2023年高考英语一轮复习：概要写作练习及答案15篇.pdf
2023年高考英语一轮复习：概要写作练习及答案15篇1第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下列短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Who is in control of your life?Who is pulling your strings?For the majority of us,ifs otherpeople-society,colleagues,friends,or our family.We learned this way of operating when wewere very young,of course.We were brainwashed.We discovered that feeling important andfeeling accepted was a nice experience and so we learned to do everything we could to make otherpeople like us.As Oscar Wilde puts it,“Most people are other people.Their thoughts are someoneelses opinions,their lives a mimicry（模仿），their passions a quotation.When people tell us how wonderful we are,it makes us feel good.We long for this good feelinglike a drug-we are addicted to it and seek it out wherever we can.Therefore,we are so eager forthe approval of others that we live unhappy and limited lives,failing to do the things we reallywant to.Just as drug addicts and alcoholics live worsened lives to keep getting their drug,weworsen our own existence to get our own constant drug of approval.But,just as with any drug,there is a price to pay.The price of the approval drug is freedom-thefreedom to be ourselves.The truth is that we cannot control what other people think.Everyone hasa different way of thinking,and people change their opinions all the time.Moreover,people havetheir own business,and in the end,theyre more interested in themselves than in you.The personwho tries to please everyone will only end up getting exhausted and probably pleasing no one inthe process.So how can we take back control?I think there*s only one way-make a conscious decision tostop caring what other people think.We should guide ourselves by means of a set of values-notvalues imposed（强 力 口）from the outside by others,but values which come from within.If we aredriven by these values and not by the changing opinions and value systems of others,we will livea more authentic,effective,purposeful and happy life.参考答案第二节：概要写作（满分25分）One possible version:It is common that our life is controlled by other people around us.Thats because we attach greatimportance to being approved of by them.Sadly,their recognition costs us our freedom to be whowe are,whereas their changeable and uninterested thoughts are uncontrollable.However,we canstill be our own masters by ignoring opinions of others and sticking to our inner values,thusmaking our life cheerful and meaningful.2第二节：概要写作（满 分 2 5 分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写 一 篇 6 0 词左右的内容概要。第1页 共1 3页Scientists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet.If theworld followed the so-called planetary health diet,the scientists told Reuters that each yearmore than 11 million early deaths could be prevented.Scientists say that the way we produce andeat food is very bad for the planet.For the health of the planet,they claim the same diet wouldreduce greenhouse gases and save more land,water andanimals.Tim Lang,a professor at Britains University of London,co-led the research.He told Reuters,Thefood we eat and how we produce it determines the health of people and the planet,and we arecunently getting this seriously wrong.Lang added that the worlds population is expected to growto 10 billion people by 2050.If we want to feed everyone,he explained,we all need to changewhat we eat and the way we eat by improving food production and reducing food waste.Well,what do you eat on the planetary health diet?The scientists who created this diet say it islargely plant-based but still has small amounts of dairy,fish and meat.The diet calls for cuttingred meat and sugar by 50 percent and doubling the amount of nuts,fruits,vegetables and legumes.Food situations around the world are not equal.In certain areas,this would mean great changes.People in North America,for example,eat 6.5 times the recommended amount of red meat.On theother hand,people in South Asia eat only half the amount suggested by the new planetary healthdiet.Meeting the targets fbr vegetables would need big changes in other areas.In sub-SaharanAfrica,people on average eat 7.5 times the suggested amount of vegetables like potatoesandcassava.The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve.But for them doing nothing is also notan option.Willet said,u If we cant quite make it,its better to try and get as close as we can.参考概要One possible version:Scientists claim they have obtained the best diet benefiting both humans and the planet.Tim Lang,the leader of the research,emphasized the significance of changing the food and the way we eat.In other words,it is more scientific for diet to be more based on plants than animals.However,thefood condition is not globally balanced.Tough as the target is to realize,it is worth trying.（69words）3第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Helicopter parents is a description of parents who are hovering over their children in a state ofextreme concern.They always show up to solve their childrens problems,protect them from realor imagined harm,resolve stressful situation,offer advice and get them out of trouble,even if theymisbehaved.Although out of love and concern,it can have harmful effect on their childrensemotional development and future autonomy.Children learn through their mistakes.But if you intervene（介入）at first sign of struggle andfinish your childs homework,hell miss out on valuable learning opportunities.Youre sendinghim the message that he needs to be perfect and failure is not an option,otherwise you wouldntalways take over for him.第2页 共1 3页By constantly rescuing your child from stressful situation,youre sending him a message that youdont believe hes capable of taking care of himself Children develop self-esteem by learning howto complete challenge on their own.If you are always intervening,hes denied this vital stage inhis growth.As a result,your child may lack the confidence necessary to do well in school,pursuehobbies and interests,and develop friendships.If youre always taking care of everything for your child,ifll be more difficult for him to becomeindependent.As an adult,he might find it hard to take care of himself because hes neverdeveloped coping skills to deal with lifts challenges.He might suffer from irrational fears,anxiety and depression,which could lead him to drop out of college or frequently change jobs,according to Dr.Michele Borba.Instead of developing healthy relationships,he might seek apartner who will take care of him or controlling,as his parents were.You can help your child become more independent by allowing him to complete tasks andchallenges on his own without your intervention.Even if he fails at first,dontinterfere-encourage him to start again.Show that you have faith in his abilities to succeedwithout your help.Allow him to learn natural consequences.Even small things can help himbecome more independent-making his own bed,preparing his own lunch,shopping for his ownclothes and doing homework without your help.第二节概要写作One possible version：“Helicopter parents，parents getting deeply involved in childrens life,actually do big harm tochildrens growth.(要点 1)Under over-protection,children miss the lessons taught by failures andmistakes,fail to build up their self-confidence and become weak in competence and emotions,which consequently makes it hard for them to face real life challenges.(要点 2)Therefore,parentsshould learn to let go and encourage children to be independent,staring from small things.(要点3)4概要Undeniably,men and women differ widely in many aspects.(point 1)Previous studies attribute thedistinctions in character to the differences between male and female brains,(point 2)However,Professor Eliot argues that they have nothing to do with brains based on the data analysis,(point 3)It is socialization,such as background and parenting,that can account for the contrasts,which wasneglected in the past,though,(point 4)5第3页 共1 3页第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Nowadays,an increasing number of young Chinese spend money because they are lazy”.According to a report issued in December by Chinas e-commerce platform Taobao on Chinas“lazy economy”,Chinese people spent 16 billion yuan on products and services online in 2018.The post-1995 generation was the“laziest”as its consumption increased by 82 percent,comparedwith that in 2017.The so-called lazy economy refers to a new type of consumption of products and services whichare designed to save time and labor.According to the report,many people of the post-1995generation buy high-tech electronic devices such as floor mopping robots and automatic windowcleaners,which save the trouble of doing household chores.Meanwhile,take-out food deliveryservices are also popular among people bom after 1995.Young people are willing to spend money on such products because they want to enjoyhard-earned leisure time after a busy and stressful day at work or school,reported Global Times.Because they need to focus on their studies or jobs,these so-called lazy people tend to use theirleisure time more efficiently.For example,Wei Duo,a 21-year-old college student,is a frequentuser of take-out food delivery services.t4I once had a birthday cake delivered to my friend wholives far from my home.It cost me 50 yuan but it saved me almost half a day that would have beenneeded to deliver it myself.My friend was also happy because she got to cat the cake instantly,“Wei told the Global Times.While the“lazy economy,might be convenient for young people,it might also create problems.The Mazy economy,on campus is expressed in things like people buying food or other thingswithout leaving the dormitory.As a result,they stay in their dormitories all day long,playing oncomputers and smartphones.According to Jinan Daily,this situation could lead to young peoplebecoming less sociable and even developing problems of communicating with others.Youngpeople should be alert（努觉的）to it.参考范文：A report indicates that more young Chinese,especially the post-1995 generation tend to spendmoney due to their laziness.（要点 1）Thafs what we call 4lazy economy”,featuring the purchaseof time and labor-saving products and services.（耍点 2）In this way,those occupied with studyand work can make the best of the limited leisure tim e.（要点 3）Convenience as the”lazyeconomy may bring,the young should be aware that it can also result in their lack of socialcontact.（要点 4）6ShynessIf you suffer from shyness,you are not alone,for shyness is a universal phenomenon.It is notsurprising that social scientists are learning more about its causes.第4页 共1 3页The first environmental cause of shyness may be a childs home and family life.Todays childrenare growing up in smaller and smaller families,with fewer and fewer relatives living nearby.Growing up in homes in which both parents work full time,children may not have the socializingexperience of frequent visits by neighbours and friends.Because of their lack of social skills,theymay begin to feel socially inhibited,or shy,when they start school.A second environmental cause of shyness in an individual may be ones culture.In a large studyconducted in Japan,57 percent of participants rated themselves as shy.Researchers Hendersonand Zimbardo say,“One expectation is that in Japanan individual performance success is creditedexternally to parents,teachers,and others,while failureis entirely blamed on the person.Therefore Japanese learn not to take risks in public and rely instead on group-shared decisions.Technology may also play a role.In the United States,the number of young people who reportbeing shy has risen from 40 percent to 50 percent in recent years.Due to our huge advances intechnology,watching television,playing video games,and surfing the Web have replacedrecreational activities that involve social interaction for many young people.Adults,too,arebecoming more isolated as a result of technology.Face-to-face interactions with bank clerks,gasstation attendants,and shop assistants are no longer necessary because people can use machines todo their banking,fill their gas tanks,and order goods.In short,they become shy.It appears that most people have experienced shyness at some time in their lives.Therefore,if youare shy,you have lots of company.参考答案：Shyness is common and it has environmental causes,including home and family life,cultureand technology.Firstly,with smaller families and working parents,children lack socialinteractions.Secondly,blaming failure on individuals causes people in some culture to be shy inpublic.Finally,with the development of technology,people have fewer opportunities to socializein person.7阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Scientists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet.If the worldfollowed the so-called planetary health diet,the scientists told Reuters that each year more than11 million early deaths could be prevented.Scientists say that the way we produce and eat food isvery bad for the planet.For the health of the planet,they claim the same diet would reducegreenhouse gases and save more land,water and animals.Tim Lang,a professor at Britains University of London,co-led the research.He told Reuters,The food we eat and how we produce it determines the health of people and the planet,and weare currently getting this seriously wrong,Lang added that the worlds population is expected togrow to 10 billion people by 2050.If we want to feed everyone,he explained,we all need to第5页 共1 3页change what we eat and the way we eat by improving food production and reducing food waste.1Well,what do you eat on the planetary health diet?The scientists who created this diet say it islargely plant-based but still has small amounts of dairy,fish and meat.The diet calls for cuttingred meat and sugar by 50 percent and doubling the amount of nuts,fruits,vegetables and legumes.Food situations around the world are not equal.In certain areas,this would mean great changes.People in North America,for example,eat 6.5 times the recommended amount of red meat.On theother hand,people in South Asia eat only half the amount suggested by the new planetary healthdiet.Meeting the targets fbr vegetables would need big changes in other areas.In sub-SaharanAfrica,people on average eat 7.5 times the suggested amount of vegetables like potatoes andcassava.The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve.But for them doing nothing is also notan option.Willet said,If we cant quite make it,its better to try and get as close as we can.参考范文：Scientists claim they have obtained the best diet benefiting both humans and the planet.Tim Lang,the leader of the research,emphasized the significance of changing the food and the way we eat.In other words,it is more scientific for diet to be more based on plants than animals.However,thefood condition is not globally balanced.Tough as the target is to realize,it is worth trying.(69words).【69字】8.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Workaholics live for their work,often spending many extra hours at work,and often taking workhome to complete.It is fine to live in a work-hard culture,but when work becom
