新高考专用读后续写09历险型（故事构造三大套路）高考英语技巧与训练.docx

读后续写09：历险型Parti：经典例文（森林遇险）01Part2：历险类细节描写03海上遇难03洪水04地震04火灾05受伤05丛林逃生06Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路” 06套路一：恶劣环境要烘托06套路二：转折思维技巧好07套路三：万能升华要牢记07Part4： 灵7舌应用08例1：山洞遇险08Part5：高考真题再现10真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】 10真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】 11Parti：经典例文（森林遇险）Brady?was a recently retired search and?rescue?dog.He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al' s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods onfire.Windblownfire.Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox （火绒箱） and the thunderstorm wasn' t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach?pulled?Steve? s arm. "Let' s go! We can make it back to?the river?we crossed today. Steve pulled Brady s leash （皮带）?and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was?full of smoke, and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river*?Brady?barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They' d never make it through that. They would have to find another?escape route. The小心：cautious/ careful害怕：scared/ frightened【点睛】高分句型 1. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.（运用 T as引导让步状语从句时的倒装结构）高分句型 21. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which we had made before （is 用了 which引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型 3. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.（运用了强结构） Part5：高考真题再现真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad' s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm, “ he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze （吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn, t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don' t be lute for supper, " Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don, t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven （编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2Ife had no idea where we were and it got dark.Possible Version: Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. "We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper. ” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired. Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, "Don' t worry, my son. I remember there is a rive。near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home. ” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a Fate dinner. 真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】 第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled（骑行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. "Man, that? s a big dog!” he thought. Butwhen he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn, t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac' s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac' s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac' s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase （追赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he' d be easy caught up and the wolf' s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn' t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.Possible versions: 1Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac' s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off. Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die, “ said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again.（续写词数：158） dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was?trained?to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.?Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him, but he didn, t come back.?They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope （斜坡）. He couldn, t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn, t have a clue which way. They hadn' t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him. 注意：1 .所续写的短文词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：“Where， ve you been?" Steve cried.Paragraph 2：?Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. 参考范文： Paragraph 1“Where've you been?z，Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they' d just climbed. When Steve still didn' t get it, Brady grabbed the boy，s jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again, urgently, “OK, big guy,“ Steve decided. Paragraph 2Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they' d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady' s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily 02/13forward until they jumped in cool,running water. "Brady, you did it!”第1段：“你去哪儿了？史蒂夫叫道，布雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。当史蒂夫仍 然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。信息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。他当然记得他叔 叔说过布雷辿救他的命，但那是很久以前的事了。他还能让他们度过难关吗？布雷辿又紧急地拉了一下,“0K, 大个子，”史蒂夫决定第2段：布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。这只大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。他经常改变方向。 他们走了多久，史蒂夫不知道。他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带，继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。听到哗 哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。河流！孩子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。“布 雷迪，你做到了！”Part2：历险类细节描写海上遇难天气*The sky is darkened with gloomy clouds. Lighting flashed across the sky, followed by a clap of thunder. Minutes later, there came a downpour.*The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face.海上*The sea boiled in the storm.*The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.船*Leaned sideways*The ship was rocking up and down in the restless sea.*The crashing waves filled their boat with water faster than they could empty it.救援人*But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore."Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board on the way and shouted at a stranger to call the police.*Patting their faces to wake them up, I continuously told them to be strong.遇难者*She calmed down to keep the rhyme of breathing so that she could breathe evenly.*1 felt extremely exhausted (apparently worn-out)*Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body.*Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.*But I still shouted in my head: keep on.*He saw an airplane flying overhead. But with no flashlight, he was invisible in the vast ocean.*He took off his yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flagged them if they came back.*In sheer desperation, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us. Thank you, lord.*Quite soon, I felt strong armspull me out of the sea onto the board.（摘自杭二中参考答案） 救援过程the water,.the water,.huge wave separated them.*Then he dragged her upper from救人未遂*He held her hand tightly but a*He fought the waves and strove*He fought the waves and stroveto catch her, but failed, she was drifted away.其他"Energy returning magically, he"Energy returning magically, herose to his feet and took immediate action.*They waved the flag and screamed for help.*Bear Grylls caught sight of the shabby boat and two men in rags.*They were taken on board and thanked Edward over and over again.*From them on, he made up his mind never to take any risks unless he could ensure tight safety. Because it was simply his stubborn conducts and his ignorance of. . that.洪水*The water kept rising. Two hours passed. He did not dare to move an inch for fear of slipping."Another two hours later, he noticed that the water level went down enough that he could try an escape, from keeping in one position for hours, he slowly unfolded his bodies.*Cautiously and steadily, he made his way forward to the entrance.地震*Deep cracks opened up in the streets.*The wall caved in.*Huge buildings collapsed, sending clouds of dust into the air.*The animals grew restless as if in anticipation of a disaster.火灾屋子"Fanned by the wind, the house was bathed in an immense stream of flames.*The house was bathed in an immense stream of flames.*The roaring fire swallowed the whole house. 烟*Dense smoke swirled and billowed and the fumes made her choke for a moment.*Thc thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe.人的反应*Through the office door, she saw flames climbing up the wall.*Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging.*She clung to her, terrified by the leaping flames.*Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran out of the house.*Shielding her noise from the smoke, she prompted him to run for safety.*When he opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.*By then, with their mouths choked with smoke, both of them feel the heat engulfing everything. 受伤*She turned around, only to find Tim beaten to the ground in extreme danger.Mfraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him.*With all her strength, she instantly seated him onto the car.*He pulled her towards him with full strength.*Her body was limp and she was not breathing.*He scooped her into his arms and struggled to feet. 伤情*He was attacked violently and covered with scratches.*There was a trickle of blood from the wound.治疗*She applies a clean towel to the wound and press firmly on it to stop the bleeding.*Wash and stitched the wound*Apply some medicine to his wound丛林逃生意识到不见了*He scanned around the forest for her. "Eurus?” he shouted again.*her heart dropped as he realized that she was gone.*he spared no effort to find her, but it was all in vain."Thinking back to all of the good times that he had shared with her, he realized that he loved her and he wanted nothing more than for her to come back.逃生*He tried to get on faster, but he could not find the way out of the bush.*He was getting tired because Ceil was too heavy to carry for a young boy.*At last he came into an open space with a large pool in the middle.*He quickly soaked his clothes, for the approaching smoke could choke them.救援*He immediately ran out for searching, sb running after him.*My poor children, the flame could have burnt them to death. ' thought sb desperately.*While the