英语新外研必修四讲义MODULE6SECTIONⅤWRITING—介绍大自然神秘现象的说明文.docx
Section_VWriting-介绍大自然神奇现象的说明文.写作技法指导XIEZUOJIFAZHIDAO一、根本结构 介绍大自然神奇现象的说明文一般包括如下内容:1 .简述神奇现象(什么样的神奇现象，何时何地发觉的，科学家对此的解释，证据);2 .各界不同的看法;3 .自己对此现象的熟悉。二、增分佳句1 .描述自然界某种神奇自然现象，以及何时何地被发觉的，常用语句:The monster of. is back in the news.It is known to all that.It lies in .It looks like a .2 .描述科学家及有关专家们对神奇现象的解释及其证据，常用语句: ©Some scientists think that.Some people believe in its existence, because .(3)By recent research, we can learn that.©Other scientists consider.3 .描述作者个人对此现象的熟悉，常用语句: ©Personally, I (don't) believe .As far as I am concerned, I think .In my point of view, I believe .五步写作规范WUBUXIEZUOGUIFAN题目要求“北美大脚怪(Bigfoot)始终引发人们的热议。请依据所给的图片以及文字提示写一篇英语短文来参加争论。怪物描述像猿(ape),高610英尺，重达500磅以上，全身掩盖棕色或红色毛，头和眼 睛很大，脚印长达24英寸发觉状况科学家和争论人员也找到了相关的毛发、粪便(waste)及大脚印等结论无其他证据证明其存在，或许是当地传奇以恐吓徒步者或猎人出没地址北美留意：1 .词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1 .确定体裁：本文要求描写神奇现象，属于说明文;2 .确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3 .确定时态：主耍用一般现在时、过去时和现在完成时。二、构思第一局部：神奇现象发生的地点神奇；神奇事物 把描述为 目击者多达做调查，做争论 与有关系 到目前为止 存在证据 使可怕其次局部：依据所给内容，描述神奇之处 第三局部：科学家的相关争论状况及结论 其次步：核心词汇想周全1. mystery2. describe . as3. witness.4. up to5. do research6. beelated to7. so far8. existence9. evidence10. terrify第三步：由词扩句雏形现1 ,北美大脚怪是世界闻名的神奇大事之一。Bigfoot is one of the world-famous mysteries.2 .它是在北美洲被首次发觉的。(被动语态)It was fi】st seen in North Ameiica.3 .据说它高 610 英尺。(It was said to be .)It was said to be 6-10 feet tall.4 .它重达500磅以上。（weigh）It weighed over 500 pound。5 .全身掩盖棕色或红色毛，头和眼睛很大。（with短语）It was covered in browD or red fur withaig6 eyes and a big head.6 .科学家和争论人员已经去那里做调查。（teams of;不定式作目的状语）Teams of scientists asd researchers have gone therejto do research.7 .他们已经找到了相关的毛发、粪便（waste）及大脚印等。（过去分词短语作后置定语； such as）They have found things jelated to it,such as waste, fur, big footprints and so on.8 ,但是到目前为止，没有其他证据证明其存在。（therebe句型；prove）However, so far there has been no other evidence to prove its existence.第四步：句式升级造亮点1 .用非限制性定语从句合并句1和句2Bigfoot、which was first seen in North America, is one of tho world-famous mysterie s.2 .用现在分词作定语合并句3、句4和句5It was said to be 6-10 feet tall, weighing over 500 pounds and was covered in brown or red fur with large eyes and a big head.3 .用定语从句合并句6和句7Teams ofLscientists asd researchers who have gone there to do research hav6 found t hings related to it, such as waste, fur, big footprints and so on.第五步：过渡连接联成篇Bigfoot, which was first seen in North America,is one ofLthe world-famous my sterie s._Witnesses described it as an ape-like creature. It was said to be 6一10 feet tall,weighing over 500 pounds and was covered in brown or red fur with laige e yes and a big head.Footprints up to 24 inches long have been found.Teams of scientists asd researchers who have gone th6re to does6arch hav6 found hings related to it、such as waste, fur, big footprints and so on. However, so far the】e has been no other evidence to prove its existence.Some people think it may bejust folk tales or stories to terrify hikers and hunters in North America.
