高中英语写作指导课件课件.ppt

How to Write A Composition in EnglishTRANSLATION 1.1.Tom来自澳大利亚。来自澳大利亚。2.2.来自澳大利亚的来自澳大利亚的Tom Tom 在我校教英语。在我校教英语。3 3、TomTom来自澳大利亚，来自澳大利亚，19651965年年12 12月生，在我校教英语。月生，在我校教英语。4 4、Tom1987Tom1987年大学毕业。年大学毕业。5 5、19901990年携妻到中国工作。年携妻到中国工作。6 6、他热爱教学，工作严谨，乐于帮助学生。、他热爱教学，工作严谨，乐于帮助学生。7 7、他教法多样，课堂生动有趣。、他教法多样，课堂生动有趣。8 8、他经常向我们做如何学好英语的报告。、他经常向我们做如何学好英语的报告。9 9、除此以外，他还任学校顾问，给我们提出了很、除此以外，他还任学校顾问，给我们提出了很 多有益的建议多有益的建议。1.Tom来自澳大利亚。来自澳大利亚。Tom is/comes from Australia.Tom is an Australia.Toms nationality is Australian.TRANSLATION2、来自澳大利亚的、来自澳大利亚的Tom 在我校教英语。在我校教英语。Tom is from Australia and works in our school as an English teacher.Tom,(who is)from Australia,teaches English in our school.Tom,an Australian,teaches English in our school.Tom,an English teacher from Australia,works in our school.3、Tom来自澳大利亚，来自澳大利亚，1965年年12月生，在我月生，在我校教英语。校教英语。Tom,from Australia,was born in December,1965 and now works in our school as a teacher of English.Tom was born in Australia in December,1965 and now he teaches English in our school.Tom,who works in our school as an English teacher now,was born in Australia in December,1965.4、Tom于于1987年大学毕业。年大学毕业。Tom graduated from a university in 1987.Tom finished his higher education in a university in 1987.Tom began to work as a university student in 1987.Tom became a graduate in 1987.5、他于、他于1990年携妻到中国工作。年携妻到中国工作。He came together with his wife to workin China in 1990.In 1990,he came to work China with his wife.He as well as his wife came to work in China in 1990.In 1990 he came to China with his wife and began to work here.6、他热爱教学，工作严谨，乐于帮助学生。、他热爱教学，工作严谨，乐于帮助学生。He is fond of teaching and is strict in his work.He is always ready to help his students.loves/likesenjoysfeels likeis always willing to7、他教法多样，课堂生动有趣。、他教法多样，课堂生动有趣。He has many methods of teaching and always makes his classes lively and interesting.With many teaching methods,he is always making his classes lively and interesting.He has many ways of making his classes lively and interesting.8、他经常向我们做如何学好英语的报告。、他经常向我们做如何学好英语的报告。He often gives talks to us on how to improve our English.gives us talkslectures/reportsspeeches We often listen to his reports on how to improve English.He often gives some advice about how to learn English well in his talks.9、除此以外，他还任学校顾问，给我们、除此以外，他还任学校顾问，给我们提出了很多有益的建议。提出了很多有益的建议。Besides this,he acts/works as an adviser of our school and has given us a lot of useful suggestions.And he is also an adviser of our school,having given a lot of valuable suggestions.In addition,he is also the adviser of our school,and we have improved our work according to his helpful advice.姓名姓名William Porter性别性别男男国籍国籍澳大利亚澳大利亚出生年月出生年月 1965年年12月月职业职业英语教师英语教师工作单位工作单位第一中学第一中学书面表达：某中学英文报拟在某期头版介绍一位外籍人士，某中学英文报拟在某期头版介绍一位外籍人士，请你就下面的简历表写一篇介绍性的短文。请你就下面的简历表写一篇介绍性的短文。个人简历个人简历1987年大学毕业，年大学毕业，1990年携妻来中国工作年携妻来中国工作主要事迹主要事迹1、热爱教学，工作严谨，乐意帮助学生；、热爱教学，工作严谨，乐意帮助学生；2、教学、教学方法多样，课堂教学生动有趣，深受学生欢迎；方法多样，课堂教学生动有趣，深受学生欢迎；3、经常对学生做如何学好英语的报告；、经常对学生做如何学好英语的报告；4、任本报、任本报顾问，提出了许多有益的建议。顾问，提出了许多有益的建议。注意：注意：1、情况介绍必须采用短文形式；、情况介绍必须采用短文形式；2、五个句子。生词：顾问、五个句子。生词：顾问 adviser TRANSLATION 1.1.William Porter来自澳大利亚，来自澳大利亚，19651965年年12 12月月,生在生在第一第一中学中学教英语教英语。2 2、William Porter 1987 1987年大学毕业。年大学毕业。3 3、19901990年携妻到中国工作。年携妻到中国工作。4 4、他热爱教学，工作严谨，乐于帮助学生。、他热爱教学，工作严谨，乐于帮助学生。5 5、他教法多样，课堂生动有趣。、他教法多样，课堂生动有趣。6 6、他经常向我们做如何学好英语的报告。、他经常向我们做如何学好英语的报告。7 7、除此以外，他还任本校报纸顾问，给、除此以外，他还任本校报纸顾问，给我们提出了很多有益的建议我们提出了很多有益的建议。Mr.William Porter,born in Australia inDecember,1965,now working as a teacher of English 1in No.1 Middle School。He graduated from an 2univercity in 1987 and came with his wife to work 3in China.Mr.William Porter loves teaching and is strict in his 4work.He is always prepare to help his students.He 5has strange ways of making his lessons likely and 6 interesting and is loved by all the students.He often 7gives the students lectures how to learn English well.8 Except this teaching work,he also acts as the adviser 9of our newspaper and has given us many valuable 10advice.CORRECTIONCORRECTIONworksauniversityreadyonisBesidesmuchlively SAMPLE I Mr.William Porter,from Australia,works as a teacher of English in No.1 Middle School.He was born in December,1965.He graduated from a university in 1987 and came with his wife to work in China.Mr.William Porter loves teaching and is strict in his work.He is always ready to help his students.He has strange ways of making his lessons lovely and interesting and is loved by all the students.He often gives the students lectures on how to learn English well.Besides his teaching work,he also acts as the adviser of our newspaper and has given us a lot of valuable suggestions.SAMPLE II Mr.William Porter,male,born in Australia in December,1965,works as a teacher of English in No.1 Middle School.He graduated from a university in 1987 and came to work in China,together with his wife in 1990.As a teacher,he loves teaching and is strict in his work.He is always ready to help his students and has many strange ways to make his lessons lovely and interesting.He often gives talks to his students on how to improve English.As a result,he is loved and respected by his students.Besides his teaching work,he is also the adviser of our newspaper and has given lots of helpful suggestions.EXERCISE 书面表达书面表达(25分）分）用英语写用英语写 一篇介绍世界著名童话作家安徒生（一篇介绍世界著名童话作家安徒生（Hans Christian Andersen)的短文，字数的短文，字数100左右。内容要点如下：左右。内容要点如下：1、他于、他于1805年生于丹麦，年生于丹麦，11岁丧父。由于家庭贫穷，童年时期没岁丧父。由于家庭贫穷，童年时期没有上学。有上学。他跟人学习缝纫技术以求谋生。他跟人学习缝纫技术以求谋生。2、14岁到一家剧院工作。后来在一些好心人的帮助下上了学。岁到一家剧院工作。后来在一些好心人的帮助下上了学。3、1828年他接受了高等教育，毕业后成为一名作家。年他接受了高等教育，毕业后成为一名作家。4、他坚持写小说、诗歌、剧本等。他以童话而著名。、他坚持写小说、诗歌、剧本等。他以童话而著名。5、一生共创作、一生共创作100 多个故事。多个故事。1875年去世。年去世。参考词汇：丹麦参考词汇：丹麦 Demark 学习缝纫技术学习缝纫技术 learn sewing 接受高等教育接受高等教育 receive higher education 童话童话 fairy tales List out the sentences:1.1.世界著名的童话作家安徒世界著名的童话作家安徒Hans Christian Andersen生生于于 18051805年生于丹麦年生于丹麦Demark。2.112.11岁丧父。岁丧父。3.3.童年时家境贫寒，没能上学。童年时家境贫寒，没能上学。4.4.他只得学习裁缝技术谋生。他只得学习裁缝技术谋生。5.145.14岁到一家戏院工作。岁到一家戏院工作。6.6.后来他在一些热心人的帮助下上了学。后来他在一些热心人的帮助下上了学。7.18287.1828年大学毕业并成为作家。年大学毕业并成为作家。8.8.他坚持写小说、诗歌、剧本等。他以童话而著名。他坚持写小说、诗歌、剧本等。他以童话而著名。9.9.他他18751875年去世。一生共创作年去世。一生共创作100 100 多个故事。多个故事。SAMPLE Hans Christian Andersen,a world-famous writer of Hans Christian Andersen,a world-famous writer of fairy tales,was born in Demark in 1805.His father died fairy tales,was born in Demark in 1805.His father died when he was only 11.His family was very poor,so he could when he was only 11.His family was very poor,so he could not go to school during his childhood.He had to learn not go to school during his childhood.He had to learn sewing to make a living.At the age of 14,he went to work sewing to make a living.At the age of 14,he went to work in a theatre.Later,with the help of some kind people,he had in a theatre.Later,with the help of some kind people,he had the chance to go to school.In 1828 he received higher the chance to go to school.In 1828 he received higher education.After graduation he became a writer.He kept on education.After graduation he became a writer.He kept on writing novels,poems,plays and so on.But he was famous writing novels,poems,plays and so on.But he was famous for his fairy tales.He died in 1875,leaving the world more for his fairy tales.He died in 1875,leaving the world more than 100 stories.than 100 stories.How to Write A Composition in English1.First find out how many points you should write and-list them out.-2.Make sure what tense you should use,i.e.,how many-tenses you need in the composition.-3.List out the sentences in Chinese you will turn into-English.-4.Translate the sentences one by one,using the words-and expressions you are sure of.-5.Connect the sentences into a passage,using the connections that are necessary and suitable.-6.Look through the passage and correct the mistakes-you may have made.-7.Copy down on the test paper carefully.英语作文英语作文“八字方针八字方针”式式（格式）（格式）时时（时态）（时态）字字（单词）（单词）词词（词组）（词组）句句（句子）（句子）段段（段落）（段落）章章（结构）（结构）面面（书写）（书写）假如你叫李华，现在美国攻读博士学位。你的一位朋友假如你叫李华，现在美国攻读博士学位。你的一位朋友Maria Staley告诉你，他原来就读的中学需要一名中文老师。你写信给该告诉你，他原来就读的中学需要一名中文老师。你写信给该校校长校校长Mr.Smith介绍自己的情况，以求谋职。介绍自己的情况，以求谋职。李华：李华：男，男，33岁岁 出生年月：出生年月：1969年年11月月 出生地：出生地：中国济南中国济南 健康状况：良好健康状况：良好 学位学位:硕士硕士(master)学习情况：学习情况：19871991年在山东大学学习英语年在山东大学学习英语-1991-1993年在纽约州立大学学习英语，年在纽约州立大学学习英语，并获硕士学位并获硕士学位 -（masters degree）-工作经历：工作经历：1993-1997年于年于纽约纽约Central High School任教，任教，1997年年-至今于至今于Lincoln High School任教任教-注注意：信的开头和结尾已经给出，其余内容约意：信的开头和结尾已经给出，其余内容约80词。词。Dear Mr.Smith,-Recently my friend Maria Staley,who was once your student,told me that-I hope to hear from you soon.Yours,LiHua SAMPLEDear Mr.Smith,Recently my friend Maria Staley,who was once your student,told me that your school needed a Chinese teacher.I was very glad at the news for I feel like teaching Chinese in the United States.I was born in Jinan,China on November,1969.I studied English in Shandong University from 1987 to 1991.After graduation I came to U.S.A.in 1991 and began to study in New York University in the same year.I took education as my major and in 1993 I got my masters degree.After that I began to work in high school.From 1995 to 1997 I taught in Central High School in New York.Since 1997 I have been teaching in Lincoln High School in Washington.I am an experienced teacher and I am healthy.-I hope to hear from you soon.Yours,-LiHua Verse OneTheres a boy on my mind and he knows Im thinking of himOn my way through to the day and the night The star shine above meHes been gone for some time but I know I truly love himAnd Im singing a song hoping hell be back When he hears itChorus(合唱)My heart goes sha la la la la Sha la la in the morningSha la la sha la la in the sunshine Sha la la la laSha la la in the evening Sha la la la la Sha la la la la just for youVerse TwoIf your loves gone away just like mine Youll feel like cryingSing along maybe once maybe twice Lets try it togetherSome sweet day no one knows youll return And youll be happyshout it l,sweet in a song listen to your heart It is singingRepeat Chorus Repeat Verse One Repeat ChorusShaSha La La La LaDreamhouse