confidcnt and determined . David kept on running, struggling to reach the finish line .3 .Depressed and helpless. Eric burst in tears, wondering what to do next.结构：2）真题翻译练习1 .感到坚定和受到鼓柒，David抬起头，感激地看着我，（2022全国1卷12 .解到放松的和快乐的，David在超过终点观后立刻向我挥手，表达他的快乐和感激.<2022全国1卷）Part 2:进阶技巧Skill 3：使用让步状语从句1 ） Observe and summarize the structureI .Extremely tired as he was. David made up his mind to finish the race.2 .Exhaustcd and hungry though he was. he carried on climbing the mountain.结构：2）真题翻译练习1 .尽管很缥急和不情愿，我还是按照爸苫的要求去洗碗。（2022广州模）2 .尽管他很苫怡和担心，Heaor还是告诉了老师发生了什么。（2023广东一模）Skill 4：使用独立主格1 > Observe and summarii the structure2 .Hearing that he was admitted into Sun Yat-Sen University, he jumped up with excitement, eyes glittering with joy.3 .Fnghtcncd and nervous. Hector knocked on the door, heart beating wildly.4 .Hcaring （he news, she was totally overwhelmed by grief, leant welling up in her eyes.结构：2）常见独立主格归纳背诵 tears welling up in sb's eyes tears stmaming down sb's cheeks eyes gliuering with relief /joy/exciienwnt. eyes blazing with anger/annoyance face gleaming with delight heart beating with happincss.'tcnsion'cxcitcmcnt. hands trembling with IrighL'fcar3）真明翻译练习，l她感到开心和兴奋,终于货到r她理想大学通知书.眼里闪烁者喜悦的光芒.2.出乎意料,大卫校利触过终点线,脸上洋潴希满足的喜悦，（2022全国I卷）综合训练：用今天所学的技巧补全语篇.（2021.全国一叁）1. Inscamly阵强烈的愤怒涌上他们父亲心头when he caught sight of the messy kitchen.（感到害怕和东虑的），the twins explained the situation to their father in a tremble voice,< 希望可 以得到父亲的理解和帮助.（2023.广东一模）2. （尽管他很害怕和解张）.Hclctor still plucked uphis courage to explain what had happened to Mr. Alder_（让他感到诈常 惊讶的是）,Mr. Alder believed him and comforted him to get ready for the final contest. Listening what Mr. Alder said. Ilektor expressed his sincere gratitude to his teacher.（眼睛电闪爆着如杼血负的光芒.）附录：参考答案（完成练习之后再核对）Skill 1翻译1. Suddenly, a strong sense of worry and anxiety seized ine when I realized that David might give up the race without prompt persuasion and encouragement.2. Instantly, u strong wave of tension and uneasiness came over Hector when he knocked on Mr. Adlers door.Skill 2翻译1. >e(emiined iind inspired . David raiMrd his head . looking a( me with gratitude .2. Relieved and delighted. David waved a( me immediately after crossing (he finish line conveying his happiness and grmiiude .Skill 3翻译1 .Anxious and reluctant as/ibough I was, I still went to wash the dishes at Dad's request. Z.Scared and worried as.'though he was. Hector still told (he teacher what had happened.Skill 4胡译1. Delighted and excited, she finally got the admission letter to her ideal university, eyes glittering with joy.2. Unexpectedly . David crossed the finish line smoothly . his face gleaming with satisfied delight.综合训练(2021 .全国一卷)1. Inslandy.n strong wave of annoyance surged through their hither when he caught sight of (he messy kitchen. Frightened mikI anxious, the twins explained (he situation io【heir father in a tremble voice, hoping that they can get father's understanding and help.(2023.广东模)2.Scared and nervous as/though he Mas. Hclctoc still plucked up his courage to explain what had happened co Mr. Alder. Much to his surprise* Mr. Alder believed him and comforted him to gc< ready ibr the tinal contest. Listening what Mr. Alder said. Hclctor expressed his sincere gratitude to his teacher, eyes glittering with relief.