06读后续写人与动物类（故事构造“三大套路”）高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考专用）.docx

读后续写：人与动物类Parti：经典例文（小狗救人）2Part2：人与动物故事构造套路4套路一：可爱型动物故事情节4套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节6套路三、主题升华句8Part3：人与动物场景素材积累8Part4：灵活应用13例1：人与麻雀13Part5：高考真题再现15真题1：小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】 15真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 18从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题 文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处，要么是人类帮助动物解决 问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇 到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成 功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6 月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险 经历（2020年6月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮 助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫 从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临沂市一模）。Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot. What was that? She wondered. A sea fish? Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat.Paragraph 2: "Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, "Get out! But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move. At the very moment, the shark's jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away. And then he grabbed hold of Betty's arm and dragged her to the beach. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.(04)Paragraph 1: He was sentenced to be torn by a lion in the public arena (竞技场).The terrifying day finally arrived. All the people in the city went there to see the brutal fight between the poor slave and a bloodthirsty beast. When Androclesappeared in the arena, they began to cheer and hoot. All eyes were on him, and time seemed to stop. Overcomeby a stab of fear, he almost collapsed to the ground, his heart pounding and his knees shaking. And then came a furious roar and the great lioncharged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hopeless, the slave closed his eyes and dropped his sword, thinking that he was done for.Paragraph 2: However, the lion didn't act as most had imagined. Much to their surprise, the savage beast stopped short, knelt down and then lickedthe slave's hands and feet. He behaved like a pet dog. And then he let out a low roar, as if whispering to his friend, "Didn't you recognize me?” Indeed, it was the very lion the slave had helped in the forest. Sighing with relief, the slave stroked his neck gently, tears of gratitudewelling up in his eyes. So moved were people by the story that they begged the master to set free the slave and the lion. One good turn deserves another, and in the end, Androcles, the slave, became a free man.(05)Paragraph 1:1 entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldn't believe my eyes. Surely, it was my long-lost friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile. What a coincidence that Arthur would appear in front of me when I had trouble! I thought. For a second, I stared at him in disbelief, my mouth hanging open. In the meanwhile Tom instantly recognized me and he gave me a huge hug. "What brings you here? he asked with a puzzled expression on his face. So I told him that my car got a flat tire and that considering the poor road condition, it might broke downon my way back home. Knowing what had happened to me, he said that he would be glad to give me a hand again.Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it. After listening to the sound of the engine, Arthur told me that there was nothing wrong with it. And then they started to fix the tire and we chatted happily. Arthur told me that the thank-you notefrom me inspired him to live a meaningfullife by helping others. Soon afterwards, he got the tire fixed. He got up, wiped the sweat from his face and wished me a pleasant journey. I couldn't thank him enough. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble.(06)Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. He exposed his sharp teeth, snarling at us, as he sanforward. And again the furious creature stood on his back legs and began to snap at the fencelike a demon. It seemed that his mouth was dripping with blood and his eyes were red with rage. At the sight of it, I could feel a flicker of fear flooding over me, and EHis was stunned, her mouth hanging open. It was only then that my mind began to race. Once again, I plucked my courage to blast him with pepper spray, but without success. Then all of a sudden, came a crash of the fence falling down.Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. It landed in a clearing, not far from our camp, and the loud noisesfrom the rescue helicopter scared the bear. For an instant, he froze, but after a while, he started to charge at us again. nEllis!n I shrieked, nLook out!'* We immediately stepped aside, spun round and galloped towards the helicopter. The moment we were into the helicopter, we collapsed, gasping with relief. As it took off, we could see the bear was hungrily eating the breadwe had made. What a hungry bear! After we returned home safeand sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.(07)Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. A familiar figure leaped out, rushedtowards me and waded into the water. Thank goodness, it was Joewho came to my rescue. However, the water was running so rapidly that he had to go back. Frightenedand a little angry, I could hardly help shedding tears. How I wished that my husband were like a superman who could save me from disaster. But, after a while, it turned out that Joe returned with one end of a rope in his hand and the other end tied to the truck. He struggledto throw the rope to me and shouted, "Catch! Open the door!"Paragraph 2:1 screamed that I couldn't make it. At that moment, the sound of the raging water outside grew louder, and the car rocked more violently. Worse still, the water came up to Joe's waist and he almost lost his footing in the water. After several vain attempts, Joe realizedthat there was no chance to make it. He put every ounce of strength into getting close to me and said soothingly, "Don't panic, honey! Fm here." With Joe's help, I burst the door open, and Joe immediately tied the rope around my waist. The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up inside me.Part4：灵活应用例1：人与麻雀阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It's getting hot. Its time to put on lighter clothes and open up the windows. I can't wait to do so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two daring sparrows （麻雀）had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and some other breadcrumbs （面包屑）on our kitchen counter.Actually, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to living alongside humans- similar to pet dogs.When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option, with no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, Tve never come to stop to feel the relationship with sparrows.I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows. She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made with her tongue. I have loved sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can*t stop observing and celebrating their dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house.Undoubtedly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we don11 consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried about their droppings （粪便）. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 ,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room.About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God!”【答案】 One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room. They happened to dirty his important work reports on the desk. He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows. I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed down. I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals.About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God !” Thinking something similar happened again, I ran over to have a look. He was looking out of the window and said excitedly, "Look! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrow's nest! They *re going to have babies of their own!” He was happy, like a child and unconsciously opened the closed window. After that, there are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者生活之处有许多麻雀，作者欢迎 它们的到来，在后院为它们准备了食物和落脚处，作者将它们当成了友好的邻居，只是有点 担心它们的粪便。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：有一天，它们在我丈夫的书房里留下了一些粪 便，所以应该写粪便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼，要详细描述丈夫的动作和心理, 与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段开头是：大约两周后，我听到我丈夫说：“哦，天哪!” 本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的转变等 等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：do a thorough cleaning, break in, run over, have a look 等高级词汇；结果状语从句，$0 He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows；宾语从句，如 I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows cant break in again；定语从句，如 I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals 等高级句式。Part5：高考真题再现真题1：小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。"I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy,“ said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions 什青 绪）get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. "I guess this is it." he said. “I'll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn't.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, "What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. "We've tried everything.“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,“ smiled Mom. "Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Lefs get a little dog for Poppy.”It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging （摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意：1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3,续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween.【参考答案1Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn't take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低 下头，好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻了过 来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩耍，高 高兴兴地互相跑着。A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. "Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. Poppy's new companion?9 said Mom. (155)几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在想 念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男孩注 意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是谁？ ”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。”“妈妈说。【参考答案2Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.lt was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. HPoppy, isn't it a sweet dog? Its for you!n Mom said in a soft voice."It's your companion.1' Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend.爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的神 情。它摇着尾巴，试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父母就 忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗？” 这是给你准备的！ ”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高兴，但又有点紧 张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不久之后它们就像豌豆和 胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and li