2023年中考英语二轮复习：书面表达（含范文）.pdf

2023年中考英语二轮复习：书面表达I.Revision口.Presentation（重点，难点，考点，热点呈现）影响得分的几个因素：1 .卷面和书写（字迹尽量工整，排列一定要整齐！没有明显的涂改痕迹）2 .完整的信息点（认真审题，画出每个信息点，确保没有遗漏；确定每个信息点要怎么去延伸；分类整理，合理排版布局，分配层次。）3 .文章结构和逻辑普遍用三段式：观点-要点-总结第一段：开门见山（1-2 句）第二段：阐释观点（8 T 0 句）第三段：总结呼应（1-2 句）逻辑词的运用分出层次、体现思路4 .词汇和语法确定时态（一般全篇时态一致）用有把握的短语和句子结构用熟悉的词汇（课文内容）5 .亮点高级词汇和对复杂句的运用短语优先原则将简单词汇作有把握的替换将可合并的简单句改写成学过的从句写作步骤：审题找要点布局成大纲草稿富内容眷写要工整不会表达，另辟蹊径中考作文给分最主要是以要点和语言准确度而定。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(1)迂回而行当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。(2)小词大用汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take,have,get,make,come,go,do,see,show,happy,nice,kind,help 等。(3)借花献佛有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。锦上添花，量力而行注意：如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不 要 I(We).到底，使人觉得乏味。适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。(6)适当调换-下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。【衔接词】类 别1表示“时序”的词或词组first of all/at last首 先 above all首要的是；尤其 then于是；然后at the same time 同时 after a while 过了一会儿 later 稍后；随后since then从那以后 until now直到现在 suddenly突然finally/in the end/at last 最后；终于 soon 不久，很快类别2表示“并列”的词或词组as well as也；又；和；及 with和；跟；同and和，并；然后；接着又neither.nor既不.也不.not onlybut also不但.而且.both.and.和.eitheror或者.或者.；要么.要么.类别3表示“递进”的词或词组also也；同样；而 且（and）whats more而且；此 外 besides此外；除此之外类别4表示“转折”的词或词组but但是；而是 however然而；可 是 still依然；仍 然 afterall毕竟类别5表示“因果”的词或词组because/as因 为 since因为；既 然 because o f因为；由 于 so 因此；如此sothat如此.以至于.such.that如此.以至于.类 别6表示“先后次序”的词或词组first第一 second第 二 then然后 next其次；然后 自 nally最后类 别7其他常用词语if如果；即使 unless如果不；除非 as long as只要 even if即使certainly当 然 in fact事实上；实 际 上 immediately立刻 once 一旦actually事 实 上 although/though虽然；尽管 especially尤其（是）；特别（是）luckily 幸运的是 in order that为了.in order to为了.类别8常用的结尾词组As a result结果 In my opinion/I think依我看；我认为；据我的观点I hope我希望.Its well-known that众所周知.In a/one word 总之；简言之 As far as I know.据我所知.To sum up总而言之in short简言之；简单扼要的Generally speaking大体而言佳作赏析：My familyMy name is Claire and Fm fourteen years old.I live a happy life because I have a warm andharmonious family.There are four people in my family.They are my parents and my elder brother.My parentsboth are teachers so that my brother and I have been well educated.I am four years younger thanmy brother who always cares much about me.We have a good relationship,though we quarreleven fight sometimes.Actually,I am likely to consider it as a sign of love.In a word.I really love my family.How about yours?第 篇：Dear friends,Recently,there are many fans among teenagers.They are talking about their favorite stars allday instead of studying hard.As a teenager,I want to say something to them.Firstly,its a waste of money.We students cant make money,instead,we just spend ourparents1 money.We know it isnt easy for our parents to make money.They need to work dayand night.So we shouldnt use the money to buy CDs or watch concerts.Secondly,its a waste of time.Our time is precious.If we pay too much attention on thestars,we have no time to study.How can we learn the knowledge to contribute to our country?Thirdly,some stars donT have positive influence.Some of them are rude.Some of them eventake drugs.So dont do that anymore.Be yourselves.Yours sincerely,XXX中考真题精讲：一个德国中学生代表团到你校访问，你作为学生代表参与了当天的活动,请你根据下面要点,用英语为你校英语校报写一篇短文，简要介绍当天的活动情况。要点:1.上周五，德国中学代表团来你校访问，包括四名老师和十名学生；2.上午九点，学校领导和同学们在校门口迎接。3.校长代领她他们参观学校并介绍学校的历史4.两国学生座谈，就中德中学生学校生活进行了交流5.中午12点共进午餐，午餐后与他们告别要求:1.必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥2.词数80左 右（标题已给出，不计总次数）3.不能出现真实的人名、校名及地名参考词汇:代表团delegationA Gennan Delegation Visited Our schoolA German Delegation Visited Our schoolLast Friday,a German high school delegation,including four teachers and ten students,cameto visit our school.Our school leaders and students welcomed them warmly at the school gate atnine in the morning.First,our headmaster introduced the history of our school while he wasshowing them around.Then,the students from two countries had a discussion,sharing the schoollife and culture with each other.At twelve oclock we had lunch together.After lunch,we saidgoodbye to each other.This is a very meaningful activity for us students.你喜欢骑自行车吗?你听说过共享单车(shared bikes)吗？(共享单车：即有需要的人通过扫描单车二维码，就可租骑的一种共享自行车。)现学校的“Focus”栏目就共享单车这一话题.向我们征集稿件。请根据以下提示，以“sharedbikes”为题，写一篇短文。要点提示：在眉山，有许多共享单车，且越来越受欢迎。原因：1.骑单车花钱少；出行方便。2.有更少的污染。3.有益于健康。问题：1.到处停放，难以保持城市整洁。2.弄坏单车；甚至偷走或带回家。具体要求：1.所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥。2.词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得出现考生本人姓名及所在学校的名称。Do you like riding bikes?Have you even heard of shared bikes?范文：Do you like riding bikes?Have you even heard of shared bikes?In Meishan,there are so manyshared bikes,and they are becoming more and more popular with people.Now more and more people enjoy riding bikes instead of cars to make short journeys in cities.Because riding bikes is very convenient and costs less money.It can not only keep the citysenvironment clean,but also can be good for our health.But in our life,it causes some problems aswell,such as some people put them everywhere and make the city in a mess.Some people brokethem,and even stole them away.I think if the government should take some actions to deal with these problems,and will makethe city become more and more beautiful.假如你是某校九年级（1）班的学生，你校正在举行“Young Star Award”的评选活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参评。内容要点如下：1.个子高，性格外向，为人友善；2.学习认真，成绩优秀；3.爱好广泛，擅长踢足球；4.乐于助人，.；5.得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣。写作要求：1.短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.第 4 要点的省略号部分，需作适当发挥（23 句话即可）；3.词数在90个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Im glad to hear the news that“Youni Star Award“is szoing on in our school.I think Li Mingis the hot favorite for the award.Li Ming is a tall boy of wide interests,especially good at playing football.He is outgoing andalways friendly to others.Thats why he has a lot of friends.Li Ming studies hard and of course isone of the top students at school.Besides,he takes an active part in different kinds of activities.Li Ming is helpful.1 remember once my bike was broken on the way to school,he repaired itfor me and thanks to him,I wasnt late.His actions have won high praise from our school.He sets a good example to us all and weare proud of him.书面表达上周你班召开了一次“告别陋习，走向文明”的主题班会，会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。请你根据表格里的内容写一篇有关王明同学的文章。过去的表现现在的表现经常和同学打架与同学相处融洽花很多时间玩电脑游戏积极参加各项活动经常吃垃圾食品健康的生活习惯在课堂上吃东西、睡觉认真听讲，按时完成作业考试不及格各门学科学得很好注意：1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文的意思连贯，语句通顺；2.词数：80词左右；（文章的开头己给出，不计入总词数）3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名。Wang Ming is my classmale.He has made great.progress this lenm.In ihc past,he alwaysfought with others.He used to spend much time playing computer games.And he often ate junkfood.In class,he either ate or slept.He could never pass any exam.But now,he has changed a lot.He can get on well with the other students.He takes an activepart in all kinds of activities.He has healthy living habits.He always listens to the teacherscarefully in class and finishes his homework on time.And he docs well in all subjects.We all likehim now.书面表达当你的父母生气的时候，你该怎么做？请你根据以下要点提示，以“Helping Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点提示：1.如果你的父母变得非常生气，你应该与他们沟通，记住让他们改变需要花费一些时间，不要对着他们大喊大叫；2.帮助父母做家务，比如做饭、洗碗、洗衣服或者擦地板等；3.给父母一些惊喜，比如送些小礼物、举行派对等；4.如果这也不奏效，那就求助于你的好朋友，让他或她来帮帮你等；5.其它观点：。要求：1.词 数 110词 左 右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2.耍点提示词均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语：communicate,change,surprise,gift,dont workHelping ParentsIf your parents get angry,you should communicate with them.But remember it will takethem some more time to change their ideas.Dont shout at them loudly.Its a good way to help them do some housework,such as cooking,washing dishes,washingclothes,cleaning the floor and so on.Sometimes,its necessary to give them some surprises,suchas sending gifts or having parties.If all these ways are useless for your parents,anger,youd betterask your good friends fbr help.Maybe they can help you.Maybe every parent will be angry.Parents give us lives and support all the family,so I thinkwe should do something for them when they are angry.If we do what we should do,parents willforget their troubles and be happy a lot.观点看法类随着时代的发展，人们使用越来越多的电子产品，在享受电子产品带来的生活便利的同时，如何处理电子垃圾已经成为一个严峻的问题。请根据以下提示，写一篇如何处理电子垃圾的文章。1.造成环境污染，威胁身体健康;2.加强教育，提高认识；3.制定法律；4.不随意丢弃；5.鼓励回收利用，建立回收网络。提示词汇：处 理 deal with；电子产品electronic product;电子垃圾e-waste；回收网络recycling network；提高认识 raise the awareness注意：1.词数80-100,开头已给出，但不计入总词数；2.短文必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。With the deviloDment of he society,more and more electronic products are used in ourdaily life,making us live conveniently and comfortably.However,electronic products are causing some trouble.People change their phones,computers or others very often.The waste electronic products are polluting our environment.It isharmful to us.It can cause some diseases.We should tell people to realize the matter and raise theawareness so that they can know how to deal with the e-waste.Even we should make some rulesand ask people to obey them.Besides,we all dont throw the waste electronic productseverywhere.To protect our environment,the government should do something such as setting uprecycling network to encourage people to recycle the e-waste.参考范文：With the development of the society,more and more e-products are used in our daily life,making us live conveniently and comfortably.However,some problems also come at the same time,such as e-waste,which people throwaway when the uses of e-products run out,and some harms and damages accordingly happen toour environment as well as our health.So it becomes very important and necessary to solve this problem now.First,we should putthe e-waste in the right place not anywhere for recycling later.Of course,we should set up arecycling site or even the recycling website on the Internet to make it easier.Then educate thepublic how to deal with the e-waste and raise their awareness of the environment protection.Finally make some rules,even the law to get the people realize the seriousness of e-waste.某英文杂志中学生专栏正在征集“二孩政策”放开后孩子们的意见。你们班就“D。you agreethat your parents have a second child?”这一话题，展开了一次讨论。请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文，向该杂志社投稿，介绍讨论情况。观点赞成反对注意：1.词数：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。理由1.不会感到孤独；2.可轮流照顾父母。1.担心父母更爱弟弟或妹妹；2.害怕和弟弟或妹妹想出不好。你的看法2.应覆盖所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Do y u agree that your parents have a second child?Different students have different opinionsabout it.Some students agree with the idea.They think,if so,they wont feel lonely and there willalways be someone to play with.Besides,if their parents get older or ill,they can take turn to lookafter them.However,some students disagree.They worry that they will get less love from theirparents if another child comes to the family.Whafs worse,they may not get along well,or evenfight against each other.As for me,Id love to have a brother or sister as company,so that we can share our happinessand sonow any time.某班英语课上，就“争当中华好少年”进行小组交流活动，请你根据活动记录情况，以“How tobe a good student?”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求:1.全文字数90词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数。良好习惯.生活习惯:健康饮食，加强锻炼学习习惯:上课认真听讲、按时完成作业诚实守信不撒谎，考试不作弊遵守校规严禁私自下河洗澡，禁带手机进校园、不打架条理清楚，书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。内容必须包含表格中的提示信息，并适当的发挥;文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。How to be a good student?Its very important to be a good student.As teenagers,how to be a good student?In my opinion,there are lots of things you should do.Firstly,live a healthy life.We should have healthy eating habits.Do more exercise to keephealthy.Secondly,have a good study habit.We should listen to the teacher carefully,try our bestto finish homework on time.Dont tell lies and never copy in tests.We should get on well withothers and try to help others.Thirdly,to be a good person in the public.Thirdly,dont goswimming alone without permission,which is very dangerous.Taking the mobile phone to schoolis also forbidden.Dont fight with others.Last but not least,we should be polite to the teachersand get on well with our classmates.生活是如此的美好，人生有无尽的欢乐，但也有诸多的烦恼。作为中学生的你，最大的烦恼是什么?你打算如何去解决？请你以My Biggest Problem为题目，写一篇英语短文。要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名，地名和校名；2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：pressure（压力）；argue（争吵）；fight（打架）；compare.with.（与 比较）;communicate.with.（交流）；cant stop talking（唠叨）；got on with（和睦相处）；understand（理解）;computer games（电脑游戏）;take after-school classes（上课夕卜辅导班）My Biggest ProblemAs middle school students,we have a lot of happiness,but we also have many problems.Forme,I have too much homework.Im not allowed to use mobile phone or play computer games.My parents often compare me with other children and so on.But my biggest problem is from myparents*argument.These days,my parents argue and fight a lot because of doing chores.Whenthey argue,its like a big,black cloud hanging over our home.Im worried about them and afraidof losing my family very much.What should I do?After thinking twice,I decide to help my parents.Firstly,Ill tell them my feelings andcommunicate with them.Secondly,Fil try my best to do more housework so that they can havemore time to relax and sit down to have a good communication.Im sure my parents will get on with each other soon.I believe well have a happy family.保持一份好心情（keep in a good mood）有利于身体健康，也有助于学习。加入你是周川，你朋友李玲近来心情一直不佳,请你用英语写一封信建议她如何保持一份好心情。要点提示:1.积极参加体育运动；2.保持健康的饮食习惯；3.与父母和老师多交流，与同学和睦相处；4.积极参加公益活动。参考词汇:公益活动volunteer activity注意：（1）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校；（2）80词 左 右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；（3）注意信件的完整性（必须有过渡语和结束语）；（4）短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥。Dear Li Ling,I heard you were in a bad mood.How is it going recently?As we know,keeping in a goodmood is good for health and study.Here are some suggestions for you.First,you can take an active part in sports.For example,you can go swimming and skating.When the vacation is coming,you can join in all kinds of activities,such as dancing,singing andthe summer camp or winter camp.Next,you should keep healthy eating habits.Usually you can eatvegetables and fruits instead of too much meat.When you have some problems,you can communicate with your parents and teachers.Atleast,we should get on well with our classmates.We know helping others is helping ourselves.Finally,you can go to do some volunteer activities.You can help the old and to clean theirhomes,sing some songs to cheer them up and so on.I wish you good health.Hope everything goes well!Yours,Zhou ChuanDear Li Ling,I heard you.were in n bad mood.How is it going recently?As we know,keeping in a goodmood is good for health and study.Why not take part in some sports?Such as running,go skating and playing basketball and soon.Excising can make you relax.Second,you need to care about your habit of eating food.Youdbetter not eat enough snacks.I think theyre not good for your body.Do you think so?Third,I hope you get along with your fiends in your school.You can tell them your trouble.Maybe its not serious problem when you hear their advice.You can often talk with your teachersand your parents.Listening to their thought,you will know how you should deal with your life.Have you heard of volunteers?They often help people in trouble.Now Im one of them.Would you like to join volunteer activities?You will be happy when you help others.I hope you will better soon.Yours,你看过中央电视台董卿主持的节目“朗读者”吗？这是一档非常受欢迎的节目，让我们看到生活中读书的美好，读书的重要。请根据下列表格中所列的要点，以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇短文。Zhou Chuan让读书成为我们生活的一部分，让读书伴随我们成长。读书好1.获取知识，增长见识2.让我们自信和快乐读好书1.读好的书：选择适合自己、能提高自己的书。2.用好方法读书：读书需要多思考。好读书1.现状：业余时间看电视、玩网络游戏。2.建议：养成读书的好习惯，让自己爱上