初中九年级英语写作专题训练50题含范文.docx

初中九年级英语写作专题训练50题含范文一、看图作文1.假如你是刘琪，现在正在参加学校组织的夏令营(summer camp)活动。你的英 国笔友Susan得知此消息后，非常关心你的住宿情况，请你根据以下图片提示，给她 写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你住的房间。要求：1.写电子邮件时须结合图片，内容可适当发挥；2.不少于5句话。电子邮件的 格式和开头已给出，不计入总句数。Dear Susan,I'm in our school's summer camp now. I have a nice room.Yours,Liu Qi【答案】例文:Dear Susan,I'm in our school's summer camp now. I have a nice room. A bed, a sofa, a bookcase, a desk and a chair are in it. There is a computer on the desk. Some pictures of animals and a clock are on the wall. I like the toy bear on the sofa. It brown. A phone is on the sofa, too. You can call me at 638-7599.Yours, LiuOi【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求根据图片内容介绍自己的房间，写作时应承接开头， 将图片中的物品介绍齐全，可适当添加细节。2.写作指导：本文应以第三人称描述房间里的物品，时态采用一般现在时，先介绍大 件家具，再描述具体装饰物以及它们的位置。写作时注意主谓一致，适当变化句型， 避免单一重复。2.School ncUvitM、假如你是李华，最近，你看到TEENS上正在开展以“Colourful school activities”为 主题的征文活动。请结合图片提示，介绍学校开展的活动，并陈述你参加此活动的理 由或收获。1 .征文稿要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2 .思维导图非限定性内容，仅供参考；3 .词数100个左右，征文稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4 .征文稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。My school life is colourful, especially the school activities.I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy.【答案】例文Colourful school activitiesMy school life is colourful, especially the school activities. In the past three years, I have taken part in all kinds of school activities. I like singing and I'm a member of the Music Club. We get together to practise singing twice a week. Singing can also cheer me up when I am in a bad mood. I sometimes go to the Drawing Club. Everything is quiet and peaceful while drawing. I hope to be a world-known artist.Besides, our school held the sports meeting last week. I ran the third but I felt satisfied. I'm looking forward to the Reading Week. We can share thoughts with each other. At the same time, I also participated in the Hope Project and the Arbor Day activity as a volunteer. Helping others and the environment makes me feel fulfilled.I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文，以“Colourftil school activities”为主题根据内 容提示介绍学校开展的活动，并讲述自参加活动的理由和收获。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。正 文可分为两个部分：第一部分介绍自己平时会参加的社团活动；第二部分介绍自己参 加的某些学校组织的活动。写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示进行描述，同时注 意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展：文章做到思路清晰，层次 分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。3 .请根据下列图片展开合理的想象，以“The Ant and the Grasshopper”为题写一个 故事。要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；2字数：110词左右。The Ant and the Grasshopper【答案】例文The Ant and the GrasshopperIt is in summer. It is very hot. The ant works hard. He carries food home. He is thirsty and tired. The grasshopper laughs at him. "You're so foolish. The weather is so hot. Why don't you have a rest?” Autumn comes, and the ant goes on carrying food home. However, the grasshopper sings all day. Winter comes, it's windy and cold. The ant stays at home. His home is warm and comfortable. He has a lot of food to eat. However, the grasshopper is cold and hungry. He doesn't have any food at home. The ant comes out. He doesn't see the grasshopper. He is dead because of his laziness.【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述一只蚂蚁和蚱螭的故事。 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。结合图片并按照时间顺序 进行描述，写作时要保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。4 .根据图示，将它们编写成一个有趣的故事，并将你的推测写进故事中，120词 左右。2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：land, man, UFO, alien, chase, must, could/might, can'tMy neighbour John lives alone. He had an unbelievable experience three days ago.【答案】My neighbor John lives alone. He had an unbelievable experience.Three days ago, a huge UFO suddenly landed in front of his house. There might be something visiting him. Then a short alien got out of the strange UFO and knocked at John's window. He was too scared to move away. After a moment the door opened little by little. He saw an ugly alien walking up to him. It can*t be a human being. *Help! Help ! ” John cried loudly, running out of his house. Many neighbors were woken up by the scary noise. The alien noticed him at once. It was chasing after the poor man. At that moment, the rain poured down. Everything disappeared when John turned back. There could be something strange around us.Do you believe it or not?【详解】根据题目要求，可知本文属于图画作文，首先需要理清几幅图画之间的脉络 关系，找出有趣所在，主旨主题所在；文章主要讲述了作者一个邻居突遇飞碟和外星 人的有趣故事。然后确定文章所使用的时态，语态，人称：文章使用一般过去时态， 第三人称为主。接下来需要确定文章的段落，文章主要由三个段落组成，第二段讲述 了大部分内容；注意头脑风暴出即将用到的句型，短语，连词；最后整理成文，并检 查修改。点睛：看图作文的写作从整体上可分为两个过程：一，感性认识过程，即通过画 面直接获得信息的过程（究竟画面展示了一个什么情景）；二，理性认识过程，即针对 画面让学生发挥想象力，挖掘画面间的内在联系融入自己的思想与见解（画面的内涵 是什么）。写作过程具体渗透到五个环节（一“抓'抓主题，二"列''列要点，三"变'变句 式，四“连”连成篇，五“检'检查错）中去。二、材料作文5.在父亲节来临之际，学校英语报teens本周举办一期“感恩我的爸爸” （Thanks to My Dad）为话题的征文活动，你准备向报社投稿，内容如下：1、介绍爸爸的外貌特征、兴趣爱好等；2、感恩爸爸的原因；3、爸爸曾经陪你度过地难忘的一天。写作要求：（1）表达流畅，逻辑清楚：（2）用到所有提示，可适当添加内容：（3）不能 出现真实姓名、班级；（4）字数70词。【答案】例文：Thanks to My DadMy father is tall and strong, with black hair and big shining eyes. He likes telling jokes. As a doctor, he not only can help with people's physical health but also can help with people's hearts. He is my hero in my heart. What touched me most happened last year. I was crazy about computer games so I couldn't focus on my school work. Noticing this, my father wrote to me every day to talk with me about it like an elder brother. Finally, I got out of my trouble.On my 15th birthday, I went to Hainan with my father. We had an unforgettable day.Thanks to my father, I am getting better and better.【详解】1,题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应先介绍爸爸的外貌、兴趣 等，然后介绍感恩爸爸的原因，最后介绍爸爸曾经陪你度过地难忘的一天，可适当发 挥。2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容：时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为 主：介绍爸爸的兴趣爱好以及感恩爸爸的原因时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性 强，保证条理清晰。6.假如你的英语老师叫陈华，请根据所提供的信息，以My Teacher's Past Li优为 题，写一篇60词左右的英语小短文，介绍她过去的生活情况。NameChen HuaBorn inA small village in ZhuchengBom onJune 18th, 1990Primary SchoolTaolin Primary SchoolFirst English TeacherMr. ZhangCharacter（性格）Friendly【答案】参考范文：My Teacher's Past LifeChen Hua is my English teacher. She was born in a small village in Zhucheng on June 18th, 1990. The name of her primary school is Taolin Primary School. Mr. Zhang was her first English teacher. At that time, she was friendly to everyone. I think all of her teachers and classmates liked her very much. AH of us love her. She is a nice teacher.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格提示要点，介绍英语老师的过去，写作时要 运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过 去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。7.假如你是李明，Marry是你的英语老师，同时也是你最喜欢的老师。请根据下 面的内容提示，以My favorite teacher为题，写一一篇作文，向大家介绍一下Marry老 师。题目已给出，内容可以适当发挥。内容提示：1、Marry老师今年30岁，来自美国，生日在5月25日；2、周一到周五，我们都有英语课；3、英语课既轻松又有趣；4、她热爱体育，放学后经常跟我们一起打篮球；5、我也想成为一名英语老师。写作要求：1、短文须包括以上信息，提示词必须使用，可适当发挥；2、字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；3、词数:60词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；4、文中不可出现真实的姓名和学校名。提示词：often （经常）birthday （生日）My Favorite TeacherMy favorite teacher is Marry,【答案】参考范文：My favorite teacher is Marry，she is 30 years old and comes from the US. Her birthday is on May 25lh. We have English classes from Monday to Friday. And the English class is funny and relaxing. She enjoys sports. She often plays basketball with us after school. All of us likeher very much. And I also want to be an English teacher in the future!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲类写作。在写作时应承接短文开头：内容须包 括提示信息，提示词必须使用，根据主题可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时，特别要注意 主谓一致。适当使用连词，保证文章要连贯、条理清楚，要叙述完整、字迹工整，表 达准确，保证语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确。8.假设Sammy是你的外教老师，请你根据Sammy的照片和所给提示，用英语 写一篇短文介绍她。注意：1 .内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；2 .文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称：3 .词数70左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。1. From the USA2. Looks :.3. Hobbies and why:(1) singing, why.(2) reading, why.4. Be good at： sports, badminton5. Likes： Chinese foodI have a new English teacher. Her name is Sammy.【答案】例文:I have a new English teacher. Her name is Sammy.Sammy comes from the USA. She is tall and slim, and she wears a pair of glasses. Her hair is long. She looks very young and modem. She likes singing very much because she sings very well. She also enjoys reading. She thinks reading can help her learn more about the world. She is good at sports. She likes playing badminton best. She practises playing badminton for an hour every Monday and Friday after work.Sammy thinks China is a great country with a long history. People in China are really friendly and helpful. And Chinese food is very delicious.Sammy is nice to us. She loves China very much. We all think she is not only a good teacher but also a good friend.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据照片及提示内容介绍外教老师Sammy,包含 Sammy的国籍、外貌、爱好、擅长的运动、对中国的看法和情感及个人对她的评价几 个方面，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。文章可分为四段式： 承接文章的第一段介绍Sammy这个人；第二段具体介绍Sammy的国籍、外貌、爱 好、擅长的运动；第三段介绍Sammy对中国的看法和感情；最后一段收尾，对 Sammy作出评价。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。9.读下面关于李文变化的文章。请根据问题提示，用自己的话写出大意总结，词数 6080。He Studies Harder Than He Used toLi Wen is a normal 15-year-old boy from the countryside. He works very hard and does well in school. It is hard to believe that he used to have difficulties in school. When he was a little boy, he seldom caused any problems, and his family spent a lot of time together. However, things began to change a few years ago. His parents moved to the city to look for jobs, and his grandparents came to take care of him. But he missed his parents so much and he often felt lonely and unhappy.Li Wen's unhappiness began to influence his schoolwork. He became less interested in studying. Sometimes he was absent from classes and failed his examinations. Finally, Li Wen's parents made the decision to send him to a boarding school. However, Li Wen was shy and was not able to make friends quickly in school. He found life there difficult. One day he told his teacher that he wanted to leave the school. His teacher was worried about him and she called his parents. She advised them to talk with their son in person. So his parents took a 24- hour train and a 5-hour bus ride to get to Li Wen's school.They had a long talk. 44It was exactly what I needed,he said. 4tNow I understand that even though they are busy, they are always thinking of me. They take pride in everything good that I do.”After that, Li Wen's parents had much more communication with their son than they used to. Now Li Wen has really changed. He become more outgoing and make some good friends in school. He even joined the school basketball team and became active in many other activities. 4fcFm much happier now, and I work even harder than I used to. I know my parents love me and they're always proud of me, says Li Wen. "It's very important for parents to be there for their children.1. Who is Li Wen?2. What problems did he have when his parents moved to the city to work? What did his parents do then?3. What did he want to do one day?4. What did his teacher do?5. Did the talk change his life? What is he like now?【答案】例文：Li Wen is a 15-year-old boy from the countryside. When his parents moved to the city to work, he became less interested in studying. One day he told his teacher that he wanted to leave the school. His teacher advised his parents to talk with their son in person. After a long talk, Li Wen realized that his parents love him and take pride of what he do. Now Li Wen has really changed. He become more outgoing and make some friends in school.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但注意写作时要按照问题提示，写出 文章的关键事件，同时要注意人称的变化和词数的限制。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述事件内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，用一 般现在时描述客观事实；描述事件时，应突出重点事件；人物的的背景、心理变化的 起因和变化结果等需要简洁凝练，同时保证条理清晰。10. 2020年6月23日上午，淮安市首届以“龙舟竞渡迎端午”为主题的大运河龙 舟公开赛在淮安清江浦区隆重开幕。这项活动的开展不仅弘扬了中国传统文化，也给 人们带来了生活的乐趣。请围绕“端午节”这话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：1 .叙述你今年如何度过端午小长假（包括时间、地点、人物、经过）：2 .你对这些活动的感悟（活动的意义）；3 .今后，你将如何弘扬祖国传统文化（经常参加有关传统文化的活动）参考词汇：聚餐 have a big dinner；看龙舟赛 watch the dragon boat race；包粽子 make rice dumplings；讲屈原的故事 tell the story of Qu Yuan.注意：1 .文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2 .词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in ourcountry.【答案】例文:The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country. Fil never forget thisyear's Dragon Boat Festival. I had a good time on vacation. I did a lot of interesting things. I helped my mother make rice dumplings. It was difficult but fun. Then I had a big dinner with my family. It was a happy time to be with my family. My parents told me the story of Qu Yuan. I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. One of the most exciting things was watching the dragon boat races. People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan. These activities not only carry forward the traditional Chinese culture, but also bring people the joy of life.In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival. Festivals play an important part in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，写一篇短文介绍一下今年如何度过端午小 长假，对这些活动的感悟以及将如何弘扬祖国传统文化，叙述如何度过端午小长假时 用一般过去时，表达感悟时可用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称上主要用第一人称和 第三人称。2 .例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连 贯，使用了一些固定句式。3 ,高分亮点：短语： have a good time； help sb. do sth.； one of the most exciting things； in order to ； bring people the joy of life； play an important part ino句型:动词不定式表目的 People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan.形式主语 It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.宾语从句 In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival.11.冼星海是中国最伟大的作曲家之一。请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇关于冼 星海的介绍文章。1 .他于1905年出生于澳门，与1945年去世。2 .曾经在巴黎学习音乐。3 .在1939年用六天时间写出了黄河大合唱(The Yellow River Cantata)。4 .他把中国音乐和西方音乐融合在一起，使全世界的人了解了中国音乐。他的许 多歌曲都很受欢迎，流行了六十多年。5 .他被称为“人民音乐家(People's Musician)要求：1.不能逐句翻译。2.词数为80左右。【答案】例文Xian Xinghai was one of the greatest musicians in China. He was born in Macao in 1905. He once studied music in Paris. Xian was famous for the song The Yellow River Cantata. He wrote it in 1939. He spent only six days finishing it. He was good at mixing Chinese music with Western music. He wrote many songs. His music made people all over the world learn more about Chinese music. Some of his songs have been popular for more than sixty years. His music made him famous in China. That's why he was called “People's musician”. He died in 1945.【详解】I.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，介绍中国最伟大的作曲家之一冼星 海，要求给出了 5点提示：他的出生及去世的时间，学习经历及在音乐方面的贡献。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称；时态采用一般过去时态，写作中适当用一些连 词，短语或句型；使文章看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也符合语法结构，内容包 括每一个要点提示，可适当发挥注意语言的逻辑性。12.“双减”后我们的作业少了，学科类补习班也少了，同学们是否担心自己的学 习成绩会因此受影响呢？在此背景下，你有什么好的学习方法吗？请以“The fim ways to learn English”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们分享一些 有趣的学习英语的方法。1 .要点：1）你有哪些有趣的学习方法；2）这些方法为何有趣；3）你的感受是什么。 2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2）词数100左右。The fun ways to learn English【答案】范文：The fun ways to learn EnglishEnglish learning is of great importance to us. Here, I will introduce some fun ways to learn English. To begin with, I watch English movies that are full of humor. Second, I learn English by singing some English songs or listening to them. Last, I often watch popular YouTube videos for some minutes.When I watch English movies that are full of humor, I can feel happy and relaxed. In this way, I can learn English very easily. When I listen to English songs, I not only practice my English listening but also im