读后续写练习写作讲义--2023届高三英语三轮冲刺.docx

续写:植树造林，修复村庄，人与自然阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之 构成一篇完整的短文。I met the Man of the Trees in summer ten years ago, when I was visiting Uncle Jita.Those were difficult times. People were cutting down our forest, and there was often flooding. Sometimes our water supply was dirty. When our pump did have clean water, we had to wait in line for ages. When the pump wasn't working, we had to walk five kilometres to the closest stream.But I was happy. I was going to see my favorite uncle. When the day finally arrived, Dad drove me to Uncle Jita's house and left. Once he saw mg Uncle Jita announced, "Tomorrow we're going to explore a magical place. Here is my camera, Amy. You can take photos of what you see.”The following day, we woke up and left early on a boat. The trip was exciting. But when we got off, there was . nothing in front of us. “I don't want to take pictures of this J I complained.Uncle laughed/'Start walking, Amy. I promise you'll be surprised." After some time, I could see the outline of a forest in the distance. A little closer, there was a man waving to us.eyes on the shoe box at the top of the shelf. There it was; the pair bore much resemblance to what Buddy desired but were an older version. He gingerly brought it down and dusted the ash off. Then he contacted Haley's mother and explained his motive. 111 want to surprise the girl. Is that OK if I drop off the shoes before six tomorrow morning?, “Sure. Thanks, Mr. White. I'm glad you could help!" Meg said gratefully.The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house. She rubbed her sleepy eyes and caught sight of the note stuck on the box. It was written, “Hope Buddy loves them!” Curious to know what was inside, Haley hurriedly opened the box and stood stunned the next minute. Though a bit different, the shoes were what would make Buddy exhilarated. Cradling the shoes in her arms, she cried in joy. Meg, who had been hidden behind the door to eye her daughter's reaction, shed tears, too. She was convinced that something else illuminated her that day 一 two golden hearts.突然，鲍勃想起了一件事，他爬到放旧鞋的楼下。他在摆放 限量版旧鞋的货架间蠕动着，上下寻找着，最后把目光落在了架子顶 部的鞋盒上。它就在那儿;这一对很像巴迪想要的，但却是一个旧版 本。他小心翼翼地把它拿下来，蝉掉上面的灰。然后他联系了海莉的 母亲，解释了他的动机。"我想给女孩一个惊喜。我明天早上6点前 把鞋送过来行吗?”当然。谢谢，怀特先生。我很高兴你能帮忙!”梅格 感激地说。第二天早上，海莉震惊地发现她家门外躺着一个鞋盒。她揉 了揉睡眼，看到了粘在盒子上的纸条。上面写着:希望巴迪爱他们!” 哈利很想知道里面是什么，赶紧打开盒子，站在那里呆了一分钟。虽 然有点不同，但这双鞋会让巴迪兴奋不已。她把鞋子抱在怀里，高兴 地叫了起来。梅格一直躲在门后看着女儿的反应，也流下了眼泪。她 确信那天有别的东西照亮了她两颗金色的心。范文2续写第一段Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored. As he searched through the boxes of shoes, he came across a pair of limited edition sneakers that had been returned because of a minor defect on one of the soles. Although the defect did not affect the shoe's performance, it had made them unsellable. Bob realized that these sneakers were perfect for Buddy and that he could give them to Haley to give to him.续写第二段The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house. She excitedly opened it to find the limited-edition sneakers she had wanted for Buddy, along with a note from Bob. The note explained that he had overheard their conversation and wanted to help. He told Haley to give the shoes to Buddy as a gift from her, and to not worry about the cost. Haley's eyes filled with tears of gratitude, and she couldn't wait to surprise Buddy with his new shoes.突然，鲍勃想起了一件事，他爬到放旧鞋的楼下。当他在鞋盒中 搜寻时，他发现了一双限量版运动鞋，因为其中一只鞋底有轻微缺陷 而被退回。虽然这个缺陷并不影响鞋子的性能，但它已经使它们无法 销售。鲍勃意识到这双运动鞋很适合巴迪，他可以把它们送给哈利, 让他送给巴迪。第二天早上，海莉震惊地发现她家门外躺着一个鞋盒。她兴奋地 打开盒子,发现了她想要送给巴迪的限量版运动鞋，还有鲍勃的一张 纸条。纸条上说他无意中听到了他们的谈话，想帮忙。他让海莉把这 双鞋作为她的礼物送给巴迪，不要担心花费。哈利的眼里充满了感激 的泪水，她迫不及待地想给巴迪一个新鞋的惊喜。“That's Kabir. The forest you see is his. He planted every single tree." As we walked towards Kabir, Uncle explained that thirty years ago, the whole area was a wasteland. But one day Kabir decided to change all that and started planting trees. Thanks to him, part of the wasteland is now a paradise（天堂）.Uncle introduced me to Kabir, who had gray hair and a determined face. "Jita told me you like animals. Are you ready to see some?” he asked. "Of course!” I replied. We continued walking and soon were under the trees. I turned my head and was amazed at the difference between the two places. All because of the efforts of one man.Like Uncle said, Kabir's forest was magical. We saw deer, rhinos, and even tigers. During lunchtime, Kabir explained how, by planting trees, it was possible to stop the land from eroding（侵蚀）.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, "I think we can plant trees too.”In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan.Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, “I think we can plant trees too." Grabbing the camera in my hand, I added with excitement, "Ive got a plan! ril show them the photos of Kabir's magical forest!” Seeing Uncle and Kabir's encouraging smile, I immediately set down to work, busy pressing my shutter. With the big planrestoring our village with clean water supply in 10 years haunting in my mind, bubbling inside my heart was thrill and hope for a new life. When Uncle and I went back to the village and showed these wonderful pictures to my neighbors, they were stunned by the beauty of the forest. "It was the trees that turned the place into a paradise!” We then explained our tree-planting plan to the villagers, which was quickly accepted by all of them.In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan. We started to plant trees by rolling our sleeves up, digging holes, setting saplings into holes and covering them with soil, which has eventually helped protect the soil and stopped the land from eroding. Thanks to the trees, the water has been purified and we finally have clean and stable water supply. Years witnessed our great endeavor and our perspiration eventually paid off. Our village is now surrounded by small thriving forests with blooming flowers, lively animals and crystal-clear streams running through. Standing under the trees and enjoying the stroke of gentle breeze, I heard birds chirping between branches as if celebrating for our fruitful achievement and praising for our wise choice-doing something right and turning our life back on track with our respect and worship for our Mother Nature.听到这些，我转向叔叔我想我们也可以种树。我把相机拿在 手里，兴奋地补充道:“我有个计划!我要给他们看卡比尔魔法森林的照 片! 看到叔叔和卡比尔鼓励我的微笑，我立刻坐下来工作，忙着按快 门。十年后让我们村恢复清洁供水的宏伟计划萦绕在我的脑海中，我 的内心沸腾着对新生活的兴奋和希望。当我和叔叔回到村子，把这些 精彩的照片给邻居们看时，他们都被森林的美丽惊呆了。是这些树 把这里变成了天堂!”然后我们向村民们解释了我们的植树计划，很快 他们都接受了。在接下来的几年里,我们村里的人努力工作来执行我们的计划。 我们开始种树,卷起袖子，挖洞，把树苗埋在洞里，用土覆盖，最终 保护了土壤，阻止了土地的侵蚀。多亏了这些树，水被净化了,我们 终于有了干净稳定的供水。岁月见证了我们的努力，汗水终于有了回 报。我们的村庄现在被茂密的小森林包围着，鲜花盛开，动物活泼, 清澈的溪流流过。站在树下，享受着微风的抚摸，我听到鸟儿在树枝 间喝啾，仿佛在庆祝我们丰硕的成就，赞美我们明智的选择做了 正确的事情，让我们的生活回到正轨，尊重和崇拜我们的大自然母亲。其他版本1Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, HI think we can plant trees too."The moment my words spilled out of lips, it found acceptance from uncle and kabir, approving smile sparking in their eyes. To materialize my idea, kabir shared with us his successful recipe in detail.Having engraved every word he said in mindj set for home with the photos of Kabirz s magical forest. With the big plan-restoring our village with clean water supply in 10 years haunting in my mind, bubbling inside my heart was thrill and hope for a new life.The following days witnessed my family rolled our sleeves up, digging holes , setting saplings into holes and covering them with soil.Photos of the magical forest with news that planting trees can save us clean water spreading around village, more and more people joined us .In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan. Demanding as the process was, the huge project breathed life and a sense of achievement into everyone' s heart. What a magical difference our effort brought: wasted areas giving way to greenery regions, diverse animals coming and going as visitors and above all, the returning of our life water -clean and sweet. Had it not been for Kabir's inspiration, we couldn't have realized how far we have gone to betray the laws of nature. Standing under the trees and enjoying the stroke of gentle breeze, I heard birds chirping between branches as if celebrating for our fruitful achievement and praising for our wise choice-doing something right and turning our life back on track with our respect and worship for our Mother Nature .其他版本2Hearing this, I turned to my uncle, “I think we can plant trees too." Grabbing the camera in my hand, I added with excitement, I? ve got a plan! I' II show them the photos of Kabir? s magical forest! ” Seeing Uncle and Kabir ' s encouraging smile, I immediately set down to work, busy pressing my shutter. WhenUncle and I went back to the village and showed these wonderful pictures to my neighbors, they were stunned by the beauty of the forest. " It was the trees that turned the place into a paradise! We then explained our tree-planting plan to the villagers, which was quickly accepted by all of them.In the years that followed, people in our village worked hard to carry out our plan. Instead of cutting down our forest, we started to plant trees, which has eventually helped protect the soil and stopped the land from eroding. Thanks to the trees, the water has been purified and we finally have clean and stable water supply. With our joint efforts, our village is now surrounded by small thriving forests with blooming flowers, lively animals and crystal-clear streams running through. Witnessing the gradual change of our village, we've come to realize that only when we live in harmony with nature can we have a brighter future. *续写：鞋子温情阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使 之构成一篇完整的短文。"What's that squeaky noise?"Meg asked her eight-year-old daughter, Haley. She looked down at the girl's shoes and noticed her sneakerssoles（鞋 底）had been torn open. Meg and Haley were on their way home from school, and it had just stopped raining. Water on the road had leaked into Haley's damaged shoes making a squishy（吱吱作响的）noise.Meg immediately took her daughter to a shoe store to buy her a new pair of sneakers. She had some money for groceries but thought getting Haley a new pair of shoes was more important. “How about these?,/asked Haley, who was checking shoes in the section only for boys. MamaJ want these limited-edition sneakers.Buddy loves a TV show and always tells me how he wishes to wear such shoes.f/Meg frowned. Not only did she not have money to afford two pairs of shoes, but she wondered why Haley was too interested in getting her classmate Buddy a new pair. Sensing her mother's hesitation, Haley continued, “Buddy is from a very poor family, mama. Poorer than us. His shoes are torn and look miserable. Everybody laughs at him. Please, can we buy these shoes for him? You can buy mine later."Meg thought for a while and decided it would be best if she bought her daughter shoes for now. "You will fall sick if you keep wearing your wet torn shoes. Pm sorry, honey, but you need a new pair." Haley sighed heavily and agreed. She was not excited to see the new pair of sneakers her mom had bought for her.As Meg and Haley left, Bob, the shoe store owner who knew Meg well, walked to the entrance and sighed. He had overheard everything and knew what it was like to live in poverty. He wanted to help Haley fulfill her mission of helping Buddy but didn't know how.Moreover, the pair of shoes Haley wanted to get for Buddy was a limited-edition collection, which had been ordered by someone else.He could not simply give them away.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应 位置作答。Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored.The next morning, Haley was shocked to find a shoe box lying outside her house.范文1:Suddenly, Bob remembered something and climbed downstairs where old shoes were stored. Wriggling his way through the sections where old limited-edition shoes were stocked, he searched high and low and finally rested his