问题与建议-2023年中考英语热点话题写作.pdf

2023年中考英语热点话题写作-问题与建议11.（2022湖北孝感模拟预测）作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容要点，以“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文。写作要点：1.表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常2.建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少两条以上缓解考试压力的具体建议。写作要求：1.词数90左 右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥。How to Deal with the Exam StressWe students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day.22.（2022江苏南通市新桥中学一模）2021年 3 月 30 日，教育部发布了 关于进一步加强中小学生睡眠管理工作的通知，引起了家长、学校和社会的广泛关注和热烈讨论。你校英文广播站Our voice发起学生睡眠情况的专题调查，请以“We need a good sleep”为题，写一篇英文调查报告。现状与原因睡眠不足.作业负担重.建议与希望学校减少作业；制定学校作息时间.家长督促按时就寝不熬夜；营造温馨舒适的就寝环境。学生（至少两点）注意：（1）要求语句通顺，意思连贯。（2）词 数 100个左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。（3）参考词汇：督促（urge）313.（2022.重庆开州一模）中考在即，为了更好地缓解同学们在学习和生活中的压力（pressure）,某国际学校准备开展以“Less pressure and Better lift”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假设你叫芳芳，打算参加这次比赛并和同学们分享你的心得体会。参考提示：1）同学们普遍存在的压力（交友、学习等方面）；2）我的压力是3）我缓解压力的方法有要求：1）词数：80 120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear friends,My name is Fang Fang.It,s my honor to share my ideas with you.As we all know,the students areunder too much pressure.Thanks for your listening!4 4.青少年在学习、交友、家庭关系等方面有时会遇到问题。初三学生Samuel最近遇到因作业多导致睡眠不足、父母不允许他花过多的时间打篮球等问题，因此他写信向你（Raymond）一位青少年辅导员讲述他的烦恼并寻求解决问题的方法。请你用英文给他回一封信（80-100个单词），信的开头已给出。Dear Samuel,Thank you for telling me about your problems.I hope I can help you.Best wishes,Raymond5 5.（2022辽宁沈阳二模）假定你是李华，通过对话了解到你的好朋友Paul面对过去长时间的网课及将要到来的考试等问题，心理压力很大，请你给他写一封安慰信。内容包括：1、表示安慰问候；2、提供减轻压力的建议或办法；3、美好祝愿。要点：1、词数80-100：开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、作文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。Dear Paul,I know your problems and recent situation through the last conversation.Yours,Li Hua参考答案：1.例文：How to Deal with the Exam StressWe students are very busy with school work and in the face of many exams every school day.Everyonemay have the exam stress.A little stress can be good for us.If we have proper stress,we can think activelyand work harder.So we can pass the exam easily.However,if we have too much stress,we cant sleep well at night and we may feel tired or sleepy inclass.We may be afraid of exams too much and fail in the end.In my opinion,wed better plan and prepare everything well to deal with stress.We should also havesome good habits.For example,we can exercise more and eat healthy food,especially fresh vegetables andmilk.Also we must have enough sleep and listen to soft music.Then well feel relaxed and do well inexams.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，根据题干提示，以“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下该如何缓解考试压力。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，首先要承接短文开头，引出话题；其次介绍太大的压力的危害；最后详细地介绍你是如何缓解考试压力的。2.例文We need a good sleepAs we know,most of us students dont have enough sleep.As a result some feel sleepy in class.Thatsbecause we often have too much homework to do and we have to stay up late.On the other hand,some ofus dont have a good living habit,like being crazy about playing computer games at night,Ifs also thereason why they dont sleep well.To solve the problems and improve our sleep,we should do something and have some charges.First,schools should make a particular timetable for sleep,and teachers should reduce our homework.We can begiven talks about the knowledge of sleep.Second,our parents,should urge us to go to bed on time and notstay up late,They also can make us a warm and comfortable sleeping place Finally,as students,we shouldplan out time carefully and try to finish our homework at school.Moreover we can do some exercise in theday time,it can help us sleep well.I hope all of us can have a good sleep and grow up healthily.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示要点，以“We need a good sleep”为题写一篇作文关于中小学需要更好的睡眠。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时首先要涵盖要点，在叙述要点时可以使用一些过渡词，如 Erst,second,finally,moreover等使文章更加通顺。最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。3.例文：Dear friends,My name is Fang Fang.Ifs my honor to share my ideas with you.As we all know,the students areunder too much pressure.Some students cant get on well with their classmates,while others may worryabout their exams.Im always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me toall kinds of after-classes at weekends.I really felt tired.Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.For the coming new term,I suggest planning our life and study well by managing our time properly.Its better to make a time table with detailed information.Only when we make full use of limited time,canwe have a more meaningful life during the last period of junior school.Thanks for your listening!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应承接短文的开头和结尾，根据汉语提示的内容，介绍同学们普遍存在的压力（交友、学习等方面）；自己的压力是什么；缓解压力的方法有什么等。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。4.例文：Dear Samuel,Thank you for telling me about your problems.I hope I can help you.First,you should talk with your teacher,and ask your teacher for help.Tell them too much homeworkmakes you stay up late and feels sleepy in class.Second,you should communicate with your parents.Youcan play basketball on weekends after you finish your homework.In this way,they may allow you to do it.Third,you can make some new friends and talk with them freely,because it may be helpful to you.If youdo these things,I believe you can solve these problems.I hope you can be better soon.Best wishes,Raymond【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一封书信，提供方法类的应用文；时态：时态为“一般现在时“；提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，针对具体的问题“遇到因作业多导致睡眠不足 和“父母不允许他花过多的时间打篮球等问题 提出自己的建议。写作步骤第一步，表示自己已经收到了来信，表达愿意提供帮助；第二步，针对具体的问题提出自己的建议，使用过渡词汇呈现：第三步，最后是叙述自己的希望。亮点词汇 ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助 communicate with 与.沟通 In this way这样 高分句型 Third,you can make some new friends and talk with them freely,because it may be helpful to you.（because引导原因状语从句）（2）If you do these things,I believe you can solve these problems.（If 引导条件状语从句）5.例文：Dear Paul,I know your problems and recent situation through the last conversation.Faced with the long onlinecourses in the past and the coming exams,you felt a lot of pressure.Here are some suggestions for you.First,you should learn to relax yourself.You can listen to some music or do something you feelcomfortable.Next,you should do some sports every day.Sports can make you feel relaxed.At last,smile atyourself every day.It helps you keep happy.Its very common that everyone can meet difficulties in the life.I hope my suggestions can give yousome help.Yours,Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求写封信安慰好友P a u l,他面对过去长时间的网课和即将到来的考试感到心理压力很大。内容要点一共有3 个，写作时要根据这些要点去写。2.写作指导：人称以第二人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。写作时，先叙述一下Paul的问题，然后给出建议，最好不要少于3 条，最后表达对他的祝福。行文时注意前后连贯，保证条理清晰。