第14讲英语写作的8个闪光句型（原卷版）中考英语一轮复习培优全攻略（上海专用）.docx

第14讲英语写作的8个闪光句型及劭器环【知识梳理1】闪光句型之I动词短语和介词短语1 have a great effect on .（对有很大的影响）例句：抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。Smoking has a great effect on our health o.enables+ Object（受词）/ makes it possible for sb + to + V （使能够）例句：听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed o旅行能丰富人们的生活。Travelling enables our life to be enriched0.By +Ving, xx can xx （通过能够）例句：通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy o通过阅读，我们可以获得更多的知识。By reading, we can get more knowledge.?2 . Thanks to/Due to/Owing to（因为，由于）例句：因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream o多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。Thanks to Miss Qin's help, I passed the examinationo【例题精讲】翻译以下句子than.朋友分享更快乐。（nothing is比较级than.）2 .没有什么比上寄宿学生更能锻炼人了。ever地我们都可以利用微信同其他人联系。（ever）.不论结果是什么，至少你有努力过。4 .不论它有多便利，我们都应该时刻警惕自己不要使用过度。5 .为了美丽，很多韩国女性都去做整容手术。6 .为了丰富我的暑假生活，我决定一个人去旅行。【巩固练习】翻译以下句子1 .我的建议是我们应当理性的使用它，不要让自己成为它的努力。2 .这个活动不但有趣，也能扩充我们的知识面.3 .是时候让自己变得独立。4 ,是时候让这种情况日益恶化.我赞同举办这个活动主要有三个理由。5 .重要的是这个善意的谎言鼓舞了他，而不是我们失去了诚信。7最吸引我的是节目的美食环节。8.第三，多种树，这不但可以美化城市也可以让空气清新。【知识梳理2】闪光句型之句型与从句. 主语+is + the + 最高级 + 名词 +(that)+ I have ever seen (known/heard/had/read) 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever hado. Nothing is more important + than + to do sth.没什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：没有比保持健康更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to keep fito没有什么比环保更重耍的事。Nothing is more important than to protect our environment o.The +比较级+ S + V,? the +比较级+ S + V (愈愈)例句：你愈努力，你愈进步。The harder you work, the more progress you make。我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。The more books we read, the more learned we become o.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子(的原因是)例句：我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。【例题精讲】Writing （作文）：（共 20 分）Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I see an old person fall down in the street, I .LU当我看至U老人在街上摔倒，我为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Reference words （Use at least two of them）:a traditional virtue （美德）； in favor of /against; calm; get along with; care for;（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） 学生范文一：.Whether or not to help an old people when you see him fall down in the street has led to a great argument. As a teenager, I think I will care for him and help him in his situation because it is a traditional virtue. But knowing that some warm-hearted young people have suffered a great loss because of their behaviors, ril say someone to take some photos for my behaviors or ask someone to prove that I'm really innocent. While helping others is absolutely worth praising, protecting ourselves is also important. All in all, I'll carefully and bravely give the old person a hand.学生范文二:Although it can often be heard that an old person fell down himself and insisted that it was innocent passer-by who helped him that caused the accident, I will help the old people who fall down in the street without hesitation. It is a traditional virtue for teenagers to respect the old and we should keep calm if we become those innocent passers-by. We should always believe that there are only a few dishonest people and our warm hearts will be paid off. In a word, I'm in favor of helping the old when they fall down in the street.【巩固练习】?Writing (作文)：(共 20 分)Write at least 60 words on the topic "A little more fresh air, please.”以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成不少于60字作文。标点符号不占格。Reference words (Use at least two of them):Plant trees, drive cars, walk more, pollute, haze(H)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）写作小Tip：中考议论文写作罗列观点时最好不过三，用逻辑词连接，观点层层递进，详略得当；加上语言流畅, 词汇稍作变化，就是言简意赅的好文。80100 (120)【知识梳理3】议论文写作之三要素和基本题型一、议论文三要素论点，论据和论词是议论文的三要素,论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论 点的事实和道理磐根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段应刊主题句 (topic sentence)来确定论点。文章结尾往往重申自己的看法、意见或建议。论证有立论和驳论两种,作 者证明自己的论点正确，是立论；反之，证明别人的论点错误，是驳论。1 .开头：背景+观点(2句)背景句：There is no denying that.There is no doubt thatIt is widely accepted that.plays an increasingly important role in our daily lifeRecently, the problem of.has aroused people's concern.最近，问题已引起人们的关注。With?the?development?of?science?and?technology, more?and?more?people?believe?that.随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为观点句：In my opinion,.As far as I am concerned,.From my point of view that.From my perspective,.2 .中间(6句)First of all/ To begin with/ To start withBesides/ In addition/ FurthermoreWhat's more/ Last but not least句型：(1) It is + adj. for sb. to do sth.It?is?necessary?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that.是必要的？? It?is?important/ essential?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that? ?是重要的It is of great importance for sb. to do sth.It?is?proper?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that?.?是适当的?It?is?urgent?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that?是紧急的(2) It goes without saying that 不用说e.g. e.g. It goes without saying that early to bed and early to rise is worthy.早睡早起是值得的。(3) so.that.彳列：At?that?moment,?I?was?so?upset?that?I?wanted?to?give?up.?当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。(4) We are supposed to do sth.我们应该做 替换 should(5)被动、定语从句3 .结尾：重申观点+相信All in all,To sum up,Generally speaking,We can draw a conclusion that.I strongly/ firmly hold the belief that. 我坚信I am looking forward to sth.Only in this way can we.（倒装句）例如：Only in this way can we realize our dream.只有这样我们才能实现我们的梦想。 强调句：It is+强调部分+ that +句子剩余部分【例题精讲】例L94. Write at least 60 words with the topic "Heavy Haze” .(以“茫茫雾霾”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短 文，标点符号不占格。)提示：去年12月上旬，申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾(was shrouded in heavy haze)中，陷于重度污染(severe pollution)o人们戴口罩(wear masks)出行，雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便 (inconvenience)。请你谈谈雾霾的成因及可行的解决方法。Topic Sentence. It caused great disturbance to our d .daily life.BeginningTSI: Obviously, haze comes from pollution.Heavy Idaze Main BodyTS2: How can we curb haze then?Conclusion.try our best to contribute to a cleaner environment.A persuasive essay can also take the form of a sales letter, a job application, or a college application essay. In each case, persuading the reader is key.Here is the general format of the persuasive essay:L Introduction and thesis: How you feel/what you think about a topic(e.g., *Tumblr is an excellent learning tool.")2. Body paragraphs (two or three): Provide detailed examples to support your thesis(e.g., The YUNiversity, PWN the SAT, etc.)3. Conclusion: Wrap up your argument 公 and call the reader to action(e.g.，“Follow The YUNiversity/*MSupport PWN the SAT,” etc.)Heavy HazeThe winter in 2013 impressed people not for its extreme coldness but the heavy haze hanging over 25 provinces. It caused great disturbance to our daily life.Obviously haze comes from pollution. Many factories let the smoke into the air without any filtering process. Day by day, it is no wonder that smoke, dirt, and dust accumulate in the air and finally turn into dense haze.How can we curb haze then? Levying heavy penalty on those irresponsible factories is definitely a must-do. Before the air is once again purified, we should also take some actions to protect ourselves such as wearing a mask and reducing exposure outdoors.We should all try our best to contribute to a cleaner environment for mutual survival and easier life. (126 words)【巩固练习】How to protect myself （怎样保护自己）Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myselP.（以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护（可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救,如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等）。Phrases for reference（以下短语仅供参考）：ask.for helpcalm downin dangerprevent. from（注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。） 写作提高Sentence structure:1. .so that.2. . so . that.3. It is said that.(据说)It is a fact that.4. It is + adj. +(for sb.)+to do sth.5. There is no doubt that .(毫无疑问)If you don't. , you will .6. The harder + 主语+谓语，the better + 主语+谓语What a / an + adj. +n. + it is!adj./adv.adj./adv.+主语+谓语！7. It is obvious (明显的)/ true that but.8. One of my favourite +n(复数). is.9. Sb. finds / thinks it + adj. + to doBeginning:1. As we all know, there is much danger around us It's necessary fbr us to know how to protect ourselves.2. Protecting oneself is an important skill that every teenager should have.Ending:1. That is the useful way to protect yourself.2. As you can see, to keep us safe, we should learn how to protect ourselves, or we'H be in danger.锦堂检恻一、话题作文1.当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时不知该怎么办。因此对孩子们来说， 学会自立相当重要。请以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，首先指出这种不良的社会 现象，然后给出你的观点和建议。参考i司？匚： make decisions; depend on; look after; on the one hand.on the other hand.注意：1 .请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；.须全面反映图表信息，但不能完全照抄；2 .文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；.词数：100左右。Learn to Be IndependentNowadays, many children are treated as "little emperors” athome.二、材料作文2.许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题， 你们班特意开展了一次“Less Pressure, BetteMife”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些 缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。要点：(I)同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么：(2)我的压力是什么：(3)我是如何缓解压力的。要求：1 .词数100左右;.短文必须包括所有要点，行文连贯通顺；3,短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Less Pressure, Better lifeHello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today's world.That's all. Thank you!3 .假如你是李华，上个月你在“中国航天日”参加了科技馆举行的航天俱乐部活动，请根据以下要点写 一篇短文，描述这次活动，并表达你的想法。(1)我听了宇航员的故事，学习到了科学精神。(2)我做了物理实验，增长了科学知识。(3)我参观了展览，使我对太空旅行更感兴趣了。(4)我认为参考词汇：科学精神?学精？scientific spirit太空旅行travel要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The activities on Space Day of ChinaLast month, I4 .请你根据以下内容提示，以“My Teachers Are Volunteers”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文， 介绍你的老师们做交通志愿者的事情。(1)每天放学后，老师们都会在学校旁边的路口做交通志愿者。(2)老师们穿着红色的马甲，拿着旗子，保证学生安全。(3)尽管夏天很热，冬天很冷，但老师们始终坚持值班。(4)多年来，学生从未发生过交通事故。(5)你觉得参考词汇：马甲vest要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。My Teachers Are VolunteersWhen school is over everyday,三、讲稿5 .近日，教育部正式印发义务教育课程方案，将劳动从原来的综合实践活动课程中完全独立出来， 并发布义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)。今秋开学，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程，每 个孩子都要学习日常生活劳动，生产劳动及服务性劳动。作为一名热爱劳动的学生，你被老师邀请在本周的班会课上来为同学们做一次讲座，请结合你目前的劳动情况，谈谈参与劳动的动机及好处，并倡议同学们一起参与劳动。 请参考下图提示，写一篇发言稿。What do you do:at home: cooking.in the community: volunteeringWhy you work:Develop life skills Make others happyHow you feel:ProudSense of achievement注意事项：1 .发言稿内容须根据提示自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;.图中所给为非限定性内容，仅供参考；2 .词数100左右，发言稿首尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hi, everyone. Recently, the Ministry of Education has enlisted labor education as a compulsory course for school students at all levels. Today I'd like to share something with you about labor education.Thanks for listening!