上海市杨浦区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：话题作文.docx

上海市杨浦区2020.2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编话题作文2022年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题X. Writing （作文）（共 20 分）64. Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根据以下情境写不少于60个词的论坛 帖子及回复等，标点符号不占格。）阅读D篇的论坛帖子中谈到了生活中发生的一些尴尬事件。假设你是Sandy,请在论坛 中发帖，讲一个发生在自己身上的尴尬事件，并设想你的朋友Jill会如何与你互动，写下你 们之间的一问一答。注意：1 .文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2 .照抄阅读语篇不得分。Sandy25 October 9.00 p.m.Jill25 October 9.05 p.m.Sandy25 October 9.08 p.m.2021年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题X. Writing （作文）（共 20 分）VIL Writing （作文）（共 20 分）84. Write at least 60 words on the given topic "has changed me".（以"改变 了我”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化、都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、 经历改变着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历, 谈一谈自己的改变。注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。2020年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题X. Writing （作文）（共 20 分）53. Write a letter of at least 60 words based on the given situation.（根据所给情境，写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格）A friend of yours is studying at home and has asked you to recommend a learning tool. 你的一位朋友最近在家自学，想请你推荐一个学习工具.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter：say what the learning tool is (give it an interesting name)describe the learning tool and its usestell the reason why you recommend itRemember ： the learning tool can be a reference book, a website, a program, an app, or whatever you use to help you with your study.（注意：文中不得出来考生的地名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分.）答案：2022年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题【答案】例文：Sandy25 October 9.00 p.m.On my first day of school, I found everything was strange. After school, I wanted to go to a toilet, but there were so many people that it was hard to find one for girls in the teaching buildings. So I hurried out of my school and suddenly find an empty toilet. No one was in the toilet. It was so strange. When I came out of the toilet, I knew the reason. It was a toilet for boys! My face turned red at once.Jill25 October 9.05 p.m.Did someone see you run out of the wrong toilet?Sandy25 October 9.08 p.m.No. I was lucky. I fast ran away and no one knew what happened to me.【解析】【详解】总体分析题材：本文为三段论坛帖子及对话，主要记叙生活中的尴尬事件；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏后两段对话，且内容要与帖子相互呼应，符 合逻辑，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤 第一步，描写帖子内容。首先表明尴尬事件发生的时间、地点，阐述起因,然后具体描述事 件的发生过程，同时通过动作、心理活动等方面进行细节描写。第二步，根据帖子中描写的事件结果“我走错厕所”，进行合理推测，提出疑问“有没有人 看到走错厕所”。第三步，回答提出的问题，表示“自己很幸运”。亮点词汇on my first day of school我第一天在学校hurried out of my school匆忙赶出学校at once立刻，马上happened to me发生在我身上 高分句型I found everything was strange, （find 后接宾语从句）I wanted to go to a toilet, but there were so many people that it was hard to find one for girls in the teaching buildings, （but连接两个并列句，sothat引导结果状语从句）When I came out of the toilet, I knew the reason, （when 引导时间状语从句）2021年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题Confidence has changed meRecently I've had a change in my life. It makes me realize that how important it is for me to be confident.The story happened a year ago. At that time I was very poor at math and my maths score was so disappointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Every time I met with some maths problems, I told myself “You should be confident and you can do it”. And out of my expectation, I got an A in my maths exam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for maths and there is nothing that we cannot do if we are confident enough.【详解】1 .题干解读：本文是一篇半命题作文。要求补充完整题目：has changed me”，再结 合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可以从自己经历的 困难、心理变化等方面讲述困难使自己变得更勇敢。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。2020年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题53.【分析】【高分句型一】It's very convenient to use.它使用起来很方便.It's+形容词to do sth做某事是的.【高分句型二】It is popular not only in school but also in many other offices.它不仅在学校很受欢迎，而且 在许多其他办公室也很受欢迎.not only.but also,不仅.而且【解答】Now I would like to recommend a learning tool - DingTalk.（学习工具是什么） It is a useful learning tool. Through the computer or telephone, we set up a DingTalk group. We can have online classes through it. Not only the teachers but also the students can use it. The teachers can show homework to the students on it. After students finish their homework, they hand it in through this app. All of this is done right here （描述这个学习工具的使用）It's very convenient to use. 高分句型一】It is popular not only in school but also in many other offices.【高分句型二】It is a very powerful office and learning software.（推荐的理由）I hope it will be helpful to you.（希望）【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和 句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务.