高考英语读后续写素材积累讲义.pdf
英语高考读后续写素材积累一、具 有 人 物 特 点 的 语 言 描 写7句1 She said she wanted to live somewhere removed,detached（分 开的），where neighbors wouldnt stare at her belly,point at her,snicker（窃笑）,or,worseyet,assault（攻击）her with insincere kindnesses.Nana的话语体现了她被人看不起的内心的感受：想远离这群对她嘲笑的人们。这些人是不尊重她的：stare at,point at,snicker（窃笑），assault（攻击）herwith insincere kindnesseso 她 是 自 卑 的。2 But he said he liked the enchanting sounds the Arabic words made as they rolled offhis tongue.He said they comforted him,eased his heart.这 段 话 表 达 了 玛 丽 雅 姆 父 亲 对 语 言 的 感 受：喜欢这些迷人的声音enchanting sounds；rolled off his tongue；comforted him,eased hisheart o3 If you really care about her,then you make her see that she belongs here at homewith her mother.There is nothing out there for her.Nothing but rejection andheartache.M这是玛丽雅姆母亲娜娜对玛丽雅姆老师说的一段话。因为玛丽雅姆想 出 去 与 同 龄 人 一 起 读 书，老 师 为 她 到 她母亲那里去说情。于是娜娜 说 这 番 话。make her see that she belongs here at home with herm o th e r,让 她 明 白 她 属 于 这 里，而且外面只会给她拒绝与令人心痛的 事 情。There is nothing out there for her.Nothing but rejection andheartache.我们可 以 看 出 她 的 思 想 是 有 局 限 性 的。可是为何她要这么说？4 Thats not a good idea,“said Nana.Her voice was calm,had the controlled,politetone she used around Jalil,but Mariam could feel her hard,accusing glare.细节描写:对声音的形象描述calm,had the controlled,polite to n e冷 静，控 制 性 的 礼 貌 语 气。作 者 还 从 听 者 角 度 来 描 述 Mariam could feelher hard,accusing glare。在 听 的 时 候，玛丽雅姆能感觉到母亲严厉与 责 备 的 目 光。从直接与间接的角度来描述母亲娜娜说话的样子以及 话 语 传 达 的 言 外 之 意。5 What rich lies!Nana said after Jalil left.Rich man telling rich lies.He never tookyou to any tree.And dont let him charm you.He betrayed us.your beloved father.Hecast us out.He cast us out of his big fancy house like we were nothing to him.He didit happily79这段话明玛丽亚姆母亲娜娜的辛酸：未能受到丈夫的尊重，被排挤在外。她的话也表示了她对丈夫的控诉：He never took you to any tree.He betrayed us；Hecast us out；He cast us out of his big fancy house like we were nothing to him.Hedid it happily.这些话也深刻揭示了当时社会对待娜娜这些底层人的冷漠以及不公。6 Nana said,Learn this now and learn it well,my daughter:Like a compass needlethat points north,a mans accusing finger always finds a woman.Always.Youremember that,Mariam.”娜娜要女儿玛丽亚姆记得男人永远不会对女人满意，男人总是责怪女人a mansaccusing finger always finds a woman。而 且 要 求 她 女 儿：Always.Youremember that,Mariam.这也为玛丽亚姆之后不幸的婚姻生活做了铺垫。她丈夫Rasheed对她的还不仅仅是责怪，而是虐待。娜娜的教育也造就了之后玛丽亚姆的忍耐与屈从。7 And,believe me,“Nana said,“it was a relief to your father having me out ofsight.It suited him just fine.”这段话表明娜娜对于丈夫已经不抱幻想。她已经彻底领教了社会的残酷，丈夫的无情。所以她才会说:believe me,it was a relief to your father having me out ofsight多么痛的领悟。二、细 腻 的 表 情 与 情 绪 描 写1 0句IWhen Nana saw the bowl,her face flushed red and her upper lip shivered,and hereyes,both the lazy one and the good,settled on Mariam in a flat,unblinking way.看到碗的反应，神态。写作技巧：作者从脸，嘴唇、眼睛等各个方面进行描述。her face：flushed redher upper lip：shiveredher eyes：settled on Mariam in a flat,unblinking way.flush flAf：When my girl friend feels embarrassed,her face flushed tomato red.当我的女朋友感到难堪的时候，她的脸就变得通红。拓展学习：a flush of anger/embarrassment/excitement etca sudden feeling of anger,embarrassment etc=surgeShe felt a sudden flush of anger.flush同义词：blush chase color even flat full level redden rush pale2 But later,when he broached Nana,she dropped the knife with which she was slicing（切片）onions.What for?”用具体动作dropped the k n if e,刀 子 掉 了 ,表示惊讶。拓展学习：drop同 义 词：abandon cease descend dismiss dive end fall give up letgo plunge stop常用词组drop across偶然遇见drop away（一个一个地）离开，散去drop behind落 伍，落后，落在 之后drop by 美 顺便访问一下drop on s b.顺便走访（某人）；顺便进去drop into 1.跌入，落入2.偶然进入（某地）3.不知不觉地进入（某种状态）drop upon 偶然遇到；偶然发现dropout退出，（中、小学生）中途退学，脱离drop through落空；毫无结果；不再被讨论；彻底失败drop t o 下降到；跌到3 She kept her gaze to the ground,on her feet,stepping on the gray stone path.Shewas aware of the presence of people in the garden,murmuring,stepping aside,as sheand Jalil walked past.She sensed the weight of eyes on her,looking down from thewindows upstairs.描述Mariam到 Jalil家沉重的心情。她的目光：盯着地面，然后移到她的脚，踩在灰色的石板路上。She kept hergaze to the ground,on her feet,stepping on the gray stone path.这句话将她这种紧张不自在都体现出来了。她的感觉：她感觉到大家都看着她sensed the weight of eyes on h e r,反映出玛丽雅姆是个敏感的女孩，第 六 感 告 诉 她，人 们 关 注 她，而且不太 友 好。文中多处使用分词murmuring,stepping,looking down,语言简洁有力。4 When she saw her friend at the door,his white beard and his amiable,toothlesssmile,Mariam felt tears stinging the corners of her eyes again.哭的细节描写：felt tears stinging the corners of her eyes again（文章中多次出现toothless smile来描述老师的外貌，是累赘吗？为何这么写？用重复的手法强化老师的特定形象，一个人因为关爱，因为美德，即使外表不好看，在我们的心里，他再丑都是美，都是他独有的特点）5 I keep,“Mariam began.She had to stop,feeling like a rock had lodged itself in herthroat.I keep thinking of what she said to me before I left.She一“表 示 难 过 的 细 节 描 写：feeling like a rock had lodged itself in herthro at感 觉 就 像 一 块 石 头 落 在 她 的 喉 咙 里，表明她难过的心情。6 Mariams chest was tightening.The room was reeling up and down,theground shifting beneath her feet.听到消息后，Mariam的反应Mariams chest was tightening,而且连房间也 reeling up and down 上 下 摇 摇 欲 坠，地面 shifting beneath her feet在 脚 下 移 动，很形象地表明她的震惊与不能接受。7 He shook the rice angrily from his fingers and pushed the plate away,spilling sauceand rice on the sofrah.Mariam watched as he stormed out of the living room,then outof the house,slamming the door on his way out.表达生气的细节描写：shook,pushed the plate away,stormed out,slamming the door 一 连 串 的 动 作 表 示 了 玛 丽 雅 姆 丈 夫 的 生 气 情 绪。8 Whats the matter?Mariam asked,hating the apologetic tone of her voice.Shecould feel her pulse quickening,her skin shrinking.玛 丽 雅 姆 问 的 时 候，憎 恨 自 己 抱 歉 的 口 气 hating the apologetic toneof her v o ice o 她 是 个 善 良 的 女 人，可 在 那 样 的 社会她无奈无助。她的 生 活 是 依 附 与 她 丈 夫 的。而且她已经害怕她丈夫这种粗暴的行为,却 无 能 为 力。她 的 脉 搏 加 快，皮 肤 起 皱 She could feel her pulsequickening,her skin shrinking o9 There was an unpleasant hum in Mariams head.Her throat burned.She drank someof the water.表达Mariam到楼下后与大家见面后的紧张,an unpleasant hum in Mariamshead.Her throat burned010 She was in a stranger9s house,with all its different rooms and its smell of cigarettesmoke,with its unfamiliar cupboards full of unfamiliar utensils,its heavy,dark greencurtains,and a ceiling she knew she could not reach.用 描 述陌生的周围环境 来 表 达 玛 丽 亚 姆 在 新 家 的 孤 单：with all itsdifferent rooms；with its unfamiliar cupboards full of unfamiliarutensils,其 中 一 个 d iffe re n t与 两 个 unfam iliar更明确表明了她在陌生 环 境 中 的 不 自 在。
