新高考专用读后续写06人与动物类（故事构造三大套路）高考英语技巧与训练.docx

读后续写06：人与动物类Parti：经典例文（小狗救人）01Part2：人与动物故事构造套路03套路一：可爱型动物故事情节03套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节05套路三、主题升华句06Part3：人与动物场景素材积累07Part4： 灵7舌应用10例1：人与麻雀10Part5：高考真题再现12真题1：小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷1 12真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 15从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角 度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处，？要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题； 另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋， 后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017 年6月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年 6?月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020 年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临 沂市一模）。Parti：经典例文（小狗救人）Just as many families do at a point, Catherine chose to add a new family member by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kate' s birth, Catherine decided she wanted a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberman Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan.aside, spun round and galloped towards the helicopter. The moment we were into the helicopter, we collapsed, gasping with relief. As it took off, we could see the bear was hungrily eating the?bread?we had made. What a hungry bear! After we returned home?safe?and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.（07）Paragraph 1 :?Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. ?A familiar figure leaped out, ?rushed?towards me and waded into the water. Thank goodness, it was?Joe?who came to my rescue. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back. ?Frightened?and a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears. How I wished that my husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster. But, after a while, it turned out that Joe returned with one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck. He?struggled?to throw the rope to me and?shouted, “Catch! Open the door!”Paragraph 2:?I screamed that I couldn，t make it. ?At that moment, the sound of the raging water outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently. Worse still, the water came up to Joe' s waist and he almost lost his footing in the water. After several vain attempts, Joe?realized?that there was no chance to make it. He put every ounce of strength into getting close to me and said soothingly, Don't panic, honey! I'm here. With Joe，s help, I burst the door open, and Joe immediately tied the rope around my waist. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up inside me.Part4：灵活应用 例1：人与麻雀 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It's getting hot. It's time to put on lighter clothes and open up the windows. I can，t wait to do so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two daring sparrows （麻雀）had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and some other breadcrumbs （面包屑）on our kitchen counter.Actually, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to living alongside humans- similar to pet dogs.When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option, with 10/16no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never come to stop to feel the relationship with sparrows.I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows. She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made with her tongue. I have loved sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can，t stop observing and celebrating their dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house.Undoubtedly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we don， t consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried about their droppings （粪便）. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room.About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling "Oh, my God!”【答案】One day, they left some droppings in my husband 's reading room. They happened to dirty his important work reports on the desk. He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows. I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed down. I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals.About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God !” Thinking something similar happened again, I ran over to have a look. He was looking out of the window and said excitedly, "Look! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrow，s nest! They 're going to have babies of their own!” He was happy, like a child and unconsciously opened the closed window. After that, there are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者生活之处有许多麻雀，作者欢迎它们的到来，在后 院为它们准备了食物和落脚处，作者将它们当成了友好的邻居，只是有点担心它们的粪便。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：有一天，它们在我丈夫的书房里留下了一些粪便，所以应该写粪 便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼，要详细描述丈夫的动作和心理，与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段 开头是：大约两周后，我听到我丈夫说：“哦，天哪！”本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原 委，以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的转变等等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：do a thorough cleaning, break in, run over, have a look 等高级词汇；结果状语从句，如 He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows；宾 语从句，如 I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again； 定语从句，如 I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals 等高级句式。Part5：高考真题再现真题1：小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。'T m going to miss you so much, Poppy, “ said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions （情 绪）get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. "I guess this is it. ” he said. T 11 see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy' s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home. ”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn' t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn' t.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn, t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. "We' ve tried everything. ”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “ smiled Mom. "Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let' s get a little dog for Poppy. ”It didn, t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppyher nose onher nose onwelcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put it. Her tail began wagging （摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween.【参考答案1Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn' t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低下头，好奇地看着 它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻了过来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞， 立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩耍，高高兴兴地互相跑着。A few weeks later, the boy ar ri ved home from the uni vers i ty. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. "Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. "It' s Poppy' s new companion. " said Mom. (155)几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在想念父母和狗。当男 孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是 谁？ ”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。"妈妈说。【参考答案2Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. It was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. "Poppy, isn' t it a sweet dog? It's for you!” Mom said in a soft voice. s your companion.z，Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend.爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的神情。它摇着尾巴， 试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从 盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗？ ”这是给你准备的！”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这 是你的同伴。”波比很高兴，但又有点紧张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不 久之后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy, growling and sniffing at his feet. Immediately, he bent down, stroked its head and asked, “What an adorable puppy! Whose is it? His parents smiled and replied, z，We got it for Puppy because.，z Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms. Tears burred his vision as he murmured, Poppy,I miss you, too. And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like xWaby in his arms.从大学回家。波比扑向他，兴奋地舔着他的手和脸，她的眼睛闪闪发光，她的尾巴剧烈地摆动。男孩 花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗，在他的脚边咆哮和嗅。他立刻弯下腰，抚摸它的头，问： “多么可爱的小狗啊！是谁的？”他的父母笑了笑，回答说：“我们给波比买的，因为”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动，把那个老女孩抱在怀里。他喃喃地说：“波比，我也想你。”然后静静地，波 比抬起头，看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears 一 like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I' m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws （爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter （相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn' t last through 30 more minutes of the bear' s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but doesn, t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar （吼叫），the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Para 2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.One possible version:Para 1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and can to the bread. But it wasn' t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again. Para 2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. "Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camero and photographed the rare scene 一 we were robbed by a polar bear!几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次他似乎更凶狠了，而 且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包， 扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。 第2部分：就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！ ”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们很快就上了飞机，兴 奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑 去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！Catherine was hopeful this would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as sharing, learning to love and responsibility to care for animals. She was looking forward to having the dog join the family.Hearing of Khan' s rough background,