高考英语复习写作：建议信课件.pptx

A letter of advice01020304日期日期称呼称呼正文正文结束语结束语结尾敬语结尾敬语书信格式书信格式05署名署名缩头式（式（indented format）（date）Salutation，The body of the lettercomplimentary close,signature齐头式（式（blocked format)(date)Salutation，The body of the lettercomplimentary close,signatureI.建建议信的定信的定义建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文。建建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告，有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇议或忠告，有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议或忠告方面提出建议或忠告。II.II.写作指导写作指导首段：回顾背景并表明写作目的。首段：回顾背景并表明写作目的。中段：婉转地提出建议。中段：婉转地提出建议。尾段：希望自己的建议能帮助对方。尾段：希望自己的建议能帮助对方。注意：注意：时态应以一般现在时为主。时态应以一般现在时为主。由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。二人称为主。1 1）日期的书写顺序是日、月、年（英式日期）或者月、日、年（美式日日期的书写顺序是日、月、年（英式日期）或者月、日、年（美式日期）。例如期）。例如8th March,2020/8 March,2020(8th March,2020/8 March,2020(英式），英式），March 8th,March 8th,2020/March 8,20202020/March 8,2020（美式）（美式）2 2）日期中的年份应写全，要写日期中的年份应写全，要写4 4位数字。例如不能用位数字。例如不能用“08”“08”来代替来代替“2008”“2008”3 3）月份应写英文名称，可用缩写，如：月份应写英文名称，可用缩写，如：Sep.Sep.，Oct.Oct.。但不要用数字来替。但不要用数字来替代，如代，如7/4/997/4/99或或7,4,99,7,4,99,因为在英国此日期代表因为在英国此日期代表7th April,19997th April,1999，而美国则代表而美国则代表July 4th,1999July 4th,19994 4）日期可用基数日期可用基数1,2,3.11.221,2,3.11.22等，也可用序数等，也可用序数1st1st，2nd2nd，3rd3rd，4th.11th.22nd4th.11th.22nd日期（日期（DateDate）Which is the correct way of writing a date?A.2020,03,18B.09,03,18C.March 18th,09D.18 March,20201 1“Dear”“Dear”的用法：的用法：最常见的是用最常见的是用Dear+Dear+（头衔）姓或名，如：（头衔）姓或名，如：Dear Professor Chen,Dear Professor Chen,Dear Mr.Alan Dear Mr.Alan 或或Dear Isabel,Dear Isabel,也就是在也就是在Mr.,Mrs,Miss,Ms,Prof.,Mr.,Mrs,Miss,Ms,Prof.,Dr.Dr.等后只用姓，不用名字。如果关系比较亲密，可用等后只用姓，不用名字。如果关系比较亲密，可用My DearMy Dear2 2给某个机构或你不认识的人写信，则按如下称呼写：给某个机构或你不认识的人写信，则按如下称呼写：Dear Sir,Dear Sirs,Sirs,Gentlemen,Dear Madame,Ladies or Dear Sir,Dear Sirs,Sirs,Gentlemen,Dear Madame,Ladies or Madame,To Whom It May Concern.Madame,To Whom It May Concern.3 3写给政府各部门首长，如参议员、法官、大使、市长等可用写给政府各部门首长，如参议员、法官、大使、市长等可用Hon.Hon.（Honorable Honorable 阁下的缩写），表示尊重阁下的缩写），表示尊重称谓（称谓（SalutationSalutation）句子翻译句子翻译1.收到你的来信收到你的来信/得知得知，喜悦之情难以言表。，喜悦之情难以言表。2.我写信来表达我关于我写信来表达我关于的看法。的看法。正文（正文（BodyBody）第一段：写信人的身份及写信目的第一段：写信人的身份及写信目的-位于开头部分，一般是位于开头部分，一般是寒暄或点明写信的目的；要写得贴切、热情、恰如其分。寒暄或点明写信的目的；要写得贴切、热情、恰如其分。第一段第一段寒暄寒暄+表明意图表明意图（2-3句）句）常用表达：常用表达：寒暄寒暄Wordscantexpressmydelightofreceivingyourletter/learningthat.Excusemeofnotwritingyouforsuchalongtime.表明意图表明意图Iwouldliketosuggestthat./Iamwritingwithmysuggestionabout/Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning（建议信）（建议信）我想建议我想建议/我写信来想就我写信来想就一事提出我的建议一事提出我的建议/我写信来表达我关于我写信来表达我关于的看法的看法第二段第二段细节（具体解释写信意图，可从细节（具体解释写信意图，可从what，why，how三方面写作，三方面写作，4-6句）句）What具体陈述建议的内容，表示事实、现状、情况变化的句子：具体陈述建议的内容，表示事实、现状、情况变化的句子：（1）Wecannotignorethefactthat/Noonecandenythefactthat.（2）Agreatchangewillcertainlybeproducedin.（4）Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessed/seendramaticchangesin.Why解释为何写信，表明建议的原因的句子：解释为何写信，表明建议的原因的句子：（1）Thereasonformyrecommendingwasthat.（2）Whydid.?Foronething,Foranother./Perhapstheprimaryreasonis.（3）Tworeasonscontributetomyrecommending.Ononehand.Ontheotherhand.How提出建议、解决方案的句子：提出建议、解决方案的句子：(1)Herearesomesuggestionsforhandling.(2)Inmyhumbleopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction:(3)Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto.andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.(4)Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyou.(5)Itishightimethatweputanendto.uIfIwereyou,Iwould.uAsfarasIamconcerned./Inmyopinion.uItseemsbetterthat.uWhynot.?Itwouldbeagoodideaif.2.中段(婉转地提出建议婉转地提出建议)假如你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。“给建议”句型我建议你早到15分钟；我建议你带一些礼物；我建议你吃饭的时候尽量保持安静。“给建议”句型I strongly/firmly suggest that you should doIt will be beneficial and rewarding for you to doIf I were you,I would doOnly when you dowill/can youI strongly suggest that you should arrive 15 minutes earlier.It will be beneficial and rewarding for you to bring some gifts with you.If I were you,I would try to keep quiet while enjoying my dinner.并列并列连连接接词词两者并列：for one thing;for another thing此 外，而 且：besides;in addition；additionally；moreover三 者 并 列：to begin with;besides;eventually/finally/lastly/last but not least“给建议”句型首先，我建议你早到15分钟；其次，我建议你带一些礼物；最后，我建议你吃饭的时候尽量保持安静。To begin with,I strongly/firmly suggest that you should arrive 15 minutes earlier.Besides,it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to bring some gifts with you.Eventually,if I were you,I would try to keep quiet while enjoying my dinner.P2多方建议类建议1+（好处1）建议2+（好处2）建议3+（好处3）表达“结果/好处”句型主句，through which(完整句子)Li Hua works out every day,through which he keeps fit.which后加完整的句子Li Hua works out every day,helping him keep fit.helping 的主语一般是前面整个句子主句，doingLi Hua works out every day.Not only can he keep fit,but also he can get relaxed.Not onlybut alsoP2多方建议类建议1+（好处1）建议2+（好处2）建议3+（好处3）I strongly suggest that you should do,(through which)It will be beneficial and rewarding for you to do,(doing)If I were you,I would do.Not only,but alsoP2多方建议类建议1+（好处1）建议2+（好处2）建议3+（好处3）To begin with,I strongly suggest that you should do,(through which)Besides,it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to do,(doing)Eventually,if I were you,I would do.Not only,but alsoP2多方建议类建议1+（好处1）建议2+（好处2）On one hand,I strongly suggest that you should do,(through which)On the other hand,it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to do,(doing)“给建议”句型首先，我建议你早到15分钟；其次，我建议你带一些礼物；最后，我建议你吃饭的时候尽量保持安静。To begin with,I strongly/firmly suggest that you should arrive 15 minutes earlier.Besides,it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to bring some gifts with you.Eventually,if I were you,I would try to keep quiet while enjoying my dinner.1 早到15min这样你能有机会帮助主人准备饭菜P2多方建议类写作词汇为准备prepare(for)To begin with,I strongly/firmly suggest that you should arrive 15 minutes earlier,through which you may have a chance to help your friend prepare the food.P2多方建议类1 早到15min2 带点礼物，比如茶叶/当地特产3 吃饭的时候尽量保持安静。这样你能有机会帮助主人准备饭菜展示出你的友好local products特产friendliness友好To begin with,I strongly/firmly suggest that you should arrive 15 minutes earlier,through which you may have a chance to help your friend prepare the food.Besides,it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to bring some gifts with you,such as some tea or local products,showing your friendliness to your friend.Eventually,if I were you,I would try to keep quiet while enjoying my dinner.P2多方建议类你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，来信希望你能给他一些建议。请给他回信，内容包括：1.中文难学的原因；2.你的建议及理由；3.你的祝愿。一方面，我建议你看一些中文电影，听一些中文歌曲。另一方面，我建议你找一个语伴。For one thing(On one hand),I strongly/firmly suggest that you should watch some Chinese movies or listen to some Chinese songs.For another thing(On the other hand),it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to find a language partner.P2多方建议类P2多方建议类1 看电影，听音乐2 找一个语伴这样提升你学习汉语的兴趣。这样你能有更多用汉语表达自己的机会。写作词汇用表达自己express oneself inarouse/trigger ones interest of激发的兴趣provide sb with a chance to do向某人提供的机会For one thing(On one hand),I strongly/firmly suggest that you should watch some Chinese movies or listen to some Chinese songs,through which you may further trigger your interest of learning Chinese.For another thing(On the other hand),it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to find a language partner,providing you with more chances to express yourself in Chinese.P2多方建议类你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，来信希望你能给他一些建议。请给他回信，内容包括：1.中文难学的原因；2.你的建议及理由；3.你的祝愿。P2多方建议类1 看电影，听音乐2 找一个语伴中英文词汇和语法大不相同，所以你会觉得学汉语很难。提升你学习汉语的兴趣。这样你能有更多用汉语表达自己的机会。写作词汇（在方面）和不同be different from(in)词汇和语法vocabulary and grammar Since Chinese is quite different from English both in vocabulary and grammar,its normal for you to find Chinese difficult.For one thing(On one hand),I strongly/firmly suggest that you should watch some Chinese movies or listen to some Chinese songs,through which your interest of learning Chinese may be further triggered.For another thing(On the other hand),it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to find a language partner,providing you with more chances to express yourself in Chinese.P2多方建议类假定你是Ms Wang，你的学生李华写了一封信，诉说他无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼，请根据以下要点给他写一封建议信：1.积极参加班级活动；2.了解同学们的兴趣爱好；3.乐于助人。练习三段式结构P1P2P3问候+背景+目的建议+好处点题+祝愿P1How are things getting along recently?寒暄问候P1因为我了解到你最近无法融入班集体而且交不到朋友，所以我写信给你一些建议。背景+目的写作词汇fit into融入P1因为我了解到你最近无法融入班集体而且交不到朋友，所以我写信给你一些建议。背景+目的Knowing/Learning that you run into some problems when trying to fit into the class and make some friends,I am writing to give you some advice.P2多方建议类1 参与集体活动，比如班级讨论/辩论等2 了解其他人的兴趣爱好3 主动帮助别人这样你有机会表达你的观点认识不同的人&展现你的友好写作词汇讨论&辩论discussion and debateshow ones friendliness展现友好To begin with,I strongly suggest that you should take an active part in class activities,such as discussion and debate,through which you may have more chances to express your own opinion.Besides,it will be beneficial and rewarding for you to get to know your classmates interests,helping you get to know different people and showing your friendliness.Eventually,if I were you,I would be always ready to help others in need.P2多方建议类75I sincerely hope that my suggestion(s)is/are of great help to you.And if you have any other problems,dont hesitate to tell me.P3点题第三段表达愿望，结束信件第三段表达愿望，结束信件常用表达常用表达（1）Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/proposals/recommendationshelpful/practical/useful.（2）Ireallyappreciateitifyouwouldandcould（3）Iwouldbeverygrateful/obliged（感激的）（感激的）ifyoucould（4）Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon./yourresponseatyourearliestconvenience.结结尾尾语语常用表达：常用表达：Wesendyouourbestwishes.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Pleasegivemybestregardstoyourfamily/parents.Alltheluckintheworldtoyou.结结束束语语在正文在正文结结束后，独立成行，后面要用逗号，常写于信件正文右下方，束后，独立成行，后面要用逗号，常写于信件正文右下方，署名上方。常署名上方。常见见的的结结束束语语有：有：写写给给地位或地位或辈辈分高的收件人：分高的收件人：Respectfullyyours,Mostsincerelyyours写写给给一般收信人、陌生人或商一般收信人、陌生人或商务务信件：信件：Faithfullyyours,Sincerelyyours,Trulyyours写写给给朋友或朋友或较为较为熟悉的人：熟悉的人：Yours,Withlove,Lovealways,Affectionatelyyours，Withbestwishes结束语（结束语（Complementary Complementary CloseClose）署名（署名（Signature)Signature)写在结束语下，通常写Li Hua。Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a foreign friend who wants to learn Chinese.Please recommend a university to him.ExerciseExercise 20thFebruary,2020DearLucy,WordscantexpressmydelightoflearningthatyouaregoingtolearnChineseinaChineseuniversity.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtotheuniversitywhichyoushouldchoose,andIwouldliketosuggestPekingUniversity.ThereisnodenyingthefactthatPekingUniversityisagreatplacetolearnChinese.Tworeasonscontributetomyrecommending.Ononehand,PekingUniversityisoneofthetopuniversitiesinChinaandthebirthplaceofmanygreatminds.Therefore,itcanprovidehigh-qualityteachingresources,whichisessentialforaforeignerlearner.Ontheotherhand,BeijingisthecapitalofChinaandtherearevarioushistoricbuildings.TheyprovideforeignstudentsagoodchancetoknowChinesecultureandhistory.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpfulandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiMingDateSalutationComplementaryCloseComplementaryCloseSignature寒暄寒暄表明意图分析原因分析原因表达愿望表达愿望+结尾语结尾语Body