读后续写：老奶奶帮杰克圆棒球梦+讲义-2023届高三英语写作专项.docx

（2023年湖南湘潭统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。“Bye, Mom! Don't forget to make my pie!” shouted 12-year-old Jake after kissing his mother, Susan, goodbye.He was anxiously waiting for the bus. Moments later, the bus pulled over, and Jake hopped in, assuming it was just going to be an ordinary ride to school. "Luckily, Mom gave me $6. Otherwise I'd have to walk all the way to school," he thought.The bus came to a stop, picking up Christel, a 56-year-old woman from the next stop. She was smelly and looked dirty. Some passengers frowned at her, but she was least bothered about them. Moments later, she trembled through the crowd toward an empty seat next to Jake.“Ticket, please?!” the conductor said loudly, staring at her. Christers face slowly started to go red. "One second, I'm looking for my purse/ she replied. "I.uh.I don't have money. I forgot to bring my purse,“ Christel stammered 吉2吉巴巴士也说），embarrassed.“Lady, this is not a charity ride that picks up beggars for free. I'm stopping the bus right now. Get out!” yelled the conductor as the crowd of passengers turned toward Christel all at once.Jake witnessed everything and was disappointed at how the conductor treated the poor woman. Then he remembered he still had some change. "Here is your $3.Give her a ticket," he said to the conductor, throwing the money into his hand.“Thank you, sweetheart. I am forever grateful to you! What is your name, dear?” said Christel."I'm Jake. That's okay. I just did what I should do/5 replied Jake, taking Christel's words of gratitude casually.They talked about Jake's school life. "I want to become a baseball player, but my school does not have such facilities. I don't want to trouble my mom. She's already working hard in the restaurant. My father passed away in an accident two years ago J revealed Jake.“Alright, Grandma! We've arrived at my school. I'll leave now.Bye-bye!”Christel was touched by Jake's warm heart. She stared a second time at his school, watching him disappear inside the gate.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day Christel paid a surprising visit to the school in her expensive car.Jake didn't realize a bigger surprise was waiting for him outside the principal's office.【答案】The next day Christel paid a surprising visit to the school in her expensive car. Jake was shocked to see her outside his classroom. "I came here to see you. Please follow me to your principafs office J said Christel, confusing Jake, who had no idea how his life would change. Christel greeted the principal and told him about her encounter with Jake, expressing gratitude for Jake's help. Christel turned out to be a wealthy and successful woman. "You must be really proud of your student!” she told the principal.Jake didn't realize a bigger surprise was waiting for him outside the principal's office. "Jake, honey, do you mind visiting your field?” asked Christel. Jake did as she told, hurrying to the school playground. Christel had hired top-class designers to change the ground into a big ballpark. Jake couldn't believe his own eyes, staring at the latest equipment for the new ballpark. Christel helped to hire an experienced baseball coach for the school. Christel smiled happily, watching Jake and his friends running in the field.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。12岁的杰克上学迟到了，他坐 上公交车赶赴学校。途中来了一位衣着肮脏且忘带钱包的56岁的 克里斯特尔太太。正当售票员要把付不起车费的克里斯特尔太太 赶下公交车时，杰克站出来为克里斯特尔太太买了车票。二人在 乘车途中进行了真诚的交谈，从谈话中克里斯特尔太太了解到杰 克梦想成为棒球运动员，杰克的妈妈在一家饭店打工，父亲两年前因为意外去世。克里斯特尔被杰克温暖的心感动了。在杰克下车进学校后，她又一次盯着他的学校，看着他消失在大门里。第一步：段落续写：结合第一段的首句“第二天，克里斯特尔开着她那辆昂贵的汽 车，意外地来到了学校。”可知，接下来的段落可以描写在学校克 里斯特尔见到杰克后，告诉他跟自己来到校长的办公室，办公室 里克里斯特尔向校长讲了自己和杰克的邂逅。结合第二段的首句“杰克没有意识到校长办公室外还有更大的 惊喜在等着他。，可知，接下来的段落可以描写克里斯特尔带杰克 到学校的棒球场。看到已经焕然一新的球场，同时配了最新的设 备，杰克吃惊地盯着。克里斯特尔已经聘请了一流的设计师把原 来的球场改造成一个大棒球场，同时帮助学校聘请了一位经验丰 富的棒球教练。杰克和朋友高兴地在球场上奔跑。第二步：续写线索：来到学校跟随来到校长办公室讲述两人的邂逅带着 来到球场看到改造后的球场激动地奔跑开心地笑了第三步：词汇激活【行为类】拜访：see/visit/pay a visit to问候：greet/send his respects to/extend greetings to表达：express/show/describe【情绪类】感到震惊的：shocked/astonished/surprised开心地：happily/pleasantly【点睛】【高分句型1】“I came here to see you. Please follow me to your principaFs office J said Christel confusing Jake, who had no idea how his life would change.（运用了现在分词作状语和非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Jake couldn't believe his own eyes, staring at the latestequipment for the new ballpark.（运用 了现在分词作状语）