2023年南京中考英语总复习精美实用教案：书面表达（二）.pdf

课 程 主 题：书 面 表 达(-)2023年 南 京 中 考 英 语 总 复 习 精 美 实 用 教 案 学 习 目 标 1.掌 握 10个 书 面 表 达 话 题 的 常 用 句 型；2.能 够 利 用 所 学 句 型 进 行 实 战 演 练 教 学 内 容【进 门 测 试】假 如 你 是 阳 光 中 学 的 王 敏 同 学，上 学 期 你 们 学 校 开 设 了 选 修 课(selectivecourses),如 烹 饪、手 工 制 作 等。本 学 期，学 校 就 开 设 选 修 课 的 必 要 性 征 求 同 学 们 的 意 见。以 下 是 你 班 同 学 的 不 同 观 点 和 理 由。请 根 据 下 表 提 示 并 结 合 你 自 己 的 想 法 写 一 篇 英 语 短 文，向 校 刊 英 语 园 地 投 稿。Opinions ReasonsGood points develop interests,learn life skills.Bad points a waste of time,not helpful fbr lessons.Your opinions and reasons.注 意：(1)短 文 应 包 括 表 格 中 的 信 息，可 以 适 当 发 挥；(2)文 中 不 得 出 现 真 实 的 人 名 和 校 名；(3)词 数：8 0词 左 右；(4)短 文 首 句 仅 供 选 择 使 用，不 计 入 总 词 数。Dear Editor,Last term our school offered students some selective courses,such as cooking,handicraft course and so on.Yours,Wang MinKeys:One possible version:Dear Editor,Last term oun school offered students some selective courses,such as cooking,handicraft course and so on.We had a discussion in our class.Some students think its really necessary to do it.First,ifs good fbr studentsto develop their interests.And interests can help learn more knowledge.Second,these classes are helpful forthem to learn life skills.However,others have different opinions.They dont think ifs so necessary.They think its a waste of timeand ifs not helpful for their lessons.In my opinion,a good idea to offer these courses.They are not only good for our study but also for ourgrowing.Yours,Wang Min【多 元 导 学】看 到 这 幅 图 你 有 什 么 感 想 呢？请 用 一 句 话 表 达 你 的 观 点。批 注：让 学 生 通 过 观 察 图 片 表 达 自 己 的 观 点。【互 动 精 讲】书 面 表 达 常 见 话 题(1-10)【知 识 梳 理】话 题 一：介 绍(自 己/朋 友、学 校 生 活)自 己/朋 友 Im.a new student at Sunshine middle school.rm.years old.I have long/short hair.I love doing sth.I often play sports after school.I want to tell you about.She is as slim as.She is one of my best friends.She is willing to share.with.She is very helpful and is ready to help people any time.He/She wants to be.when he/she grows up.I hope his/her dream comes true in the future.I often talk to sb.when I am sad/happy/have problems.I believe what he/she says.He has a good sense of humor.I never feel bored or unhappy when he is with me.He always makes me laugh.When something worries me,I can always go to her.I can tell her everything because she can keep a secret.She never says a bad word about anyone.We will always be best friends.学 校 生 活 I am in Year 8 a t.School near.Boys and girls have lessons together.I like learning how to cook and sew.We can bring in books and magazines from home.Near the end of each class,we can.I love.and I spend a lot of time practicing.During lunchtime,we always have a great time doing.话 题 二：节 日 My favourite festival is.We always get lots of nice presents at Christmas.All my family get together and have a big dinner,eat moon cakes,and then enjoy the full moon.Children have lots of fun on that day.We dress up and wear masks.It is wonderful to.They give us some candy as a treat.We always have a party on the evening of.and enjoy nice food and drinks.There are a lot of interesting things at the party.They can have a nice dinner.It is really a special day.话 题 三：饮 食 与 生 活 习 惯 I have a healthy lifestyle.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.I like fish,because its good for our health.I love dancing.I dance for half an hour every day.Healthy food is important for me.I need to keep fit.I always have.for breakfast.Sometimes I fell hungry between meals,so I eat.I seldom eat.They have too much sugar and are bad for my teeth.I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables every day.This helps me.【例 题 精 讲】例 1.每 年 的 5 月 1 5日 是 国 际 家 庭 日，为 迎 接 今 年 的 家 庭 日,你 校 将 开 展 以“Families and Health”为 主 题 的 家 庭 日 活 动。请 结 合 你 的 家 庭 实 际，按 要 求 用 英 文 写 一 篇 演 讲 稿。内 容 要 求：1.你 家 存 在 的 健 康 问 题 2.问 题 形 成 的 若 干 原 因 3.提 出 你 的 一 些 建 议，让 家 庭 生 活 更 健 康。注 意：1.文 中 不 得 出 现 你 的 真 实 姓 名 和 学 校 名 称；2.语 言 通 顺，意 思 连 贯，条 理 清 楚，书 写 规 范；3.词 数 8 0左 右，文 章 的 开 头 已 经 给 出,不 计 入 总 词 数 Dear teachers and fellow students,I am very glad to give a speech on Families and Health here today.Thats all for my speech.Thanks for listening【答 案】Dear teachers and fellow students,I am very glad to give a speech on Families and Health here today.From my point of view,the problem ofmy family is that my parents usually dont have enough time to stay with me,and I even cant feel their love.One reason that my parents cant stay long with me may be that they spend too much time on their work.Sometimes I have to communicate with them by calling them instead of face to face.Of course,we often use toomuch technology to communicate with each other,its harmful to our relationship.In fact,there are many ways to solve the problem.First of all,I hold the opinion that my parents shouldspend more time on our family rather than their work.We can have a family day every Sunday to have fun.Secondly,I need care more about my parents but not just myself,and I can offer to do some housework to helpthem.Last but not least,vve can use less technology,such as computers and cell phones,to make our relationshipbetter.In conclusion,to make our family lives healthy,we should do something to improve it,not only our parentsbut also ourselves.Thafs all for my speech.Thanks for listening【分 析】整 篇 文 章 葡 要 根 据 信 息 各 内 容 要 求 进 行 归 纳 总 结 和 梳 理，加 上 考 生 自 己 的 观 点，观 点 清 晰 明 了，建 议 配 合 多 种 句 型，提 升 内 容 和 句 式 的 多 样 化。话 题 四：购 物 There is a new mall down the street.r d like to go shopping,but I dont have any money.I need you to carry all the bags.I want to buy.a present.They are two yuan each.There are different kinds of hair clips in our shop.These clips are beautiful,and they match pink coat.We need many things for the party.Can I try them on?They fit very well.There are five floors of shops and each floor is big.All the restaurants are on the top floor.The mall is a good place to meet friends and have fun.话 题 五：时 尚.ask.to lend her some clothes fbr the fashion show.What size is your blouse?Ifs too large fbr me.The students are giving a fashion show in the school hall.We are going to show you different styles of clothes.I am wearing sports clothes and a pair of trainers.are popular among young people.His red and grey tie matches his clothes.He looks smart in.She is wearing a red silk blouse,a black wool skirt and a pair of red boots.Thats all for todays show.They are made of leather.You look lovely in your new hat.matches/goes well with any other colour.are light and comfortable.话 题 六：住 房 与 邻 居 I used to live in.in.Now I live in the center o f./a town 15 miles from.There is a/an.in front ofTbehind/beside.It has.floors.There is/are.o n the ground/second floor.I share my bedroom with.I love to sit there and look out at the beach and the sea.There is/are always enough.there.I would like to invite my friends to.My friends like to.Its good to live in a neighbourhood like that.They often help me with.It is great fun!【例 题 精 讲】例 1.假 如 你 是 Li M in g,请 用 英 语 给 笔 友 B en回 复 邮 件。注 意：Hey L i Ming,I will move to your community and stay for two months.I want to know something about yourcommunity.What is your community like?What activities do you usually have?How can I get along withyour neighbors?Write soon!Yours,Ben1.文 中 不 得 出 现 你 的 真 实 姓 名 和 学 校 名 称；2.语 言 通 顺，意 思 连 贯，条 理 清 楚，书 写 规 范；3.词 数 8 0左 右，邮 件 的 开 头 与 结 尾 已 经 给 出，不 计 入 总 词 数。Dear Ben,Im very glad to know that you will come to our community.Yours,Li Ming答 案：Dear Ben,F m very glad to know that you will come to our community.My community is in the northern part ofthe city.Its not a big one,but its quite beautiful.You can see a garden with different flowers when enteringit.You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides,we also have different activities.For example,people in Helping Hand Club always do someshopping for the old who live alone.Every weekend,college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our community are kind and easy to get on with.Youd better say“Hello“to greet them.If you bump into someone,it will be polite to say“sorry”.Thats all about our community.I hope you will have a good time here.Yours,Li Ming话 题 七：地 点 介 绍 和 旅 游 We can take sb.to.Sunshine Town is north/south/east/west of.It is/isnt far away from.We will get there by.It takes us.to go.The air is fresh and you can see.There is a.between.and.Go straight on,and youll find.on your left/right.Remember to.Dont forget to.Turn left/right,and to the north/south/east/west of.,youll find.We are looking forward to meeting you soon.Have a nice trip!.is the capital of.I have been to.We have a fantastic time here.We spent the whole day at.Everyone got excited when.I couldnt stop doing sth.At the end of the day,.Hope youve enjoyed yourself there!We got on a coach.The trip from.to.took about two hours.There was a lot of traffic on the city road.I felt sick for most time of the trip.Finally,we amved at the World Park.It is made of metal and really tall.was there in front o f.There are.places of interest from all over the world.look like.I couldnt believe my eyes.It was an amazing day but the best part was.话 题 八：宠 物 I love my rabbit very much because.My.looks like.He/She is always very friendly/quiet/happy/noisy.He/She lives in a cage/basket/boxHe/She usually sits/lies on the bed/floor.I can feed her carrots.I often walk my dog,brush its fur and feed it.It eats.We dont have to feed her much.It has long ears and red eyes.It can grow up to be.centimeters long and weigh up to.gramsI can play with.in the park.It can.,and I want to teach it to.My dog is the cleverest animal of allIt isnt any trouble.话 题 九：DIYHere are clear instructions.Read them first.Youd better do it yourself.It stands for.When you.,you make,repair,decorate things yourself instead of paying someone to do it.I enjoy making something new.is crazy about DIY.He once tried to put in.Another time,he wanted to put up.on the wall.He hit a pipe and filled.with.He painted it blue.I advised him to take a course in DIY.I know much more about DIY than.Cut.into.I decided to.by myself.helped me with.We had fun working together.It took me.minutes/hours to finish.I made some mistakes when.Finally/in the end,.When I com pleted.,.话 题 十：保 护 野 生 动 物 When.was bom,she weighed.grams/At four months old,she weighed over.and did.fo r the first time.She grew into a.Sadly,it is difficult for giant pandas to survive in the wild.Here are some of the problems th a t.may have in the future.Hunters will kill it for its fur.If farmers cut down trees and forests,giant pandas will have nowhere to live.Giant pandas are in danger now.We can take actions to protect giant pandas.We can build more reserves and encourage farmers to leave the giant panda reserves.If we do nothing,soon there will be no giant pandas in the world!Zhalong is a nature reserve in.It is one of the worlds most important wetlands.The area provides food and shelter for wildlife.It is an ideal home for.is an important area for.This means there will be less and less space for wildlifeThe government wants to protect these endangered birds.are going to study the changes in their numbers.We do a bird count once a year.We need more people to.答 题 技 巧【知 识 梳 理】1.体 例 得 当，要 点 齐 全。在 动 手 写 之 前，先 认 真 审 题，明 确 所 写 要 点，从 表 现 主 题 的 需 要 出 发，精 心 组 织 材 料 P认 真 审 题，必 须 从 三 方 面 人 手：审 文 体（弄 清 写 何 种 体 裁 的 文 章），审 要 求（内 容、要 求、时 间、环 境），审 人 称（要 求 用 何 种 人 称，是 第 一 人 称、第 二 人 称 还 是 第 三 人 称）。，一 般 来 说，书 面 表 达 的 顺 序 是：写 提 纲 一 打 草 稿 一 连 句 成 文。文 章 写 完 之 后，再 回 头 对 照 提 示 及 要 求，仔 细 核 对，确 保 没 有 遗 漏 要 点。2.表 达 准 确，条 理 清 楚。平 时 应 重 视 句 型、习 惯 用 语 的 积 累，掌 握 一 定 量 的 单 词 和 习 惯 用 语，而 不 是 考 前 突 击 背 和 记。力 求 正 确 使 用 词 语，使 用 地 道 现 成 的 英 语 句 型 和 自 己 熟 悉 而 且 又 有 把 握 的 句 子，不 造 没 有 根 据 的 和 中 式 句 型，更 不 能 采 用 在 中 文 句 型 中 使 用 英 语 单 词 的 做 法。有 的 考 生 易 受 母 语 影 响，写 出 中 式 的 英 语 句 子。例 如：号 课 或 不 地 道 的 英 调 句 子 正 靖 或 地 道 的 英 谕 句 子 1 very thtnk you Think you very muchMy books are more than you I hive more boolu than you daWekomc you to cocne to Chinei(You tie)Wdcomc to China.He is preps ring for money to buybike.He i w n n*money to buy a bike.应 根 据 内 容 要 求，通 过 确 定 句 子 的 主 语 和 谓 语 的 形 式 来 连 词 成 句。一 个 句 子 一 个 中 心，句 意 清 楚，合 乎 逻 辑。然 后 对 分 散 的 句 子 按 一 定 的 顺 序（如 时 间 和 空 间）进 行 加 工 整 理。3.词 数 适 中，书 写 规 范。注 意 用 词 的 准 确 性。考 生 可 以 选 择 自 己 最 有 把 握 的 表 达 方 式，做 到 语 言 规 范。尽 量 使 语 句 过 渡 自 然，整 个 语 篇 浑 然 一 体。注 意 把 握 好 时 间。因 为 书 面 表 达 一 般 在 试 卷 的 最 后，所 以 有 的 考 生 没 有 留 足 时 间，导 致 仓 促 应 战，造 成 要 点 不 全、开 头 不 好、表 述 不 清、没 有 结 尾 或 卷 面 潦 草 等 问 题。考 试 时 间 是 有 限 的，因 此 不 能 边 写 边 想 边 改 或 写 写 停 停，而 是 应 该 一 气 呵 成。一 般 说 来，可 按 照 下 列 步 骤 进 行：一 审 试 题，二 圈 要 点，三 注 短 词，四 定 基 调，五 写 全 文，六 改 病 句。还 要 注 意 词 数，书 面 表 达 对 词 数 都 有 一 定 的 要 求，过 多 或 过 少 都 会 影 响 成 绩。在 进 行 大 量 扎 实 的 基 础 训 练 的 基 础 上，还 应 该 进 行 系 统 的 专 题 训 练，即 按 照 不 同 的 体 裁 进 行 专 门 训 练，从 而 掌 握 表 达 技 巧。【课 堂 检 测】假 设 你 是 阳 光 中 学 的 张 红，你 家 将 作 为 友 好 家 庭 接 待 来 自 美 国 的 交 流 学 生 A m y o请 根 据 A m y的 邮 件 内 容，用 英 语 给 她 写 一 封 回 信。Dear Zhang Hong,Im so happy to have the chance to study and live with you.I cant wait to leave for Nanjing.I amcurious about the study and life in Nanjing.V/buld you please tell me about that?Is your school far from home?W hat is your school like?Are there any special courses for us tolearn?Do you have any plans for our weekends?Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,_注 意：1.文 中 不 得 出 现 你 的 真 实 姓 名 和 学 校 名 称；2.语 言 通 顺，意 思 连 贯，条 理 清 楚，书 写 规 范；3.词 数 8 0 左 右，信 的 开 头 已 经 给 出，不 计 入 总 词 数。Dear Amy,I am very glad to receive your e-mail.Welcome to my home and my school.Yours sincerely,Zhang HongKeys:One possible version:Dear Amy,I am very glad to receive your e-mail.Welcome to my home and my school.My home is not far away from our school.It takes only ten minutes by bus.Our school is big and modern.Thereare three classroom buildings,a playground,a library and a hall in our school.We have four lessons in themorning and three in the afternoon.After school,we have some other courses,like music,dancing,drawing,DIY and so on.We don*t have lessons at the weekend.I am going to show you around our city and take you toenjoy our local traditional food.I am sure you will enjoy your stay here.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.I cant wait for your arrival.Yours sincerely,Zhang Hong最 近 学 校 进 行 了 主 题 为“说 出 你 的 烦 恼”的 调 查。请 你 用 英 语 写 一 篇 短 文，内 容 包 括 调 查 结 果（如 图 所 示）、对 老 师 和 父 母 的 建 议。电 1作 业 多，压 力 大 日 父 母 要 求 严，相 互 沟 通 少 口 活 动 少，差 注 意：（1）词 数：9 0个 左 右。（2）短 文 的 开 头 已 给 出，不 计 入 总 词 数。Our school has made a survey 一 Dont keep your worries.Here are theresults._Our school has made a survey-Dont keep your worries”.Here are the results.About fifty percent of the studentsin our school are worried about their homework.They have too much homework to do every day and they feel stressed.About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them in their studies.Its difficult for them toget along well with their parents.The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health.They complain thatthey have no time for their hobbies or after school activities.I think students should have more communications with their teachers and parents.【要 点 回 顾】【温 故 知 新】课 后 巩 固 假 如 你 是 L u c y,想 应 聘 校 报 英 文 版 的 记 者(English reporter)。请 根 据 招 聘 要 求 写 一 封 应 聘 信，说 明 你 能 胜 任 此 职 的 理 由。A REPORTER WANTEDDo you want to