2023年高考英语写作训练- 文章续写_泉州五检.pdf
高考英语写作训练5月17日泉州五检文章续写One windy day in March,Kitty Miller was on her wayto school when she glanced into a store window andsaw a great pile of lovely red apples.OhJ Sheexclaimed(惊呼).“How lovely!If only Mamma couldhave onei,5 Immediately,the store owner recognizedthe familiar girl and asked her to pick one.Kitty justshook her head and ran away shyly.Kittys mother was extremely poor.She had been adressmaker ever since KittyJs father died,and had towork hard to earn a living for herself and Kitty.Unfortunately,she had recently become very sick andhad to lie in bed all day long.When Kitty was away atschool,the house was incredibly cold and cheerless.She missed her little angel-that is what she calledKitty.Kitty took great care of her mother.She cookedher food,mostly soup.They could not afford freshfruit.Kitty would even sing to her mother at night.When Kitty reached the school that day,herthoughts were full of her sick mother and the lovelyred apples.She was usually an excellent student,butthat day she made so many mistakes that the teacherlooked at her in surprise.The little girl could only sitat her desk,with her book before her,and dream ofthose red apples.When school was dismissed,Kitty started slowlyhomeward.She had walked only a short distancewhen she saw a man in front of her drop his wallet.Running quickly forward,she picked it up.The walletfelt quite heavy in Kittys little hand.“There must be a good deal of money in it/5 thoughtKitty.uHow I wish I could keep it,so that I would thenbe able to purchase a red apple for Mamma,and somany other things she needs.”Kitty knew this would not be right,so she hurriedafter the man.情节推进速度、细节分配轻重、设计结尾主题She stopped him by pulling his arm and said,Sirthink you lost your wallet/5 Surprised at first,the mansaw the wallet and realized his carelessness.Heexpressed a heartfelt gratitude for her kindness andoffered one dollar as a rewarding gift.Kitty refused totake it,but at the mans insistence,she accepted themoney gratefully.Tinally,I can buy Mamma a gift!she thought and hurried to the store.The store owner saw the familiar girl rushing in,onedollar in hand.“Sir,would you please find me the biggest redapple?”Kitty asked with an eagerness in her voice.“Its for my Mamma.She is ill and I hope this will makeher better soon.Touched with the girls truthfulness,the owner said,This apple is free of charge.Take itas my award for your being a good kid who caresabout your mother so much.”On her way back home,Kitty was feeling a warm joy,not just for thoseunexpected gifts,but for what kindness brought herin this special day.到家母亲醒着/睡着没到家回家路上one dollar+one apple kindness苹果拿回家和母亲分享苹果/今日经历母亲为她骄傲She stopped him by pullingthink you lost your wallet/5his arm and said,uSir,ITinally,I can buy Mamma a gift!”she thought andhurried to the store.感 词 寸 n gratitudev appreciateadj+adv gratefully/thankfully