读后续写写作指导讲义-2023届高三英语复习写作专项.docx

试题原题第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的 短文。I looked around at the other patients waiting to see the doctor. Maybe they all had more romantic plans for the evening on this Valentine" s Day, but for now the group seemed anti-social. Three people had their heads down, staring at cell phones. Another was absorbed in a magazine. The receptionist tapped at her computer. Everyone was in their own little world.But I couldn' t judge them for it. I would probably be buried in my cell phone too - if I hadn' t forgotten to charge it before I left home. It would have been nice to strike up a conversation to pass the time on this day, a day of love and friendship. Instead I sat patiently in my plastic chair as a couple of new people took distant seats.uRoberta? The doctor' s ready for you, “ the nurse called. At least I' 11 have some kind of human connection. I thought.My checkup went well, and I breezed out of the office to my little Honda in a space right out front. I got in and turned the key. Nothing. Oh, no. Not again. I' d sent the car to the garage several times already for this very problem and thought it had finally been fixed.I reached for my cell phone to call AAA - then remembered. It was dead, like my car. I would have to use the phone inside. A few people glanced up when I came back into the waiting room, then quickly went back to what they were doing. I went straight to the reception desk, but the receptionist was not there. So I turned back to the people in the waiting room.“I wouldn, t normally do this. " I said to the group, hoping that I sounded apologetic. Several people turned toward me to listen. “But my car won' t start*-,The nurse popped her head into the room. "You in trouble, Roberta?” she said. "I' 11 go and take a look. ” I followed the nurse outside. As I passed through the door. I felt someone was behind me.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I turned to see all the other patients following me. I said a quick prayer and turned the key. 试题写作分析1 .时间：the Valentine' s Day2 .地点：in a hospital3 .人物(角色)：I (Roberta)：去医院看病，车坏在医院门口，手机也忘了充电the receptionist (the nurse)：听说我的车坏了，径直前往查看patients：看医生前，各自忙着自己的事情；听说我的车坏了后，就4 .主题：人与社会(自我)情人节这天我去医院看病，在等待的时候，发现很多等候的病人都各自忙着自 己的事情，要么在刷手机，要么在阅读杂志，而接待病人的护士则忙着敲打键盘。 要不是我手机没电，我也他们一样埋头于手机了。没办法，我就只得搬了条塑料凳， 坐着等。轮到我检查的时候，一切都很顺利。检查结束，正准备开车离开的时候， 我发现车启动不了，虽然这车已经在修理厂修过多次。加之手机又没电，我只得硬 着头皮向等候的病人们求助。听到我的麻烦，接待的护士说一起去看看。于是，我 们前脚刚走，病人们后脚就跟了来。5 .续写情节安排：第一段：I turned to see all the other patients following me.（与开头句衔接）感到惊讶（为什么？）病人们跟过来的原因及他们的行动？（与下文开头句衔接）其中有位极有修车天赋的“病人”在其他病人的帮助 下鼓捣了一会儿，然后让我试车第二段：I said a quick prayer and turned the key.（与开头句衔接）车确实可以启动了我的心情和感激之情？对此事的感悟？下水作文下水作文I turned to see all the other patients following me. A puzzle flashed in my mind whether they just came to see my embarrassment. But when seeing their worried expression, I knew the opposite. Before I arrived at my dead car, someone had been one foot ahead of me, checking what was wrong with it on earth. Smiling at him, I handed him the key, waiting for a good result. Obviously, the patient showed great talent in fixing cars. After having checked all the possibilities raised by other patients, he located where the problem lay and tried to fix it. His confidence melted my worries. Few minutes later, he said I could try it now. (105 words)I said a quick prayer and turned the key. To my pleasant surprise, the car came back to life, its engine working merrily. I thanked the gifted patients, bowing to them again and again. No beautiful words could describe my earnest gratitude to the group seeming anti-social minutes before. Waving goodbye to those lovely and helpful people, I headed for home with great delight and satisfaction, for nothing was better than a group of strangers who wou1d be glad to offer their timely assistance to me. Indeed, it wasn' t an ordinary Valentine' s Day, but a day full of love and friendship, which would inspire me to provide necessary help to those in need. (104 words)参考范文I turned to see all the other patients following me. A bit puzzled, I went to my car and slid into the drivers seat. One of them called “Pop your hood!” So I pressed the button. Several others bent forward, most probably leaning in to check the engine. "The screw is loose, “ one assured me, “Trust me. I used to be a mechanic” . Having fetched the tool from his car, he began to twist it. It was not long before he straightened up to rest, rubbing his back. Unexpectedly, the other patients just volunteered to take his turn despite their own health condition. When the “mechanic” gave a thumbs-up, everyone called out together, “Try it now!” (106 words)I said a quick prayer and turned the key. The engine turned over immediately. A cheer went up. Several hands shut the hood. "Don' t make any stops on the way home, " the “mechanic" said. "Keep the car running till the battery gets a good charge. " I backed my car out of the space, then paused to wave at the crowd of people who' d saved the day. My Honda never stalled again. It turns out that my waiting room team had done a better job than my garage ever did. I guess that' s just what happens when people come together. And there, s no better valentine than that. (97 words)